Originally posted by: --.munchkin.--
Reserved..😳
*EDITED*awww this was so cute, and good..you kno your wishes and dreams for your friend reflected do nicely :) do keep writing...🤗...thanks for the pm..!take care Chikkiii🤗
2nd Part was nice, perfect end and u didnt rush anything, Beautifully written di.
thanks😊
Originally posted by: neha_mjht
very nice
Originally posted by: varsh-mayur
amrtha i just read all us os they r brilliant btw...u wrote exactly wats happening in my frnds life ...next time pls p,m me
thanks fiza for liking...Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
i adore the confesion in this update..
truly amazingbut ill recomended ur frnd to leave attutide n atleast try n talk casually...else she will regret this her whole lifewonderfullmay Allah bless ur frnd with her love
amrita
beautiful OS hun
loved it so much
keep it up
Originally posted by: MayUr-ArTi_fan
it was so so adorable😍one of the cutest Os's i've ever read😃 love the way you showed that when one is in love they like someone for their bad qualities as well as good qualities👏the hesitation and fear described are very realistic and almost every girl can easily relate to them😳 ending was beautiful i never expected Mayank to have to same feelings for her so it came as a huge surprise😃
regarding the OS being real... you should tell your friend to confess her feelings before its too late👍🏼all in all it was amazing🤗
Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR
Hey it was Simply sweet OS dearthanks for the pm
I wish your's Friend will get her Love soon
really a lovely story dearI loved itbeautifully writtenthanks for pmwrite more
Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Ah-mazing storyyy dear...
I loved the story..besutifully written..hope ur frnd gets exactly this ending...Or i can say new beginning...
Brilliant...
oh gosh dear...
it was amazing os...
loved it...
both were in love wid eachother but didnt confess...and mayank took a step...gr8...do cont dear to write...
thank you🤗Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
nyc os amrita!!
luvd it 2 d bits!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
awww
it was so sweet story ...loved it.after many times i read such kind of sweet story.thanks to u.they loves each otehr...bt dint tell each other ...bt finally mayank confessed.loved it.keep writing.thanks for the pm.
very nice ,cute ,sweet n simple.👏
Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Nice os'es
Loved them
Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Nice os..
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