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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
hey kajal....

nice update.........

but feel sad for madhu n baaji........

hope u dont separate them........ waiting for ur next update..........

tc
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PART-36

IN PATIL NIWAS...

Aayi sahib is sitting with pandit ji asking for engagement and marraige time to be fix...Pandit ji see madhu and shabd kundali {horoscope}... Pandit ji examine it and after some time he sees aayi sabhi and says

Pandit ji says "Aayi sahib don bacho ki kundali mainey dekh li hai... kya baat hai dono ke 36 ke 36 gun miltey haiSmile....aisi jodi toh ram aur sita ki jodi hai...magar.."
Aayi sahib says "magar kya pandit ji...Confused"
Pandit ji says "shaadi ke baad bachi ki sehat theek nahi rahegi... woh mangal bhaari hai isliye...lakin aayi sahib gabramey ko koi baat nahi hai baapa ki kripa sey sab theek ho jaayega...Smile...waisey sagaai ke liye kal ka mahurat bahut acha hai... aur shaadi 10 din baad ati mangal... uske baad 7 mahiney tak koi acha mahurat nahi hai..Smile..."
Aayi sahib says " lakin pandit ji itni jaldi sab kasey hoga...Confused."

Dutta who is standing behind him... keep his hand on aayi sahib shoulder...
Dutta says "chinta nako karo aayi mey hu na sab ho jaayega...aur waisey bi shaadi 10 din baad yar 1 mahiney baad woh toh honi hi hai na aayi...Smile"
Aayi sahib says "ho porga mag {ha beta, lakin}Confused.."
dutta says "aayi, sab ho jaayega naSmile..."

Aayi sahib nodes her head and pandit goes.. Aayi sahib calls mohini to tell the mahurat and all the stuffs...They start for preparing...

Dutta and naku room:Smile
dutta says "aey naku kya hua tu aisey kyu bed pe beithi hai..."
nakku says "kuch nahi sahib bas meri tabiyat theek nahi hai..."
duttaShocked says "kya hua, chal doctor ke pass chal abhi...."
nakku says "nahi mainey dawai le li hai...aap chinta mat karo sahib...."
dutta says "hmm madhu ka lagan bi pakka ho gaya hai...kal sagaai hai aur 10 din baad shaadi...kuch din ki aamanat hai woh hai is ghar mey..Cry"
naku feels happy for madhuSmile.."
naku says "sahib madhu hamesha sey hi aap mey bada bhai dhundati rahi hai.. woh pyar jiski usey zarurat hai... in kuch dino ki mey usey itna pyar dijiye ki woh apney saarey gamo ko bhula kar nayi zindagi shuru karey...Smile"
Dutta nodes his head and give smileSmile to nakku..."

Madhu room scene:
Dutta comes and sits besides to madhu and says "madhu tu janti hai aaj teri shaadi pakki ho gayi hai..."
madhu gets shockShocked says "bhau... woh mujhe nahi pataCry..."
dutta says "yeh sach hai, kal teri sagaai hai aur 10 din baad shaadi..."
madhu says "nothing..."
dutta says "tu khush toh hai na..."
madhu says "ji bhau mey khush hu..."
dutta hugs madhu and madhu feel so happy she start cryingCry..
Dutta says "aey pagali ro kyu rahi hai tera yeh bhau apni behan ki aankho mey aansu nahi dekh sakta...."
madhu says "nahi bhau yeh toh khushi ki aansu hai... badey bhai ka pyar kaisa hota hai yeh aaj mujhe mehsoos hua hai..."

{she hugs dutta like a small baby....dutta also hugs her a little dolll.. she start cryingCryCry a lot a lot.. dutta sees thi sand feels something fishy..}
dutta says "madhu kahi kuch aur baat toh nahi hai na kahi tu is shaadi sey khush nahi hai..humara maan rakhney ke liye aisa keh rahi hai..."
Madhu says "nahi bhau... aisi koi baat nahi hai... aaj itney dino ke baad mujhe mera bhau mila hai... toh rona toh aayega na...."
dutta says " naku ab rona band kar, ab khushiyo ka inetzaar karo jo tumari zindagi mey aainey wali hai..."
madhu Smile says "ji bhau...."

dutta goes and madhu smiles... after dutta goes...aur madhu murdti hai aur apney bed pe gir jaati hai,,, aur zor zor sey roney lagti hai aur maan hi maan sochti hai..."bhau ab mey aapko kya batau...merey dil mey koi aur hai mey chahkar bi kuch nahi keh sakti hai...merey dil mey sirf baazi hai aur koi nahi aa sakta yeh jo kuch bi ho raha hai...sir pariwar ki khushi ke liye ho raha hai...

