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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

simply adorable parts...........

gang masti was just awsum..............

just loved them yaar............

n ridz surprise............

im eagerly waiting yaar..

kahin armi ka b'thday tu nahin................

thnx for the pm..................

thnk u sooo muchSmile
im overwhelmed with ur comment
im glad u found it adorable n d gang masti ausumEmbarrassed
nd hmmm lets see whther ur guess is right or nt Wink

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amruta04

hey Sri
nice update
loved it
waiting for ridz surprise
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm.
thnk u sooo muchSmile
iam glad u found d part niceEmbarrassed
nd ridz surprise will open soonWink
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vayu_prachi



Hey awesum update......eagerly waitng for riddhima's surpise........nd thnx for d pm

thnk u sooo muchSmile
im glad u  found d part ausumEmbarrassed
will open ridz surprise soonWink
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simran45

i haven't commented on so many parts
shrish all parts r great n story is getting interesting
keep writing u r one of wonderful writers here
thnk u soooo muchSmile
overwhelmed with ur complimentEmbarrassed
nd im glad u found d story interesting
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krazzy4armaan

Nice update!
bt more AR scenes in next part plzzzzzzz
thnk u sooo muchSmile
yup there ar AR romance in riddhimas surprise fr armaanWink
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaaniKSGmallik

sry for late cmntOuch

loved it

thnx for the PMEmbarrassed

hey it k vaaniSmile thnk u sooo much
nd im glad u loved itEmbarrassed
nd wat a sryy love this pic ksg roxEmbarrassed
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NOTE: sorry fr updating it very late actually this week was hectic yesterday had a test and thrusday hav a presentation dn friday i hav 2 viva due to studies my writing speed reduced finally i managed to write a part.
 
last but nt the least thnk u to all the silent readers
 
NJOY READING
 
 
 

UPDATE 31

 
 

GIRLS GREEN ROOM

 

 

There was a knock on the door "kaun hai"asked muskaan and when she got no response she shouted "abe kaun hai bolte ho ya muh (mouth) todo tera" hearing this other three girls giggled and could also hear giggles from outside, the voices were quite recognisable.  Riddhima went and opened the door since she understood it must have been the boys, while the boys were entering they had a huge smile on their faces since deliberately they didn't speak up and wanted to hear muskaan shouting and the idea was of none other than Rahul. Seeing the smile on boys faces muskaan couldn't control "abbey oye tum log ke muh (mouth) main zubaan nahiin hai kya '''' bol nahiin sakte the" blasted out though girls giggled but boys looked into each others eyes. Seeing getting diverted from the topic riddhima spoke "guys its serious can we please discuss what we wanted to" hearing this every one looked towards her. "hain tum ladkiyon ne hume yahan kyun bulaya hai and why didn't you guys called armaan?" said Rahul who still didn't knew why they were here since atul had told them that Anjali had called and was sounding bit serious and wanted to talk but armaan was suppose to stay away from all this he wasn't even called.

 

 

Riddhima understood that now she would have to explain the guys also about her surprise for armaan and what all is stored for tonight. "fine suno" riddhima started explaining her surprise and what all is gona happen after 12 since it's a surprise for armaan so she wanted it to hide from armaan though she knows how much it must have been hurting armaan as she promised him that she will tell him every thing after 12 she had to make her surprise a hit rather than a flop and needed her friends help in that. After explaining the whole surprise to every one the guys had a huge smile and Rahul commented "riddhima ausum surprise for armaan by his love" riddhima blushed hearing the words his love where as other smiled. "Toh ridzy tum humse kya chahti ho" asked atul who was still not able to think why are they hear what they have to do. "Oh atul '''.. Listen ridzy wants you guys to bring armaan on the terrace so that he doest have any doubt in his mind" said Anjali while the guys listened to her with full seriousness and tried to grab what she meant. "Oh like that" said abhimanyu "yes Mr Modi" replied Anjali. 

