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Posted: 13 years ago
omg such a sad update...   
 
aww swarali n shabd knew but didnt say anythng 4 every1z hapines..bles
 
i love swarali n sabd man gona miss him..he was such a sweetheart  
 
 
am so surpriesd madhus mothr-in-law didnt blame madhu n told her shez manhoos....they are a lovely fam!!
 
soo now baji gona marry madhu....
 
tbh im not 2 hapy wit that..i rely wanted swarali n shabd to be happy..they totaly deservd it!!  >>hugs to them both....
 
update soon kajol.x  



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Posted: 13 years ago
Next part-47

Swarali sacrfice her love. Baazi decided to marry madhu. Dutta agrees because he respect their decision.AS is happy but sad for shabd family and swarali... Shabd family agrees because they want to fullfil a dream of their son.... They are proud on their daughter.. AS brings madhu home.. Madhu is very upset and cant believe that she has lost shabd and baazi is sitting and remembering swarali word's...  {😭.............} dutta comes to baazi...

baazi sees dutta and wipes her tears....dutta sees this...
dutta says "kyu apney anshu chupa raha hai...kya terey bhau ko pata nahi hai ki tu aaj bi swarali sey pyar karta hai...."
baazi says "nahi bhau aisi koi baat nahi hai...mey ek dam khush hai....madhu meri dost hai....aur apna dono mey khub jamegei...ab aap chinta mat karo, madhu ab meri zimedari hai..."
dutta says "bahut badi badi baatein karney laga hai tu...apney dard ko apni hasi mey chupa kar kya sabit karna chahta hai...ha bol...dekh mey bas teri aur madhu ki khushi chahta hu.. agar tu yeh shaadi nahi karna chahta toh koi baat nahi lakin kuch bi faisala zabardasti mat lena...isey ek nahi teen teen zindagi kharab hogi.. tumari, swarali aur madhu...."
baazi says "bhau kaisi baat kar rahey hai aap, mainey jo bi faisala liya hai bahut soch samaj kar liya hai aur mainey aur swarali ne milkar liya hai... apun saala swarali ke laayak hi nahi tha.. kaha woh padhi likhi aur kaha apun saala..."
dutta sees dutta and hugs him tightly and baazi also hugs him and crys so as dutta also😭....

AS decided to make arrangments of madhu and baazi wedding on the same day when the day was fixed for swarali and madhu.. and the day comes... Madhu ke haatho mey baazi ke hath ki mehandi lagti hai... Simple sangeet cermony.... Swarali also comes there... 

a performance is made by ragini khanna {suhana of sasural genda phool} and jai soni {ishaan of sasural genda phool}

Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane 
{lights are off and turns on back of ragini khanna and she turns and sings with danceing poss}

Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda,
{ishaan comes to suhana and start dance with her...}

Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda...{ishaan pulls suhana and dance}

then a pair changes a couple dance start and now its 
{richa soni  and vishal karwal {bindiyaa and vinay sinha of bhagyavidhata}
dances together on a song "chand chupa badal mey"}

Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa(Repeat)
{ baazi sees swarali {neha bomb} and swarali puts her  teary eyes down}
Nazdikiyan Badh Jaane De, {vinay goes to bindiyaa and pulls her and sings}
Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
{bindiya comes to vinay and sings}
Door Se Hi Tum Jee Bhar Ke Dekho, 
Tum Hi Kaho Kaise Door Se Dekhoon,{vinay hugs bindyaa}
Chaand Ko Jaise Dekhta Chakor Hai,
Aye, Gumsum Sa Hai, Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai
Ho Ho Ho, Chand Chupa Badal Mein(Repeat)
{girls brings madhu and they stand, swaraliwatch them and smiles...}
Marriage day comes:madhu is getting ready and nakku is there with her...
 Naku knows that swarali had made sacrifies for her love...
madhu is sitting in front of mirror.. she is in tears...nakku comesto madhu and put her jewelleries....
naku says "madhu tum khush ho na....."madhu says "aapko kya lagta hai vahini....naku says " mey bappa sey prathana karti hu ki tumhey duniya ki har khushi miley....
aur usey bi jisey aaj ka yeh mubarak din humari zindagi mey laaya hai...."
madhu sees nakku with ? mark expressions 
madhu says "mey janti hu yeh sab shabd ki wajah sey hi hua hai.. 
shabd meri zindagi ka wohahem hissa hai jiska jagah hamesha merey dil mey rahegi.."
nakku says "iska koi aur haqdhar bi hai..."
madhu says "kaun vahini..."
nakku says "swarali, shabd ki behan....ha madhu jisney apna pyar tumhey dey diya..
jisneyapni khushi ka tayaag sirf isliye kar diya taki tumari zindagi par koi aanch na aaye... 
mujhe garv mehsoos hota hai uspar...aur baazi usey acha aur sacha dost aur jeevan sath 
toh tumhey mil hi nahi sakta...aaj usney sabit kar diya hai ki dosti har rishtey sey bhadhkar hai...
ab yeh tumari zimedari hai us rishtey ko sambhalna...."
madhu is shocked to listen this as she she was sensless and crying when this all happen.. 
she start crying and hugs nakku and says "vahini mujse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai..
mainey baaziko kitna galat samjha, apni khushi ke liye na jaaney mey kitni zindagiya 
barbaad karney ja rahithi...mey toh shabd ki yaado ke saharey ji sakti hu..
 lakin agar yeh shaadi ho jaati toh mey kabhiapney aap ko maaf nahi kar paati vahini...
lakin ab aisa nahi hoga........"

nakku sees madhu and hugs her.....





Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey stary,

2 updates!!...... oh u killed shabd's character...... so much tragedy......

pls progress the story fast dear......... so now, madhu again will sacrifice n get swarali n baji back is it?

will look forward to the next update...

tc
divya
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Posted: 13 years ago
u know never know dc... actually i am busy in work that why i couldnt upadate fast but i will try for it....
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Posted: 13 years ago
A very nice updt...... so Madhu cums to know abt swarali and baajis sacrifice fr hr.......... cant wait to know what happens nxt.......... updt sooooooooon.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting ff please update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-47

Baazi is sitting on a mandap and sees swarali standing there.He looks swarali {neha bomb} with teary eyes, swarali goes from there.... nakku brings madhu {rucha gujrati} and swarali is also there...

a song play...

Jaanewafa Hoke Bekaraar
Jaanewafa Hoke Bekaraar
Barson Kiya Maine Intezaar
Par Kabhi Tune Nahin
Ye Sab Kaha Jo Ab Kaha
Dil Bebasi Mein Chupke Se Rota Hai
Kya Karoon Hay Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai
Kya Karoon Hay Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

baazi sees swarali..madhu notice this and looks at swarali and then baazi...madhu stops in between and runs to her room.. baazi comes out from the mandap.. madhu is standing in front of mirror... {she saw shabd image in mirror in white clothes...shabd smiles...}

shabd{aditya redji} puts his both hands on her cheeks...madhu looks at shabd with teary eyes😭........😭
shabd😊😊😊 says "aey madhu kyu ro rahi ho, dekho khushiya tumarey aanchal mey bas aaney ko hi hai..."
madhu hugs shabd and says "mujhse baut badi galti hogayi shabd mujhe maaf kardo shabd, baapa ney toh tumhey meri zindagi mey khushi bankar hi bheja tha.. lakin mey paagal hi samaj na sakti aur usey pyar karney lagi....woh toh kabhi mera tha hi nahi...woh toh kisi aur ka pyar hai....tum please wapas aa jao..plz shabd and cry😭...
shabd smiles and says😊 "mey wapas nahi aa sakta madhu..lakin mey tumhey rotey huey bi nahi dekh sakta...apni zindagi mey aagey badho...baazi tumari zindagi mey thehraav laayega, woh tumhari taakat banega..."

madhu sees shabd and hugs him... but then someone knocks the door.. shabd disappears.... she opens the door and baazi comes in....
baazi says "madhu kya hua, tum aisey mandap chodh kar kyu aa gayi...tum theek toh ho na...chalo chaley...{he takes madhu too mandap}

madhu stops baazi in the middle of mandap...baazi turns and sees madhu...AS, dutta, nakku, kala, and everyone is shocked to see this😲😲😲
baazi says "kya hua madhu, ruk kyu gayi..."
madhu says "baazi, shhh bahut boltey ho tum...ab tum chup rahogey aur sunogey, aap logo ney meri zindagi ka faisala mujhe bina puchey kar diya mey chup rahi, baazi apni khushiya kurbaan karney chala aap logo kuch nahi kaha, phir bi mey khamosh rahi....