aayi sahib calls mohini...and tells her the whole story of tommorrow mahurat and marriage also.. mohini feels happy.. she is on call with aayi sahib..

mohini says "ji aayi sahib yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai....hum kal aa jaayengey..."

mohini {gautami kapoor} tells shabd {aditya redji} and swarali {neha bomb }and raj {ram kapoor} for the whole story... mohini calls meera {sakshi talwar} and invite her for the function with family... here roops calls shalini and invites her for the function at home..















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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
PART-37

IN PATIL NIWAS:Smile

Sab madhu ke sagaai ki tayari kar rahey hotey...Smile... NakkuSmile bi decoration karney mey busy hai...woh sabhi ko instruction de rahi hoti hai... kala, roops aur leela bi busy hoti hai.. kishore aur sudesh bi tayari mey jutey hotey hai... Aayi sahib sabhi tayariyo ko dekh rahi hoti hai...Smile

Aayi sahib says to nakku "naku madhu ki sagaai ka jodaa aa gaya kya..."
Naku says " ji aayi sahib bas aaney waala hai..."
Aayi sahib says "theek hai hum aatey hai..."

Naku goes to kitchen for looking preparations of food... babi is there...

In kala room:
Kala says to anay " anay beta chalo jaldi tayaar ho jao..."
Anay says "mumma plz mujhe khelna hai..."
kala says "anay tum mumma ki baat nahi sunogey..."
anay says "ok mumma mey baad mey khelunga...."
kala says "gud boy...

Ghar ke bahar ek aadmi aaata hai uske hath mey ek bada sa box hota hai... baazi aata hai...

Baazi says "kaun ho tum..."
A person says " mey ram jeweller ke yaha sey aaya hu..yeh sagaai ka joda aur dulhey ki anguthi...."
baazi says "ek number..."

baazi goes to madhu room...he knocks the door... roops open the door... baazi sees roops...he come in...

baazi says "leela taayi yeh madhu ki sagai ka jodaa aa gaya hai..."
madhu woh was lost in thoughts...

leela opens the box...it was a golden lengaa...
roops says "wow taayi kitna pyara hai na..how cuteLOL..dekho madhu...
madhu doesnt listen..again roops calls madhu...madhu sees that and give fake smile... and sees baazi with teary eyesCry
madhu says "hmm..."
leela says "dekh na kya hua tujhe..aaj toh khushi ka din hai aur tu udaas kyu ho.."
baazi says "tayi mey jaata hai mujhe aayi sahib bula rahi hai..."
madhu sees baazi going and looks down... at that moment baazi stops and sees madhu.... and he feel something and goes....madhu start getting ready...

In dutta room naku is getting ready and dutta comes...
dutta hugs naku from back...
dutta says "aaj mey bahut khush hu naku aaj madhu ki sagaai hai...meri behan dulhan banegi...is din ka intezaar sabko hota hai..."
nakuSmile says "sahib aaj mey bahut khush hu...kyunki aap khush ho..."
dutta makes naku in front of him and hugs her tightly... 
naku says "kya hua sahib..."
dutta says " ini khushiya ek sath kaisey sambhalunga mey..."
maku says "in khushiyo ka aap par haqh hai sahib...."
dutta kisses naku on her neck and naku become shy....
naku says "is pal ka intezaar mujhe hamesha sey tha...."

dutta took naku on the bed...he make her lay on the bed... he comes on naku... naku sees dutta.. she becomes emotional.. dutta sees naku

naku puts her shoulder on dutta neck....dutta sees naku from up to down..
naku says "mainey kabhi bi kisi sey itna pyar nahi kiya...hum hamesha sath rahengey... khush rahegey... mey kabhi bi aapko apney aap sey dur nahi jaaney dungi...."
Dutta sees naku and giving fishy smile....
Naku says "mey aapsey bahut pyar karti hu..."
dutta look for a min and says " aur mey bi...."

