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Posted: 13 years ago
aww shalini daydreamn bou shourya๐Ÿ˜
 
bechari madhu...ope yeh gadha baji galdi apne dil ki sune..b4 itz 2 l8!
 
nyc upd8 continue soon n thnx 4 upd8 ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice FF update more soon 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-35

IN dutta house:

Sab log raj sahay {ram kapoor} and mohini sahay {gautami kapoor} with swarali sahay {neha bomb} and shadh sahay { aditya redji} ka intezaar kar rahey hai... All is set and well..Kala as usual with evil smile looking at baazi...She is happy for roops...๐Ÿ˜Š

Aayi sahib says " dutta pata nahi yeh log kab aayengey..."
Dutta says "aa jaayengey aayi sahib...aap chinta mat kijiye..."

In madhu room:

Naku is looking so beautiful in sea green saree.. and she is making madhu ready..Madhu is wearing navy blue saree..She is also looking beautiful...Madhu is sitting in fornt of mirror with teary eyes... Naku looks at her...

Naku says "kya baat hai madhu..tum ro rahi ho... kya tum khsuh nahi ho...."
Madhu looks at naku sand says"nahi vahini mey khush bas is ghar mey kuch dino ki mehmaan hu bas isliye..."
Naku says "madhu kahi koi aur baat toh nahi hai na..."
Madhu gives fake smile and says "nahi vahini kaisi baat kar rahi hai...mey bahut khush hu... aayi sahib ne merey liye kuch socha hai acha hi socha hoga..."
Naku laughs says "hmm acha mey toh mazaak kar rahi thi...chal ab jaldi sey tayaar ho ja...."

Naku goes in hall to look other work... Dutta sess naku and gives smiles...dutta naku ko apney pass aaney ka ishaara karata hai... naku dutta ke pass aati hai..

Dutta says "arey naku tumari pichey ki dori khuli hui hai..."
Naku says "kya...kya sahib pehaley kyu nahi bataya....ab mey kya karu...woh jaldi sey kamrey ki taraf bhagti hai...."
Dutta follows naku...In room naku in front of mirror looking at dhori...
Naku says "kaha khuli hai dori sahib...jhooth bol rhey they...."
Dutta come close to naku says " hmm mainey apni biwi ko jee bhar ke dekha nahi na isliye jhooth bolna padha...{she pulls naku from her waist to him...}
Naku says "sahib..koi aa jayega...chodjiye mujhe jaana hai...bahut kaam hai..."
Dutta says "agar mey naa jaaney du toh kya karegi...."
Naku says "toh mey chilaungi..."
Dutta says" hmm chilaana hai chilao..."
Naku tries to but in vain...He kisses her so fastly that naku cant react..."
Naku is mess up and all her...her saree palu is going somewhere..Her Lipstick removed and her hair...messed up...

Naku sees dutta and dutta gives a cute smile to her....๐Ÿ˜Š

 



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Posted: 13 years ago
me first again ......
Madhu i so sad.......... Nakku doesnt blieve her...........Dutta getting mischievious............to hav some privacy with her told lies........so sweet.........so romantic kiss to stop hr frm shouting..........
continue sooooooooooooooooon...........
Edited by ushankitvc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd da update hun spesh naught dutta scne lol 
 
btw sory 4 such a l8 coment jus saw u updated 



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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-36

IN PATIL NIWAS...

Everybody is waiting for Raj sahay {ram kapoor} and mohini sahay {gautami} with their children... Naku jaldi sey apna huliya theek karke aati hai.... Kala, roops aur leela are standing..... Tabhi sab log aatey hai.... aayi sahib seems to be very happy... Aayi sahib comes forward to greet them.... Only shabd sahay {aditya redji} comes} with them.... Baazi feels sad...Dutta looks at baazi and smiles๐Ÿ˜Š....

Aayi sahib says " Aaiye aaiye sawagat kartey hai aapka...."
Raj sahays says " danyawad aayi sahib....kaisi hai aap...."
Aayi sahib says " hum theek hai...aaiye beithye... mohini ji kaisi hai aap..."
Mohini says "theek hu aayi sahib...."

Shabd sahay "{aditiya rediji} aayi sahib ke pao chuta hai....Aayi sahib usey aashirwad deti hai....Mohini kala, leela aur roops sey milti hai aur dutta aur nakusha sey bi...Baazi sey bi....

Aayi sahib says to nakusha "jao madhu ko lekar aao..."
Nakushah says "ji aayi sahib"

Naku madhu ko lekar aati hai.. Madhu sabko greet karti hai...shabd usey dekhta hi reh jaata hai... kala gives evil smile...

Mohini says "kitni pyari bachi hai....{madhu smiles}...."
Raj sahay says " aayi sahib humhey toh aapki betiya bahut pasand hai....ab bacho ka zara akeley mey baat karney di jaaiye taki woh bi apna fasila humhey bata sakey..."
Aayi sahib says "ji bilkul...jao madhu..."
Madhu says "ji aayi..."

