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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 2 (Page 30)

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 12:54pm | IP Logged

~deewangi~
part 13

it was nice to see them getting so dependent on eachother.
maan did very well with his studies and now had full control on
her studies too. he was able to understand & guide her but actually
she never lacked.

geet came with this celebration idea & was quiet enthu about the
next day. I guess this time he also knew what was the special day all
about. it was indeed a special day for them, he felt it was more for him
because it was the day he saw her for the first time. he wanted to do
some thing special for her but didn't know how could he make it special
he knew nothing can be as special as the gift she has given him...
she gave him everything he ever wanted..life full of love..she filled
every moment of his life with pure and seren love. she never asked for
anything liked she owned him.

next day she came in the morning it was a saturday no school
still she managed to be there at 9am. she barged straight into his room
and & saw him sleeping. she went & cuddled up next to him & waited for him
to get up but dossed off next to him. they probably just slept for few hours
maan put his hand around her & felt it was a dream. he held her closer. she
was so happy he did. he opened his eyes suddenly to meet her pure face
he felt what a perfect way to start a beautiful day. he kept admiring her
folding his arms on his chest. he didn't disturb her, she was used to sleeping
untill late on weekends, she probably got up early because it was their anniversary
she got up after an hour or so, she fluttered open her eyes & saw him
looking at her, she jumped up & said happy anniversary I love you. mujhe pata hain
you don't know. actually last year hum aaj hi ke din pehle bar mille the
aur maine aap ko kiss kiya tha, I love you bhi kaha tha.
he didn't want to say anything he just kept quiet, still not sure how
to express himself in words. she dragged him to the washroom jaldi ready ho javoo
I want to go to the temple today with you
. He got ready & they cycled to the
temple. it was bit crowded today. dehke late kar diyana kitni beheed hain uff
they sat in the steps waiting for the crowd to disperse.
geet kept looking behind at the crowd. She noticed the crowd was because of some
wedding cermony. she jumped up & said mujhe bhi shaadi karni hain abhi
maan looked at her in shock. she dragged him close to the idols & said challo
shaadi karten hain.
maan - geet relax aise shaadi nahi hoti
she started to cry..aap mujhse shaadi nahi karna chate issliya bahane bana rahen ho
he didn't know what to say, he hated her tears & was losing it
geet - you don't love me & kept crying
he took the sindoor & put it on her forehead & removed his chain from his
neck & tied it around her. she hugged him in joy & kissed the locket which fell
till her stomach. mujhe sabko batana hain we are married now.
he was not sure of what he did or was he even supposed to do that.
she rushed to her house with him
geet - mama..mama..mama dehko....
rano came out running to see her with red sindoor on her forehead & dragging
maan holding his hand.
rano shouted - GEET
geet jumping around rano - humne shaadi karle!!! humne shaadi karle
maan stood looking down & feeling guilty
rano told geet to wash her face & come, & took maan to the her room
rano - woh to nasamjh hain, tumhe tho..
he stood looking down
rano - how could you do something like this, agar kisi ko pata chalgaya tho
kitni badnami honi hain, kaun karega isse shaadi abhi
maan fell on his knees pleeding - hume allag nahi kareyan please
rano looked at him in shock & lifted him he had tears in his eyes
rano - hume aapke risthe se koi problem nahi, lekin this is not the age
abhi geet ko kuch samjh nahi, she is crazy behind you, what if she grows up
and thinks all this was a big mistake. u will not like it yourself.
maan just realized what rano said.. offcourse as she grows her expectation
or fantacy about life partner may change.
rano - not just her you may also feel it differently latter on
u may find someone better
maan - no one can be better than geet he said very softly
rano smiled & hugged him - aise hi rahena badal mat
he hugged her back holding feeling the warmth of a mother
geet came & hugged them both mujhe bhi hug karni hain
rano - challo uski chain wapis karo
geet - nahi aab yeh meri hain
rano - GEET
geet - yeh mera mangalsutar hain & turns away
maan - aacha put it inside atleast
geet - umm
maan - promise u won't tell anyone
makes a baby face & nodes for a yes.
rano kissed the forehead of both the kids & blessed them

the 11th was rocking for maan. the whole school was impressed with his
performance as the vice-captain & studies. his attitude was to kill for
girls just die to have a word with him & he cared a dam. he walks
pass & the crowd would just turn to acknowledging him. all age group
girls would turn up to him with lame excuses just spend a sec around him.
he was the best vice-captian ever, dedicated & impartial. he made them all
pround. the most happiest person was his cute little wify.
she never could stop claiming herself as his wife but to him & only him.
they finished their exams & results where out.
both of them topped. rano was very happy specially knowing their closeness
she was happy that they always helped eachother do better.
 
