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Hi all,I'm here again with my one shot ff.It's about prem aur uska shakti......
I wrote this os much before on my another fav couple on prithviraj chauhan forum .it's my one of fav os and I want to share it with u all.
Prem aur Sakti
Prem is a word, is feelings. Prem hota hain do logo mein ,unke dil milta hain, ek doosre ke liye dhrakta hain ek doosre ke liye.
Love, what is the definition of love. Can we know the meaning of love? May be yes, or may be not.
Hum, pyaar ki kaya naam dete hain, kai tarah se express karte hain lkein iye ek aise feelings hain jisse sirf samjhna chaiye ,koi isse samjha nehi sakta.
Love is purity, trust,loyalty, honesty , sacrifice,power and more than worship.Yes,It's worship cause it's touch our soul.It's an unconditional bond between two person or more than two soul.
Iye kahani hain ek lerka aur ek lerki ka , jo ek doosre se Pyaar karte the aur unke Pyaar ko unke parivaar wale bhi maan lia aur ek din un dono ka shaadi ho gaya??..
Lerke ka naam Maan Singh Khurana.He is capt of army.
Lerki ka naam Geet (Handa) Singh Khurana.She is house wife.
Dono ka shaadi ka ek saal hogaya. Aaj undono ka annivery celebrate ho raha hain?
Geet wearing a deep red color and cream color lehenga with matching jwellery.she looks stunning.
Maan enter and stood there silently.his face have little smile and Geet look him by the mirror and asked kaya hua ?kaya dekh rehe ho?
Geet:- Maan mein tumhe kuch puch rahi hoon.bolona.
Maan:-aapne pari ko dekh raha tha.
Geet:-pari kaha hain?
Maan:- mere saamne toh hain??
Geet blushed and said baatein bahut accha kar rehe ho??
Maan:-oh toh hum humesha karta hoon?.
Geet:-pata hain, aab uha khara kyuon ho,iha aao,mere mang bharo?.
Maan:-hummm, then he goes close near to her anf fill her mang and said now u look more beautiful.
Geet just smiled shyly and said hummmm. Then aap ready ho gaye?
Maan :-ha, bahut pehele?oh mujhe kahi jana tha na??
Maan:-puchoge nehi kaha gaya tha mein?
Maan:-iye baat tumahari mujhe aajtak samajh mein nehi aaya,tum kuch puchte nehi kyuon?
Geet:-kyuon ki aapke upar mujhe pura trust hain ,aur jab aap kisise pe Pyaar karte ho tohusse pucha nehi jata aur aap toh haar baat mujhe batate ho, phir?
Maan smiles and said humm jaan ,isliye toh tumhe mein sirf Pyaar nehi karta,I respect u lot.
Geet:-iye toh mein aapse jani hoon , aap hi toh mujhe samjhaya iye Pyaar kaya hota hain , aapko iyaad hain humara shaadi ke din aapko jana para?.tha mission ke liye?uss din meine samjha iye Pyaar kaya hota hain?
Maan smiles and said aacha par uss din toh tumne mujhe sahi meaning smajhya Pyaar ka,
Geet:-mein kha mein daar gayithi?
Maan:- oh toh koi bhi lerki bhi daar jayga agar uske pati ko shaadi baad hi koi itni dangerous mission pe jana hoga? toh?.
Flashback:-after MaanGeet married. Their first night, they talking with each other.
Maan got a call from his office and his face color changed. Geet noticed it and said kaya hua Maan aapko?
Maan just give her faint smile and said kuch nehi?
Geet:-aapne Geet se nehi kehenge aapne pareshani,
Maan:-nehi Geet, aise baat nehi hain, oh kaya hain na,
Geet:-ha boliye na?.
Maan:-oh,kaise kahu mein tumse?
Geet:- boliye na?
Maan:- Geet,mujhe abhi jana hoga, ek mission hain,it's very dangerous and I have to go now?..
Geet stood there silently some moments and said aaj , abhi jana hoga,dangerous??
Maan:-ha Geet,mein samajh sakta hoon tumhara halat, par mein kaya karu Geet?.
Geet get up from the sofa and stood near the window and looking at the outside.
Geet:- sab kuch kitna shant hain na Maan??par?.
Maan:-par tumhara maan nehi ,mujhe pata hain,I can understand Geet.
Geet turned and said Maan mujhe bahut daar lag raha hain??
Maan:-I? but then he just hugged her .
After some moments Geet said to Maan aapko der ho jayega, aap ready holo,mein aapka uniform thik karta hoon.
Maan look at her and said Geet.
