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2nd Part was nice, perfect end and u didnt rush anything, Beautifully written di.

amrtha i just read all us os they r brilliant btw...u wrote exactly wats happening in my frnds life ...next time pls p,m me

i adore the confesion in this update..

amrita
beautiful OS hun
loved it so much
keep it up

This content was originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i adore the confesion in this update..

truly amazing

 

but ill recommended ur frnd to leave attitude n at least try n talk casually...else she will regret this her whole life

 

 

wonderfull

 

may Allah bless ur frnd with her love

well said jana..:D

it was so so adorable😍one of the cutest Os's i've ever read😃 love the way you showed that when one is in love they like someone for their bad qualities as well as good qualities👏the hesitation and fear described are very realistic and almost every girl can easily relate to them😳 ending was beautiful i never expected Mayank to have to same feelings for her so it came as a huge surprise😃

Hey it was Simply sweet OS dear

thanks for the pm

I wish your's Friend will get her Love soon

Ah-mazing storyyy dear...
I loved the story..besutifully written..hope ur frnd gets exactly this ending...Or i can say new beginning...
Brilliant...

oh gosh dear...

it was amazing os...👏                                                                            loved it...