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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amruta04

I forgot to tell all the best for exams Smile
do well..
thnk u amruta
nd all d best to u toSmile
 hope after exams u get holidays and come on ATSmile

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
NOTE: hey every one i had put up a note on pg 127.
 
guys my college exams are starting from 11th april to 26th april in between i will update my ff but might nt be able to send pms. just wanted to convey that kindly keep checking the banner during this time since i might update nd nt send pms if i have time i will try my level best to send pms.
 
 
last but nt the least thnk u to the silent readers
 
 
 
njoy reading
 
 
 

UPDATE 33

 

 

 

"Hmmm mujhe guess nahiin karna tum bolo" said armaan who understood that riddhima is gona play along and won't speak up easily. "Kya bolo" asked riddhima and in her thoughts she said "Mr Armaan malik itni assani se nahiin kahoongi thoda intezaar". "Yahi ki tum aaj khush kyun ho" said armaan and his thoughts he said "miss basket riddhima gupta bolna toh apko padega hi padega bachke kaha jaogi.  Armaan was playing with her hairs or rather caressing her hair which made riddhima shiver a bit. Armaan was liking this effect of his on her while doing this armaan remembered the moment before their performance which happened in the green room and smiled remembering that tender moment. As soon as he remembered that he also remembered that how he shouted at riddhima though he asked for an apology but still he was feeling bad for shouting his face changed into a sad one. Riddhima noticed the change in armaan "kya hua armaan?" she asked.

 

 

 

"kuch nahiin basket" said armaan who didn't wanted to remind her of that moment when he shouted at her rather he thought he is diverting from the topic he was suppose to hear her say why is she happy today. "Nahiin armaan kuch toh hua hai bolo na" said riddhima and armaan smiled he thought may be this way she says it and he wins it. "Basket wo mien' who mien tumpe gussa hua "armaan stopped hear since he realised he wasn't suppose to remind her though he wanted her to speak up why is she happy but not by this. Riddhima thought that may be he is still feeling bad for shouting at her "armaan miene kaha tha na ki mien naraz nahiin hun mien samaj sakti hun ki tum kyun gussa huye the mujhpe aaj toh boht khushi ka din hai pata hai jab tumne mujhse sorry bola sabke samne toh mujhe acha laga mien boht kh" riddhima stopped saying kh since she was about to speak why was she happy. Armaan looked at her showing her a winning smile and seeing this riddhima understood he was trying to make her say that why is she happy. "kh' aage bolo basket" said armaan with a smile. "Nahiin kuch nahiin" said riddhima while fumbling a lot in between.

 

 

 

"Basket ab bol bhi do aadha toh tum bol hi chukki ho or meri meethai bhi mujhe dedo" said armaan with a grin. Riddhima looked at armaan and shook her head this constant no was irritating armaan he thought more than half of the battle he has won why she can't just complete her statement or rather a word so that he can win properly. "Basket bol do waise bhi tum haar chuki ho or mien apni meethai ki wait kar raha hun" said armaan and riddhima looked at armaan and and again shook her head. "That's it boht ho gaya basket bolo" said armaan in bit anger and riddhima spoke "na" she couldn't complete her statement when armaan placed his lips on her hard where as riddhima who was shocked closed her eyes and started pushing armaan back keeping her hand on his chest.  Armaan grabbed her hands and pinned it with the wall behind her, riddhima had no option but to give up and she gave in the moment and started responding to his kiss. No matter how hard she tries his touch always melts her down and she unknowingly gives up in the moment.  

 

 

 

After a while they broke from the kiss to breathe fresh air where as armaan coudn't control he just kissed her on her cheeks forehead then moved down to her neck. His hands were moving on her stomach creating a havoc with riddhima she was loosing her control where as armaan was enjoying his effect on her. Armaans hand went behind riddhimas back and started to move along her spinal cord which resulted in riddhima shivering even further.  Armaan looked into riddhima's eyes and then down at her lips he once again captured her lips and his hand which were at her back opened her button of kurta which made riddhima moan. When riddhima felt armaans hand on her bare back she pushed him with a force which brought armaan into reality. "umm '''''' ummm sorry basket" said armaan and kept his hands on his face and shook his head. Riddhima however tried to close her button but the efforts went in vien. Armaan saw this and said "mien band kar do" though he wasn't sure whether he should do it or not but to avoid the awkwardness he had to ask her. Riddhima on the other hand didn't knew what to say since till date their close proximity never went beyond kissing this time it went bit ahead but she had to go out where every one is so she had no option but to take armaans help. Without saying anything she turned which meant armaan had to tie her kurta. Armaan raised his hands to tie her kurta during this process his hands touched her bare back again which made riddhima gasp, armaan tried hard not to lose his control again so he tied her knot with a diverted mind.