 
 

"Per the question is hum ye sab karenge kaise" said Rahul who still didn't get how they would do it till now they just know whats the surprise why is it and what they have to do but no one told them how they have to do it so that armaan doesn't doubt. "oye Rahul tu gadha hai kya" said muskaan to which Rahul shook his head in disagreement "toh phir kuch apni akal bhi laga le" said while moving towards him and other thought and prayed hope she doesn't fights that's the last thing riddhima wanted at this time since time is running they hardly have 20 mins to think of how to bring armaan to the hall.  But to their surprise muskaan didn't do anything rather walked towards the washroom and other sighed since if muskaan would have fought they would have wasted their time. "ok come on you guys go" said Anjali which left other shocked riddhimas mouth remained open "kya keh rahi ho di....... Agar ye gaye toh phir armaan ko kaun layga" said riddhima who couldn't think her brain had stopped working at this moment since fear of her surprise getting flopped made her tensed and due to which her barin wasn't even working. Where as boys looked at her with a question mark on their face which said kya matlab.

 

 

Seeing every one shocked Anjali understood that they haven't understood what she was trying to say or convey.  "guys I meant be original......... don't think of any plan just go to armaan and what ever comes to your mind just do it" said Anjali and guys again looked at her but this time with a smile since they got it plan hardly works with armaan he would in a second caught them so they needed to be original and when he is infront of them what ever comes to their mind will not make him doubt. "Sounds good anji" said Rahul with a grin on his face. "di pakka yeh flop nahiin hog" riddhima was still fearing scared as to what will happen. She didn't wanted her plan to be flop and she never in her dreams thought that she would do all this without a proper planning. Since she knew armaan he is some one whom no one can fool he can easily catch people since he is the master of all the pranks all the ideas which they know come only from armaan. "hain ridzy daar mat kuch nahiin hoga hain na nikita" she knew ridzy wont agree to her only if other would also say she would agree since this matter involves armaan whom she loves more than any one else in life consoling from one person wont effect her. "Hain riddhima ammy ka ye surprise flop nahiin hoga hain na guys". All the guys now knew the seriousness of the situation so to lighten it up "hain riddhima hum sambhal lenge don't worry armaan ayga or surprise flop nahiin hoga" said Rahul "Or agar nahiin manna toh hum kidnap karke le aynge ridzy fikar mat kar tu" said muskaan while other giggled and due to this the atmosphere did lighten up riddhima did smile.

 

 

OUTSIDE BOYS GREEN ROOM

 

 

"Abbey andar ja na" said Rahul to champ and while saying this he was trying to push atul inside the room so that they follow him and don't give armaan a chance to doubt. "Mien nahiin jaonga" said atul and was trying hard not get pushed by Rahul where as abhimanyu just hit his forehead. "aree kyun nahiin jaoge" said abhimanyu who was not understanding why atul is not following. "Champ agar aisa hi chalta raha na toh humne jo riddhima ko promiss kiya hai na ki hum armaan ko uske surprise main laynge vo poora nahiin ho payge" said Rahul who wanted to atul to realise they cannot back out now. "Nahiin mien nahiin jaonga armaan pakad lega or phir kahin gusse mien kahin vo sasurji ko mere baare main ulta na bol de.......... Pata hai kitna time laga hai mujhe unse patane main" both Rahul and abhimanyu looked at each other "abhe champ tu ye soch agar tune riddhima ka promiss poora nahiin kiya toh....... toh Anjali tujhse naraz ho jaygi phir kya karega tu?" said Rahul who knew atul doesn't listen until things involve Anjali his love. "Sachi Rahul Anjali mujse naraz ho jaygi agar miene ridzy ka promiss poora nahiin kiya"asked atul with utmost innocent and saw Rahul nodding his head in agreement.  "Chal mere bhai" said atul and all of them walked inside the green room.