Geet -mujhe aape aur aapne Pyaar pe pura belive hain ,aapko kuch nehi hoga,mere Pyaar humesha aapke sath rehega????
Maan:- Geet I love u.
Geet:-I love u too.go and ready.
Then after some time Geet and Maan go downstairs and Geet said Best of luck Maan,
She doing his aarti and put a tilak on his forehead and said jeet ke aana ,I'll wait for u?
Maan ne bahar jane ke time again look back and said, I'll back and win this mission also.
Geet smiles and nodded in positively.
Morning mein sab ko pata chala and everyone got tensed.
Geet 's papa came and said Geet, iye kaya?
Geet:-papa aap,aaiye iha this time?
Geet 's papa:-tujhe lene aagaya.
Hearing this all shocked and Geet said par papa,kyuon ?iye mere ghar hain ,mere pati ka ghar??
Geet 's papa:-kaun sa pati, jo tujhe chor ke chali gaya?... aur tu iha?kis liye rehegi?.
Geet:-papa,iye aapkaya kehe rehe hain, oh mujhe chor ke kaha gaye, unhe toh jana para, aur iye toh unka duty hain towards his country?.aur meine unhe jane ke liye kaha,
Geet 's papa:-tu ne, tum samaj sakti hain tune kaya kia?.
Geet:-ha papa,meine bilkul sahi kia.
Geet 's papa:- par??isliye meine pehele tere shaadi?.
Geet:-papa,meine unse Pyaar kia hain aur aaj unke liye mere Pyaar aur bhi baar gaya hain.papa aapka naraj ge samajh mein aara hain par papa,mein unse Pyaar karti hoon aur Pyaar kabhi selfish nehi hota, Pyaar ka doosri naam toh tyag hain papa, agar hum ek doosre ke problem na samjhe toh kaise hoga, mere Pyaar itna kamjor nehi ke mein unke liye intejar bhi na karu,mujhe pata hain aap kyuon mujhe lene jane ki chathe ho aap , par mein iha rahungi aur intejaar karungi unka,mujhe pura believe hain oh jarur wapas aayenge?aur mein aapke paas wapas nehi jaungi papa, mujhe maaf kar dijiye aap.
Maan 's papa:-don't worry; Maan will be back?.and ur daughter is now our daughter?..don't worry?.
Geet 's papa:-but?..
Geet:-papa,I understand ur feeling and u but pls try to understand me and my love.I love him and I respect his decision, If he didn't go then I didn't like it.Infact it's not only his decision ,it's my decision also.
Geet 's papa:- Geet?
Geet:-ha pa, kaal raat unhone mujhe kaha ,infact mujhse unhone pucha and I said u'll go there , ur duty come first.
Then Geet 's papa goes from there.
Aise kuch din chala gaya and no news of Maan.Everybody tensed. Geet also but she didn't show it infront of anyone.Everyone understand also her feelings?
they thinks may be Maan will not return but Geet told them he 'll return.
Geet,I have full faith on my God ,my love and my Maan, he'll return.
One day they heard news Maan injured and they successfully complete their mission. Everyone goes to meet Maan in the hospital.
Doctor told them just minor injury. Nothing to worry.
Geet 's parents and Maan 's parents are happy and they understand it's true love of Maan and Geet, it's power of their love , that Maan back.
Then Maan returned from hospital and one day asked Geet, agar mein nehi wapas ? Geet covered his mouth by her hand and said no Maan, aap aisa mat akho, bhagwan na kare aisa kabhi ho par phir bhi mein humesha tumhara intejar karti iha aise??.
Maan smiles and said love u jaan.
Geet:-love u too jaan.
Maan:- aww, aaj peheli baar tumne mujhe jaan kaha?.
Geet:- humm and blushing. Then mein daar gayi thi Maan but I believe God, u and my love.
Maan:me also jaan aur mein iye bhi janti hoon tum kitni baar God se prayer kia hoga. Bhagwan ke blessing and ur love bring me back safely.
Geet smiles and said but mujhe aapne Pyaar pe trust hain aur mujhe pata hain aapko kuch nehi hoga?..
Maan:-par tumne agar mujhe na bolte jane ki toh mujhpe power kahase ? Geet said shhh, aap ke Pyaar nehi mujhe believe kanra para aapko kuch nehi hoga ?..
Maan:-yes, jaan our love give us power to fight with every odd. And trust each other.
Then both goes down stair to attain the function and enjoy lots.
Their love give them trust,power to fight with every odd.they love each other and they trust each, they know many odds will be come but they 'll over come all the odds.
they show,if u love someone truely then God also support u.
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