 

 

 

To lighten the moment armaan had to say something but what he didn't knew "um ''.. ummm. basket'''''..  tum '''''.tum iss''''. Red dress '' I mean sauce wale laal dress main boht khoobsoorat lag rahi ho" riddhimas face was still facing the wall and her back was facing armaan so armaan couldn't see she was blushing he wanted to see her reaction so he turned riddhima around and saw her red cheeks which was enough hint for him that she blushed hearing this. "waise basket aaj ki party toh boht achi hai mujhe nahiin pata tha ki tum surprise party bhi plan kar sakti ho" said armaan since he saw the moment was lightening so he was back to normal and hearing this riddhima opened her mouth and said "armaan tumhare kehne ka matlab kya hai ki mien'. Mien surprise party plan nahiin kar sakti?". Hearing this armaan looked at riddhima with a smiling face "hain basket mera matlab aaj tak toh surprise miene hi plan kiye hain tumhare liye per ye tumhara pehli baar hai''''' waise I must say you are not a bad learner" armaan said this with a grin on his face and his voice sounded like a teasing one. Riddhima was getting irritated now "kya '' tum '''.. Tum kehna chahte ho ki miene yeh surprise plan karna tumse seekha hai? Armaan was smiling that how riddhima is reacting to his funny comments as well "mien kehna nahiin chahta''. Mien keh raha hun basket ''' keh rahu" said with a huge smirk on his face.

 

 

 

CONFERENCE ROOM

 

 

 Shashank Padma and billy annanya were sitting and chit chatting. "Aur billy kaise hain aap" said shashank with a smile "apko kaisa dikh raha hun" said billy and shashank laughed he knew billy never gives straight answers. Billy looked towards Padma and started flirting again padma ji aap aaj boht achi lag rahi hain" and hearing this shashank coughed annanya hits billy on his shoulders and Padma smiled. Somethings never change thought shashank and smiled along with it and then Padma and shashank exchanged a look Padma was trying to convey that shashank should speak up and shashank nodded. "Waise billy mujhe or padma ko app dono se kuch important baat karni thi" said shashank sounding bit serious. Ananya and billy looked to each other that what important talk they want to tell soon shashank started speaking and ananya billy kept hearing it.

 

 

 

FIRE ESCAPE

 

 

"Bas boht hua ''. Ek toh miene tumhare liye party plan ki or tum'.. tum mujhe hi suna rahe ho jao bhaad main" said riddhima who was completely irritated by his constant comment. "As usual basket '''' or hamesha ki tarah basket address toh batati jao" come armaans instant answer riddhima stormed her feet on floor and walked out of the fire escape.  "Basket tumhe satane main kitna maza aata hai gusse main tumhari aakhien jab gol gol ghoomti hain or jaise tum apni naak (nose) roll karti ho boht pyaari lagti ho ekdum ek cute se bache ki tarah, gosh I love you riddhima so much" said armaan and started walking towards the hall where riddhima went.  When armaan went inside every one catch hold of him for cutting  his birthday cake "armaan cake kaat (cut) le phir romance kar liyo" whispered  Rahul in armaans ears who knew both armaan and riddhima wernt here meant they are somewhere romancing. Armaan looked at him with an irritated face and Rahul in return smiled which made armaan shook his head and thought yeh kabhi nahiin badlega.

