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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww such an awsum upd8 hun..it wz soo sweet..
 
awhh naku is dreamland..bt shez olrdi marid hehe😆 ...
 
yeh dono foji toh bare playerz lagte hai lol 😉😆
 
haha shalini aur roops ek dusre ki chori pakr rahi hain😆 ..
 
hmm kya us ladke has crush on madhu..sory cnt rmmba hz name😆 ... he soundz lyk a nyc guy bt sory man madhu is reservd 4 baaji..haina..??
 
continue soon hun.x
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have u watched na aana is des meri laado.... he is aditya redji... he is playing a role of raghav in this serial....
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so the marriage is over................. a nice updt..........continue sooooooon......... eager to know what happens nxt.............
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😭Next Part-31

Kartik aur roshini bado ka ashirwad letey hai…. Ab vidayi ki tayari hoti hai..  Sab roshini ka intezaar kar rahey hai… Music starts "babul ka ghar chodhke beti piya ke ghar chali…..{song from sainik movie }… Background all of them  are standing... Roshini comes to her mother kirti vardaan  (neena gupta) roshini ke papa nahi hai bas ek bhai hai…. Her brother roshan (dev akka abhinav shukla)… 

Songs starts:😭

baabul ka ghar chhod ke beti piya ke ghar chali  -2😭

ye kaisi ghadi aai hai milan hai judaai hai  -2😭

( roshini comes to neena gupta and hugs her and start crying😭)

 

baabul ka ghar chodh ke beti piya ke ghar chali-2😭

yeh kaisi ghadi aayi hai Milan hai judaai hai…😭

(roshini comes and comes to her brother roshan and cries)😭

 

bachapan ke vo khel khilaune chhod ke sab jaayegi😭

vo raaja raani ki kahaani yaad bahut aayegi😭

( roshini sees roshan.. and camera focus on both of them only.. here naku also feels crying so dutta put his hands on her shoulder tightly so that she can feel worm)

rokar bhi mamata ki keemat kaise chuka paayegi …

(then she again hugs roshan… she was looking like small child they way she hug him)

 

Babul ka ghar chodhke beti piya ke ghar chali

Yeh kaisi gadi aayi hai Milan hai ya judaai hai….

(all of them start walking slowly slowly….they come to mandir,,she sits their and start crying…)

 

maika hai do din ka basera kaun yahaan rah paaye

bin beti ka baap bhi dekho beti ka byaah rachaaye

{roshan roshini ko uthata hai.. aur usko seeney se laga leta hai….)

 

roke ruke na aansu ki dhaara aankh chhalakati jaaye

(roshini hugs her mother…and cry through heart…)

 

baabul ka ghar chodhke beti piya ke ghar chali..

yeh kaisi gadi aayi hai Milan hai judaai hai..

(they make roshini sits in the car….)


 Kirti vardaan comes to suraj and meera and she says….

Kirti says "bahut pyar se paala mainey apni phul si bachi ko… agar isey kabhi koi galti ho jaaye toh chota samaj kar maaf kar dijiye…."

Meera says "kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap.. roshin ab aapki nahi humari beti bi hai…aur maa kabhi bacho ko dantati nahi…."

Roshan says  to kartik "dhyan rakhan jeeju… meri behan ab aapki amaant hai…"

Kartik says "don't worry yar and dnt call me jeeju…" 

Sab log chaley jaatey hai…. Aayi sahib aur dutta aur baazi.. apni gaadi mey beith jaatey hai… sab kartik ke ghar pahunch jaatey hai... waha gate pe meera roshini aur kartik ka sawaagat karti hai... aur pratyush aur shourya kartik ke pass aatey hai....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Next part-32

Meera  says "ander aao bahu'."

Roshini aur kartik ander aatey hai aur meera aur suraj ke pau chutey hai' Pratyush and shourya comes hugs kartik'

Pratyush says "chalo dost hum ab chaltey hai'. Humarey dost ne itna bi time diya kaafi hai'."                          

Shourya says "teri shaadi mey special permission lekar aaye they' ab jaana hoga'"

Kartik says "yar khaana toh khakar jao.."                                       

 Pratyush says "agar yaha khaana kha liya toh humara brigadier humhey kacha kha jayega''"                               

Kartik eyes become teary and three of them hugs each other'..

