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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
ShockedPART-39

Everyone is happy and meera and mohini are talking to each other and roshini and swarali is there and dutta, baazi and kartik also there.. madhu went to here room so as kala,roops and leela.. shabd is looking for madhu.. swarali is looking at baazi.. 

baazi says to shabd "kya shabd babu nazarein kisey dund rahi hai..."
shabd says "kisi ko bi toh nahi..."
baazi says "aey sab samajh raha hu..."
dutta says "tu nahi sudherega..."

mohini says "acha aayi sahib ab hum chaltey hai, ab toh shaadi ki tayari bi karni hai.."
meera says "ha aayi sahib...hum bi chlatey hai..waisey hum kisi taraf sey aaye..."
mohini says "humari taraf aakhir tum ladhke ki maasi ho..."
aayi sahib says "nahi meera humari taraf sey aayengi...aakhir meera humari beti hai..."
suraj says "ek min aayi sahib ek kaam kartey hai bharat ka sawaagat hum karengey aur bidai key time yeh humara sawaagat karengey...."
aayi sahib says "yeh theek rahega...."

shabd touches the feet of aayi sahib.. hugs dutta, baazi.. baazi sees swarali... they all go..even meera family also..dutta looks for naku...naku is not there.. aayi sahib went for rest with baazi...dutta goes to his room...dutta opens the door and sees naku... naku is sitting in room...

dutta says "aey naku kya hua..."
naku says "nothing mujhe kya hoga sahib..."
dutta says" tum kuch bhul rahi ho...."
naku says "kya mujhe toh kuch yaad nahi aa raha..."

dutta naku ko godh mey uthata hai... aur washroom mey le jaata hai... aur shower khol deta hai..naku puri bheegi jaati hai..naku peith ki taraf ghum jaati hai..dutta naku ki gardan pey kiss karta hai.. naku apni aankhey band kar leti hai... dutta naku ko apni taraf ghumata hai... naku dutta ki taraf dekhti hai..dutta naku ke chehrey pe kiss karney lagta hai,,pehaley uski aankho pe, cheecks pe, lips pe.. naku bi bas uski hi hona chahti thi...dutta naku ko apni taraf khichta hai and he kisses her passionately..

meanwhile dutta naku ko godh mey uthata hai...naku apni aankhey band kar leti hai.. dutta naku ko bed pe lita deta hai... both are covered in black bedsheet {aww looking dam hotEmbarrassed...} 

dutta says "naku tujhe nahi lagta ki ab humhey bacho ke baarey mey sochna chahiye,,,kya kehti hai... "
naku feels shy and says nothing...
dutta says "bol na kuch kya hua tujhe..."
naku says "mey kya bolu sahib..."

dutta is impressed by naku innocense.. dutta kisses naku passionately.. naku also gives her... naku can feels his touch in her.... dutta kisses her evrywhere...she holds the back of his head and pulls him towards her, feeling the response Dutta got happy and made the kiss deeper..Then Dutta holds nakku close and starts caressing her and she moans a little ! He closes his eyes with her voice ecoing in his head! He pins her hands against the bed and she moans in his ears! Nakku finally grip her hand to his and they become one!...

In the morning:
madhu is siting in the chair and looking at ring... naku comes and sees madhu.. 

Naku says "madhu kya soch rahi hai... shabd ke baarey mey..."
madhu says "hmm ha vahini apni aaney waali zindagi ke baarey mey soch rahi hu na jaaney kya hoga aagey..."
naku says "jo bi hoga acha hi hoga...acha tu us din kuch keh rahi thi na..."
madhu says "ha woh..."
suddenly baazi comes and interrupts between...
baazi says "ha woh vahini madhu soch rahi hai ki kaisey shabd sey kaisa mila jaayey,,,kyu madhu..."
madhuAngry says "har waqt mazak acha nahi hota hai...baazi..."
she hits the glass and glass broke down.. and goes from there.. baazi and naku sees madhu shockinglyShocked...baazi says to naku "hmm mey dekhta hai..." baazi goes behind madhu..