 

 

 

Armaan was about to cut the cake when the elders that is shashank Padma and billy ananya stopped him and Padma spoke "riddhima beta tum bhi armaan ke saath cake kaato" said which made other three smile while armaan riddhima were shocked for this and same goes for the gang they all were giving a look of why?. When no one spoke armaan spoke "umm ''''' ummmm lekin kyun''''. Cake toh mujhe katna chahiye na '''''''' I mean birthday mera hain na toh cake bhi mujhe katna chahiye" he was hell confused whether what he is saying is making sense or not but hearing what elders have said before which sound senseless and comparing that it makes sense.  "Armaan beta jaisa Padma ji keh rahi hain waisa karo" said ananya who knew the reason but as per decided by them few minutes before they will not reveal it until its time for it. Armaan had no option so he nodded his head and looked on his left side where riddhima was standing next to him he could see her shock look and a confused face and saw her lost in some thoughts so on order to break that he softly said "riddhima".

 

 

 

Riddhima looked at armaan and nodded her head she came bit closer to armaan so that she can easily cut the cake. Armaan handed her the knife which she held it and armaan held the knife above her hand and both cut the cake while others chanted the happy birthday song for armaan. After cutting the cake armaan gave the first piece of cake to riddhima second to his mom and dad then to shashank and Padma, then to his friend's atul Anjali muskaan Rahul Nikki abhimanyu. All clapped along side while the feeding session was on. After this atul spoke "armaan mere bhai jaldi kar yaar boht bhook lagi hai" he didn't know his statement will create a huge mess out here.  "Boht bhook lagi hai" said muskaan or rather asked atul and atul absent mindedly nodded his head and "toh yeh le" said muskaan while throwing the piece of cake towards atul which landed on his cheeks.

 

 

 

Seeing this every one started laughing loudly and atuls hand automatically reached his cheeks and looked at muskaan. "Teri toh" said atul while throwing another piece of cake towards muskaan but to his bad luck muskaan hid behind Anjali and the cake piece landed on Anjali. They didn't even realise while doing this that elders are still present there shashank Padma and ananya billy whose mouth were left open seeing children throwing piece of cake at each other.  Where as nana was having fun giving commentary "muskaan ko gussa aya usne cake ka piece uthaya or atul ki taraf pheka (throw) kiya aur yeh cake atul ke cheek pe land hua. Ab atul ko gussa aya usne ek cake piece uthake muskaan ki taraf pheka (throw) per muskaan nikli inteliigent vo Anjali ke peeche chup gayi or cake ka piece atul ki anjali ko laga bechara ab Anjali ko gussa aa raha hai kyunki atul ka piece Anjali ki nayee dress per gir (fall) gaya"

 

 

 

Anjali was about to throw the piece of cake on atul as a revenge but threw at nana cos his constant commentary was irritating her after the piece landed on nana Anjali started laughing nana coulnt tolerate this so he picked up a piece and aimed at Anjali but Anjali ducked at the last moment and it hit armaan who made a frowning face.  "Sorry apple'' sorry miene toh Anjali pe aim kiya tha" said nana but armaan was in no mood to listen he picked up a piece of cake and aimed at nana but to his bad luck it landed on riddhima. Riddhima who was walking out since she didn't wanted to land up in this mess fortunately or unfortunately she landed in this mess. "mujhe pata tha .......ye log har baar kuch na kuch ulta seedha karte hi rehte hain"said riddhima and looked towards armaan who was saying sorry to her by holding his ears but riddhima paid no attention firstly she was angry with him due to the fire escape thing where armaan teased her to hell and now this "ughhh" came from riddhimas mouth picked up a piece and threw towards armaan. Armaan saw a piece straight coming towards him opened his eyes widely and walked side wards Rahul who was standing behind armaan unfortunately became the aim. The piece of cake landed on his nose seeing that armaan started laughing but then saw riddhima and mumbelled "mar gaye basket phir se gussa ho gayi".

 

 

 

Rahul was aiming the piece of cake towards armaan but fortunately armaan moved since he was going behind riddhima to talk to her the piece of cake landed on muskaans hair and she turned back with a killer look seeing that Rahul mumbelled "aaj toh tu gaya beta muskaan tujhe chode gi nahiin jaan bachake bhaag". Muskaan seeing a piece of cake on her hair couldn't resist but shout "abbey oye kankhajoore tujhe dikhta nahiin hai kya ja jake eyes test kara ke aa" while saying this she was preparing a piece of cake to throw at Rahul when she threw she saw the piece of cake landed on shubhankar and heard a giggle. When she looked it was Rahul who was giggling and said "ab tu jake chashma (specks) laga". This was the height for muskaan she was now boiling with anger and ran behind Rahul soon Rahul and muskaan were running like Tom and Jerry. Shubhankar on the other hand who was standing with kirti was shocked that the piece of cake landed on him and shouted "dr muskaan aapne mere pe cake kyun pheka?" hearing this muskaan who was busy running behind Rahul stopped and looked at shubhankar and shouted back "sorry sir maaf kardo" and again looked at Rahul and said "oye kankhajoore tu toh gaya aaj" and started running behind Rahul again.

