Swords n Sweet dreams~RP FF~Part 1 n C.S - Page 2

nice intro waiting for rajveer

will wait for the upd 

wow

yeh kya hai siri...main toh MANZIL ke bharoshe yahan baithi hui hun aur tum 'sapno me talbar le kar ghum rahi ho'....ha ha ha...!!!ab yeh toh buri baat hai ke...main tumhe scary msg bhejti hun ...toh kya tum bhi mujhe darayogi...???😆

 

okay...okay...bakwas bandh aur kaam ki batin chalu...

 

banner toh bada achha banaya hai tum ne...aur Priyanka ka naam bhi tum ne bilkul sahi chuna hai...ha ha ha...

 

kafi int tha...bole toh ek dam dhamke ke sath suruwat kiya hai tum ne...!!! lagta hai underworld wala fic hai...matlab...dhishum...dhishum toh hoga hi...bada maza aayega...

 

ab Raj koun sa role play karr raha hai yeh dekhna baki hai...!!!

 

vaise ek chiz se narazgi hai...!!! pata hai kya...??? arre yaar...yahan hum sab raj ke fans hain...isiliye kam se kam intro me hi sahi...ek JHALAK toh us ki dikha hi sakti thi na...!!! par nahi...tum kyoun aisa karogi...lagta hai jeeju ne sar pe chadha rakha hai...tumhari shikayat karni padegi...

 

naam bilkul perfect select kiya hai tum ne...!!! isi se pata chal jata hai ke kahani kitni int honewali hai...

 

ab tum baithe baithe mere bakwas kyoun padh rahi ho...!!! chalo jayo...aur ud karo...jaldi...

nice and lovely start.loved it.
 nice characteristics.
update soon.

that sounds interesting
would love to read it
but plz update manzil too i loved that fic very much
and when you informed that you are back and would continue the fic
 i was so excited
plz update Manzil soon and i liked it too

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Edited by esha143 - 13 years ago

Hi dearie...

Just came across your ff... amazing start 👏

can't wait to read more...  do continue soon and please let me know when you do😳

Sonia

hey esha..

huh!!!!!!!!! muje pehle bataya b nai aur main galat jagah comment karke aa gayi na.. huh!! 😳😆😆

madam aapne 16 dec 2010 ko post kiya tha aur abb 25 jan 2011 aa gaya hai.. 😲 😳 abb yeh mat kehna ulta chor kotwal ko daante.. huh!! 😒😆😆

usually hero don hota hai par yaha heroine don ki beti hai.. gud.. nice concept.. 👍🏼 thank god rajeev ko gv ya priya wala role nahi diya.. 😆 warna hamesha darr laga rehta.. 😳😆

abb jaldiiiiiiiiii seeeeeeeeeeee UD kar de peejjjjjjj!!!!!!!!! aur haan usmein na ☺️ rajeev chahiye mujhe.. ☺️


continue ASAP.. 😃