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shonadesire IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
hey srishti
r u going update today??????????????????????????//

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youth_showsfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
hey every one just wanted to tell after 3 more updates a huge surprise is awaiting for u all stay tuned for it Wink 



[Riddhima was getting bored since Anjali was so excited to return back from her trip that she went to her friends house for an over night stay and Riddhima was missing Anjali and started thinking about armaan so thought of msging him]

Riddhimas msg: kahan ho armaan

Armaans msg: tumhare dil main

Riddhimas msg: kya kar rahe ho

Armaans msg: tumhe dekh raha hoon

Riddhimas msg: sapno main

Armaans msg: nahiin

[Riddhima was shocked for a second and was trying to recollect what she had read, she received another msg from armaan before she could understand this one]

Armaans msg: jab mujhe hakeekat (reality) main dikh rahi ho toh sapno main kyun dekhoon

[riddhimas reaction to this msg was again shocking but it made her remind of the past when armaan came through window and smile came on her face]

Armaans msg: smile kyun kar rahi ho

[now Riddhima wasn't shocked she knew armaan is near her window this time she wanted to fool armaan unlike last time]

Riddhimas msg: tumhe kaise pata

[While she was typing she was moving towards the window and as soon as the phone showed her msg sent she removed the curtains where she found armaan]

Armaan: tum intelligent ho gayi ho basket

Riddhima: mujhe pata hai

Armaan: sentence toh khatam karne do

Riddhima: karo

Armaan: mien keh raha tha tum intelligent ho gayi ho basket mere saath reh kar

Riddhima: really

Armaan: really

[Armaan moved forward to tickle her but she knew whats going on armaans mind so she was moving taking her steps back]

Riddhima: armaan no badmashi

Armaan: basket mien toh kuch bhi nahiin kar raha

[still armaan kept moving towards her and she moving steps backward only to realise she was now against the wall and armaan kept moving forward and now the distance between them was of half foot. Soon she closed her eyes realising the proximity between them armaan noticed her who was scared of such closeness to lighten up he started tickling Riddhima which made her shout ARMAAN]

Armaan: kya hua basket

[Even after saying this he continued his tickling which made Riddhima laugh continuously]

Riddhima: armaan bas papa aa jaynge please

[Hearing to riddhimas last line armaan stopped]

Armaan: theek hai basket theek hai

Riddhima: armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho

Armaan: tumse milne aya hun (he said this holding Riddhima tight in his arms)

Riddhima: armaan door does exist in this world

Armaan: waise seriously while climbing I thought to come by door per

Riddhima: per tumhe toh seedha raste se aana hi nahiin hai

Armaan: let me complete first

Riddhima: bolo

Armaan: miene socha tha to come by doorway but phir socha sasurji mujhpe gussa honge ki itni raat ko I was here so cancelled the idea

Riddhima: tum nahiin sudhroge

Armaan: waise I should get special treatment hun after all hone wala damaad hun

Riddhima: armaan please or papa kuch nahiin kahte

Armaan: basket itni mushkil se mera impression acha hua hai unki nazron main don't want to spoil and create unnecessary problems between us again.

[after hearing to all this she forgot that she was still in armaans arms to avoid the drama she again concentrated on trying hard to get herself free from armaan thus she was pushing him back but end result was armaan came out of his thoughts and tighten his grip and started nuzzling his nose on her neck giving her shiverings. Finally Riddhima gave up and asked]

Riddhima: armaan batao na please tum yahan kyun aye

Armaan: basket tumhe miss kar raha tha aur kya

Riddhima: hum aaj hi toh mile the na sanjeevni mien

Armaan: kya basket mien tumse milne nahiin aa sakta

Riddhima: miene aisa kab kaha armaan

Armaan: acha chodo mien kehna aya tha aaj iam proud of you

Riddhima: kyun

Armaan: aaj jaise tumne max ki help ki na mujhe acha laga

[This thing reminded Riddhima that she wanted to talk to armaan regarding this only]

Riddhima: armaan tumne ye prank kiske kehna pe kiya tha

[armaan was shocked to hear this question which came all of a sudden]

Armaan: I didn't get you

[armaan was trying to show he didn't understand her question]

Riddhima: armaan miene tumhari or papa ki baat sun li thi

[armaan smiled since he knew it wasn't her but atul]

Riddhima: armaan why you smiling

Armaan: basket mujhe pata hai atul ne suna tha or ussi ne tumhe bataya hoga


[outside shashanks cabin atul was standing he was suppose to meet dr. shashank regarding a case but when he saw armaan and shashank talking he thought to wait outside but somehow he couldn't resist what are they talking he really wanted to know so he tried to be a jasoos and was trying various methods to hear their voices he brought a stool and tried to open the roshan daan that's how he could hear the conversation between shashank and armaan and was way beyond shocked]


