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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asma_227

I just loved this part.
This was awesome.The whole sequence of bringing Armaan to the surprise place was written very beautifully.
I'm quite eager for the next part.
plz update soonest.
U r really a wonderful writer.
thnk u sooo much fr ur overwhelming commentEmbarrassed
iam glad u found the part awesome Embarrassed
yes i will update it soonSmile

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
hey Srishti
sorry for lte reply yaar
now come to d part
awesome part dearClapStarClapStar
lovedddddddd it so much
wowwwwwwwww all helped ridz so much
interns to sach bahut bade idiot hai har baat ko wrong ways se dekhte hai
but i eagerly waitinfg for surprise, i thought is part mein to pta chal jayega par yey nhi hua
but waiting nxt part eagerly
thxnks for pm
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz contnue soonnnnnnnnnn

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpI007

hey Srishti
sorry for lte reply yaar
now come to d part
awesome part dearClapStarClapStar
lovedddddddd it so much
wowwwwwwwww all helped ridz so much
interns to sach bahut bade idiot hai har baat ko wrong ways se dekhte hai
but i eagerly waitinfg for surprise, i thought is part mein to pta chal jayega par yey nhi hua
but waiting nxt part eagerly
thxnks for pm
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz contnue soonnnnnnnnnn
thnk u sooo muchSmile
im overwhelmed with ur commentEmbarrassed
i agree abt interns they r idiotLOL
b4 revealing d surprise i wanted to show how gang brings armaan to his surprise
but next part main toh surprise khul hi jaygaWink

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
hey every one iam soo happy india won the world cup after 28 long yrs the match was indeed an interesting one.
 
thnk u to all the silent readers i hope u liking the ff and the story
 
njoy reading
 
 

UPDATE 32

 
 

Heard a whisper is his ears "armaan just relax and soon you will come to know whats going on" said Rahul in his ears. Armaan was now thinking ye ho kya raha hai what does Rahul mean by I will come to know whats going on. He realised that no one is standing near him now he could sense that and soon had a smile on his face since he heard a voice which is familiar and it said "welcome armaan" said a voice. "Riddhima" mumbelled armaan.

 
 

ASMAANI RANG HUN

PYAAR KI BOOND HUN

[Riddhima walked towards armaan while singing and armaan had a huge smile while smelling her fragnance which was quiet easy to recognise]

 

 

ROSHNI KA AB HUN

MIEN TERI DHOOP HUN

[Suddenly the lights are on and and riddhima stands in front of his face so that the lights doesn't falls on him directly]

 

 

TUJHSE HI HAI MERI BANDAGI

TUJHSE MERI JAAN HAI

[Riddhima showed armaan the ring which he had given her on their date and hugs armaan frm behind]

 

 

SAAYA TERA MERA ASHNA

TU MERA ARMAAN HAI

[Riddhima comes in front armaan caresses her face and and while saying tu mera armaan hai riddhima blushes while looking in armaans eyes.

 
 
LARALALA

[Riddhima hugs armaan and armaan lift her a bit from the floor and starts taking turns with her in his arms]

 

 
TU ZINDAGI

MERA IZHAAR TU

[They stopped and part ways armaan showed her his ring which they had exchanged before their shoot out this brings bit tears in riddhimas eyes]

 

 
MERA IKRAAR TU PYAAR HI PYAAR TU

TU ZINDAGI

[Armaans kisses her cheeks very passionately and hug each other]

 

 

As soon as the song finished riddhima and armaan are still in hug rather parting riddhima whispers in armaans ear HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARMAAN. Hearing this armaan's eyes become watery he is touched by this gesture of hers. Now he realised why she said surprise and wait till 12 all this while she was preparing for his surprise birthday party. He mentally cursed himself for shouting at riddhima he should have been patient but his anger over took him at that point. He thought he would apologise for his behaviour as soon as possible.  Soon a shout came which said "surprise" and when he looked in the direction his mouth remained open he couldn't believe his eyes.  "basket kya ye mien sapna dekh raha hoon" asked armaan who couldn't believe what he is seeing and hearing this riddhima smiled and said "nahiin" while pinching armaan and he shouted "ouch" and started rubbing the place where riddhima had pinched him and mumbelled "thnx"

 
Armaan: billy mom and nana aap log yahan?

