neww ff Der na ho jaye kahi... - Page 12

Posted: 13 years ago
HEY FRNDS I AM CHANGING THE CHARACTER OF MADHU... PLZ SUGGEST WHO CAN PLAY A ROLE OF MADHU IN FOUR OF THEM...

1. JENNIFER WINGET {RIDIMA DIL MIL GAYE}
2. SUPRIYA KUMARI {AMOLI BAIRI PIYA}
3. RUCHA GUJRATI {KALI IN KUSUM}
4. RICHA SONI {BINDIYA IN BHAGYAVIDHATA}

HEY FRND PLZ SELECT CHOICE SO THAT I CAN WRITE FURTHER UPDATES FOR YOU...HOPE U WILL DO SOON..
WAITING.............
Posted: 13 years ago

part35~ so baaji feels abit sad den...finaly! lol... ukno wa i actualy like shabd bt i rely wntd baaji op madhu evn tho shabd is sucha sweetheart...oh oh he asd hr 2 b truthful n she wz imaginin baji (bles hr) n sed yes 2 hmm awh he fel in luv wt hr 1st tym he saw hr..i jus knw it lol

 

part36~ was wrong wit naku..y she not wel...luvd hw D was doin hr chinta..wel a lil bit tho...wud luvd 2 c mor tasha ;)

 

awh madhu n dutta r soo sweet...bles emm...luved da bro-sis bonding scne...

 

awh she cnt imagine no1 els oda den baji...feel 4 da poor gurl...

 

only 10 days lft...baji kuch kar jaldi se...

 
part37~awwwww finaly tum tasha scnee!!!  sucha romantic scnee...  lekin yeh baaji bhi na phir se KMH ban ke agya aur saath mein AS ko bhi abhi kaam tha...lol D bta tel naku 2 mke up 4 it ol ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
 
bechari madhu...baji..kya kuch kuch tumhe bhi hua hai??? 



continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š
 
ps.y do u wna chnge character do madhu??

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
MISHEZX  well dear i know baazi should do something but what to do yar... everything is decided by destiny... jo humhe chaiye woh zaruri nahi humhey mil jaaye.... i have tried to make real this comment in this story,,

shabd and madhu meets at kartik {jay bhanushali } wedding... they even danced together...

ya dutta is a caring brother he loves his sister too much. ya naku is not well... she is exerted yar {kitna kaam karna padta hai๐Ÿ˜‰}....

sabar kal meetha hota hai dear...
Posted: 13 years ago
PART-37


RAJ SAHAY {RAM KAPOOR} AND MOHINI SAHAY {GAUTAMI KAPOOR} COMES WITH SWARALI SAHAY {NEHA BOMB} AND SHABD SAHAY {ADITYA REDJI} ALONG WITH SURAJ KEHDHKAR {RONIT ROY} AND MEERA KHEDHKAR {SAKSHI TALWAR} WITH KARTIK {JAY BHANUSHALI} HIS WIFE ROSHINI {PARNEET CHAUHAN} AND SHALINI {ZIVEDHA TUM BIM JAU KAHA FAME}... AND EVERYONE COMES AND OTHER PEOPLE ALSO.. AAYI SAHIB WITH HIS FAMILY GREETS EVERYONE GREETS EACHOTHER... SHABD TOUCHES FEET OF AAYI SAHIB AND HUG DUTTA...
BAAZI IS HAPPY TO SEE SWARALI... AAYI SAHIB HUGS MOHINI AND MEERA.. DUTTA TOUCHES THE FEET OF SURAJ AND RAJ.... HUGS KARTIK...ROSHINI MEETS NAKU WITH SHALINI AND KALA ALSO...SHALINI IS VERY IMPRESSED WITH KALA... AS SHE IS LOOKING VERY BEAUTIFUL... SHE MEETS ROOPS ALSO...

AAYI SAHIB SAYS "AAJ BAHUT KHUSHI KA DIN HAI... AAJ HUMARI BACHI KA RISHTA PAKKA HONEY JA RAHA HAI...."
MEERA SAYS "AAYI SAHIB HUM TOH BAPPA SEY YAHI PRATHNA KARTEY HAI KI HUMARI BACHIYA JA BI RAHEY KHUSH RAHEY..."
MOHINI SAYS "HA MEERA TUMNEY SAHI HAI....IS EHSAAS KO SIRF MAA HI MEHSOOS KAR SAKTI HAI...."

