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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 2 (Page 125)

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp

haila..what happened to geet...uff maan all scared...going insane!!!!
anyone waiting for the update NOW!!!!
actually faby's black coffee magic!!!WinkWink

Me going Insane like Maan too
Wonder wht will happen??
Omg scared hehe

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 25 December 2010 at 9:28pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 9:40pm | IP Logged

part 20

His smile washed away with the sight. His face turned pale. He didn't have time to say another word and she was already standing on the rim & she turned to face him. She cried innocently wanting him to believe her, her deewangi. There was no fear in her eyes she just stepped backward looking at him with tears in her eyes,her eyes kept him captive as it moved lower & lower. He ran towards her & jumped out, leaning out, holding her hand pulling her up with all his strength. She hit her head on the wall while swinging in mid air. He lifted her upward, crying geet ..geet..he hugged in her arms & kissed her madly, like it was his life like he just got his heart beating in his bear hands. She cried I love you & fainted bleeding. He didn't quiet understand what happened to her. He lifted her in his arms & rushed down the steps, impatiently waited for the lift,  there was no point taking her to his house, he or nakul couldn't have sone much to her so he made his way to the main gate..took a cab & went to her house. Carrying & running inside & screaming mama..mama...!!rano & maid came out seeing holding geet. He lay her on the sofa & cried sab meri wajahse huwa, mama geet, mama meri geet ko dehko na,  he kept cupping her face & crying to rano. Rano looked at geet, she looked fine with just a small swelling on her forehead but her skirt was soaked in blood. She understood & consoled maan, she fine usse kuch nahi huwa hain.
Maan - nahi mama, woh kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hain, dehko na kitna khoon...he could even voice it out. Rano hugged him & patted his back, she is fine.. she was down with fever last month & abhi.. she pauses & says weakness hogyee hain thats why she fainted. She tells the servant to make her lay inside. Maan doesn't let any one come near geet. He lifts her & takes her to her bedroom.
Maan - mama doctor ko nahi bulana?
Rano - nahi beta she is fine
maan - woh kab uttha gi?
Rano - let her rest for some time, challo have some water.
He looked really worn out & tensed.
Rano gave him a glass of water & asked him to have
maan - nahi mujhe geet ke paas rahenna hain holding geets hand
rano - maan aap thodi deer bahar wait kareyen, I will need to change her
he half heartedly went out & paced restlessly in the hall.
Rano came out after 30mins - she is perfectly fine & sleeping now. Tum uss se kal millena
maan - mama main usse ek bar dehk loon
rano smiled & nodded.
He rushed up the steps & stood near the door & watched her. Rano had changed her into her night dress & she was cuddled up in her spread with tear trail in her eyes. His eyes moist seeing that. Rano kissed him on his forehead & told him there is nothing to worry. He hugged her sobbing, feeling guilty.
Rano - tumhare koi galti nahi,  woh tho hain tumhari deewani, kuch hosh nahi rahta usse,
rano mocks she thinks tum badal rahen ho, she doesn't realize she is also growing.
Maan feels little better. He goes back home & punishes himself. He punches the wall with bare hand until it doesn't kill the pain with in him.
Geet wakes up calling his name & crying with stomach crunches. She gets up to run out, rano comes & shouts at her. Kanha ja rah ho tum.
Geet - maan
rano - u can't go out anywhere for 5days
geet - nahi mujhe jana hain
rano - u have started with your periods
geet was dumb stuck & looked at her stomach & went in the wash room. She sat on the commode cuddled up. Rano explained it is normal & will last 5days. She explained her how to place the pad & take adequate rest. Her friends came to meet her in the evening. Arohi was only left odd one out now.  Meera - which pad are you using?
Geet pointed at the packet on the table
meera - try whispers with wings they are ultra thin
ridz - whats the point ultra thin, we will have to change it that often.
Meera - I still prefer that.
Geet left really shy discussing about all that.
Ridz - aab tho tumhe bhi bras lene padhenge
meera - actually I wanted to tell you that, it is high time you should start wearing one. It looks really odd with shirt.
Geet looked at herself in the mirror, not able to understand what they meant. She wondered if maan meant the same thing.
Geet - kya matlab? Kya odd lagraha hain?
Meera & ridz laugh. Arohi & geet innocently look at them.
Meera - u need to wear bras stupid.
Geet - usse kya hota hain
meera - Bras provide support for the breasts and keep breasts from sagging while you wear them.
ridz - uff geet u r such a duffer
geet makes a baby face
ridz - it looks so indecent otherwise
geet was shocked InDeCeNt!!!! she just realized that's what maan hinting to all the while. She felt ashamed of herself. She didn't know how to face maan again.