Shabd aur madhu bahar jaatey hai aur naku aur baki servants sabko nashtey ke liye le jaatey hai....

Shabd says "aap itni chup kyu hai.... hamesha aisi hi rehti hai ya phir u r nervous for this marriage...."
Madhu says " ji nahi...ha thodi si nervous hu...."
Shabd says " kuch bi faisala leney pehale mey aapsey kuch puchna aur kehna chahta hu...."
Madhu says "ji boliye..."
Shabd says "dekhiye mey apne maa baba sey bahut pyar karta hu.... mey unki marzi ke khilaf toh dur mainey kabhi aisa socha bi nahi.....aur isliye mey is shaadi ke liye tayaar ho gaya.... mujhe jhooth bolney waalo sey bahut nafrat hai...isliye mey yahi umeed karunga ki aap hamesha sach ka sath dengi...."
Madhu sees shabd.... 
Madhu says "ji mey is baat ka pura khayal rakhungi..."
shabd says "toh aap is rishtey sey khush hai...."
madhu thinks about baazi and his smiling face...she imagines baazi is standing in front of him asking "mujse pyar karti hai na..."
Madhu smiles and says "yes"
shabd hear this and smiles hold her hand and says " toh mey bi waada karta hu ki tumhey zndagi bhar khush rakhunga...tumari palko pe kabhi aansu nahi aaney dunga....jaanti ho kyu......."
Madhu says "kyu...."
shabd says "kyunki tumhe pehali baar dekhtey hi mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya tha."
Madhu sees shabd... shabd sees madhu... both of them have a eyelock for a minute {tum mujhe bas yuhi pyar karti rahooo a song from aetbaar john and bipasha}....after sometime they go to patil niwas...

Mohini and raj sees both of them coming....mohini stands and goes to shabd... madhu goes in her room....
Mohini says "toh beta pasand hai tumhey madhu..."
Shabd๐Ÿ˜Š says "ji mom...."
Raj hugs shabd....
Mohini says "li jiye aayi sahib aapki beti humhey  pasand hai aur shabd ko bi....ab aap ani betiya sey puch lijye..."
aayi sahib says "us puchkar hi humney is rishtey ke liye ha kaha tha...uski tarf sey ha hai..."

Naku madhu ko hall mey lekar aati hai... madhu raj aur mohini ke pao chuti hai.. mohini madhu ko shagun ke kangan pehnati hai...

Mohini says " ab tum kuch din ke liye humari amaant bankar is ghar mey ho... jaldi sey aa jao bahu..."
madhu smiles and sees baazi with teary eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ... baazi is smiling...๐Ÿ˜Š.. Dutta and naku are also happy...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...
Aayi sahib says "mohini ji ab hum pandit ji sey kehkar subh mahurat nikal waatey hai aur aapko ph kartey hai...."
mohini says "ji aayi sahib...."

They all back to their houses... Dutta and naku goes to their room.. aayi sahib and madhu also.. same as baazi, roops...only kala stands there...

Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved ............ Me first again..........
 
A superb updt.............. so Baaji is sad that shabd's sis didnt cum......... so baaji doesnt luv Madhu......... Madhu agrees to marry thinking it is Baaji asking..........  shabd fell in luv with Madhu first sight only.............all happy ..........continue soooooooooooooooooooooon.............hope to read more of tasha romancing...............waiting eagerlyyyyyyyyyyy
Edited by ushankitvc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey kajal....

nice update.........

but feel sad for madhu n baaji........

hope u dont separate them........ waiting for ur next update..........

tc
divya
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PART-36

IN PATIL NIWAS...

Aayi sahib is sitting with pandit ji asking for engagement and marraige time to be fix...Pandit ji see madhu and shabd kundali {horoscope}... Pandit ji examine it and after some time he sees aayi sabhi and says

Pandit ji says "Aayi sahib don bacho ki kundali mainey dekh li hai... kya baat hai dono ke 36 ke 36 gun miltey hai๐Ÿ˜Š....aisi jodi toh ram aur sita ki jodi hai...magar.."
Aayi sahib says "magar kya pandit ji...๐Ÿ˜•"
Pandit ji says "shaadi ke baad bachi ki sehat theek nahi rahegi... woh mangal bhaari hai isliye...lakin aayi sahib gabramey ko koi baat nahi hai baapa ki kripa sey sab theek ho jaayega...๐Ÿ˜Š...waisey sagaai ke liye kal ka mahurat bahut acha hai... aur shaadi 10 din baad ati mangal... uske baad 7 mahiney tak koi acha mahurat nahi hai..๐Ÿ˜Š..."
Aayi sahib says " lakin pandit ji itni jaldi sab kasey hoga...๐Ÿ˜•."

