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DMG: Ab Kya Hoga (AR FF)new thread (Page 58)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Nice part cont sun

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
hey sri
nice update
waiting for the next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
awww...loved this ud...
shub is really the same...
n bechara ab kirti ki dant sunane padegi...
n armi ridz,....sachi kahin b shuru ho jate hain....
whose there in the entrance,....
thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
ab kaun hai jisko dekh kar armaan is shocked???

aare vers sister lovely..bech bech me unko bhi le aaya kar dear..even she ws gudd..

chalo update asap..

have fun !!!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
poornima-  thnk u sooo much and surprise is every near keep reading
qt4ever thnk u sooo much for surprise keep reading
 jiyaa  thank u jiyaa di
krazzy4armaan thnk u soo much
Ksg-Shona-JJ  thnk u sooo much kangan keep reading
kashndsel4eva thnk u soo much surprise isnt far off keep reading
ARMAANKSGFAN thnk u sooo much nd it wasnt an exam but a small class test but still thnk u soo much for d wish keep reading for d surprise
friends_4dream thnk u soooo much
 laizu thnk u soo much keep reading to noe the surprise
shilpI007 thnk u sooo much yeah he can never change lol keep reading to know the surprise
arshbest thnk u soo much nd sorry for d small update due to the class test i couldnt magane to write a big one but next one would surely be a bit longer keep reading
ammyluvridzi thnk u soooo much keep reading
amruta04 thnk u amruta keep reading to know the surprise
anumeha_rajat thnk u sooo much and lol shubhankar will never change bechara seriously anyways keep reading
deepsi thnk u sooo much nd ur suggestion taken into consideration willl surely try to bring sister lovely backkeep reading
 
thnk u sooooo much once again iam glad you all are liking me ff 


Edited by youth_showsfan - 22 January 2011 at 9:29am

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

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NOTE: 3 down finally the next updates wud be a surprise wala update the hint is given in todays update nd coming up keep reading. since yesterday i had given a small update so thought to update the next part today njoy

 
 

UPDATE 15

[Armaan was shocked too see shashank standing at the entrance of the door and didn't knew what to say or do thought he is said he just wanted to run form here Anjali saw armaan lost some where]

Anjali: armaan kya hua

[When Anjali spoke atul and Riddhima followed armaans eyes and saw shashank standing in the entrance and were shocked didn't knew what to do and Riddhima wanted to run away cause she didn't had strength to face her father who must have seen her in armaans arms but it wasn't her fault she fell down if armaan wouldn't have stopped her she would have hurted herself she had no option but to stand there and see shashank walking up to them]

Shashank: so rehersals are going on

Anjali: yes sir

Atul: jee sir

Shashank: so aap logo ne decide kar liya ki aap apne interns ka welcome kaise karenge

Anjali: yes sir

Shashank: hope you guys wont let the staff of sanjeevni led down

Armaan: sir trust us we wont let the reputation of sanjeevni fall

Shashank: I trust your words dr. armaan

[armaan was shocked but happy that now dr. shashank trust him completely and have faith in him which makes him feel proud and happy]

Shashank: by the way your juniors are kind enough even they are planning a performance for you all

Riddhima: really but why

Shashank: well I don't know but its good they will feel a part of sanjeevni then

Anjali: sounds interesting

Anjali: nice of them

[where as armaan smiled he understood ki why are they performing while judging the new interns he had enough idea that these people think that they are no less than their seniors may be they wanted to proof us something. Armaan said to himself well seniors are seniors]

Shashank: continue I'll take your leave

[shashank left the place wishing them all the best for their rehersals]

Riddhima: chalo lets go and practice again

[atul and Anjali went on one side and started rehersaling their steps while armaan and Riddhima went on another side to practice their steps]

Atul: Anjali ye gana acha hain a

Anjali: hain boht I just love it

[on the other hand armaan wanted to utilize this moment to its fullest all of a sudden he asked]

Armaan: basket mere saath date pe chalogi

Riddhima: armaan nahiin

Armaan: basket kyun

Riddhima: mujhe jail nahiin jana hai

Armaan: kya

Riddhima: yaad hai jab hum pehli baar gaye the toh sab aa gaye the or hume jail jana pada tha or dooseri baar jab gaye the tumhare so called lonely place main wahan bhi police aa gayi thi or hume jail jana pada or phir papa ko sab pata chal gaya tha iss baar no risk main nahiin aaogni

[armaan was giving a shocked and frowning look to her]

Armaan: basket ab kaisa darr ab agar jail jaynge toh sabko hamare baare main pata hai so you see no problem

Riddhima: what'. armaan tum pagal ho gaye ho

Armaan: basket yaar come on iss baar nahiin hog kuch I promiss yaar please

Riddhima:  no

[Riddhima was so adment n saying no that armaan was getting angry so he pulled her close to himself and murmered in her ears chalogi basket and then brushed his lips with her ear lobes and Riddhima shivered a lot and then his hand started moving up and down on her back side which was giving her goose bumb again armaan asked her basket chalogi and Riddhima trying to regain her senses said nahiin armaan then removed her hair from one side of her neck to another and kissed her on the neck and Riddhima closed her eyes and was trying to feel his touch but was also shivering on the proximity they were sharing at that moment armaan again asked basket chalogi but Riddhima didn't reply anything then armaan kissed her on one of her cheecks and whispered basket hain kardo warna agli baar kiss gaal pe nahiin hoga Riddhima was sooo shocked to hear this that at one go she said yes to him and armaan smiled kissed her forehead and left her]

