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Naku ghar wapas aati hai aur sabko prasad deti hai........ Naku apney kamrey mey aati hai.... Dutta mirror ke saamney tayar ho raha hai... Naku bed pe aakar beith jaati hai... Aur dutta ko dekhti hai....... Dutta tayar hokar jaaney lagta hai...... lakin apna cell phone leney aata hai naku ke pass... Dutta naku ko dekhta hai aur chup chap sey chala jaata hai {how rudeCryCryCry} Naku bi sochney lagti hai ki "zindagi kaisey kaisey mod le rahi hai dutta aur uske jeevan mey hamesha khushi aatey aatey reh jaati hai..."

Baazi apne kurta ka button see raha hota hai... Tabhi madhu uske pass ati hai aur bolti hai......"arey baazi yeh kya kar raha hai......." Baazi says "terko kya dikhrela hai... apun apney kyrtey ka button silela hai... tereyko kuch kaam tha kya...."Madhu says "nahi nahi baazi koi kaam nahi hai acha mey jaati....... Dono ka eyecontact hota hai for  1 min... Madhu sharma ke chali jaatiBlushing... Baazi also gives smile...Smile

Sab nastey ke liye dinning table pe beith jaatey hai....Aayi sahib dutta ki taraf dekhtey kehti hai "Dutta naku kaha hai...."Dutta says nothing... Madhu says "mey jakar vahini ko bulakar laati hu......." Madhu naku ko bulaney ke liye jaati hai... Naku apney kamrey mey beithi aakhey band karke soch rahi hoti hai... Madhu kamrey mey aati hai aur kehti hai "vahini aap yaha kya kar rahi hai sab aapka nashtey ke liye intezar kar rahey hai........" Naku says Disapprove "madhu tu ja merey ko nashta nahi karna hai, mera maan nahi hai......"Madhu says "kyu maan nahi hai... bhau ne kuch kaha kya........? Naku says Ermm "nahi madhu terey bhau ne mujhe kuch nahi kaha... lakin mera maan nahi kar raha... tu ja aur nashta kar le....."

Madhu nichey aati hai aur kehti hai "Aayi sahib woh naku ka kuch khaaney ko maan nahi kar raha hai......." Aayi sahib dutta sey kehti hai " dutta naku ney kal raat sey kuch nahi khaya hai... kahi uski tabiyat toh theek nahi hai na.... Kala bolti hai Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile."aayi sahib aap itna pareshan kyu ho rahi hai vahini ko kuch nahi hua hai... maan nahi hoga uska khaney ko abhi baad mey kha legi aur phir hum sab hai na vahini ko dekhney ke liye... chaliye nashta kijye aap hi bolti hai na khaaney ke bich se uthkar janey sey ann ka upmaan hota hai phir.......

Kala gives evil smileEvil Smile...........

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Dutta apney kamrey ki taraf dekhta hai..... aur uth kar jaaney lagta hai... Kala bich mey kehti hai..... "arey bhau ab tu kaha ja raha hai....." Bhau kehta hai "taayi mey abhi aata hu tum log nashta shuru kijiye...." Kala says "lakin bhau....." Dutta kala ki baat ko undekha karke chala jaata hai... Kala becomes angry...Angry.... kishore says "kya hua kala, ek baar phir bhau ne tumari baat ko andekha kar diya...... hmmm ismey kaun sa nayi baat hai... yeh toh abhi shuruwat hai... aagey dekho kya hota hai....LOL.... leela, roops makes faceConfused.....

Dutta kamrey mey aata hai aur naku ko dekhta hai.... naku aur dutta ek dusrey ko dekhtey hai....Dutta says "Angry yeh sab kya hai naku aayi sahib bol rahi thi ki tuney kal raat sey kuch nahi khaya........ kyu kar rahi ho tum aisa....agar tum yeh lagta hai ki aisa karke tum mujhe paa logi toh aisa kabhi nahi hoga....AngryAngryAngry dutta kabhi dhokhey baaz ko maaf nahi karta.... Naku CryCrysays "mey janti sahib ki mey aapko nahi paa sakti lakin mey yeh aakhri koshish karke dekhna chahti hu... ki kya sach mey baapa pe vishwas karney waalo ki jeet hoti hai ya jhooth aur fareb ka nakab dhakey huey logo ki........"ClapCryClap.....

Dutta kehta hai aisa kabhi nahi hoga....aur yeh bolkar chala jaata hai.... {title track from anjaana anjani "tujhe bhula diya".....starts}... Naku thinks about dutta and dutta having a glass of wine in his hand remember naku... Naku is roming here and there and dutta headdown with a glass of wine..... In this line "naina lagiya baarisha" naku imagine dutta saying "aey naku mey tumarey bina ji nahi sakta... and hug naku........