 

 

GIRLS GREEN ROOM

 

 

"Humne sahi kiya hai na inn ladkon pe trust karke" said nikita who still had a doubt ki guys will be successful. "Pata nahiin yaar per iam sure they arnt bad they will surely bring armaan" said Anjali. While riddhima kept on praying for the success and didn't utter a word since she didn't wanted to be negative any more she wanted to remain positive with her thoughts. "Agar inne koi gadbad ki na toh mien inhe chodongi nahiin inke chote- chote chote-chote tukde kardoongi" said muskaan and other burst out laughing including riddhima who needed something to divert her mind from all the tentions which she is having. "Guys chalohum hall main tyari dekh ke aate hain" said nikita and others nodded and started walking out if the room but before leaving Riddhima looked up towards the ceiling and silently prayed to god for her surprise to be a success one.

 

 

BOYS GREEN ROOM

 

 

All the boys entered the room and saw armaan standing infront of the mirror combing his hair when armaan saw them through the mirror he spoke "aa gaye tum log''''''' waise kaha gaye the?". The three of them looked into each others eyes and trying to think what to say since they had to be original and had to be successful in getting armaan to the surprise.  "umm''' vo''''. Vo" said Rahul who had no words to say "kya" said armaan when he heard Rahul fumbling. "kuch nahiin mere bhai '''''. Vo mujhe bhook lag rahi thi toh mien inhe apne saath le gaya" said atul and hearing him Rahul and abhimanyu's mouth left open they never thought that atul would come up with an idea of their disappearing. Though armaan smiled since he was convinced with it while the three looked at each other trying to say kuch bolo we have to bring him to the hall.  But before any one could speak armaan spoke "chalo guys kahin bahar chalte hain its been long time since we all have gone out I'll call the girls as well what say?" said armaan without knowing some surprise is waiting for him. Though according to him he wanted to know whats going on with riddhima why is she hiding it from him and this was the best opportunity when they are out he might get time to speak to her alone. "Nahiin"came an echoed answer from his friends and he looked at them with bit of frown on his face since they are saying no and he had only this chance to talk to his basket.

 

 

"per kyun" said a confusing armaan he really didn't answer understand the reason of their refusal.  "vo ''''. Vo hum '''''''. Hamara mood nahiin hai" said Rahul who hit himself mentally for coming up with such a lame excuse they will be caught. Armaan stared at Rahul did he said mood nahiin hai thought armaan then he noticed him looking to atul and abhimanyu trying to say something he was observing them ever since anjali's phone came but brushed his doubts but now these silly acts are making him feel to rethink about it. "Whats going on?" asked armaan who was still confused and hearing him they thought pakde Gaye ab kya kare "kuch'. Kuch bhi toh nahiin" said abhimanyu. Armaan shook his head thinking ye log kya chupa rahe hain kuch toh gadbad hai per kya ek toh pehle hi riddhima mujhe kuch bata nahiin rahi aura b yeh'''''' after few seconds he thought kahin riddhima or ye mile huye toh nahiin ''''. Hain ye possible hai kyunki Anjali ka phone aya tha atul ke paas kuch toh hai lets play.

 

 

"ok guys hum bahar nahiin jaynge" said armaan and looked at their faces which showed a relief and continued further "per mere ghar chalenge?" now their eyes popped out a second before they were relief since they wont go out but now armaan is asking them to be at their house? "Oh god ab kya kare agar isse riddhima ke surprise main nahiin laye toh kya hog" thought Rahul but he was very determined not to spoil riddhimas surprise due to them he was thinking of something when suddenly an idea came in his mind.

