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Hi guys I am sorry I promise to update but god plan something and what we plan don't happen this is the update your waiting please sorry if you think I break the promise because I did not some one send me some think with virus and my computer because s is slow which came to me so I am using my laptop as I have to re write every thing so it was hard for me to re think what ever happen here is the update I hope you enjoy.
Man wake up early in the morning and was working on his gym and he remembered it was his birthday today he never celebrated his birthday after his parent died but his family use to wish him and today he was waiting for them which didn't happen because dadima didn't wish him and Dev left home early as he have to go to manila to a meeting and Vicky left home with Dev he have to drop him and came back to drop gauri and when he came back he saw Maan sitting and said to him self bhai sorry for you engagement and your birthday will be celebrated and I promise no one will make fuss about because you are my best brother I can ask god
Vicky was young when his parent died but Maan use to take care off him and dev was 12 so Maan was there angel he use to play with them and today his brother was sad because no body wish which he didn't want to see so he left and called and said gauri lets go.
Dadima:" Maan beta what happen why is your face bale."
Maan:"nothing just tired how you are dadima."
Dadima:" I am fine but I am worried about these days you do a lot off work why don't you make plans with your fiance and go out get to know each other and show her the office."
Maan:" I have meeting with the board directors so I have to leave and see you tonight take care dadi."
Dadima said "Maan I know you think I forget your birthday but tonight you will know how much I love you and what you mean to me." ever since your parent died you always you took care off us even thought you were young and wanted to have your days but you did what every brother would do I love you more then my life and tonight you will know how much your happiness this family mean tonight we will celebrate your birthday and your engagement and your daughter who you lost when you needed her most after tonight you will be happy and no one will dare to touch you that is my promise Maan Singh khurana."
Maan didn't hear because he was thinking why did they forget his birthday today why.
Maan came to office and had his meeting and he called geet and said "I am coming so get ready I am coming and please don't wear that suit because we are going lunch and its second date dear."
Geet:"okay jaan I will get ready but I have to see mom before we go lunch so let's meet at the hospital."
Maan:" geet are you driving the car which broke in the middle off the road."
Geet:"yes jaan why."
Maan:" geet I will pick u up so please don't drive that car wait there I will be there."
Geet:" Maan I want to go wedding shopping are you going with me because if you drive me I will always want you to drive me are you ready."
Maan:" geet we are going lunch I am not going to shopping with you so get ready okay."
After 10 minute he was there and he knocks the door and she open he was amazed how beautiful she looked and he said.
Maan:" geet you look wow beautiful and I am lucky indeed."
Geet:"come in sir."
Geet:" ha do u have problem."
Maan:" first off all you don't work for me and I am not your driver so please if you r ready lets go."
Geet:" Maan I am ready let's go and why are you acting so weird."
Maan:" my family forget my birthday today which never happen and specially dadima she never forget our birthday."
Geet:"sorry Maan but dadima is old and she will forget so many think it happens so lets go and bye the way how old are you."
Maan:" geet I thought you know my age how are you planning on getting married the guy you don't even know his age."
Geet:" Maan to love you I don't need to know your age and if that make you happy you are 28 so please let's go."
Maan:" to love me you need to know who I am right."
Geet:" Maan the word love means a lot but its four words and yes the first time I saw you its not when we met this lawyer and thinks it was 13 years a go when you were going to the boarding school and u use to cry about your brothers missing them remember you a girl who use to came to you and gave you Ice cream every weekend and lunch time do you know her name."
Maan:" I use to call her mishti how do you know her."
Geet:" Maan I will tell you but did you ever love her."
Maan:" geet to tell you the truth I wish can find her so I can tell how much I miss her when ever I needed a friend I use to remember her she was my first love and will be always." I don't mean to hurt u geet but that is the truth."
Geet:" Maan it's me mishti geet handa. I fell in love with that boy even thought I was 12 I loved him dream him and when I find out you go to that boarding school I though u had a mascara that I did to you throwing a knife which I didn't mean to hurt u I saw that mascara last night."
Maan and geet hug they kiss each other and they cried Maan and geet loved each other but this made their day.
They come to the hospital and spend time with geet mom and they left after she slept.
Geet:" Maan please let's go to the wedding shopping and we will have a blast or I need a shopping so please jaan.
Maan:"sweetheart I am not going to a shopping so please stop making the faces."
Geet:" okay there will be no kiss and hug for you and bye." and I am not talking to you until you take me to a shopping."
Maan:"okay lets go I am saying okay because I met my friend after long time so I am doing this for my mishti."
Geet:" Maan are trying make me jealous, Maan I loved you and if you ever try to look other women I will kill you and that is for sure."
Geet:" Maan can I ask you something why do you hate go out and fun"."
Maan:" because people ask so many questions that I don't have the answers but after today I have the answers so lets go its getting late."
When they go the mall geet said I will to the washroom wait and she called dadima she didn't answer and she called Dev and said" we are coming I will text you so please hurry."
They finish their shopping and geet bought a beautiful sari and she bought him a suit and she said lets get ready we are going some where please don't ask and this time I am driving,this time he didn't protest because he want to have good time with her.they came to a her house and the change and wear these cloth which made them so cute and the best jodi.geet wear a sari
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