Dutta nashey ki haalat mey naku ke kamrey mey aata hai..... dutta chup chap se beith jaata hai sofey par....Naku comes to dutta "sahib sab theek hai na.... naku rotey hueyCry...Dutta naku ki taraf dekhta hai aur kehta hai "bahut pyar karti hai na mujse tu.... kyu apney aap ko itni takleef de rahi hai merey liye.... jisey teri koi parwah nahi...ClapClapClap Naku says "ha sahib mey aapsey bahut pyar karti hai... lakin mey kuch jhooth bi toh nahi bol rahi mey aapke bina ji nahi sakti ha lakin aapke liye jaan zarur de sakti haiCry... Dutta hugs naku tightly....

Naku cries a lot......CryCryCry

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"Raat ka scene very romantic and emotional scene....ClapClap

Dutta naku ko dekhta hai, naku uth kar jaaney lagti hai' Dutta naku ki sari ka pallu pakad leta haiShocked'.. Dutta khada ho jaata hai'. Naku ke pass dheerey chal kar aata hai' Dutta naku ki lower neck par kiss karta haiTongue'. Naku ki dil ki dhakaney badh jaati hai aur who apni aakhey band kar leti hai' Dutta naku ko apni taraf modhta hai' Naku ki aankho sey aansu Crybeh rahey hotey hai aur dutta un aansuo ko pochtey huey kehta hai...  

Dutta kehta hai "aey naku ro mat mey aa gaya hu na'bas'."

{title track merey hath mey tera hath ho saaru jantey terey sath ho.."}

Naku says "sahin itni der kyu kar di aaney mey''." 

Dutta dubara sey naku ko kiss karta hai aur naku bi dutta ko kaskar hug kar leti haiBlushingNaku jaaney lagti and Dutta naku ke seer ko pichey sey kaskar pakdh leta hai aur apni aur khichta hai... Naku bi dutta ko waisey hi galey laga leti hai'. Dutta ko bahut rahat milti hai aur who khush ho jaata hai aur usko achey sey kiss karta hai'Dutta naku ko godh meu utha leta hai aur dono ek dusrey ko dkehtey rehtey hai'' Dutta naku ko bed ke bicho bich le jakar leta deta hai' 

Dutta naku ke pass aa jaata hai, uski taraf jhukta hai'                       Dutta usey dekhtey huey bolta hai " Dutta shriram aaj tumsey kehta hai "ha naku mey tumsey bahut pyar karta hai, tumari aakho mey aansu nahi dekh sakta, tum jab takleef mey hoti ho'toh mujse bardshat nahi hota'."Clap

Naku dutta ko apni baaho mey bhar leti hai                                   Naku 

says "sahib mey bi aapke bina ek pal ke liye bi nahi ji sakti jab aap merey pass nahi they toh mujhe yeh duri sadiyo mil lambi lagti thi'.." DancingDancingDancing

Dutta Naku ki lower nick pe gently kiss karta hai' Dutta dherey sey naku ke blouse ki dhori apni ungliyo sey kholta hai. Dutta naku ke lips pe kiss karta.. Naku usey side karti hai aur hastey huey khidaki ki taraf bhaag jaati hai' Dutta uske pass aata hai'Dutta usey smile deta hai'aur uski sundarata ko nihartey rehtey hai.. Dutta naku ke close jaata hai uske chehrey pe dheerey hath phereta hai' Naku dutta ko dekh rahi hoti hai.. and she close her eyes'Naku dutta ke hath ko jakad leti hai' Dutta ko zor se alag se jhataka lagta hai'. Dutta usey phir sey godh mey utha leta hai aur usey bed pe le jaata hai.. Dutta dherey se naku ke hath pe kiss karta hai dherey dherey uskey cherey par karta hai chehrey (his face to top of hers, not the body! } Phir uske chehrey par uski naak, gaalo pe aur tab uske lips apna raasta dhund hi letey hai' Dutta kiss was full of passion and love.. Naku bi dutta ko kiss karti hai''.

Dutta naku ko kiss karna chodh deta hai aur uski garden pe nichey ki taraf jaata hai.. Aur dutta naku ki saree ka palu hata deta hai' Naku sharma jaati hai.. Aur chadar sey apney aap ko dhakney ki koshish karti hai' Agar dutta allowed karega toh hi naa.. Dutta naku sey kehta hai "tum sirf meri ho'"  Naku finally grip dutta hand aur who dono ek ho jaatey hai...


So frnds how was the story plzz do comments

 

 



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Great update...
please tell me he isnt drunk Shocked ,, cause i dnt want him 2 4get lol
 

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Subah ka scene dono ke kapdey zammen pe nicey geerey huey hai {naku ji blue colour ki saree aur dutta ka black colour ka kurta...Tongue......} naku dutta ke seeney pe seer rakh kar so rahi hai aur dutta bi naku tight se hug karke so raha hota hai.... Suraj ki kiran dutta ke chehrey par padti hai uski aakhey khulti hai aur woh dekhta hai ki naku ko sotey huey dekhta haiSmile.... aur phir sey so jaata hai...Naku ki bi aankh khulti hai woh dheerey sey dutta ka hath side karti hai...aur usey dekhti hai aur sochti hai "aaj kitney din baad sahib chain ki neend so arhey hai.... Naku shower leney chali jaati hai....