madhu comes to dutta with tears😭😭😭
madhu says "bhau na jaaney mainey kaisey nahi dekha ki baazi sirf swarali {neha bomb} sey pyar karta hai...na jaaney mainey kaisey nahi dekha ki baazi ki saanso mey sirf swarali ka pyar hai....aaj baazi ki is tayag ney mujhe aur bi sharmindaa kar diya.. baazi toh mera pyar tha hi nahi kabhi..mera pyar toh shabd they jo ab merey sath nahi hai...."
dutta listen this. dutta is in tears and hugs madhu....
dutta says "madhu meri behan mujhe maaf karde mey tera bhau kabhi teri takleef ko samaj hi nahi sakta...."{dutta folds her hand}
baazi is also in tears😭😭😭...baazi comes to dutta...dutta hugs baazi...
madhu says "bhau ab aapko mera kaam karna jo ki abhi tak adhura hai woh hai shabd aur swarali ki shaadi..."
dutta nodes his head
madhu comes to swarali and take her to baazi and make her stand there with him and she looks at them..
madhu says "tum dono ki jodi bappa ney banayi hai, isey tum log kya duniya ki koi taakat nahi todh sakti hai...bas mujhe maaf kar dena baazi aur swarali, mainey tum dono ko bahut dukh diye hai..."

baazi comes to madhu and hugs her.....AS also cries, nakku also cries and so as meera, raj, mohini and all others...madhu makes swarali ready..she is looking like a doll in bridal dress and madhu is in light blue suit...baazi and swarali sits in mandap..pandit starts mantra..both of them are happy..pandit tells them to take pherey, they both stands...everyone throw flowers on them..madhu also do the same...

While throwing flowers shabd spirit comes and holds madhu hands...madhu sees shabd and smiles and shabd also smiles...





Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww that was really a very emotional update kajol..but loved it!!   am actualy realy glad madhu did wa she did..it was soo sweet of her   
 
i totaly loved the convo between madhu n shabd...realy heartouching 

continue soon.x



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Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-47

Madhu {rucha gujrati} is throwing flowers on baazi and swarali {neha bomb}..baazi smiles and madhu is in tears..but someone holds her hand..she looks at up.. its shabd {aditya redji}... madhu sees shabd.. shabd smiles and throws flower...but madhu is looking towrds shabd only... shabd sees madhu and kisses on her forehead and disappears...dutta and naku comes to madhu....baazi puts sindoor and mangalsutra to swarali...marriage is over now...swarali and baazi takes blessing of all the elders..

madhu is also very happy and music starts
{kartik {jai bhanushali} and roshini {parmeet chauhan} dance on this song}
ishq hai,Teri aankhon ke matvaale
Kaajal ko mera salaam
Zulfon ke kale kale
baadal ko mera salaam
ghayal kar de mujhe yaar
tere paayal ke jhankar
hey soni sone,teri soni,
har adaa ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq,Salaam-e-Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai....

Ho teri mastaani anjaani {nakku and roops dances in this stanza}
bataon ko mera salaam
Rangon mein doobi doobi 
raaton ko mera slaaam

Khwaabon mein kho gayi main {kala and shalini dances on this}
deewani ho gayi main 
soney soney aisse soney
har adaa ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-(2)
Ishq hai....{kishore, dutta dances on this stanza..}

Teri meri nazar jo milli pehli baar
ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar...
dil hai kya dil hai kya
jaan bhi tujhoe nisaar
maine tujhe kiya aitbaar
ho main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi
deewanapan kya kar gayi
meri har dhakan betaab hai
palkon vich tera khwaab hai

Ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari
jaaniya ko salaam

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai....