[Armaan couldn't resist his happiness so he shouted while saying this he walked towards them]

Armaan hugged billy first and billy whispered in his ears

 
Billy: or kya tumhara birthday hain Na Hume toh aana hi tha or waise bhi yahan pe maza boht aata hai desi girls.
 
They both parted and armaan shook his head and smiled his dad wont change he will remain a flirt only and he loved him or what he is. Then he moved on to his mother and hugged her.
 
Armaan: mom I missed you
 
Ananya: me to happy birthday beta

Then flashing a million dollar smile to his mother he moved on to nana and hugged him happily.

 
Shashank: happy birthday dr. armaan
 
Armaan: thnk u sir
 
Padma: happy birthday beta
 
Armaan: thnk u beautiful (said while hugging her)
 
Armaan: nana
 
Nana: apple

[Both were jumping while hugging after stopping and parting]

 
Nana: happy birthday apple bulbul ne boht achi tyari ki hai

 

 

Hearing bulbul from nana's mouth brought a smile on his face and then looked around to see the decoration. He was mesmerised seeing the decoration the hall was looking exceptionally beautiful. He saw the curtains were red and gave a close look it was sause wala laal which brought a huge smile on his face. "Basket" all he could murmur seeing the red colour, this colour always reminded him of his earlier counters with riddhima especially the first one when he had put a red sauce to fool riddhima, mentally he thanked for himself for playing this prank on her otherwise he wouldn't have met his love of his life ever. Then he remembered the moment when he had invited her for their first date and riddhima didn't turn up but thanx to her his ex girlfriend did turn up remembering that he had a sweet smile on his face and shook his head. Then he remembered his first valentine day when they had to spend it in kirti's house and he had to become a pizza boy to meet his love that day. But remembering that day he remembered kirti's dance as well automatically his smile was seen on his face seeing that riddhima came to armaan. Riddhima had been observing armaan from a long time and seeing him lost in his thoughts and even smiling it made her confused and increased her curiosity to know what it was about.

 

 

"Kya hua armaan"asked riddhima who wanted to know the reason behind armaans smiled "kuch nahiin basket hassen pal yaad aa gaye" said armaan in a husky voice but still riddhima didn't get it why, so she asked him again "matlab" with a sweet face. "Basket hamari hassen yadien'''.. Yaad hain tumhe" said armaan in riddhima's ear which made her shiver and blush. Riddhima closed her eyes and remembered her beautiful days with armaan. Soon her thoughts were disturbed when muskaan came from behind and kept her one hand on armaan and second on her. "Oye kahan kho gaye tum dono" said while trying to control her giggle. "Yeh toh inka purana kaam hai" said Rahul who came behind muskaan "oye rahoool tera kaam bataon mien" said armaan and saw Rahul lowering his head and he flashed a victory smile. "Guys tumhe nahiin lagta ki kuch missing hai" said nikita who had seen Rahul muskaan collecting around armaan riddhima so thought she should too join in.