baazi comes at madhu room says " aey madhu kya hua tujhe... aisey kaisey tu bolkar gayi...."
madhu Angry says "jo bi kaha sach kaha mainey baazi... kabhi dusro ki feelings ko samjha karo..zindagi koi joke nahi hai...."
baazi says "hmm aey aey kya bol rahi hai tu kya mey nahi samjhta...aur pehaley toh tujhe mera mazak bada acha lagta tha.. ab kya hua..."
madhu says "hmm samjhtey ho ha...kya samjhtey ho tum..kabhi yeh jaan paaey ho ki merey dil mey kya hai...mey kya chahti hu"
baazi sees madhu shockinglyShocked...
madhu says "jab kisi ki feelings samaj mey na aaye  toh kuch bolna bi nahi chahiye..har koi mazak nahi hai tumarey liye... samjhey.."
baazi says "madhu tu hosh mey nahi hai...jakar aaram kar..."
madhu ko bahut gussa aata hai aur woh baazi ke pass aati hai aur usey zor sey thapad maarti hai..Shocked... baazi ek gaal hath pe rakhta hai aur uski taraf dekhta hai...
madhu says "kyu baazi hui na dard mujhe bi aisa hi dard hota hai jab tum kuch nahi samjhtey ho..."
baazi says "kya nahi samjha mey madhu bol mujhe..."
madhu says "chodho tum aur jao yaha sey..."
baazi says "aey tu samjhti kya hai apney aap ko.. ha kahi ki hur pari hai tu... ek toh pehaley thapad maara ab bata bi nahi rahi hai... baazi key uper aaj tak kisi ne hath uthana toh dur kisi ney aankh utha kar bi nahi dekha aur tu...bhau ki behan hai isliye chodh raha hu warana jawab mujhe bi dena aata hai...
madhu baazi ko dhaka deti hai.. "kya nahi kya jawab dega tujhe.. maarega mujhe maarega...maar chal maar mujhe...."
baazi says  "dekh madhu mera hath sach meu uth jaayega mey keh raha hu..."
madhu says "ha toh khadha kyu hai maar na chal maar..."
baazi says  "dekh madhu...mey keh raha hu..."
madhu says "mard ka bacha hai toh maar ke dikha...."

aur baazi jor sey ek thapad maarta hai... madhu nichey gir jaati hai...baazi uski taraf dekhta hai... madhu roney lagti hai...baazi sey dekha nahi jaata hai.. woh uski taraf badhta hai..

baazi says "madhu chal uth abhi..."
madhu says "dont touch me okay...how dare you..himat kaisey hui tumari mujhe thapad maarney ki..."
baazi says "dekh madhu ab bahut ho raha hai tera naatak samjhi.. aaj jo tuney kiya hai na mey bhau ko bataney waala hai...:
madhu says "kya bolega bhau ko tu ha kya bolega ki madhu mujse pyar karti hai...ha bol..."
baazi is shocked...ShockedShockedShocked...baazi nichey ki taraf dekh raha hota hai.. achank uski taraf palta hai...
baazi says 'ek min kya boli tu...zara phir sey bol..."
madhu breaks downCry says "ha baazi mey tujse bahut pyar karti hu tab sey karti aaayi hu jab sey terey sath dosti hui..jab sey tujhe jaana, tab sey jab sey baba ke jaaney ke baad tuney mujhe jeena sikhaya...tab se baazi tab sey...."
baazi listen her ShockedShockedShocked....
baazi says nothing and goes from there....

madhu breaks down Cryand baazi leaves from there...

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Edited by stary_kajal - 08 February 2011 at 12:28am

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Reserved ............ Me first again.............
Tasha bcums one........(Thanx fr their romantic scene, Kaajal)............Madhu confesses hr luv fr Baaji............. what will Baaji do now?????????cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!! continue sooooooooooon...........


Edited by ushankitvc - 08 February 2011 at 1:31am

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
next part-40

baazi come out from the room and goes out from there... he didnt noticed kala who is standing behind the door.. she looks madhu and gives evil smile Evil Smileon her face and then baazi.. she goes in and sees madhu for a while and smile. madhu sees kala and wipes her tears.. and stands.. kala comes to madhu..