 

 

OUTSIDE THE AUDITORIUM

 

 

All the ineterns were standing and were saying good by to each other when their pagers rang which showed a messege saying "reach the hall at 12 in the night" seeing this messege all looked into each others eyes and thought what this was. "Itni raat main hall main?" said nazuk and other didn't know what to say since this question was running in their mind too. "Ab kya kare?" asked priya who didnt know what to do "chalte hain ab messege aya hai toh jana toh padega hi" said ruhan "hain per ye koi prank bhi toh ho sakta hain na" said max to which every one looked at him. "mera matlab generally pagers pe emergency ke baare main bolte hain per this has asked us to report in a hall where as for reporting announcement mike se hoti hai" said max for thei first time he was right thought ruhan it was true for announcement mikes are used but still they cant ignore the messege they have to go to the hall no matter what. "guys sochna band karo and lets go messege aya hai we cant ignore it" said ruhan and other simply nodded their head and started walking towards the hall.

 

 

BOYS GREEN ROOM

 

 

Armaan was staring at atul and abhimanyu who were standing infront of him where as Rahul had gone to washroom and it has been 5 mins he is still not out whats going on armaan started thinking.

He saw atul and abhimanyu staring at something behind him when he turned to see what it is he didn't find anything and looked towards them and asked "kya" both shook their head since they  understood whats gona happen in next few seconds Soon he couldn't see anything except a black colour. Then he realised some one had put a cloth on his face and it had to be Rahul since he was only missing from the sight. "Rahul now what is this" asked armaan while trying to take out the cloth but couldn't since atul and abhimanyu were holding his right and left hand respectively. He didn't know what's happening but surely thought today was a day full of surprises.  all three of them started walking towards the hall and in between atul couldn't control his curiousness "abbey Rahul tujhe ye idea aya kaha se" Rahul looked at him and thought he had to ask this question right now when he knows armaan is standing here with them "um ummm aise hi" but armaan didn't stop from commenting "aur kahan se muskaan ke saath reh kar uss jaisa ban gaya hai" after saying he giggled for a second and joined by others too when Rahul hit on his shoulder and he shouted "ouch"

 

 

INSIDE THE HALL

 

 

"oye ridzy yaar kitni der lag rahi hai inko" said muskaan who getting impatient since after a long time they will enjoy that too on a special occasion. "Hume in boys pe bharosa karna hi nahiin chahiye tha" said nikita and riddhima thought do they really have to say all this right now when they know iam getting tensed due to it. "Totally agree nikita per ab koi chara bhi nahiin hai we have to wait for them" said Anjali. Soon muskaan saw gate opening and jumped saying "shayad wo log aa gaye" all looked towards the gate but to their disappointment they were interns rather armaan and others. Interns came forward and asked riddhima since they have seen her and interacted with her most so felt comfortable asking her "ye sab kya ho raha hai" asked nazuk and riddhima looked at them and understood that they are confused "kuch der main pata chal jayga just make yourself comfortable" interns looked at the decorated hall and understood to some extend that something is special so they nodded their head and went towards the end of the hall and adored the decoration. Soon Anjali read a messege and said "lights off" and others understood they are here riddhima felt great that now her surprise will come infront of armaan and she was eagerly waiting for his response. Some ticklish feeling she was getting thinking what will armaan say after her surprise but now she had to concentrate on what was planned for armaan.

 

 

OUTSIDE THE HALL

 

 

"hum aa gaye" said abhimanyu and armaan made a frowning face first of all he was blind folded secondly he didn't know whats all this for thirdly where is riddhima she was suppose to tell him something important and fourthly where are they what does abhimanyu means by hum aa gaye? While all these questions were running inside his mind he was brought forward and was stopped and heard a whisper is his ears "armaan just relax and soon you will come to know whats going on" said Rahul in his ears. Armaan was now thinking ye ho kya raha hai what does Rahul mean by I will come to know whats going on.

 

 

 

 

Coming up

 

1.       Armaans surprise (with return of)

2.       Armaan riddhimas moments

 

 
finally updated i guess every one  was missing AR romance so next part reveals the suprise along with romance. btw how was this part?  please leave ur suggestions view and comments
 


Edited by youth_showsfan - 29 March 2011 at 10:55am

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sris gr8 part dear
loved it
awesome update
excited to know the surprise
continue soon

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