 

"Kya what is missing"said riddhima who was bit disappointed with this comment since she had worked day and night to plan this special party for armaan. Armaan saw the change of expression in riddhimas eyes "kya niki sab kuch toh perfect hai kuch bhi toh missing nahiin hai"said armaan ad turned to see riddhima who flashed a fake smile since she didn't get what was missing where she went wrong she started thinking. Nikita realised that this statement was taken in double meaning so she thought to clear it off before her friends come and hit her with jutas and chappals for creating a scene on armaans special birthday party. "guys '''' guys mera matlab party ki decoration se nahiin tha" said nikita and halted to see her friends reaction but all she could see was astonished faces. She could only manage to see a shock face of her friends who were looking at her without even blinking their eyes even for once. "toh kya matlab tha" asked ridddhima who after hearing this came back to her senses and thought if she doesn't mean reagarding the decoration then what is missing where as she made a recheck in her mind and thought everything was perfect then what is niki talking about?. "Well mera matlab hai tumhara aur armaan ka famous salsa dance" said nikita and hearing this both armaan and riddhima smiled. The salsa dance was the moment where they both felt something about each other; armaan thought that when every one came to know about their love story immediately they had the Valentines Day where he had told himself to people about salsa dance.

 

 

Before any one could speak they heard Anjali saying "attention every one" and all looked towards the stage. "Guys since riddhima has prepared this special party for armaan why don't we have the birthday boy dancing on his own birthday" armaan gave a shocked look where as every one giggled and enjoyed seeing armaans face.  "anjy this is not fare" shouted armaan and Anjali just smiled and continued "wait armaan there is something more coming up" hearing this every ones giggle just stopped "what else was left will she make armaan wear a costume and dance or wait wait will she make him dance like a girl isme toh aur bhi maza aayga" said muskaan to which every one started laughing loudly while armaan stood their crossed his hands infront of his chest and gave a frowning look, which made other laugh more. Anjali too started giggling seeing every one she just couldn't stop her laughter as well. 

 

 

Juniors who were silently watching all this thought these seniors have a good bond with each other. "Guys lagta hai in sabme boht gehra rishta hai don't you just feel that" said priya which shocked nazuk and ruhan she would say something like this was least expected but just smiled and nodded with her. "hain yaar sab kitne cool hai I think they have a strong friendship for sure"  said max who for the first time observed from a positive side rather than a negative side, which left ruhan and nazuk to shake their head they couldn't believe their ears. But soon to add a wish nazuk added her view "kash hum bhi inki tarah ban ban sake hamare beech bhi yahi dosti ho jo inke main dikh rahi hai".  "Afcorse hogi Miss Darpok agar hum sab bhi time spend karenge toh shayad hamare beech bhi yahi bond ban jaye" said max which made nazuk shook her head and started looking towards the gang with a wish in her mind of having or feeling the same friendship.

 

 

Soon Anjali stopped giggling since she had to complete her sentence "let me complete my whole sentence guys" which made the gang stop laughing and looked at her waiting to know what else is left. "sorry muskaan nothing what you expected or spoke" which made muskaan bit sad but on the other hand armaan smiled which showed a victory smile atleast he wouldn't have to do what that muskaan was thinking it sounded really wost but his smile was a for short seconds since he sighed thinking then what else if not this. "Well' well I was thinking riddhima planned this whole surprise party for armaan so why doesn't she dance with armaan, if we look from the other side riddhima being armaans fianc the couple should grace the occasion with dancing first."  Now riddhima was left astonished she couldn't believe her sister her sister did this with her. She trapped her in the whole mess along with armaan it was armaans birthday it was his day so he was suppose to dance alone.  But after few seconds she pondered upon anjalis statement she was right she is armaans fianc and being a couple they should start the dance for the evening.

 

 

Hearing this armaan flashed a smile which showed his dimples his brain started having naughty naughty thoughts. He thought for the first time his friends did a right thing he was waiting for being close to riddhima after seeing her surprise. Somewhere down the line he remembered his rude behaviour with riddhima and felt bad he should have kept patience rather losing out his temper. Riddhima was doing for him he should have guesed and when riddhima had told him to wait still he was following her to know her mysterious calls. He wanted to apologise riddhima for loosing out his temper on her but before that he wanted to enjoy this moment with her.he wanted to make this moment a memorable one. Armaan walked towards the stage and asked Anjali for the mike. He wanted to speak something. Anjali gave him the mike.