THREE OF THEM SMILES.....
ROSHINI SAYS "AREY NAKU TUMARI SAREE TOH BAHUT ACHI HAI...LAGTA HAI BHAU KI PASAND HAI...."
NAKU FEELS SHY AND NODES HER HEAD....
SWARALI SAYS "NAKU VAHINI MADHU VAHINI KAHA HAI..."
NAKU SAYS "WOH TAYAAR HO RAHI HAI... BAS MEY USEY LEKAR AATI HU...."


MADHU IS LOOKING HERSELF IN MIRROR SHE IS WEARING GOLDEN LEHNGAA...HER HAIR ARE PINED UP.. AND OPEN... SHE LOOKING LIKE A ANGEL... BUT SHE IS IN TEARS๐Ÿ˜ญ..... SHE IS MISSING BAAZI AND SHE DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY AND TO DO NOW.... THEN ONLY NAKU COMES....

NAKU SAYS "KITNI SUNDER DIKH RAHI HO BILKUL PARI...."
MADHU SAYS  NOTHING...
NAKU SAYS "KYA BAAT HAI MADHU MEY KAAFI DINO SEY DEKH RAHI HU KI TUM BAHUT GUMSUM REHNEY LAGI HO... BAHUT UDAAS HO.. APNI VAHINI KO NAHI BATAOGI TUM...."
MADHU SAYS "NAHI VAHINI AISI KOI BAAT NAHI HAI..."
NAKU SAYS " TOH KAISI BAAT HAI...BATANA TOH PADEGA"
MADHU SAYS  "WOH VAHINI MEY WOH...."

TABHI LEELA AA JAATI HAI... 
LEELA SAYS "VAHINI KYA KAR RAHI HO NICHEY SAB MADHU KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHE HAI..."
NAKU GET CONFUSED๐Ÿ˜•...

LEELA TAKES MADHU WITH HER..... NAKUSHA SEES THIS... LEELA BRINGS NAKU DOWN IN HALL... THEN KALA COMES TO NAKKU... SHABD SEES MADHU AND SMILES.... MADHU SITS ON A SOFAA WITH SHABD... MOHINI TAKES THALI FROM SWARALI AND SHE PUTS RED ODHANI ON MADHU AUR USKO TILAK LAGATI HAI... SHE GIVES JEWELLERY SET TO MADHU AND MADHU TOUCHES HER FEET... THEN PANDIT JI COMES AND THEN HE RESITE SOME SHALOK AND ALL. HE GIVES RING TO MADHU AND SHABD... MADHU SEES BAAZI... BUT BAAZI IS NOT THERE...







Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved ..........
 
Part 36 -- Dutta see hr sad and he finds sumthing fishy......... hope he heard her opening her heart out.................
Part 37 -- Thank god Baaji too felt sumthing when he saw Madhu............. but wht was that feeling????
 Atlast we got sum Tasha romancing.... bu Baaji the Kabab Mein Haddi is also there.......
 Part 38 -- Nakku has a seriousdoubt that Madhu is hiding sumthing........she didnt  get a chance to talk........
All the prts superb.......... contnue soooooooooooooooooooon............Dont want Madhu to marry sumone else......... Hope dutta only fnd out on his own (he must hav head hertalk to  herself --part 36) and get her maried to Baaji........I think Rucha Gujrati will make a good Madhu..........
Edited by ushankitvc - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
just read through you ff..fab...can u add me to your pm list pls..would love to catch it when possible. thanks!
Posted: 13 years ago
๐Ÿ˜’FROM TODAY THE ROLE MADHU WILL PE PLAYED BY RUCHA GUJRATI BECAUSE OLDER MADHU IS NOT SUIT FOR BAAZI... I AM VERY UPSET THAT MY FRNDS DOESNT EVEN ANSWERED ME.. SO I HAVE DECIDED THAT RUCHA WILL PLAY THE ROLE OF MADHU...๐Ÿ˜’.. I WILL NT EXPECT ANYTHING FROM MY FRNDS YAR NW... IF ANYONE WANTS TO COMMENT DO IT OTHERWISE AS YOU WISH FRIENDS..
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by stary_kajal


๐Ÿ˜’FROM TODAY THE ROLE MADHU WILL PE PLAYED BY RUCHA GUJRATI BECAUSE OLDER MADHU IS NOT SUIT FOR BAAZI... I AM VERY UPSET THAT MY FRNDS DOESNT EVEN ANSWERED ME.. SO I HAVE DECIDED THAT RUCHA WILL PLAY THE ROLE OF MADHU...๐Ÿ˜’.. I WILL NT EXPECT ANYTHING FROM MY FRNDS YAR NW... IF ANYONE WANTS TO COMMENT DO IT OTHERWISE AS YOU WISH FRIENDS..
 