Armaan: basket toh aaj raat 10 baje I would wait for you

[Riddhima who was still trying to regain her senses back didn't pay any intention to this so armaan repeated him self again and this time Riddhima asked]

Riddhima: kaha ana hai

Armaan: basket I will pick you up

Riddhima: theek hai

Atul: Anjali armaan Riddhima kitne ache lagte hain na saath main

Anjali: hain sahi kaha made for each other couple

Atul: hamari tarah

Anjali: excuse me

Atul: um um mera matlab kash hum bhi unki tarah hote

Anjali: what ever

[soon atul and anjali's pager rang and they checked up and armaan Riddhima were still lost in each others eyes after what had happened their eye lock wasn't broken yet]

Anjali: guys kabhi toh dekh liya karo kaha khade ho

[Anjalis these wordings broke armaan and riddhimas eye lock and brought them to present both went red with embaressment]

Anjali: well we are leaving page aaya hai

Armaan: oh ok toh hum bhi chalte hain will rehearse tomorrow

Riddhima: hain theek hai (she just wanted to run from this place after what had happened)

Armaan: basket be ready by 10

Atul: for what

Armaan: mien basket ko date pe le jaa raha hun

Anjali: wao

Riddhima: per di ghar pe kya kahoongi

Anjali: don't worry who mien sambhaal loongi

Armaan: thanks anjie

[all 4 of them left to resume their duties back]

LOCKER ROOM

Priya: guys concentrate yaar

Nazuk: miene kaha tha ki kuch nahiin ho sakta

Ruhan: max yaar hum abhi tak ye decide nahiin kar paye ki kaunsa song choose karenge rehersals toh door ki baat hai

Max: chil guys don't worry abhi decide kar lete hain na

Nazuk: practically hamare paas zyada din nahiin hai only 2 days or humne practice bhi shuru nahiin ki or seniors ka almost khatam ho chukka hai

Priya: nazuk don't worry seniors se toh acha hi karenge

Max: afcorse vo jo 4 din main karenge hum 2 din main kar dikhaynge

Ruhan: well we loads of practice or uske liye time

Nazuk: correct ruhan or duties ke baad itna time nahiin hai ki hum rehersals kare so I guess we shouldn't perform

Priya: pagal ho gayi hai kya nazuk hum already dr shashank ko bol chuke hain

Max: ya correct or ab tak seniors ko bhi pata chal jayga ab agar peeche hate toh besti ho jaygi

Nazuk: or un prepared performance denge toh nahiin hogi

[none had the answer to this question some where down the line both max and priya understood that what ever she is saying is true but due to their ego they wernt ready to accept the defeat and were adment on performing so all started thinking of various ideas]

Ruhan: ek kaam ho sakta hai

Max: kya

Ruhan: agar hum duty hours ke baad kisi ke ghar pe practice kare toh

Priya: nice idea

Nazuk: sorry guys per mien nahiin aa paogni

Ruhan: kyun

Nazuk: parents allow nahiin karenge

Priya: toh unse mien baat karti hun or bol doongi ki I will drop you back

Nazuk: hmmm pata nahiin try karle maan jaye then I have no problem

Priya: ok then done chal baat karte hain

Ruhan: abhi

Priya: kyun kya hua

Ruhan: duty pe jana ke waqt ho gaya hai

Max: oh no dr. armaan ko mujhe report karna tha bye guys

Priya: theek hai duty ke baad baat kar lenge ok

Nazuk: theek hai

Priya: cool phir kal se 2 din practice after duty hours

Ruhan: cool idea

[all of them left for their duties]

RIDDHIMA'S CABIN

[Riddhima was siting on her chair and some files were kept in front of her which she was reading and side by side jotting down some points for her reference]

Man: may I come in maam

Riddhima: yes come in

Man: maam ye file aapke liye

Riddhima: table pe rakh do

Man: nahiin maam boht zaroori file hai please abhi dekh lijiye

[Riddhima was irritated by this man who was forcing her to see the file right now Riddhima opened the file and was shocked to see it was written DINNER TONIGHT AT 10 along with a heart drawn there was a paper saying will pick you up by 9:40 riddhima turned to that man and was shocked to see it was armaan]

Riddhima: armaan tum

Armaan: hain basket mien

Riddhima: armaan tum hadh karte ho

Armaan: jaise ki tum nahiin karti acha get ready by 9: 40 I will pick you up

[armaan left the place didn't give Riddhima a chance to speak or deny the offer Riddhima smiled and went back to her work]

 

Coming up

1.       Armaan and riddhima's romantic date

NOTE: the whole part dedicated to armaan riddhimas romance with lots of cute masti and pranks and bickering ( its a very long update)



Edited by youth_showsfan - 22 January 2011 at 10:18am

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged

hey dear...

read both parts today...

they r really lovely dear....

cant wait fr nxt update...

please update it soon

love

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