Atul: mujhe toh pata hi nahiin tha armaan or shashank sir ek team main kab huye armaan ne ye sab sir ke kehna pe kiya mujhe yakeen nahiin ho raha

[atul was so engrossed in himself he didn't  realise when Riddhima came and heard all this and was also shocked what is he murmering nd blabbering couldn't wait but had to ask]

Riddhima: atul tum kya murmer kar rahe ho

Atul: ridz kuch nahiin aaj ajeeb chees hui

Riddhima: kya

Atul: tum vishwaas nahiin karogi

Riddhima: kya hua atul

Atul: miene kabhi nahiin socha tha ki kabhi aisa bhi ho sakta hai

[by now Riddhima was completely irritated and angry so shouted]

Riddhima: atul tum seedhe seedhe bologe kya hua hai

[atul came out of his senses and realised whom he was talking to and thought agar ridz ko pata chala toh armaan usse nahiin chodega]

Atul: ridz tum

Riddhima: hain mien ab bataoge kya hua

Atul: nahiin kuch nahiin kuch bhi toh nahiin

Riddhima: atul tum bolte ho ki mien Anjali di se kahoo ki tumm

[before Riddhima could continue atul interrupted]

Atul: nahiin nahiin batata hun

[then atul told her the full conversation between armaan and shashank and Riddhima was also way beyond shocked she couldn't take it that shashank her father told armaan to do such thing since when shashank started participating in armaans prank she couldn't gulp it and had to ask armaan about it]


Armaan: basket jab sun hi liye hai toh pooch kyun rahi ho

Riddhima: kyunki tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahiin

Armaan: sorry basket

Riddhima: answer toh do

Armaan: basket ab chodo na please (armaan said this with a cute puppy face)

Riddhima: armaan papa ne tumhe kaha

[she still couldn't take it in and was still in a shock state]

Armaan: basket jab champ ne tumhe bata hi diya hai toh phir kyun phir se sunna hai

Riddhima: kyunki mujhe yakeen nahiin ho raha papa ne tumhe tumhare prank main

Armaan: hain saath diya kyunki iss prank se kuch sach pata lagana tha

Riddhima: toh phir tumne mujhse bet kyun lagai

Armaan: masti basket tumhara vo cute angry looks and mere dimaag ko padhna (armaan winked)

Riddhima: tum mujhe bata nahiin sakte the

Armaan: bata deta toh phir maza kaise aata basket

Riddhima: phir bhi armaan bata na chahiye tha

Armaan: basket

[before armaan could continue suddenly both of them heard some foot steps after thinking for a second they realised it would be shashank so armaan hurried and left riddhimas house. The talk was left their itself which needed to be solved and armaan thought tomorrow he will clear it out]



[all the interns and senior doctors were standing since their was an announcement that both seniors and juniors had to approach to nurse station for further announcement and now they were waiting for dr. kirti and dr. shashank to come]

Shashank:  doctors I have to announce something really important since we have juniors and seniors lets have an ice breaking session i.e we will have seniors welcoming their juniors thourgh a function put up by them and keeping various games to break the ice between the seniors and juniors

[hearing all this every one was shocked but armaan was smiling cos he needed a mauka which he got after hearing this]

Shashank: I hope after this session juniors and seniors will get friendly and work as a team I hope every one would participate whole heartedly and try to keep the spirit of ice breaking alive thank you dr, kirti

Kirti: yes dr. shashank

[shashank left after saying this]

Kirti: doctors check notice board todays duty are put up their

(armaan in his mind said finally mujhe mauka mill gaya iss baar no bet no revealing under cover plan hoga ye iss baar)

[naughty smile or laugh was on his face]


      Coming up

1.       Interns masti

2.       Armaans new under cover plan

3.       Seniors preparations for ice breaking function


Edited by youth_showsfan - 13 January 2011 at 9:03am

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dmg_roks_antara Goldie

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:24am | IP Logged
awesome thnx fr d pm

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ujala26 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
lovly update srish....Smile
lovd da whole part....
cntinue soon....Smile

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-Anku- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Sorry for not commenting Srishti ..amazing parts .
They are soo adorable and really nice to read !
Thanks for the pm !

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Simrangills Senior Member

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged

 Thankuu shoo much.....Hug

Lovely update....Tongue
Plzz continue soon.....Wink

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riddhan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
the part was awesome n thanxs for the pm Big smile

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saniashzadi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged

hey dear...

both parts r rocking yaar....i must say u r excellent writer yaar...

loved both parts...

update nxt part soon



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