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VSai2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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thanks yaar...!!!!

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part 18

maan - nahi I don't like it
she starts to cry - pehle tho aise nahi kaha
she goes home & cries.

rano asks her wat happened, she still coninues to cry
rano - tumhara aur maan ka jagda huwa kya?
geet - unhe mera dress aacha nahi lagta
rano understood what maan meant
rano - teehk hain na main tumhare dress alter karva doonghi
geet - nahi mama, woh aise nahi the!!! aaj kal unhe kuch hogaya hain
rano didn't know how to explain her it was she who was changing not maan
geets insecurity about herself was taking over her belief on everything else. she started to feel
low & unhappy about herself.

Teachers day celebration in school. All the 12th students where to take classes
the girls were dressed in sarees & guys were dressed in formal pant & shirt
Maan looked dashing in his very formal attire. Pari looked lavishing in a white saree
pari & maan were to take classes togather. They walked into VIII-B
geet was already low & insecured & seeing them together was end of her.
maan intenstional took her class to be around her but pari just tagged along in the last
moment. Maan was not aware of geet insecurities. He never realized it exsited at the
first place. For him she was most beautiful & perfect. He never expressed it
probably didn't know how to express it...she was too young to ignore or
overlook her insecurity & paris looking lavishingily beautiful & all her friends
calling them pair made in haven. Perfect match, looks & intelligence.
too much for her to take. she watched paris body language closely
the way she wore her saree, they way she flocked her self around maan.
Maan seemed happy least she knew his happiness was because of her, being around her
seeing them together was hurting her. she went home early & took rano's saree
she selected a white saree purposely, she cried & asked the maid to help wear it
after she wrapped the saree, she placed it exactly the way pari did, exposing her curves
and naval. she practised walking couple of time around the house & in front of the
mirror. she applied the lipstick, similar color as pari had on.

she then took a cab & went to school, maan had already left from there
then she went to his house but he had gone to karate class.
she took the cab & went there. she was mad today, in peek of her bottled
emotions, she herself was not sure what she was doing or saying.
all she wanted was maan. she waited outside the class.
his class mates noticed her there & began to watch her. she didn't even
notice them. she herself didn't what she had done to herself.
she was wearing a lose fitting blouse without wearing inners on top
of that she had the saree trying to expose her curves. she looked stupid!!!
attracting wrong ideas. maan came out & didn't even notice her, since she was
dressed so differently. him not noticing her just made her cry louder
maan immediately turned to her voice, he stood rooted looking at her.
& hated the people who looked at her with lusty eyes
now u don't even notice me she screamed & cried
maan just dragged her & pushed her in a cab.
reached home & didn't talk a word to her all the while
when they reached home he dragged her to the room & shut the door
he yelled - what the hell are you wearing
she snapped back - u don't like me in any dress now days
actually u don't like me, actually u never liked me she cried
maan didn't understand what was wrong with her.
her saree was almost falling apart. maan looked away
geet yelled - so u can't even bare to see me now
she came in front of him in anger & pressed a kiss in his lips like
her last option. her touch so innocent, he just melted, his heart paced
every thing was so situational, her looks, the kiss, it was so easy to
be drawn in & the spell she cast on him. it would have taken a hell lot of
strength for maan to pull her away & place tight slap on her face. It was more of his self control & hatred of the sotuation, self denial of her act. he pulled her saree away & told her to wear his pant & t-shirt. she cried & changed into his cloths. his slap just turned her into a rebel
she came out wild & angry & mad. maan held her & wiped the lipstik from her lips with his thumb
he shouted - dare u ever dress up like this again
geet crazily screamed - when pari kissed u, u didn't say anything to her I saw that, u just let her kiss you
he was shocked that she actually saw her kissing him
when she wore a saree u didn't say anything to her, in fact u were happy in the class
with her. I noticed you.

maan just realized what she was thinking, he closed his eyes, he felt he shouldn't have
slapped her. she may not understand him at all. She still was a kid 
geet cried - I know you don't find me grown up enough for you.
he felt how silly she was.
geet - u have changed, u don't care about me , u don't want me, u hate me
she cried & shouting & pushing him
maan - geet its not like that
geet - it is like that... she left crying & weeping

Maans last day in school

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 25 December 2010 at 2:46am

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hi muskan !!!
awesome ...dear 

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loved it was superb

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 24 December 2010 at 12:06pm

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nice update dear...
very well written..
waiting to see how ll maan manage geet..
do continue soon..

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owww!! Feeling bad for maan and geet both.. Awsome dear!!

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muskan we want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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lovely part. loved it.
I don't but I want to kill pari first.
  aww geet is too innocent.
 and her friends are hopeless.
pls muskan make everything fine.
update soon.

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