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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 2 (Page 21)

love_lavnya Senior Member

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Hey Muskan di,
awosome update di u realy rocks with u r ff
so sweet.......geet is  so caring and wavo both share b'day.....OMG maan becharaa..only god no how he controlling himself and geet din understand Wink..........pls update soon
really loved it n geet is so naughty how will maan handle her
plzzzzzzzzzz update khamoshi and truly magical soon
pls di it's weekend pls update two parts fo deewangi plsssssssss
give us weekend treat plssssssss
love uEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


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kellz Goldie

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
geet is still dressed in maan's clothes ?
_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
loved it
geet is so sweet
gr8 update
con soon
ksasi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
lovely part.
SakshiGarg Goldie

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
honestly this update was mixture of all the feelings together....... like u had shown sorrow on one tym followed by joy followed by innocence followed by passion........all in one update!!!! love u 4 this wonderful update!!!ClapClap
they share b'day!!!! i was lyk Day Dreaming
maan's mom died on the same day......CryCry i literally cried here!!!Cry
geet maan ke rang mein rangi huiEmbarrassed
geet bringing gifts 4 maan n making him happy Big smileHug
geet asking her gift...........maan being out of control...... geet's innocence...... maan's reluctanceBlushingBlushing
jst loved it!!!!!!
bluedreamz953 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 12:42am | IP Logged

part 12

aug 1st
she met him in the morning she looked excited & thrilled  
geet - yeh mera bday month hain, waise aapka bday kab hain?
he was quite, he hated his bday
geet - mat batavo main pata kar longi
he ignored her and didn't want to talk about it. Its been more than 10yrs he
has celbrated his birthday.
she was giving him the list of things she demanding her father this year
geet - cell phone - 2..ek pink color ek blue color
video games wi fi wali - 2
mujhe ipad bhi chahiya - 2
dresses & chocolates tho banta hi hain  OMG!!Iski b'day wishlist is longer than mine!!!Haha!
he was not listening. The talk of his bday just reminded him of his past
he looked really angry & irritated. she didn't realize he was getting upset

latter in the day she found out his bday. she was on top of the world
to see they share the same birthday.WOW!!Same b'day!!How cool!! she planned to keep it a secret
on her bday she went to his house in her cute pink colour dress with all
her gifts, she went in her car with the driver.
as she went in there was havan going around. maan & daadi were dressed in
white & attending the shrad. it was maans moms 11th death anniversary
and ironically geets 11th bday. she was shocked & didn't know what to
say. she never knew maans mom was no more and above all her date of birth
was same as his moms day of death.So sad! she ran to his room & began to cry
she changed her pinky fairy dress & wore his pyjama & kurta So cute!!
she came & sat next to daadi & cried resting her head on her lap
the driver left the gifts on the sofa & left.
after the havan was completed, maan went to his room & sat next to the window
he felt odd, for all these years he felt sad on this day. but today he was
happy,Khush kyun nahi hoga..akhir usko uski Geet jo mill gayi hai!! he didn't quite understand his own reason to be so warm & happy
daadi got some halwa for geet & maan, she told geet to give to him.
geet - nahi woh naraz hain mujhse
he stood behind the door & was listening to them
daadi - woh tumhe kuch nahi kahega
geet - woh kyun daadi?
daadi - tum tho uski mama ke tarah ho
geet & maan both were confused
daadi - u were born on the same date as his mom died, tho bhagvan ji ne
tumhe uski mama ki jagha friend bana ke bheja hain Heart
maan curiously delightedly - mera liya bheja hain? Of coz buddhu,tumhare liye bheja hai!!Big smile
daadi smiled seeing him for the first time so happy on his birthday
she always wanted to celebrate his bday, but he never enjoyed he always sulked
he took the halwa from her bowl & finished it.
she had it from his bowl. Haha..that's so cute!

daadi looked at the gift packs on the sofa yah sab kya hain?
geet - humare bday gifts hain
maan wondered humare Oye,agar uski baat suni hoti toh pata chalta ki sab kuch tum dono ke liye tha!D'oh
she opened the gifts & showed it to daadi & maan
maan sat on daadi's chairs arm rest while she was excitedly openning all
the gifts. first she opened a the phone wala packet
geet - yah dehko this is for you & this for me
she took two identical Samsung Epic phones, mujhe color choice nahi millen
she twisted her lips. maan looked at daadi & she nodded & then he accepted
took the phone in his hand.

