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youth_showsfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
NOTE: firstly i have tried to change the style of writing rather writing dialogue wise i have writen it in a continuous form please do tell ur opinion regarding the same which is better
secondly my exams are starting from wed so i will update complete part  on friday  or if u want i can update in two part i.e one on wed and other on friday.plz tell
thnk u



Dr. Kirti: ye aap logo ka ghar nahiin hai ki jab mann kare tab aa gaye ye ek hospital hai jahan koi rules and regulations hote hain every single minute counts while dr. kirti was giving them this angry lecture interns head were down in guilt this was their 4th day in sanjeevni and they are being scolded and all had one thing in their mind she looked like phoolandevi soon they were out of their thoughts when dr. kirti mentioned "aap sabko punishment milegi" hearing this every one was looking with a confused face and were thinking punishment on our 4th day of work. Soon they were interrupted by kirti who said"aap log 3 din tak lagatar stool test karenge" hearing this max said instantly "per maam"before he continued kirti interrupted and said "4 din" hearing this max again said "meri baat toh suniye" again kirti continued "5 din" this time max didn't say anything he understood if he says anything the punishment would just increase rather than decrease so he kept quiet. Kirti again said" aur kuch kehna hai apko dr max" seeing kirti increasing the punishment days every time he spoke he chose to shut his mouth so he shaked his head which meant no. dr. kirti conitued saying "better dr. max and interns now your punishment is of 5 days rather 3 days and iam personally going to check each and every body whether you are doing your work or not is that clear?" hearing dr. kirtis command or rather order they nodded their head which meant they agreed ti what ever she said.]

When dr. kriti left the the nurse station every intern had a shoked face and didn't knew what to say or what to do 1st week of their internship they got a punishment. To lighten the atmosphere max spoke" koi baat nahiin guys 5 hi toh din hai" hearing this nazuk spoke instantly "3 hote agar tumne kuch bola nahiin hota" and after this statement priya for the fist time agreed with nazuk "hain max agar tu kuch nahiin bolta toh 3 ke 5 din nahiin hote"  being offended max couldn't resist but speak up to defend himself "mien toh kam karwane ki koshish kar raha tha" hearing the talks ruhan couldn't stop but speak up "thank you max for helping" though he said it in a sarcastic manner which was a hint that every one is angry with his behaviour. Max understood the sarcasm and after that didn't speak a word rather heard every ones anger quietly cause by now he understood 3 days were easy compared to 5 days since it would only increase the work load for them. Doing their regular duties along with the punishment they would hardly find time to reherse for their performance and even if they get little time to prepare it's only going to make them tired.

While max was lost in his thoughts of calculating how would they find time for practice ruhan saw seniors coming so he gave hints to others about their arrival but since max was lost in his own thought he didn't pay any kind of attention to his ishare's, it went ignored by max and little did others knew that this ignorance might lead to some problems for them.

Seniors arrived and saw dull faces of interns no matter how much juniors tried to hide it was still visible from their faces that something is really fishy but what? Armaan took the initiative "so whats up guys?" asked armaan to interns. Every one turned their faces towards him; ruhan gave an instant answer "nothing" now toh definitely there's some problem armaan could sense that so he tried other way round he saw max not paying attention to their talks so he tried to talk to him "hey max kya hua" hearing his name being called out he came out of his thoughts and saw seniors standing infornt of him. Seeing seniors he gave a bit shocked look which didn't go unnoticed by seniors especially armaan. Riddhima asked max "kya hua itne khoye (lost) huye kyun ho?" hearing this max looked at her and was trying to find some answer where as other juniors cursed their destiny since by now they have understood that max is still thinking anout the punishment but why is he thinking seeing his character and behaviour all these things doesn't matters him at all then how come he is thinking all the juniors had no answer to this question which was running in their brains.

Armaan asked max "kya hua kya pareshani hai bol na" hearing this max instantly said "agar hum apni duties karenge phir punishment wali duty toh phir practice kab or kasie karenge" at one go he spoke without realising to whom he is speaking all this, but after this statement other juniors were really shocked their mouth left open they couldn't believe he said about the punishment to seniors. Being juniors and getting punishment is not that bad but telling seniors creates a bad impression and might hamper the relation ship as well since seniors might think junior's ne aate hi gadbad ki and they got a punishment seeing all this their behiavior might change towards them. This is what the 3 of them believed. Since max had revealed about their punishment seniors were shocked where as other 3 just lowered their heads as if something really worst happened.