summer holidays geet was to go away to HP to visit her grandparents this year
both of them where very upset & didn't want to leave each other.
almost 2years now, they have never stayed without meeting eachother.
it was a one month long trip maan could not even think about not seeing geet
for that long. he was getting wild with the thought.

PRECAP
meeting after a month

-NEXT PART 14-
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 19 December 2010 at 10:36am

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Yepeeeeeeeeeee.......RES

OMG OMG OMG.......mushki u r too good  Muaaahhhh and big hug Hug........maneet are so innocent and married...oopppsssWinkLOL and RANO is so supportive....chalo atleast maan has expressed his feeling to rano Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

Aweee geet is going HP and maneet will be apart for ONE MONTHCryCryCryCryCryCry....but but but pracap is rocking...abhi se m feeling Day Dreaming
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Hey mushki pls pls pls pls update khamoshi?????

pls tell wen u will updateeeeeeeeeeeee........we r waiting for ur ans




Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 18 December 2010 at 1:07pm

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I speechless right now...

Well thinking of something to say... Kafi kuch change ho gaya... Shaadi... ShockedWinkLOLEmbarrassed... all emotions together...
Bal-Vivah...Tongue....
Ek daam suprefast speed main kahani aage baad rahi hai...
Ohh merko toh promo yaad aagaya... Waha Maan forces Geet... He says... Na Aunghuti... Na koi Izhaar... Geet tuumhe meri Mangeetaar banna hi padhega...
Par yeh kya... Na prior warning... Na enagement.. direct shaadi...
arre Geet saath phere lena bhul gayi... Bahut jaaldi thi ghar bhaagne main... Sabko announce jo karna tha... that she became Mrs.Geet Maan Khurana....
(Tressa Jealous...Ouch.)
Geet seems to be a little innocent girl by age... But usske ideas... By GOd... Abhi shaadi karli... Aage pata nahi kya kya demand karegi madam... Maan bechara... Kabhi naa nahi kar payenga..LOLLOLWinkWink
& Rano.... Wat an understanding mother...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Mujhe aise ideas bhi agar aaye na... Toh I wud have been homeless by now... My family wud be behind me... Pyaar ka saara bhoot meri dimag se nikal deete...LOLLOLLOL
Par yahan toh ulta hi scene hai...
Rano Maa ki Jai ho....
Chalo I will stop bugging u with my silly commments....
Today's update was superb...
Love
Tressa
 


Edited by Tressa - 18 December 2010 at 1:17pm

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
:O
what was that?
YOU GOT THEM MARRIED??
I LOVE YOU MUSKAN!!

Tiny wifey ke liye itna!! Tiny babies bolenge papa star lakey do, ye to rocket leke nikal padega!!

You updated..and now i can finally go to sleep :D
marvellous job!

Edited by Mohi_nisH - 18 December 2010 at 1:03pm

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 WWWWWWWWOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW MAANEET ARE MARRIED NOW HAYE Dancing Party Embarrassed

FIRST MIND BLOWING EPISODE AND NOW THIS UPDATE  Embarrassed

HAYE AAJ TO 2NO NAI FAINT KAR DIA Dead

LOVED THAT PART WHEN MAAN FELL ON HIS KNEES Embarrassed

DO UPDATE SOON Day Dreaming


Edited by misbah92 - 18 December 2010 at 1:10pm

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great
superb..........

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AWESOME MUSKAN!Clap

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at last...and u know what?? As usual came up with a great update!!! OMG!! They got married?!?!? Do they hv any idea what they hv done?? I hv never imagined that marriage can be sooo cute..

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