Cmon yaar thats not fair..........I had voted fr Rucha Gujrati only................... abb main naaraaz hoon...... i always read ur FF and make sure I comment........... let me see how u can manaoo me??????? ......I can giv u a hint if u want............. i luv tasha romantic scenes.................think over........... continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon......... 
Posted: 13 years ago
sory kajal but i dnt kno any of dem girls das y i cudnt/didnt vote 4 dem...x
Posted: 13 years ago
PART-38

IN THE NIGHT PATIL NIWAS:

SHABD {ADITYA REDJI} MADHU KO RING PEHANATA HAI...{MADHU KI NAZAREY BAAZI KO DHUND RAHI HOTI HAI...} MADHU {RUCHA GUJARATI} SHABD KO RING PEHANTI HAI... TABHI BAAZI

this is
something
special
to all the paajis and all the parjaiaans
this is patiala house in it....
{BAAZI FRNDS KE SATH DANCE KARNEY AATA HAI....๐Ÿฅณ}

{BAAZI START DANCING}
laung da lishkara
o baby tera jaan se pyaara 
o baby yeh chamka dil saada
o  deke gaya pyaar ye patiaalvi
{BAAZI SWARALI KO DEKHTA HAI....AND TAKES SHABD WITH HIM}

{SHABD SEES MADHU AND SINGS AND DANCE.....}
ho jab se dil haara 
o badla main saara ka saara
o baby ji we gabru dildaara 
o baby tera yaar ye patialvi

o yar hai yar hai yar hai patialvi {dancers dance and sing in chorus.}

patiala peg laga ke naachunga naachunga 
patiala dhol baja ke keh dunga keh dunga
heere meri zulfen teri, 
mere haathon ki ye lakeeren bunti hain
{DUTTA COMES AND DANCE SEEING NAKU....}

laung da lishkara
o baby tera jaan se pyaara 
o baby emey chamka dil saada
o  deke gaya pyaar ye patiaalvi

patiala patiala patiala o patiala {dancer dance and sings in chorus}

ho jab se dil haara 
o badla main saara ka saara
o baby ji we gabru dildaara 
o baby tera yaar ye patialvi
{baazi, dutta, kartik and shabd dance...baazi looks at swarali, dutta looks at naku, kartik looks at roshini and shabd looks at madhu}

patiala peg laga ke kehnda hai kehnda hai
kaley milo to chup ye rehnda hai rehnda hai
channa mere chhddo pare
mishri si mithi gud si baatein ye rehne de..
{swarali took naku, roshini on floor to dance....they look so beautiful.. in dance step... naku is wearing purple saree with silver embrodiery, roshini light brown, madhu in golden lehngaa and swarali light pink saree....wow that's cool...}

laung da lashkara....{dutta comes to naku...and dance}
o baby tera {shabd comes to madhu...}
o baby emey {baazi comes to swarali..}
o  dekh gaya tera pyar patialavi {kartik comes to roshini..}

{shalini {zivedha tum bin jau kaha fame} imagines ๐Ÿ˜shourya {karan tacker} coming from back and take around of her in slow motion singing this line}
baaton se teri baaten bani hain
aa phir se chup ke mere kaanon mein kehde
baatein to meri chup ho gayi hain {shalini sings with shourya by touching his hand}
aa jo bhi sunna hai wo aankhon se sun le.

{someone push roops in the floor...arey that is pratyush {iqbal khan}
tu jo kahe uske ab charche hum karte hain
tu jo kahe ab se hum sunte hain, karte hain {roops smiles and sings}
aisa kabhi socha na tha
dil yoon hi kho kar hi takdeerein milti hain {pratyush sings}

laung da lishkara
o baby tera jaan se pyaara 
o baby emey chamka dil saada
o  deke gaya pyaar ye patiaalvi 
aayi sahib comes and take out by touching their shoulder...from imagination๐Ÿ˜.. they see the four couple dancing....