kala says  "why are you crying madhu..what happened?
madhu says "nothing taayi {sister}...something is gone to my eyes..."
kala says "why are you hiding your tears from me dear. i can feel it that my small sister is sad..tell me what happened?
madhu comes to kala and hugs her tightly and cryCryCryCry..
madhu says "taayi {sister} what should i do? i dont know anything.. my life is so confused and becoming terrible day by day..."
kala says "shhh shhh dont cry. when your kala taayi is here then no need to cry tell me what happened to you...?
madhu says "taayi {sister} i wanna say that..."
kala says "that you love baazi rite madhu..." {kala smiles, madhu is shockedShocked}
madhu nodes her head and says "yes taayi i love baaziCryCryCry"
kala says "why are yo crying madhu its too late now why didnt you said earlier..."
madhu says "taayi {sister} i was sacred. how will bhau {brother}, aayi {mother } will react when they will come to know that i love baazi... infact i was not awared that baazi loves me not...."

kala gives smile and says "and what about your vahini...she dont know anything that you loved baazi.."Evil Smile...
madhu is shocked  says " taayi i dont know anything,"
kala says "are sure that u dont know anything... your vahini doesnt know that anything...."
madhu is standing in the centre and kala is revolving around her slowly and slowly....
kala says " i tell you the truth  she knows everything about you and baazi but she doesnt want to tell anyone, if she does how can she take over the property..."
madhu is shockedShockedShockedShocked to listen this and kala takes her hand and take her out from the room. Here baazi and naku is laughing..{actually the secene is that baazi does a prank with naku and she is laughing.. he doesnt want to tell naku anything...} so kala take advantage of this and show madhu in the other way that naku is against for this relationship.. and madhu is also convinced...
kala says "hmm my poor sister, what will you do now... its too late now...."{she goes from there}

In the morning:
everyone is sitting on dining table.. dutta comes for breakfast with naku. madhu is lost in her thoughts.. kala is watching her and smiling.. baazi also comes and sees madhu.. he sites opposites to her...naku comes and serves food to all... naku comes to madhu..
madhu saysAngry " vahini {sister in law} i dont want..."
naku says "why you dont want its ur favorite....see you are getting married in some days. takecare of yourself.. otherwise your shabd will say we didnt take care of you..."
madhu Angrysays " excuse me vahini i think first you make urs realtionship better than say these things to some one.. and please dont interfare in my relationships.."
everyone see madhu with shock expressionsShockedShockedShocked
dutta Angrysays "is this way to talk with your vahini madhu...."
naku says "no sahib dont say her anything.. i think she is distrubed. due to something and it was my faukt only i was forcing her to eat..."
madhu says "good you understood...."

baazi see madhu and comes to madhu...
baazi says "are you gone mad madhu...why are you behaving like ths with vahini..."
madhu says "any problem to you baazi...."
baazi says "see madhu i know you love me but i feel that you are my gud frnd nothing more than that ever.. i respect your feelings and dont want to hurt you.. but i wanna say that shabd is a nice guy he will love you a lot.."
madhu says " who are you to decide with whom i will be happy or not..."
baazi says "madhu i am your friend.... and i have a full right...."
madhu says " just go from here when you dont know anything then dont say anything...."'

baazi sees madhu and goes from there...madhu is upset..





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OMG!!!!!!!!! Madhu fall fr Kalas plan............ hate that kala.........Baaji does not luv her and he made it clear to her............ didnt like how she talked to Nakku.......... continue soooooooooooooon.........
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Clapnext part-40

baazi is sitting on his bed looking a pic of his and madhu and he is in tears.. He sings the songs:

Bhoola fasana koi
Guzra zamana koi
Sathi purana koi {he thinks wen he offered madhu a hand for frndship}
Banke bahana koi
Agar dil main yun
sama jaye to
Ye dil kya kare(2) 

Jaado sa chaane laga {baazi thinks pf past when both spend time as a frnd}
Pagal banaane laga
Kuch yaad aane laga
Kuch bhool jaane laga
Kyana karein kya karein
Ye dil kya kare(2)

Is paar rehna sake
Us paar jaana sake
Khamosh rehna sake
Jo chaahe kehna sake {madhu is standing in front of window...}

Ye pagal sama
ye mausam jawan
Ye dil kya kare(2) {she turns and looks at baazi pic}

Jaado sa chane laga
Pagal banane laga
Kuch yaad ane laga
Kuch bhool jane laga
Kyana kare kya kare
Ye dil kya kare(4) {madhu cries a lotCry}

In dutta and naku room:

naku is standing in the gallery and looking down.. dutta comes slowly and slowly.. dutta hugs naku and kisses on her forehead...