Next day maan waited for her in the morning. He only knows how he managed the whole night worrying for her. His fear deepened not seeing her. He immediately called her. Geet lifted the phone in half sleep.
Maan - where are you? Why didn't you come to my place it is 8.20am, tum teehk ho na?
Geet sat up in the bed at once, it was the very first time maan ever called her & why did he expect her to come to his place when he doesn't have classes.
Maan - GEET !!! GEET!!!
she was shy & hesitant - umm
maan - tum teehk ho na?
Geet - umm
maan - what happened to you?
She didn't know how to tell him she got her periods, it felt so odd & the thought that she had asked about it to him made her feel even more conscious.
Maan was losing it  now - geet kya huwa hain tumhe?
She was still quiet totally unlike her
maan shouted - so u don't even want to talk to me now?
She cried struggling to express herself.
He hated to her tears, he was just losing it. He cut the call & closed his eyes & banged the wall with his already hurt fist. He called her again getting restless.
Maan - GEET !!! kuch tho bolo?
Geet - main school nahi gayee, sick leave leya hain
he was shocked..sick leave. he cut the call & he reached her place in 15mins.
Maan - mama mama
he rushed in bumping into to mohinder handa, geets father.
Mohinder - kya huwa beta?
Maan - papaji geet !! he looked really hassled
mohinder calls for rano
rano comes out listening to maan & mohinder
rano - ji yeh maan puttar, main ne kaha tha na aapse
mohinder scanned him top to bottom & patted his cheeks  giving a warm smile and left to office.
Rano looks at maan
maan -  ussne sick leave kyun liya hain? Kya huwa usse
rano - kuch nahi stomach ache hain, wait I will call her
maan - nahi usse rest karne do , main room main jaake milta hoon
rano shouts - EK MIN
maan stops at the steps
rano - I will see if she is up first & rushes to the room, before him
maan was confused
rano quickly went & shook geet - uttar utto maan aaya hain
geet gets up & sits at once.
Rano - change karlo
geet - yeh dress teehk hain
rano points at the stains go change now
geet - mama main ne tho pad teehk hi rakha tha phir bhi aise
rano smiled - first time hain na iseliya, u will soon get used to it.
geet freshens up & changes into her another teddy printed pink color pyjama & top in cotton
she checked herself in mirror & felt concious.
Geet - mama yeh she pointed at her sagging curves
rano - its ok teehk lag raha hain
geet - nahi main aise unke samne nahi javongi
rano smiled thinking finally she seems to understand, things. Rano tells her to wear a spaghetti tight slip inside & then wear the top. Geet changes & comes out. Still feeling conscious. She wondered if he will again get angry at her or not believe her. 
Maan walks in restlessly - tum teehk ho na?
he hugged & holding her close to him. She felt his concern in the way he literally crushed her in his grip. Her hands softly rested on his back forgetting all her consciousness. He stood hugging her for few minutes. He pushed her curls behind & looked at her - you took any medicine?
She fluttered her eyes in confusion, wondering if he actually knew she was having her periods. That thought made her feel really nervous.
Maan - bahut pain ho raha hain?
She didn't know where to look. She turned pink in embarrassment.
geet hiding whispers from maan

~PREV PART 19     NEXT    PART 21~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 27 December 2010 at 2:10pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
How cute!

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it was so cute............ loved it

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 25 December 2010 at 9:58pm
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love it..
nice that maan care for geet..

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maan cares for geet a lot !

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loved it

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