Dutta who is standing behind him... keep his hand on aayi sahib shoulder...
Dutta says "chinta nako karo aayi mey hu na sab ho jaayega...aur waisey bi shaadi 10 din baad yar 1 mahiney baad woh toh honi hi hai na aayi...๐Ÿ˜Š"
Aayi sahib says "ho porga mag {ha beta, lakin}๐Ÿ˜•.."
dutta says "aayi, sab ho jaayega na๐Ÿ˜Š..."

Aayi sahib nodes her head and pandit goes.. Aayi sahib calls mohini to tell the mahurat and all the stuffs...They start for preparing...

Dutta and naku room:๐Ÿ˜Š
dutta says "aey naku kya hua tu aisey kyu bed pe beithi hai..."
nakku says "kuch nahi sahib bas meri tabiyat theek nahi hai..."
dutta๐Ÿ˜ฒ says "kya hua, chal doctor ke pass chal abhi...."
nakku says "nahi mainey dawai le li hai...aap chinta mat karo sahib...."
dutta says "hmm madhu ka lagan bi pakka ho gaya hai...kal sagaai hai aur 10 din baad shaadi...kuch din ki aamanat hai woh hai is ghar mey..๐Ÿ˜ญ"
naku feels happy for madhu๐Ÿ˜Š.."
naku says "sahib madhu hamesha sey hi aap mey bada bhai dhundati rahi hai.. woh pyar jiski usey zarurat hai... in kuch dino ki mey usey itna pyar dijiye ki woh apney saarey gamo ko bhula kar nayi zindagi shuru karey...๐Ÿ˜Š"
Dutta nodes his head and give smile๐Ÿ˜Š to nakku..."

Madhu room scene:
Dutta comes and sits besides to madhu and says "madhu tu janti hai aaj teri shaadi pakki ho gayi hai..."
madhu gets shock๐Ÿ˜ฒ says "bhau... woh mujhe nahi pata๐Ÿ˜ญ..."
dutta says "yeh sach hai, kal teri sagaai hai aur 10 din baad shaadi..."
madhu says "nothing..."
dutta says "tu khush toh hai na..."
madhu says "ji bhau mey khush hu..."
dutta hugs madhu and madhu feel so happy she start crying๐Ÿ˜ญ..
Dutta says "aey pagali ro kyu rahi hai tera yeh bhau apni behan ki aankho mey aansu nahi dekh sakta...."
madhu says "nahi bhau yeh toh khushi ki aansu hai... badey bhai ka pyar kaisa hota hai yeh aaj mujhe mehsoos hua hai..."

{she hugs dutta like a small baby....dutta also hugs her a little dolll.. she start crying๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ a lot a lot.. dutta sees thi sand feels something fishy..}
dutta says "madhu kahi kuch aur baat toh nahi hai na kahi tu is shaadi sey khush nahi hai..humara maan rakhney ke liye aisa keh rahi hai..."
Madhu says "nahi bhau... aisi koi baat nahi hai... aaj itney dino ke baad mujhe mera bhau mila hai... toh rona toh aayega na...."
dutta says " naku ab rona band kar, ab khushiyo ka inetzaar karo jo tumari zindagi mey aainey wali hai..."
madhu ๐Ÿ˜Š says "ji bhau...."

dutta goes and madhu smiles... after dutta goes...aur madhu murdti hai aur apney bed pe gir jaati hai,,, aur zor zor sey roney lagti hai aur maan hi maan sochti hai..."bhau ab mey aapko kya batau...merey dil mey koi aur hai mey chahkar bi kuch nahi keh sakti hai...merey dil mey sirf baazi hai aur koi nahi aa sakta yeh jo kuch bi ho raha hai...sir pariwar ki khushi ke liye ho raha hai...

aayi sahib calls mohini...and tells her the whole story of tommorrow mahurat and marriage also.. mohini feels happy.. she is on call with aayi sahib..

mohini says "ji aayi sahib yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai....hum kal aa jaayengey..."

mohini {gautami kapoor} tells shabd {aditya redji} and swarali {neha bomb }and raj {ram kapoor} for the whole story... mohini calls meera {sakshi talwar} and invite her for the function with family... here roops calls shalini and invites her for the function at home..













Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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PART-37

IN PATIL NIWAS:๐Ÿ˜Š

Sab madhu ke sagaai ki tayari kar rahey hotey...๐Ÿ˜Š... Nakku๐Ÿ˜Š bi decoration karney mey busy hai...woh sabhi ko instruction de rahi hoti hai... kala, roops aur leela bi busy hoti hai.. kishore aur sudesh bi tayari mey jutey hotey hai... Aayi sahib sabhi tayariyo ko dekh rahi hoti hai...๐Ÿ˜Š

Aayi sahib says to nakku "naku madhu ki sagaai ka jodaa aa gaya kya..."
Naku says " ji aayi sahib bas aaney waala hai..."
Aayi sahib says "theek hai hum aatey hai..."

