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ujala26 IF-Dazzler

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awesome part..
cntinue sooon..

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hey awesome

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loved it

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Hey sristhi

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Nice part

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hey every one thnk u soooo much for ur lovely comments sorry for not replying individual but ur comments realy help me to improve and be better each time with my updates thank u sooo much for encouraging comments thnk u
btw sorry i had said i would update on wednessday 1 part but i couldnt write one due to my papers but heres the full part

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Armaan was waiting for his answer where as riddhima was still looking in his eyes, so armaan repeated his question to riddhima "batao na basket tumhe ring kaise lagi" this time riddhima didn't wait and said "boht achi hai tumhari pasand" hearing this armaan wanted to tease riddhima "basket mujhe pata tha ki tumhe meri choice, pasand ayegi kyunki tum bhi toh meri pasand ho" saying this armaan winked at riddhima. Riddhima lowered her head while blushing off, where as armaan thought still she hasn't recognised it but its good she hasn't cause till that time he has his full chance of being close to riddhima.


It was few mins since they hadn't talk but were just looking into each others eyes it was hard for armaan to control his feeling any further so he touched her hand and raised it and kissed the ring she was wearing, in return riddhima closed her eyes trying to feel his touch. After kissing her hand armaan looked towards her face he saw riddhimas eyes closed which brought a smile on his face. She hasn't changed a bit even after their relationship went ahead yesterday night she still remains the same shy riddhima, thinking about shy riddhima armaan had a smile on his face and shaked his head "basket aakhen khole kha nahiin jaoonga tumhe" while saying this armaan was smiling on the other hand riddhima opened her left eye keeping the right eye closed to see where is armaan standing seeing this act armaan couldn't stop his laught and burst out laughing loud hearing him laugh riddhima opened her other eye as well.


"Armaan itna kyun hass (laugh) rahe ho" hearing this made armaan laugh more since he wasn't able to control his laughter firstly she didn't realise they wernt dancing on their music for performance secondly she still gets scared when he touches her. Thse two things were making him laugh all the way, but this wasn't the case with riddhima she was just fuming in anger she didn't knew what is happening "armaan whats so funny" armaan stopped his laughter to reply her back "basket tumhe aaj ho kya gaya hai" riddhimas face appeared confused which he noticed "matlab" trying to understand what armaan said failing upon her thinking she thought better to ask rather think.

"Basket kuch nahiin chodo" he said while riddhima couldn't take it "armaan bhaad main jao" and quickly armaan reply came "hamesha ki tarah address toh bata do" this answer made riddhima spack armaan on his hand. Soon their ususl bickering started off by this time atul and Anjali came back from their duty since some time was still left so they thought to practice with armaan and riddhima seeing this site they couldn't stop but burst out laughing hearing them laughing armaan and riddhima looked at them joining with them was armaan even he couldn't stop though Anjali and atul were laughing at the scene they saw but armaan was laughing at something else.


Atul and Anjali walked upto armaan and riddhima, Anjali spoke first "tum dono kabhi nahiin badloge na" following her was atul "Anjali bilkul sahi keh rahi hai atleast ab toh bickering karna band karo" armaan had to say something since riddhima didn't knew what to say "nahiin champ ye bickering or fights haasi Mazak hi toh hamari love story ko aur haseen banati hai" riddhima smiled to armaans answer giving a nod to his answer meant he is right. Anjali was happy from inside that her sister is damn lucky to have armaan in her life he is the best person for her sister. "How cute" said Anjali both armaan and riddhima looked towards her and smiled as a gesture of thank you.



Max knew his friends want to kill him for lying to dr. kirti, they arnt ready at all for get about ready they haven't yet decided the song nor they know will they ever get time to practice after their punishment. Priya who was fuming in anger spoke "what made you say a lie" following her was ruhan "tujhe pata hain a we haven't decided anything phir bhi why you did this" max looked at nazuk thinking even she would         say something but to his surprise she didn't say anything so he spoke to give an answer to his friends "aur kya karta unhe bol deta ki humne kuch practice nahiin ki hai or phir vo kya sochti ki hum juniors kisi kaam ke nahiin hai khud bola tha ki performance karenge per abhi tak practice shuru bhi nahiin ki" for a second every one was dumbstruck but to his surprise nazuk spoke "toh tumne jhoot bolna sahi laga"?.