25 minutes after...
Naku shower lekar aati hai... Naku ke baal bheegey hotey hai.... Naku ney light yellow colour ki saree pehani hoti hai... woh dutta ke liye chaye baney chali jaati hai.. Naku chaiye lekar aati hai..... tea table pe rakhti hai aur dutta ke pass aati hai... Naku bed ke side pe beithi hai aur dutta ke seney pass aaati hai... Naku ke bheegey huey baalo sey pani ki bundey dutta ke chehrey par padti hai,,,,,

Naku says Smile dheerey sey "sahib uthiye na dekhiye subah ho gayi hai...."
Dutta says "hmm abhi nahi naku mujhe soney de...."
Naku says " dekhiye sahib chaye thandi ho jayegi....."
Dutta naku ko hug kartey huey....Tongue
Dutta says " naku kyu itna bol rahi hai.. tu bi soja aaja..."
Naku says " nahi sahib mujhe abhi nashta banana hai sabke liye aur aayi sahib humara intezar kar rahi hai......"
Dutta says " aayi sahib ko bol ki aaj dutta jamkar soney waala sath mey naku bi toh hum nichey nahi aayengey...."
Naku blushesBlushing....
Naku says "dekhiye mujhe jaaney dijiye... sahib...."
Dutta says "nahi tu kahi nahi jayegi.......'
Dutta naku ko waisey hi apni baaho mey jhakdey rakhta hai aur kehta hai.........ClapClap
Dutta says 'naku tu khush toh hai na......."
Naku says "ha sahib mey bahut khush hu... bapa ney mujhe nirash nahi kiya unhoney meri prathana sun li........"
Dutta smiles and hugs naku tightly........Smile

Sab naashtey ke tabley pe baithey hai.....Smile
Leela says to kala "tayi bhau aur naku ko nichey aaney mey itni der kyu lag rahi hai... kya baat ho sakti hai......."
Kala says " tujhe kab sey naku ki inti chinta honey lagi.... waisey bi bechar bhau inta sharmida ho chuka hai naku ki wajah sey ki nichey aaney ki himmat nahi hogi.......Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile"

Tabhi naku nichey aati hai... naku ke chehrey par khushi saaf dikhayi de rahi hoti hai......
Leela says "ab tayi isey kya hogaya yeh itni khush kyu hai...."
Roops says "vahini ki saree kitni achi hai na leela aur kala tayi.....hw cute...."
Kala roops ko gusseyAngry sey dekhti hai..."
kala says " roops tumhe aaj kal vahini badi pasand aaney lagi hai......."
Roops nods her head...Unhappy...........

Kala , leela and roops sees naku...........



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Phhheeewwww ... lol ... yaaay great .. TaSha finally happy... great updatee..

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Read all the 3 parts............ I was scared after reading the 2nd part........ but thank god he didnt react badly........ and accepted her....
liking it very much..........looking frwrd f he nxt part.........updt soooon...

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'Part-16

Naku dinning table pe aati hai…. Sabko khaana parosti hai…
Aayi sahib says "Naku dutta kaha hai……."                                  
Naku says " aayi sahib who saab nahakar abhi aa rahey hai...."               
Aayi sahib says "theek hai naku….."                                            
  
Aayi sahib naku se kehti hai ki ganpat ka phone aaya tha who log aaj sham ko 
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apas aa  rahey hai….. Naku khush ho jaati hai…….

Dutta nichey aata hai..

Kala says "kya baat hai bhau aaney mey badi der laga diya aaney mey.."     

Aayi sahib says "kala shant basa porgi, naku ne kaha toh tha ki dutta abhi aa raha hai nahakar…

Kala sees naku and dutta with fake smile…….

Aayi sahib says " madhu humhey tumsey kuch baat karni hai…. Hum ney yeh soch rahey they hai  ab toh tumari padhai bi khatam ho gayi hai… aur aaj kal humari kuch tabiyat kuch theek bi nahi rehti hai agar samay rehtey huey hum apni zimedari puri kar ley toh acha rahega….. hum tumari shadi ke baarey mey hi baat kar rahey hai…

Kala, leela gives evil smiles….

Madhu says "magar aaayi sahib iski kya zarurat hai… abhi mujhe shadi nahi karni… 

Aayi sahib says "arey hum yeh thodi na keh rahey hai ki shadi kar lo, hum toh keh rahey they ki soch rahey hai… kala ,leela bi aisey hi kehti thi magar ho gayi na unki bi shadi…. Aur teri vahini ki bi toh hui na…………"

Madhu says "jaisa aap theek samjhe ayi sahib…"

Madhu chali jaati hai……

 

 

              

 

 

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