geet - dehko na yah aise slide bhi hota hain

maan was thrilled to see & explore it. she had locked it with a pwd
maan looked at her knowing what will be her great idea of pwd
geetmaankhurana Haha...that's so cute!
he was looking curiously into the phone, while geet was opening the next gift
she gave him the wi fi video game
daadi was little reluctant now.
geet - daadi yeh sab mainne nahi mama papa ne li hain
daadi - lekin beta yah sab
geet - aacha aap mama se baat kar lo
she promptly takes the landline & makes a call to rano
geet - mama daadi gift nahi le rahi
rano - they didn't like the gift
geet - aap hi pouch lo
geet gives the phone to daadi
rano - namaste ji
daadi - namaste
rano - aapko gift aache nahi lage
daadi - nahi woh baat nahi, itna sab kuch
rano - aarey aaj tho maan beta ka birthday hain na jaise geet humari beti wasi hi maan bhi humara beta huwa na, tho dono main behd kaise kar sakte hain, jo geet ke liya wohi maan ke liya bhi liya hain, kuch alag nahi hain
daadi was not sure, this was the first time some one was showering so
much of love to him she didn't want him to be deprived of their love,
even though she felt all this was too much.
daadi smiled weakly in acceptance
rano - kya hum maan ko wish kar sakte hain
daadi - ji
she gives the phone to maan
rano - happy birthday beta
maan - thank you aunty
rano - aapko gifts aache lage?
maan - ji, thanks a lot
rano - aache se man laga ke patna, aur apne deewani ko bhi patne ko kahna
aajkal padhai main dyan nahi hain uska
he looked at geet - ji aunty
geet busy opening the other gift.
he finishes the call & looks at her. she looked so delighted all dressed in his
dress, uske rang main rangi huwai ho jaise Just so cute!!Hug
geet - yeh dehko I-PAD
she gives to him, yeh aapka aur yeh wala mera
then she gives a data card for internet connection
daadi looked curiously
geet - daadi yeh internet connection ke liya hain
yeh sab papa ke office ka corporate connection hain, tho bill tho office jayega
she starts jumping mama kho pata bhi nahi chalega 
daadi knew she was naughty but was shocked to see her challo panti ROFLChalupanti!! 
but she was happy that maan had some one to share his happiness with.
she left them alone to play with their new gifts & went inside to her room
relaxing, she looked forward to sundays to rest. she was not able to take
the office stress off late.
there was another packet she didn't open
maan - woh kya hain
she looked down feeling reluctant
maan opened it & saw it was their bday cake she had specially ordered
with their names written..happy birthday maan - geet
maan - daadi ...!! DAADI!!!
he took the cake & went to daadis room
geet was confused whether he got angry about this celebration idea
he showed the cake to daadi - challo cut karte hain
geet came in - sachi main cut karenge
daadi - hain.. both u together
she gave the knief to maan & geet, they held it together & cut it
daadi sang - happy birthday to maan & geet
nakul also joined her singing in his own besura cute tone Haha..Nakul fans,this bit was for you!!LOL
they all laughed. geet fed him & daadi
daadi told maan - tum bhi use khilavo
he took a small piece & fed her she was so happy he did
maan also fed a piece to daadi.
daadi kissed maan & then geet - happy birthday
nakul served the cake in a plate, they took it & went to maans room
she sat on his bed & messed up her face with chocolate cream all around her
face, cheek & lips. maan looked at her & smiled Waah waah!!Aaj kal khoob smile karne lage hain...Not bad huh?Wink
geet - meri gift showing her cheeks to kiss
he could not refuse her today, actually could never refuse her for anything
he bend forward towards her cheek & placed a very soft peck & whispered
happy birthday. she froozed with the thought he actually kissed her
she was so happy she couldn't react she just sat there frozen. Geet tu kitni jhalli hai??ROFL 

he was really tempted to kiss her more & more. he kept looking at her
feeling her so closed to his lips. he licked the chocolate from her cheeks
she looked at him from corner of her eyes - that is not fair main bhi lick karongi
maan moved away realizing what he was doing. Oh ho!!Embarrassed
she pulled him down on the bed & sat on his stomach. Abe!Uska rape karegi kya??ROFLshe put the cake on his face LOLbechara bach nahi paya..all my sympathies with you!!LOL
maan screamed - geet nahi , mari baat suno yeh sab teehk nai hain
geet - aap kar sakte ho tho main kyun nahi, mujhe bhi aapki cake khani hain
maan - geet meri baat suno please, meri uppar se uttro
before he could stop her she nibbled his cheeks, his hands stopped protesting
she moved on the other side nibbling the chocolate cream & crums
he felt it so nice & melting. he could feel himself drowning in it. he did
she took some more cream & put it on his nose & forehead
she began to cutely playfully kissing him & licking him
he closed his eyes feeling the peek. his hands held the spread untill he could
finally come back to senses. he pantingly opened his eyes & looked at her.
she was looking at his lips. he held her sochna bhi mat he said OMG!!Bacchi badmaash hoti jaa rahi hai!! Control Geet!!Control!!
she smiled naughtly & moved away from his stomach. he went to clean himself & changed into
something more decent like a jeans, because his hardness was quiet visible in
his pyjamas. he definitly didn't want her to notice & question him
knowing her she will bluntly innocently ask him

holidays!!! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited!!!LOL!!
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan Love you too di!!

Edited by bluedreamz953 - 18 December 2010 at 12:42am
mamon.moon Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:17am | IP Logged
nice and sweet part. loved their bday gift. geet is really too much for maan. I hope he can keep his control untill geet become a little older. update soon............
kooliio IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 12518

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Awesome update..!!!
aww they share same b'day..!!
thats so cute..and loved their gifts..!!!
cant wait for the next part..!!!
pls cont.soon..!!!

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