 

 

 

Shubhankar made an angry face since kirti was laughing at him he picked up a piece of cake and threw at kirti after throwing it he realised what he did his anger made him throw a piece of cake on his wife he is dead now he thought. "um'.... um sorry kirti" said shubhankar where as kirti's anger boiled up completely. "shubhankar"shouted kirti where as he closed his eyes since he got the hint kirti picked up a piece of cake from the floor and aimed at shubhankar but seeing the piece coming to him he ducked and abhimanyu who was standing behind became the sufferer. His hands automatically went to his cheeks where the piece of cake had landed looked at kirti who was feeling guilty and spoke "sorry....... sorry dr abhimanyu''''. Vo miene ........ummm actually ...... umm miene shubhankar pe pheka tha ''. Aap pe nahiin" after saying this she bit her lips as she didn't know what to say. Seeing the piece of cake on abhimanyu nikita started giggling which made abhimanyu angry he picked up a piece and rubbed it on nikitas face. "What the hell"nikita shouted she couldn't believe abhimnayu just rubbed his face with the cake.

 

 

 

On the other hand elders were looking at each other face they couldn't understand one moment everything was perfect and now everything looks bizark.  The whole place has become a mess though shashank wanted to shout at them like always but when he was about to Padma stopped him and said "bache itne dino ke baad mile hain hass lene dijiye" and hearing this shashank nodded his head in agreement and looked at the view. After few seconds he kind of started liking it he had a smile on his face seeing every one laughing something which was missing from few days.  Padma billy ananya couldn't believe their ears when shashank started laughing and soon they busrt out laughing when a piece of cake came on shashanks face. "Kisne kiya yeh" shouted shashank but others were soo engrossed in their happiness that hardly any one heard him. He looked at three people and'''

 

 

 

On the other hand interns were completey shocked seeing this view. Few minutes before when armaan had come they remembered max chuckling and saying "they kidnapped him and brought him here" but then all ignored it since they thought may be they blind folded him purposely. Secondly in the party they saw armaan riddhima and at once got that they are the lovey dovey kind of couple. But now they can't believe their eyes the same armaan riddhima who were saying sorry to each other are fighting with cake was this for real or that was real. Their confusion was just increasing seeing the site. When the gang had met they seemed liked besties but now fighting and seeing muskaan calling Rahul kankhajoore was making them hard to control their laughter. "Yeh seniors such main mast hain did u see gabbar I mean dr. kirti and dr. shubhankar also fighting like kids" said max and others were way beyond shock to react or speak. When they saw a piece of cake landing on shashanks face they were stunned firstly he didn't react to all this didn't tried to stop it and secondly a cake on his face who dared to do that they gulped down their saliva seeing shashank standing and looking at Padma billy and ananya they thought something is worst coming up and looked into that direction where as seniors wernt bothered they were contining their cake fight.

 

 

 

Coming up

1.       Shashanks outburst or something else?

2.       Cake fight continues Seniors indulge juniors

3.       Couple's romancing

 

 

 

finally i dont noe how will u react to this update since i tried to mix the romance and humour both. above all its almost going to be 10 updates for one night gosh i dont noe in one night i showed green room romance frm 24th- 25th update to old gangs return, masti armaans surprise part and now this part rofl one night so many events lol.LOL  waise i hope you guys like it. hope after reading this every one has a smile on their face. 

as i say this ff s based on dmg's original concept when humour is there romance is less now its time for romance to be more and humour to b less. ishara kaafi hai Wink

 

please share ur views comments and suggestionsSmile



Edited by youth_showsfan - 08 April 2011 at 10:08am

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loved d update ....... continue soon  ........

n once again all d best 4 ur xamz ...........

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lovely update
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loved d update ....... continue soon  ........

n once again all d best 4 ur xamz ...........

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Awesum part!!!!

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