Anjali couldn't stop but say "I knew it" to which riddhima replied "di" giving Anjali a hint that juniors might not like it and she shouldn't speak this infront of them.  To worsen the situation atul spoke up "aisa kya kiya tum logo ne ki punishment mil gayi" hearing this, junior's afcorse didn't like seniors asking them their mistake since it would only give a wrong impression of theirs. To reply priya spoke "kuch nahiin dr. atul hum bas" she was about to say when ruhan interrupted her and said "humhe khud nahiin pata"  hearing this max just blaberred the real reason out "kya baat kar raha hai hum aaj late aye the na isi liye toh punishment mili" . hearing this statement juniors just wanted to die off since they really didn't expect him to say in this manner, where as seniors just looked at them and trying to remember their times since they were also punished for not coming/or reporting on time and remembering those times they had a smile on their faces which was noticed by the juniors and they misunderstood the things. 

Juniors thought seniors are smiling since they got a punishment seeing smile on their faces nazuk spoke "aap kyun hass (smile) kar rahe ho"? this one statement brought seniors back from their sweet memories and looked at the juniors. Armaan who could now make out things are taking a wrong direction he spoke to control the situation "kuch nahiin hume bhi punishment milti thi when we use to come or report late dr kirti never use to listen to us if we try to speak she will just increase the number of days nothing much" hearing armaan saying this juniors thought same thing happened with them when max tried to speak dr. kirti just increased the days of punishment. This brought some what of relief to juniors that even seniors went trhough the same they are not the only one.

Now both juniors and seniors had a smile on their faces. Does this means the situation was controlled or rather its just the beginning of seniors vs juniors who knows time will tell whats stored for them. Presently the situation was controlled that's what armaan thought and smiled off.


During the lunch break time seniors made their way to auditorium but just when they entered the room Anjali and atul got a page saying emergency which made them leave the rehersal immediately. Now only armaan and riddhima were left to reherse for their respective portion.

Riddhima who was nervous being alone with armaan due to what ever happened yesterday, she had not slpet yesterday night since their most romantic date was still infront of her eyes she just couldn't come out of it.


While she was lost in her thoughts she didn't relaise they were dancing not on the tune of their song rather some different dance which wasn't even a part of their act. Armaan on other hand was enjoying this close and slow dance with her but what was worrying him was that riddhima isn't recating anything why isn't she in this world what is she thinking all these questions came in armaans mind. He decided to let go off for a while since he got a chance to dance with riddhima in the same manner like they danced yesterday.

Armaan was very enthusiastic to be alone with riddhima he needed to talk to her and be with her since this practice and their duties were not giving them much time unlike yesterday where they got time to spend and re live and create moments. Armaan saw riddhima lost some where so he took the initiate and spoke "basket ring tumhare haathon main boht achi lag rahi hai" hearing about the ring riddhima came out of her thoughts and looked at armaan and smiled "kal maama ne or di ne bhi yahi kaha" she said this very softly to armaan. This wasn't the answer to his question armaan thought he expected her to say something romantic and not a random thing but to carry on the conversation he said "really iam glad waise basket abhi tak tumne ye nahiin bataya ki tumhe kaisi lagi" riddhima looked at him and armaan looked in her eyes and was waiting for her answer or rather a reply.


When all the seniors were practicing or working juniors were sitting in caf teria and still thinking what to do soon they saw dr. kirti entering the caf teria she walked upto them and asked "interns are you ready with your performance" none of the interns had the answer to her question but every one looked at max since he was the one who had made every one fall into this performance trap seeing every ones eyes on him max gulped down his saliva since he understood he was the one who had to speak but none knew he wont speak the truth "maam yes we are ready with our performance" hearing him say lie interns had anger on their faces but didn't speak since dr. kirti was still standing their. "good interns keep it up" saying these words dr. kirti left the place and now interns were looking at max and max guessed it right their looks meant they wanted to kill him.


Coming up

1.       Riddhimas answer

2.       Armaan teasing riddhima

3.       Tiff in juniors


Edited by youth_showsfan - 06 February 2011 at 10:01am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM...
Great part...
U are such a good writer Clap
cant wait for the next update Smile

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awesome update

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Hey sristhiSmile..........awesome part dearClapClapStar..............loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchSmileBig smileTongue.............hwwwwwwwwww interns got punishment...........but its okLOLLOL............loved typical kirti............hmmmmmmmm max is like armaan n he try to become superbcool but he is not armaanSmile............AR r little moments sooooooooooooo cute n adroableSmileBig smile.............waiting for ridz answerWink............
thanks for pm
plzzzzzzzz continue soonSmile

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heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon


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nyc part

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