Naku goes to kitchen for looking preparations of food... babi is there...

In kala room:
Kala says to anay " anay beta chalo jaldi tayaar ho jao..."
Anay says "mumma plz mujhe khelna hai..."
kala says "anay tum mumma ki baat nahi sunogey..."
anay says "ok mumma mey baad mey khelunga...."
kala says "gud boy...

Ghar ke bahar ek aadmi aaata hai uske hath mey ek bada sa box hota hai... baazi aata hai...

Baazi says "kaun ho tum..."
A person says " mey ram jeweller ke yaha sey aaya hu..yeh sagaai ka joda aur dulhey ki anguthi...."
baazi says "ek number..."

baazi goes to madhu room...he knocks the door... roops open the door... baazi sees roops...he come in...

baazi says "leela taayi yeh madhu ki sagai ka jodaa aa gaya hai..."
madhu woh was lost in thoughts...

leela opens the box...it was a golden lengaa...
roops says "wow taayi kitna pyara hai na..how cute๐Ÿ˜†..dekho madhu...
madhu doesnt listen..again roops calls madhu...madhu sees that and give fake smile... and sees baazi with teary eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ
madhu says "hmm..."
leela says "dekh na kya hua tujhe..aaj toh khushi ka din hai aur tu udaas kyu ho.."
baazi says "tayi mey jaata hai mujhe aayi sahib bula rahi hai..."
madhu sees baazi going and looks down... at that moment baazi stops and sees madhu.... and he feel something and goes....madhu start getting ready...

In dutta room naku is getting ready and dutta comes...
dutta hugs naku from back...
dutta says "aaj mey bahut khush hu naku aaj madhu ki sagaai hai...meri behan dulhan banegi...is din ka intezaar sabko hota hai..."
naku๐Ÿ˜Š says "sahib aaj mey bahut khush hu...kyunki aap khush ho..."
dutta makes naku in front of him and hugs her tightly... 
naku says "kya hua sahib..."
dutta says " ini khushiya ek sath kaisey sambhalunga mey..."
maku says "in khushiyo ka aap par haqh hai sahib...."
dutta kisses naku on her neck and naku become shy....
naku says "is pal ka intezaar mujhe hamesha sey tha...."

dutta took naku on the bed...he make her lay on the bed... he comes on naku... naku sees dutta.. she becomes emotional.. dutta sees naku

naku puts her shoulder on dutta neck....dutta sees naku from up to down..
naku says "mainey kabhi bi kisi sey itna pyar nahi kiya...hum hamesha sath rahengey... khush rahegey... mey kabhi bi aapko apney aap sey dur nahi jaaney dungi...."
Dutta sees naku and giving fishy smile....
Naku says "mey aapsey bahut pyar karti hu..."
dutta look for a min and says " aur mey bi...."

Naku hugs dutta and then dutta start kissing her on neck๐Ÿ˜ณ... she closes her eyes.. and dutta makes her face in front of him... and kisses on her lips for sometime.. they change their position..nw naku is on dutta.. naku kisses๐Ÿ˜ณ dutta on his chest, then up and up opens the button of his kurta...Dutta sees naku that she want to get involved.... dutta changes the position aur dutta uske uper aa jaata hai... He takes off her pallu from her shoulder and unpins her hair!..Meanwhile he kisses her forehead and she closes her eyes!๐Ÿ˜ณ... she also gives in...

lakin tabhi achank sey koi darwaaza khatkata hai... dutta come back to his senses... same naku also... naku gets up and make herself set...and opens the door...baazi is there...

baazi says "woh vahini bhau aur aapko aayi sahib bula rahi hai..."
naku says "hmm hum aatey hai tum chalo..."
baazi says "kya baat hai vahini sab theek toh hai na aap kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi hai..."
naku ๐Ÿ˜• says "nahi baazi nahi woh toh... hmm tum chalo hum bas abhi aaye..."
baazi says "aap logo ka bi kuch samaj nahi aata hai.. acha mey jaata hai..."

Naku closes the door and tells dutta to get ready as aayi sahib is calling them..
dutta naku ko apne pass khichta hai aur kehta hai...

dutta says "naku tu bi na itni jaldi kya hai jaaney ki...."
naku says "lakin aayi sahib bula rahi hai..nichey kitna kaam padha hai..."
dutta says "aur mey jo yaha terey sath hu...uska kya..."
naku says "aaj madhu ki sagaai hai, toh kaam toh karna padega na.."
dutta says "hmm toh ja..lakin baad mey dekhta hu ki tu kaisey jaati hai..."

naku feels shy and they both get ready๐Ÿ˜ณ...