"Matlab" asked max who couldn't understand what was she trying to say. To explain max she expanded what ever she wanted to say "mera matlab tum sach nahiin bolna chahte the kyunki tumhe darr tha ki impression kharab hog isi liye jhoot bola ab iss jhoot ko sach kaise sabit karoge agar ye pakda gaya toh tumhe nahiin lagta isse impression aur kharab ho jayga" hearing this priya felt its somewhat true how will they come out of their truth if they ever fall into trap.where as ruhan agreed with nazuk and said "I agree nazuk ek jhoot ko chupane ke liye 100 aur jhoot bolne padega" this was testing max he being a complete tension free kind of a guy didn't really liked this lecture and spoke "ok fine mujhe ye lectures nahiin sunne and can we concentrate on the practice now".


This was the final blow for nazuk she thought this man had no sense of what he is saying or doing so she again spoke "tumhe samaj nahiin aa raha we haven't yet decided things or tumhe lagta hai aaj sab kuch ho jayga well then you are wrong forget it mien jaa rahi hun" max didn't like what nazuk said "nazuk tum aise beech main chodke nahiin jaa sakti samjhi" "why cant I leave" nazuk's instant reply came which took a second for max to understand think and then reply "kyunki nahiin jaa sakti rehersal karni hai" this time priya spoke rather than nazuk though nazuk wanted to say something but priya spoke first "rehersal my foot we haven't decided on the music steps forget rehersal I guess tumse kuch nahiin ho sakta"  ruhan who was observing this fight tried to control his friends by saying something but was interrupted by nazuk she spoke first "tum logo ko jo karna hai karo but the truth is ki ab hamara impression kharab zaroor hog cause of you mr. max" max who couldn't take this insult spoke to defend himself "why cause of me you guys arnt ready to practice"

Ruhan who was listening patiently lost his cool and shouted at them "shut up guys" hearing such loud voice not only these 3 people but other people in the caf teria also looked towards him with a question mark on their face. The question was nothing but why did he shout seeing every one looking at him he realised he shouldn't have shouted if by any chance seniors would have heard him or any of the doctors under whom they are doing their internship he would surely been given a punishment to correct his mistakes he said an apology to thers "sorry I didn't mean to shout like this but my friend wernt listening to me so I had left with no options orry once again" hearing his sorry other people resumed their talks or concentrated on their work now ruhan looked that other are no more looking here so he looked towards his friends and said "why the hell are you fighting its not the time to fight"  but others were not interested for this one so the girls left the place saying they wernt interested any more to perform with them and max who was frustrated with this whole argument just left without any word ruhan was left dumbstruck by this behaviour of his friends. He didn't knew what to do or say so he to left hoping everything to be solved by tomorrow.



For the first time armaan had entered through the door which made riddhima bit surprise. Today they were suppose to rehersal in riddhima and anjalis house since in sanjeevni atul and Anjali couldn't practice due to their emergencies. Some how today the luck was with armaan dr. shashank wasn't at home he had left for lonavala today itself along with Padma since some important work needed to be finished by shashank which required Padma as well though he didn't tell his daughters the exact thing but said its something for them. Before going he had given the permission for armaan and atul to come and reherse and can even stay back if it gets quiet late in the night. Shashank by now had started trusting armaan and seeing her daughter smiling again and living the life which she had forgotten he didn't mind at all armaan being around her if that makes her happy he is happy to let armaan be around her.


They all were practicing in the hall in the house they had collectively decided the show it will be a kind of film bit of acting and dancing on the whole it will show case something or depict something which was for juniors to understand. After a while they all took a break from their rehersal and sat down to chat and relax a bit. Anjali spoke "guys aaj interns ka jhagda caf teria main I guess not a right sign" anjalu had come to know since some of her collegues who use to assist her or knew her had to told her about the incident which had taken place in the caf teria today.

Armaan: I know man I cant believe they fought

Riddhima: armaan ho sakt hain a ki koi problem aa gayi hogi

Armaan: hain riddhima lekin sabke samne

Anjali: these juniors are really proving to be kiddish

Atul: mujhe lagta hai hume juniors ko judge nahiin karna chahiye

Armaan: sahi kaha champ per unhe pata hona chahiye they are no more in medical college they are doing internship

Anjali: right armaan pata nahiin how these juniors are.

Once the discussion started it was a never ending debate, here seniors think juniors should behave where as juniors think that they have to be in good books rather giving a wrong impression to any one. Here seniors think they shouldn't judge juniors but still were assuming things as the history goes none can stop assuming things once the talk happens it evolves into assumption which does bring a barrier to any relationship, it creates differences some how between people trying to stop things generally leads the other side, it ends up happening juniors who didn't wanted to give a wrong impression certainly seniors were getting wrong impression their chat continued for about an hour they completely forgot about their rehersal and started having a conversation or rather a debate. Finally armaan said "lets wait observe our juniors before coming to conclusions"

Coming up

Juniors under observation by seniors

Juniors into trouble

Armaan and riddhima romance fire escape

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