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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 2 (Page 85)

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~deewangi~
part 17

pari held him from back - I don't know how but I really started to love you
he laughed wickedly & just walked away.

ridz - bus you will not meet maan bhaiya again
she was crying
meera - chee that was so gross
geet still was not able to believe what she saw
arohi - woh tumhare saat bhi aise karta hain kya?
geet was feeling horible - NAHI!!!!! she screemed
ridz - see, so he doesn't love you, he loves pari di
waise bhi anji di kah rahi thi, they are always together now a days
meera - u are not his age, have u seen pari di, the whole college drools over her.
arohi - maan has selected pari over geet
meera - obivously he will prefer some one who can understand him better
geet murmured I understand him holding his chain under the shirt.
ridz - waise bhi yah sab bade logon ki baaten hain we can't understand
geet crying - I will ask him why he did that?
meera - dehklena he will just refuse
ridz - he will say kiss never happened
geet - he can't lie to me
ridz - u mean to say he will accept he is two timing !!
geet - aise nahi ho sakta
meera - he will never tell u the truth.
geet cries & goes away from there.

she waited for him at his place. he looked in a different mode all-together
he came excitedly & told her - you won't believe what happened today?
geet was already upset & his excitment was killing her
but in between of all this she just realized he was talking...
he was actually sharing his feelings with her for the very first time
she asked feeling nice about him being happy - kya huwa?
maan - that stupid pari
geet loved that he addressed her as stupid
maan - she kissed me on my lips
geet was shocked!! maan - yuck!!! so gross ...how cheap!!!
tum wanha hoti tho use 2-3 thapad mar dethi
yah tho uski shirt pe phirse chocolate laga dethi
& he laughed holding his stomach
she actually smiled & felt bad why she didn't actually slap her when she wanted to
instead she ran away not trusting him
maan sounded on top of the world, so different arrogant, devilish he went on - tumhe patah hain geet !! last year in front of the whole class she said she will make me fall for her
geet looked at him wondering he never told such things to her untill now
he never shared any of his view with her, but today he spoke to her as if they
were friends more of companion in real sense. she was so delightfuly lost in him
he had to shake her holding her arms - tum sun rahi hona
geet nodded with a smile now
maan - she actually said I love you to me
geet reluctantly asked - aapne kya kaha
maan - why should I reply to her
geet - aapne kuch nahi kaha?
maan holding her shoulders - meet.. they all are just behind my marks & rank not me.
geet liked the new name he gave her meet..
geet - aise tho she main feel u love her
maan - no ways..HOW DARE SHE!!! there is only one person who is allowed to feel that
her heart almost stopped beating
he said it in attitude - waise bhi Maan Singh Khurana ko kisi kho safai nahi deni hain,
all that matters is u know the truth. I am only bothered what you think, I care a
dam about what others feel or think.
it way beyound confession or acceptance. she was just not able take so much of
expression from him. she just hugged him & cried innocently feeling guilty that
she saw that & wanted to question him. She was not able to accept it to him either.
she just kissed him all over & said I love you .. I love you a lot.
He stood lost in her every kiss, like he was longing for it. He could never have enough
of her. he felt complete only in her arms. still couldn't get the wits to hold her back.
she loved even his arrogance, she admired every thing about him..deewani jo thi uski
even his ruthlessness seemed to look perfect to her.

it was there second anniversary & 1st wedding anniversary.
a very special day to both of them. geet still assumed he didn't remember
but how could he ever forget. they went to the temple & offered their prayers
they sat at the temple steps, maan slipped few steps lower & tied gold anklets
on her legs, she jumped up in joy - mera liya
maan smiled
she suddenly became sad
maan hated it & shouted - u didn't like it?
geet - I loved it, lekin
maan screamed - lekin kya?
geet - u spent all ur scholership in this
he looked away
she hugged him from behind - aap kuch chahiya tho phir aap kya karoge
maan - I don't need anything, I have all what I want holding her hand that
held his waist. she didn't realize what he maent but it felt nice.

pari still tried to wag her tails, maan really didn't care, his coldness was giving mixed signals to her. She was unsure. her mind told her it was a clear no but whole heartedly she wanted a yes. the uncertainty was making her behave crazily now. she began to express herself openly. It was only adding to maans already boosted ego. the whole class began to consider them as a couple & maan never accepted it nor did he refuse it.

geets friends also knew through anji that maan & pari were together. geet didn't bothere to listen to them because maan spoke more to her off late about every thing. It was more of him talking off late & she just sat & drooled over him. He spoke endlessly about every small thing to her.

This time karate tournament maan fought as a attacker. geet was all there to support & cheer him. few of his class mate noticed geet around. maan noticed them looking nastily at geet.
he was furious. his temper was shown in his fight. he just won all the rounds in one clear shot. usualy geet dragged her friends for such events, but offlate they didn't support her with Maan. So she had to be alone, giving more chance to those guys to glare at her skirt & now her forming curves which was quiet prominent now. Maan was getting violent when he noticed those guys pointing & giggling. In his final round he almost killed the opponent with his one clear punch. The referee had to pull him back. after the tournament maan just dragged geet from there & went home.
maan - yah kya pehnti ho tum he shouted looking at her knee length skirt
& the shirt which was hugging to her chest, almost stripping the buttons.
she didn't understand & looked at her self in the mirror - main tho roz yanhi pehnthi hoon
aapko aacha nahi lagta
maan - nahi I don't like it
she starts to cry - pehle tho aise kabhi nahi kaha
she goes home crying. Maan hates himself to have made her cry.

PRECAP
teachers day in school
~PREV PART 16 NEXTPART 18~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 24 December 2010 at 11:58am

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Just one word yaar : AweSOME :

really really really  loved it....

yaar you r simply great.. loved the way you portrayed their  pure love SmileSmileSmileSmile


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Edited by febinyusuff - 23 December 2010 at 7:43am

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Yayyyyy me 2nd woohooo finally awesomeeeee update as usual yayyy maan telling geet abt his feeling yayyy n hehe he don't care abt pari or anyone he only care for geet n loveeee to be in her arms hayeeeee n den uff dis pari hating her so so much plzz stop doing dis pari bt thnx god maneet relationship is not affecting at aol wid dis pari n den ooohhh maan getting angry n jealous seeing boys staring at geet n even shouted at geet awww can't wait for next update now n thnx diii for updating was waiting a longggg for it

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 23 December 2010 at 7:39am

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loved it............

possessive maan is on the way nd geet is sweet with her innocence

wonder how pari reacts wen she saw maan nd geet together

amazing update....

u just don't deserve just three stars but ten

so here u goesStar

cont soon

 



Edited by dia_ditz - 23 December 2010 at 7:40am

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Muskan di:) a big big hug to ya:) :) geet is so innocent:) maan shud hav pushed that idiot pari in msk style :) and maan poor boy he cant just make his angel understand things :) :) mind blowing update.. :) :) eagerly waiting for the next one.. :) :)

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 23 December 2010 at 7:46am

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fabulous...had been sitting in front of my pc for endless hours for ur beautiful updates..

keep writing


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really loved it happy tht now maan talks more and geet is quite but cant imagine it

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thanks girl, you are great, i wont be able to read your updates from tomorrow till 3rd jan please forgive me, i shall read them when i return, till them please keep PMing me.

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