dutta says "hey beautiful what's up..hmm why are you sad"     

naku says "no sahib i am just thinking about madhu.. soon she is getting married and soon she will going to enter in new life..."                                                                           

dutta says "but what she did today was not right naku..."                                             

naku says "no sahib dont say like this she is just nervous.. it's usual and every girl feels like that...so dont worry and it was my fault i was forcing her to eat...."                       

dutta hugs naku and naku also hugs dutta...                                                       

dutta says "ohh naku why are so good..."                                                                     

naku says "beacause you are so good that's why and your love is enough for me to become more gud..."

one servant come and calls dutta and naku that aayi sahib is calling them...        

dutta says "aayi sahib you called me..."                                                                      

aayi sahib says "yes dutta i want to ask you something very important about baazi..."   dutta says "baazi ..what happened to him.. what he did now....?"  

aayi sahib says "he had done nothing.. i am thinking to tie a knot of baazi and swarali on the day when madhu and shabd will get married... what do you say dutta...?                      

dutta says "its nice aayi.. you ask baazi...."                                                                

 dutta calls baazi and everyone comes including madhu...aayi sahib comes to  baazi...

 aayi sahib says "baazi will you marry swarali {neha bomb shabd sister}

 everyone is shocked to listen thisShocked.. in fact baazi also and madhu she looks baazi in  tears and baazi looks madhu...

 aayi sahib says "i am asking you something baazi.."   

baazi looks at aayi sahib and says "yes aayi sahib and hugs her...he looks at madhu..."   

kala says "but aayi sahib how can be this possible, we have to make so many preparations for the marriage..."

aayi sahib says "you dont worry kala, we will make it...SmileSmile..."

madhu runs from there no one looks at her apart  from kala and baazi..kala gives evil smile  Evil Smile... baazi is worried about madhu...{as he consider her very good frnd}.. baazi goes to   madhu...

DUTTA AND NAKU ROOM:

dutta says " I am so happy naku baazi is getting married and you know baazi is not only   my brother but my best friend.. I always want him to settle down and today the day has come.."                                                                                                                     

naku says "yes i am happy for both of them....{suddenly she feels uneasy.. she puts hands on her mouth and she runs to bathroom}....                                                             

Dutta also run behind her.. he knocks the door of washroom... Shocked                      

dutta says "naku... naku what happened to you? are you okay.. let me in please... open the door..."

 

IN MADHU ROOM: 

Baazi comes to madhu and madhu is crying and crying,, she is so frustrated and    angry... baazi tries to console her..but in vain.. baazi puts hands on her shoulder.  

madhu saysAngry "dont touch me baazi i said.. you that i love you but then also you said yes  to this marriage.. how come you do this to me? So this is your friendship ? You hurt me a  lot baazi and i dont want to live like this...Are you listening me or not?                          

baazi tries to speak and try to calm her down.. she was impatient and restless at that time. it was very difficult to handle her... baazi gives a tight slap to madhu {rucha gujarati}.. she bend down and cry.. baazi comes and hugs her tightly...    

madhu says "you are bad baazi you are really bad baaziCry CryCryCry {she hits him on his shoulder and she is crying} i will die baazi i will die..." 

baazi says "shhh shh madhu dont you dare to say this...yes i am very bad very bad..." {baazi is also in tears...seeing madhu in this condition} 

{aww baazi you are such a sweetheart friend..everyone should have a frnd like you...Clap}

the scene stops there one side dutta knocking door and baazi hugs madhu..... what will happen next...

   



Edited by stary_kajal - 13 February 2011 at 3:51am

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
great update...
But i want Baaji to marry Madhu.. not swarali..!!
n Nakku is pregnant lol!..
Double khushi.. but i dnt want shabd n swarali 2 marry madhu baaji! They sud get together!..

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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!! what happens nxt????????
Kaajal plzzzzzzzzzzz updt sooooooooooooooooooooooon........
Hav a feeling Baaji too luvs Madhu........... Nakku pregnant???? ...........
Let madhu marry Baaji only plzzzzzzzz and No shabd and swarali sent tham back.........


Edited by ushankitvc - 12 February 2011 at 10:09pm
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
@sophia : thanks dear...hmm you know na baazi loves swarali... any shabd and swarali are brother and sister

@ushankitvc: yar u tell me where should i send them........thanks dear


Edited by stary_kajal - 12 February 2011 at 11:51pm

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