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Swords n Sweet dreams~RP FF~Part 1 n C.S

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 2:09pm | IP Logged




PART 1

MAURITIUS,10:30 AM
VARDHAAN PALACE


  
The meeting has been going on since 5 in the morning...but still they were not able to decide what to do.Mr.Gaurav Vardhaan,or GV as the world knows him,is in deep thoughts.HE had been the un disputable DON of  Mauritius Underworld for as long as he can remember, and  before him his father.Now who is this that's trying to take over him by slowly destroying this empire bit-by-bit.Whoever it is,they are doing a really commendable job.Because he has just lost a consignment of his which contains both gold reserves and latest weapon technologies that are worth trillions of euros.And whoever has planned this is extremely smart since GV practically owns Mauritius and doing something against him is equal to embracing one's death with their own hands.There has to be some solid reason for such thing happening in his empire.

 "Who is the traitor between them that helped his enemies?"This is the main thought of GV for it's impossible to cause such a damage with out inside help.This is the discussion of this meeting where all the important links of his empire are present.But none is ready to take the blame.While the discussions,or rather arguments at this point,are going on,suddenly there is a sharp sound of  swords clashing!Everyone jerked their heads towards the door of the room and saw two people clad in white armor brandishing swords at each other enter the room.GV smiled and relaxed in his chair.His problem will be solved now.This is what he has been waiting for since he heard the news.As he looked up,the two are engaged in a fierce sword fight whipping their swords like hunters and destroying anything that came in their way.Everyone at the huge circular table are shivering in fear looking at them.Suddenly,one sword whipped around and cut the throat of a man who is sitting two chairs away from GV.He died instantly.Everyone is shocked to see what happened as the man who died was none other than their second in command chief,Vikranth Rathode.

  GV smiled in satisfaction.One headache down!He looked at the person holding the sword who removed the helmet,revealing black and red wavy hair and an angelic face. Princess Priya Vardhaan stood there in all her glory holding the sword  and looking at the dead man with contempt.She turned to her father GV and gave him a small smile along with a reassuring nod conveying him everything is under control as of now.GV moved forward and hugged his daughter as his men removed the body from the room without any word.All the others understood what must have happened and left the room in silence.They knew for sure the entire Rathode family would have been wiped off by now.

Princess Priya never forgives !!!


Edited by esha143 - 04 September 2011 at 4:05am

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CHARACTERS :-




GAURAV VARDHAAN / GV : NAWAB SHAH




PRIYA VARDHAAN / PRINCESS PRIYA : PRIYANKA BASSI




RAJVENDRA SINGHANIA / RS : RAJEEV KHANDELWAL




PARINEETA SINGHANIA / PARI : KRITIKA KAMRA




ARJUN MALHOTHRA : ARJUN BIJLANI


Will be updated as the characters come...Smile

Edited by esha143 - 04 September 2011 at 4:29am

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Mujhe na likhte waqt hassi aa rahi hai....coz I hope u already knw wat or rather who I am going to ask for....hehe. Yup sweetie....mujhe Raj chahiye....Blushing

But anyways...main apni typical ardent fan wali avtar se bahar aa jati hu....well....a new FF is always welcum....though of course...I wud love to read a part of 'Manzil'....however....this is wayyyyyy toooo interesting yaar!! I wasnt supposed to comment actually.....ek new fic dekha to bas dekhne chali ayi....thought wud comment later.....but see....am going on n on.

Achha ab seriously kaam ki baat karti hu....the intro was fab....and to be honest....I didnt want Raj to be in any of the character....sumhow I didnt want to be the GV or even beneath the mask....hehe. Well...guess main phir se Raj me atak gayi...umm....I was saying....intro kaafi intriguing hai.....and am really much interested in reading further...and yeah....just thought this actor is perrrfect for playing GV....nice choice...hehe.

Arre haan....ek aur imp baat....WC bak.....!!

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Originally posted by Revolutionbreez

wonderful esha!!

continueeeeeeeeeeee !!!Big smile


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Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Esha
 
I was waiting for Manzil's update but u started another fiction..the more the betterBig smileLOLLOL
The title is indeed very interestingClap..I liked it very much..Thumbs Up 
but swords and sweet dreams dont go hand in hand .. u cannot have sweet dreams while u r holding a sword...TongueTongueTongue
anyways this underworld story reminded me of Sur's unfinished fiction..Smile ..I hope Raj is not the cop  coz Priyanka is surely playing a dangerous underworld lady don here.Big smile
the intro part was indeed gud..ClapClap Priya seems to b too ruthless..
Where is my dear hero???
 
Pls continue soon
Bye
 

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Originally posted by mayadika11

awesome....
fab...
loved it.....
do cont. soon..........
and thanx for the pm.........

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Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really good
sop naina is a don here wow sounds interesting but plz bring raj
cont soon and pm me

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Originally posted by PrincessFlavia

Hey Esha.............

Maar daala tune....Another RN fic......continue soon yaar....
Its awesomeeeeeee.............

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Originally posted by khushi909

nice start Thumbs Up
priya is realy looking awesome but where's raj 
upd soon


RESERVED.....WILL REPLY SOON...

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Gr8 intro Esha and i luved ur siggi, more like the poster for the fic


Edited by arwa72 - 16 December 2010 at 3:52pm

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Oh yeah lovely poster Esha....and u posted in the wrong thread....tabhi main kahu upar ka view thoda khali lag raha hai....as the banner of FF forum is of a darker shade....lolz. But anyways....do continue this one soooooooooooooooooon.....

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
Interesting beginning.
So Priya is the daughter of the underworld DON. She is as brave an ruthless as her father.
waiting to read more
Please continue with Manzil as well.
 

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 9:10pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The title is very interesting!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

GV is the Don of Mauritius!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Nawab is perfect for the role of GV!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap

Priya is his daughter and she is as brave and ruthless as her father!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

I loved her entry fencing with a sword and then she killed the traitor!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

It reminded me of Viktor and Sonja in Underworld:Rise of the Lycans!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Princess Priya is dangerous and she never forgives!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile

Looking forward to the entry of the hero!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 17 December 2010 at 4:18am

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Hi Esha
 
Poster is just too gud..ClapClapClap Both Priyanka nad Rajeev r looking  hot and sizzling...the title is perfectClapClap .The wars of the titanLOLLOLLOL
May the best person wins.
 

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