apney bi mey pind mey ek phuljadi thi..{kishore comes sings this by seeing kala}
woh tile wali juti suit parandi
kheto mey jakar cheda tha jisney {kala sings this}
uskey toh kaha yar dil sey mey chahti 
kajala lagake woh my kya ji kehti hai {shabd sings and dance... other pair comes}
ho ping merey dil mey uthati hai {swarali sings this for baazi and dance with him..then other pair comes
heery meri kothey tey aa {dutta sings for naku and dance.. other pair comes}
mazi tey beh ja tenu raz raz dekha 

{all four the copues comes and dance}
laung da lashkara {kartik comes with roshini and dance}
o baby tera{dutta sings} jaan sey yeh pyara{naku sings dance}
o baby emey{shabd sings}chamaka dil saara{madhu sings dance]
o baby dikh gaya pyar ye patialvi

ho jab se dil haara 
o badla main saara ka saara
o baby ji we gabru dildaara 
o baby tera yaar ye patialvi
{baazi sings and take all of the them to dancebaazi dance with swarali and madhu sees with teary eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ and she moves from there}

Everyone gathers in a hall for having dinner.. baazi comes to swarali...
baazi says "ab toh hamesha ke liye rishta jhudney ja raha hai...๐Ÿ˜Š"
swarali sees and says "hmm u r rite๐Ÿ˜Š"
baazi says "toh tuney hamarey baarey mey kya socha hai...๐Ÿ˜Š"
swarali says "humarey baarey mey" {swarali ๐Ÿ˜‰ make prank๐Ÿ˜›}
baazi says "kyu tumari aayi ne kuch bataya nhi tumhey"
swarali says "nahi toh, kuch batana tha kya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ"
baazi says "aey tu mazak kar rahi hai merey sath..๐Ÿ˜›"
swarali says "hmm mazak karna meri aadat nahi...๐Ÿ˜†"
baazi says "acha baazi ke sath panga, bahut baari padega....๐Ÿ˜›"
swarali says "dekhtey hai kaun kis pe baari padta hai..."{she makes faces๐Ÿ˜• hunn and goes from there}

Naku aur dutta dur sey is scene ko dekh rahey they.. and they laugh๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..baazi come to them...
dutta says "kya baazi teri toh iske saamney band baj gayi... ha ha ha ha๐Ÿ˜Š"
naku says "kyu re baazi tu toh bada sher banta hai ab kya hua"
baazi ๐Ÿ˜• says "kya bhau kya vahini aap dono bi chalu ho gaye, lakin baap re baahu kitni tikhi mirchi, maan na padega pehali baar baazi ki takar ka mila hai.."
dutta says"lagta hai tera dil aa gaya hai is mirchi pey..."
baazi says "kuch aisa hi samaj lo... magar ek aur tikhi mirchi nazar nahi aa rahi...."
dutta says "kaun kiski baat kar raha hai..."
baazi bhau "aapki behan madhu... kaha chali gayi...mey dekh ke aata hai.. ab wahi apni kuch setting kar sakti hai...aakhir uski vahini jo hai..."

{baazi goes to find out madhu....dutta looks at naku}
dutta says "yeh to gaya...'
naku says "hmm..."
dutta says "hum bi chaltey hai...." {dutta looks naku with naughty eyes}
naku says "kaha..."
dutta says "lagta hai tumhey yaad karna padega... chalo merey sath

Roshini-kartik scene
kartik says "roshini kitna khaati ho tum..." {kartik do prank with her๐Ÿ˜‰}
roshini๐Ÿ˜ก says "aur tum apni plate dekho...aisa lagta hai pata nahi kitney dino sey khaana nahi khaya ho..."
kartik says "nahi...nahi kehna kya chahti ho...๐Ÿ˜‰"
roshini says "tum sab mard ek jaisey hotey khaaney ke maamley mey bhukhad..๐Ÿ˜›"
{then only shalini comes and sees them and laugh๐Ÿ˜†}
shalini says "bhaiya aur vahini yeh kya hai.. not atleast here yar..."
roshini says "hmm ab shalini aa gayi hai..woh batyegi kaun sahi hai..."
shalini says "sorry sorry mey kiska sath nahi dungi... mey yeh kehney aayi thi aapko maa bhula rahi hai..."
kartik laughs๐Ÿ˜Š "ha ha tumari supporter to gayi.."
roshini sees kartik and goes๐Ÿ˜Š

PARTY IS OVER..GUESTS ARE GONE ONLY FAMILY MEMBERS, SHABD FAMILY AND KARTIK FAMILY IS THERE...




Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago

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