Naku hugs dutta and then dutta start kissing her on neckEmbarrassed... she closes her eyes.. and dutta makes her face in front of him... and kisses on her lips for sometime.. they change their position..nw naku is on dutta.. naku kissesEmbarrassed dutta on his chest, then up and up opens the button of his kurta...Dutta sees naku that she want to get involved.... dutta changes the position aur dutta uske uper aa jaata hai... He takes off her pallu from her shoulder and unpins her hair!..Meanwhile he kisses her forehead and she closes her eyes!Embarrassed... she also gives in...

lakin tabhi achank sey koi darwaaza khatkata hai... dutta come back to his senses... same naku also... naku gets up and make herself set...and opens the door...baazi is there...

baazi says "woh vahini bhau aur aapko aayi sahib bula rahi hai..."
naku says "hmm hum aatey hai tum chalo..."
baazi says "kya baat hai vahini sab theek toh hai na aap kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi hai..."
naku Confused says "nahi baazi nahi woh toh... hmm tum chalo hum bas abhi aaye..."
baazi says "aap logo ka bi kuch samaj nahi aata hai.. acha mey jaata hai..."

Naku closes the door and tells dutta to get ready as aayi sahib is calling them..
dutta naku ko apne pass khichta hai aur kehta hai...

dutta says "naku tu bi na itni jaldi kya hai jaaney ki...."
naku says "lakin aayi sahib bula rahi hai..nichey kitna kaam padha hai..."
dutta says "aur mey jo yaha terey sath hu...uska kya..."
naku says "aaj madhu ki sagaai hai, toh kaam toh karna padega na.."
dutta says "hmm toh ja..lakin baad mey dekhta hu ki tu kaisey jaati hai..."

naku feels shy and they both get readyEmbarrassed...






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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
HEY FRNDS I AM CHANGING THE CHARACTER OF MADHU... PLZ SUGGEST WHO CAN PLAY A ROLE OF MADHU IN FOUR OF THEM...

1. JENNIFER WINGET {RIDIMA DIL MIL GAYE}
2. SUPRIYA KUMARI {AMOLI BAIRI PIYA}
3. RUCHA GUJRATI {KALI IN KUSUM}
4. RICHA SONI {BINDIYA IN BHAGYAVIDHATA}

HEY FRND PLZ SELECT CHOICE SO THAT I CAN WRITE FURTHER UPDATES FOR YOU...HOPE U WILL DO SOON..
WAITING.............

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part35~ so baaji feels abit sad den...finaly! lol... ukno wa i actualy like shabd bt i rely wntd baaji op madhu evn tho shabd is sucha sweetheart...oh oh he asd hr 2 b truthful n she wz imaginin baji (bles hr) n sed yes 2 hmm awh he fel in luv wt hr 1st tym he saw hr..i jus knw it lol

 

part36~ was wrong wit naku..y she not wel...luvd hw D was doin hr chinta..wel a lil bit tho...wud luvd 2 c mor tasha ;)

 

awh madhu n dutta r soo sweet...bles emm...luved da bro-sis bonding scne...

 

awh she cnt imagine no1 els oda den baji...feel 4 da poor gurl...

 

only 10 days lft...baji kuch kar jaldi se...

 
part37~awwwww finaly tum tasha scnee!!! undefined sucha romantic scnee... undefined lekin yeh baaji bhi na phir se KMH ban ke agya aur saath mein AS ko bhi abhi kaam tha...lol D bta tel naku 2 mke up 4 it ol Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
 
bechari madhuOuch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page....baji..kya kuch kuch tumhe bhi hua hai??? 



continue soonSmile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
 
ps.y do u wna chnge character do madhu??



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MISHEZX  well dear i know baazi should do something but what to do yar... everything is decided by destiny... jo humhe chaiye woh zaruri nahi humhey mil jaaye.... i have tried to make real this comment in this story,,

shabd and madhu meets at kartik {jay bhanushali } wedding... they even danced together...

ya dutta is a caring brother he loves his sister too much. ya naku is not well... she is exerted yar {kitna kaam karna padta haiWink}....

sabar kal meetha hota hai dear...

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PART-37


RAJ SAHAY {RAM KAPOOR} AND MOHINI SAHAY {GAUTAMI KAPOOR} COMES WITH SWARALI SAHAY {NEHA BOMB} AND SHABD SAHAY {ADITYA REDJI} ALONG WITH SURAJ KEHDHKAR {RONIT ROY} AND MEERA KHEDHKAR {SAKSHI TALWAR} WITH KARTIK {JAY BHANUSHALI} HIS WIFE ROSHINI {PARNEET CHAUHAN} AND SHALINI {ZIVEDHA TUM BIM JAU KAHA FAME}... AND EVERYONE COMES AND OTHER PEOPLE ALSO.. AAYI SAHIB WITH HIS FAMILY GREETS EVERYONE GREETS EACHOTHER... SHABD TOUCHES FEET OF AAYI SAHIB AND HUG DUTTA...
BAAZI IS HAPPY TO SEE SWARALI... AAYI SAHIB HUGS MOHINI AND MEERA.. DUTTA TOUCHES THE FEET OF SURAJ AND RAJ.... HUGS KARTIK...ROSHINI MEETS NAKU WITH SHALINI AND KALA ALSO...SHALINI IS VERY IMPRESSED WITH KALA... AS SHE IS LOOKING VERY BEAUTIFUL... SHE MEETS ROOPS ALSO...