 

 

Armaan: basket sabse pehle toh sorry (riddhima looked at armaan where as others were confused and armaan noticed others expression and continued) basket mien tumse gussa nahiin hona chahta tha per ''''' kher sorry basket sabke samne kaan pakad kar sorry bol raha hun please forgive me. Kya tum mere saath dance karogi?

 

 

Riddhima on the other hand was dumbstruck she never expected armaan to say sorry infront of so many people nor she wanted him to say sorry she understands why he was angry why he shouted at her. She could feel people looking at her for an answer so she walked towards the stage. When she reached the stage she took the mike from armaans hand and spoke "armaan sorry" armaan looked at her with a confused face since he wasn't able to understand why she is saying sorry to him. "Armaan galti meri bhi thi ki tumhe nahiin bataya im also sorry" said riddhima and armaan understood why she said sorry to him both hugged each other.

 

 

Anjali took the mike and spoke "now can we have the couple inaugurating the dance floor with their dance"  both armaan and riddhima smiled armaan put forward his hand and riddhima  kept her hand on his hand and both walked towards the stage. The music began and they danced on their favourite dance the salsa dance.  After when they finished their dance every one clapped for them and soon every one started dancing. However shahshank Padma annanya billy went to other room to have their chit chat since they can't be an interruption in the youngster's party.  

 

When every one was busy armaan pulled riddhima and went towards their famous love place that is the fire escape. "Armaan kya kar rahe ho" riddhima said armaan pulled her towards the wall and pinned her up against the wall. Armaan kept his hand on her lips "shhh" they looked into each others eyes trying to capture the moments they had encountered inside the hall. "Basket aaj nahiin aaj mien boht khush hun" said armaan "mien bhi" come riddhimas instant reply. "Kyun" said armaan with a naughty smile he knew the reason still he wanted to hear from riddhima "tumhe nahiin pata" said riddhhima who understood seeing armaan naughty smile. "Nahiin tum batao" said armaan with a cute face "nahiin tum guess karo" said riddhima who wasn't gona give up so easily she thought to play it along she will not share until armaan gets bit irritated."agar guess kiya toh mujhe kya milega" said armaan trying his luck where as riddhima was not gona easily give up "kuch nahiin tum pehle guess toh karo". "agar miene tumhara mooh (mouth) se nikal diya ki tum khush kyun hot oh mujhe meri meethai chahiye" said armaan and riddhima blushed hearing about the meethai "mhm tum nahiin jeet paoge"said riddhima. Armaan on the other hand was thinking of a plan when riddhima spoke "guess toh karo". "Hmmm mujhe guess nahiin karna tum bolo" said armaan who understood that riddhima is gona play along and won't speak up easily. "Kya bolo" asked riddhima and in her thoughts she said "Mr Armaan malik itni assani se nahiin kahoongi thoda intezaar". "Yahi ki tum aaj khush kyun ho" said armaan and his thoughts he said "miss basket riddhima gupta bolna toh apko padega hi padega.  

 

 

 

 

Coming up

 

1.       Armaan riddhimas romance

        2.     Interns shocked to see
 
 
 
 i noe the romance wasnt much in this part but i cant bring the romance immdediately especially when humour track is on had to bulid it up next part would have romance as said in coming up.  how was the update? do leave your comments, views and suggestions
 


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Awesum part!
so sweet ov riddhima to arrange dat surprise fr Armaan

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Originally posted by krazzy4armaan

Awesum part!
so sweet ov riddhima to arrange dat surprise fr Armaan
thnk u sooo muchSmile
iam glad u liked riddhima arranging the surprise for armaanEmbarrassed
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AR ke beech hone wale drishye ne mere hridye ko prafulit kar diya
shresth bhaag bhi atyadhik manbhavak tha
sandesh ke liye dhanyewaad
yeh aapke liye:-


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Awesome part
loved it

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