{madhu is clapping and then suddenly shabd comes there and sings this}
Main tere ishq mein do jahan vaar doon
mere vaade pe kar le yakeen
keh raha aasman keh rahe hai zameen
tere jaissa dooja nahin

Ho aisse jaadoon na daal ve
naa aaon tere naal ve
jhooti tereedein chodh de
ab dil mere dil se jod de
ho jo abhi hai dil se
nikli uss dua ko salaam {nakku puts hand on madhu and dances, she sees that dutta and nakku is dancing}


Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq,Ishq,Ishq...Salaam-E-Ishq
Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai....


Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E...(2)
Ishq hai {kartik, dutta comes there and dances}

Rab se hai iltija maaf kar de mujhe {baazi comes to swarali and sings}
main toh teri ibaadat karoon
Aye meri soniye na khabar hai tujhe
Tujhese Kitni mohobbat karoon

Tere bin sab kuch benoor hai {swarali comes to baazi and sings and dance}
Meri Maang Mein tere sindoor hai 
sanson mein yehi paigaam hai 
Mera sab kuch tere naam hai 


Ho dhadkanon mein rehne
waali soniye ko salaam

Salaam-e-ishq
{all copules kartik-roshini, dutta-nakku, baazi-swarali, meera-suraj, mohini-raj, all of them dances...}

Madhu sees all of them and smiles... she is in tears also😭 {aww she is missing shabd} suddenly someone comes and puts hand on shalini {zivedha tum bin jau fame}... she turns its shourya {karan tacker} and one handsome boy with him...and pratyush {iqbal khan} also... with their parents.. shalini is so happy to see him. karan introduce his big brother saksham {aamir ali}.. shalini parents meets karan parents...pratyush parents also meets roops parents.... they all agree for the engagment...

Swarali parents takes permission to go... Madhu stops them...all are shocked...
madu says "aayi {mohini gautami kapoor} aap mujhe sath lekar nahi jayengi.."
aayi sahib says " madhu yeh tum kya keh rahi ho..."
madhu says "ha aayi shaadi ke baad ladhki ka sasural hi uska ghar hota hai na.."
aayi sahib cries...
dutta says "madhu lakin tum..."
madhu says "lakin kya bhau, jaha shabd ki yaadein mey waha rehna chahti hu.."
dutta says "theek hai aayi kaisey tujhe sahi lagta hai..."
madhu says "thank you bhau, toh aayi le chalegi na mujhe shabd ke pass"
mohini comes to madhu and says "woh ghar tera ha beti, tumare shabd ka hai..us ghar ke darwaazey hamesha tumara sawaagat karengey..."
raj says "ha mohini tumhey bi waisa hi pyar aur waisa hi adhikar milega jo swarali ka tha...tum humari bahu nahi beti bankar rahogi waha.."

mohini hugs madhu and aayi sahib smiles and give permission to madhu to go with them... madhu sees baazi and comes to him...
Madhu says " baazi swarali aur apna dhayaan rakhna..."
baazi says "aur tum bi apna dhayan rakhna...apne aap ko kabhi bi akela mat samjhana...hum sab tumarey sath hai..."
madhu smiles and goes with them...

mohini hugs swarali and gives her blessings to her...swarali cries and hugs her mother and so as raj also... they take madhu with them..AS is worried about madhu and dutta comes to AS and tells her not to worried...

Scene shifts:
Swarali is taken to baazi's room for first night.... Nakku makes swarali sit on the bed. As usual swarali is nervous...nakku says her to be nervous as all girls feel likes that only..Dutta brings baazi to room...Dutta smiles and leave, here nakku smiles ..Baazi comes nakku leaves....baazi sees swarali and smiles..

baazi sits besides swarali and puts his hand on her hand...
baazi swarali ka ghungat uthata hai... swarali baazi ko dekhti hai aur nazrey nichey kar leti hai...baazi uski chehra apni taraf karta hai...
baazi kisses swarali.. swarali feels shy...swarali achank sey ghum jaati hai aur uski chhunari nichey dhalak jaati hai..she sees this...
baazi kisses swarali on her lower neck and swarali closes her eyes.
baazi 
then takes off her jewelries leaving it beside them on the bed. Meanwhile he kisses her forehead and she closes her eyes!😆😆...

baazi again kisses swarali and this time she gives in! she holds the back of his head and pulls him towards her, feeling the response baazi got happy and made the kiss deeper. While with his fingers he starts to untie the dhori's that are located at the back of swarali's lengha!