AAYI SAHIB SAYS "AAJ BAHUT KHUSHI KA DIN HAI... AAJ HUMARI BACHI KA RISHTA PAKKA HONEY JA RAHA HAI...."
MEERA SAYS "AAYI SAHIB HUM TOH BAPPA SEY YAHI PRATHNA KARTEY HAI KI HUMARI BACHIYA JA BI RAHEY KHUSH RAHEY..."
MOHINI SAYS "HA MEERA TUMNEY SAHI HAI....IS EHSAAS KO SIRF MAA HI MEHSOOS KAR SAKTI HAI...."

THREE OF THEM SMILES.....
ROSHINI SAYS "AREY NAKU TUMARI SAREE TOH BAHUT ACHI HAI...LAGTA HAI BHAU KI PASAND HAI...."
NAKU FEELS SHY AND NODES HER HEAD....
SWARALI SAYS "NAKU VAHINI MADHU VAHINI KAHA HAI..."
NAKU SAYS "WOH TAYAAR HO RAHI HAI... BAS MEY USEY LEKAR AATI HU...."


MADHU IS LOOKING HERSELF IN MIRROR SHE IS WEARING GOLDEN LEHNGAA...HER HAIR ARE PINED UP.. AND OPEN... SHE LOOKING LIKE A ANGEL... BUT SHE IS IN TEARSCry..... SHE IS MISSING BAAZI AND SHE DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY AND TO DO NOW.... THEN ONLY NAKU COMES....

NAKU SAYS "KITNI SUNDER DIKH RAHI HO BILKUL PARI...."
MADHU SAYS  NOTHING...
NAKU SAYS "KYA BAAT HAI MADHU MEY KAAFI DINO SEY DEKH RAHI HU KI TUM BAHUT GUMSUM REHNEY LAGI HO... BAHUT UDAAS HO.. APNI VAHINI KO NAHI BATAOGI TUM...."
MADHU SAYS "NAHI VAHINI AISI KOI BAAT NAHI HAI..."
NAKU SAYS " TOH KAISI BAAT HAI...BATANA TOH PADEGA"
MADHU SAYS  "WOH VAHINI MEY WOH...."

TABHI LEELA AA JAATI HAI... 
LEELA SAYS "VAHINI KYA KAR RAHI HO NICHEY SAB MADHU KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHE HAI..."
NAKU GET CONFUSEDConfused...

LEELA TAKES MADHU WITH HER..... NAKUSHA SEES THIS... LEELA BRINGS NAKU DOWN IN HALL... THEN KALA COMES TO NAKKU... SHABD SEES MADHU AND SMILES.... MADHU SITS ON A SOFAA WITH SHABD... MOHINI TAKES THALI FROM SWARALI AND SHE PUTS RED ODHANI ON MADHU AUR USKO TILAK LAGATI HAI... SHE GIVES JEWELLERY SET TO MADHU AND MADHU TOUCHES HER FEET... THEN PANDIT JI COMES AND THEN HE RESITE SOME SHALOK AND ALL. HE GIVES RING TO MADHU AND SHABD... MADHU SEES BAAZI... BUT BAAZI IS NOT THERE...







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Reserved ..........
 
Part 36 -- Dutta see hr sad and he finds sumthing fishy......... hope he heard her opening her heart out.................
Part 37 -- Thank god Baaji too felt sumthing when he saw Madhu............. but wht was that feeling????
 Atlast we got sum Tasha romancing.... bu Baaji the Kabab Mein Haddi is also there.......
 Part 38 -- Nakku has a seriousdoubt that Madhu is hiding sumthing........she didnt  get a chance to talk........
All the prts superb.......... contnue soooooooooooooooooooon............Dont want Madhu to marry sumone else......... Hope dutta only fnd out on his own (he must hav head hertalk to  herself --part 36) and get her maried to Baaji........I think Rucha Gujrati will make a good Madhu..........


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