Baazi kisses her nose, eyes, cheeks forehead and then finds his way to her lips which was light pink! His kiss was full of passion and love! swarali response his kiss with love as well!

He broke the kiss and went down to her neck! He bites her neck and remove the choli of her lengha off with his mouth! (he aint a dog lol) swarali feels shy and tries to cover with bed sheet but only if baazi would allow her lol! Full moon shining in the room with candles everywhere made it more romantic! He couldnt get enough of looking at her! She stands up and runs behind the curtain and he gives a naughty smile thinking "Your mine" Lool...

baazi puts her in the middle of the bed! Then you see the white silky bed sheets on swarali and baazi still in his sherwani! Red & green sherwani matchin swarali s Lengha!

Then baazi holds swarali close and starts caressing her and she moans a little ! He closes his eyes with her voice ecoing in his head! He pins her hands against the bed and she moans in his ears! swarali finally grip her hand to his and they become one!

Scene shifts:
Mohini, raj and madhu reaches home..Mohini brings madhu in, mohini takes madhu to shabd room..mohini leaves and madhu sees room..Its a very beautiful room... Shabd ki deewaro ka colour Light blue hai jo ki uska fav colour hai.. saamney ek badi is tasveer hai {madhu aur sshabd ki engagment pic} aur uskey nicey bed... Windows pe white colour ke curtains hai...saamney ek changing room hai...Madhu opens the wardrobe... she sees shabd and her clothes...madhu is in tears...😭...

madhu close the wardrobe... she turns and sees shabd picture on the side table of bed.. she comes and takes shabd picture and lay down in a bed. she is looking at top of the roof... she closes her eyes and after some time she feels someone is there with him...

madhu opens her eyes and sees its shabd spirit...shabd madhu ke seer pe haath pherta hai...
shabd says "aey madhu room pasand aaya ki nahi..."
madhu says "bahut acha hai...ismey har ek cheez meri pasand ki nahi..bas kami hai toh sirf tumari....kyu mujhe chodhakar chale gaye tum.. tumhey wapas aana hoga merey liye...kaho aaogey na..."
shabd makes madhu turns to herself and smiles and says " mey sirf tumara hu, aur sirf tumara hi rahunga...jab jab tum mujhe yaad karogi bas aankhey band mera naam pukaarana.. mey aa jaunga..."
madhu closes her eyes and hugs shabd and sleeps...

In the morning...
Madhu ki neend khulti hai...woh aas pass dekhti hai waha koi nahi hota...madhu puts shabd photo's back to table and stand up from the bed...

Swarali is sleeping on baazi's chest... suraj ki kiraney uski aanko mey padti hai.. she wakes and goes for shower... after some time she comes out and in dark green saree... she comes to dressing table and wipes her wet hair with towel and puts sindoor in her maang and mangalsutra....baazi is still sleeping and she goes out to make tea...

Everyone is sitting there swarali comes and takes everyone blessings... AS is sad because of madhu... 

IN Dutta rooms:
nakku is also getting ready... dutta comes and hugs her...
nakku says "saab kya kar rahey hai aap...chodhiye mujhe...bahut kaam hai.."
dutta says "yeh tum mujhe saab saab kehna kab chodhegi..."
nakku says "kabhi nahi..."
dutta says "toh theek hai..mey bi aaj sey tujhe madam kehkar bulaunga..."
nakku says "baazi aa jaayega chaliye chodhiye naa..."
dutta says "baazi toh ab apni biwi ke sath hai, toh tum uski chinta mat karo..."

dutta kisses nakku and nakku also kisses dutta.. Dutta take nakku to bed... nakku sees dutta....dutta start kissing her on neck then lower neck..and then lower and more lower... naku closes her eyed and she feels pain and she pulls dutta towards her..dutta doesnt stop and keep kissing nakku.....

In dinning hall :
AS is sitting..and looking at madhu pics...kala is also there but she is not saying anything...Baazi comes there... Baazi sees AS, swarali comes there with tea..kala is angry on baazi..😡..baazi says nothing... Suddenly there is a phone call and baazi picks it up...


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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 upd8!!   **gives a big big hug 2 madhu** upd8 soon.x