Kartik says " oey saalo jaldi aana'.tumara intezar hamesha rahega..."     

Shourya says "dost  intezar toh har kiski ko rehta hail akin desh ki raksha kartey huey agar shaheed hogaye toh humarey gam mey ansu mat bahana'.. balki fakar sey seer ucha kar lena'."

Shalini hears this and she start crying' kartik sees this including suraj and meera are also senti'.

Shourya says "hey hey roney ki kya baat hai' yeh toh sach hai jiske sath jeena padta hai' humara pata kabhi bi kat sakta hai' ilsiye toh sabko tabko tang kartey rehtey hai' taki log humhey yaad rakh saktey'..

Roops hears this and she also become emotional and sees pratyush' Pratyush sees and gives smile aur woh smile ka ishaara karta hai'.

Meera says " aey dono bahut bol diye tum log ab aao aur maa ke galey lag jao'"                                                  

Suraj shourya ke kaan pakdtey huey says " hmm bahut badi badi baatey karney laga hai' shaheed, desh hmm abhi tum logo ko bahut jeena hai samjhey'.."

Aayi sahib says to dutta "humhey tumse kuch baat karni hai dutta"        Dutta says "ji aayi sahib,'.. boliye kya baat hai.."   

 Aayi sahib shabd sahay {aditya redji} ko dikhatey huey kehtai hai'."yeh ladhka humhey madhu ke liye bahut pasand hai'. Ladka padha likha hai acha guni hai humari beti ko bahut khush rakhega'"                       

Dutta sees aayi sahib sand says " aayi lakin baazi ko pasand kiya than a madhu ke liye phir'.."                          

Aayi sahib says " ho porga lakin humey lagta hai ki madhu is ladke ke sath khush rahegi' aur baazi ke liye bi humney  ladki pasand ki hai' iski behan hai'.. hum baat aagey bada chuke hai'. Tumari marzi jaana na chahtey hai...."                                                                                

Dutta says "jaisa aapko theek lagey aayi sahib aapney faisala liya hai theek hi liya hoga'. Lakin ek baar madhu sey zarur puch lijye'. Mey nahi chahta ki woh kisi bavaab mey aakar shaadi ke liye ha boley'''.."

Aayi sahib nods her head and sees dutta with smile'. Kala heard all this and gives evil smile and says to herself "wah kala ek teer sey do nishaaney toh suna tha yaha toh do nahi 4-4 nishaaney'.. bechara bhau kaisa sambhalega in rishto ko''"

 

Shalini takes roshini to her room and comes down to sees shourya.. She looks here and there... but she cant find out... tabhi koi pichey sey usey khichta hai....

Shalini says "aap abhi tak gaye nahi.. chodiye mujhe koi aa jayega..."     Shourya says "toh aa janey do.. i dont care...acha yahi shaadi ho jaye.."

Shalini says " hmm uske liye maa baba sey baat karni hogi captain..." Shourya Shalini ko hug kartey huey... says "woh toh mey kar lunga but pehaley yeh batao "mujhe miss karogi...."

Shalini says "kyu mey kyu miss karungi...."                                         Shourya says "acha toh nahi karogi....😆"

Shalini closes his eyes and kiss hi on his lips and says "jo dur ho woh yaad bankar yaad aatey hai lakin jo dil mey hotey hai woh hamesha aapki dhakon ke pass rehtey hai...."

Shalini says and runs... Shourya also run behind her... but woh pratyush se takra jaata hai....

Pratyush says"kya boss abhi sey bhagana shuru.... tera future mujhe saaf dikhayi de raha hai..woh aagey aur tu pichey......ha ha ha...😛"

Shourya says "meri chodi aur apni bata....."                                           Pratyush says "Major shourya yaad rakhiye Major pratyush ko bhaaganey ki zarurat kabhi nahi padti...ladhkiya khud pichey picheey bhagti hai... samjhey... nw follow me....."

Roops says "acha ji toh aapke pichey ladhkiya bhagti hai...."                 Pratyush turns around and says " abey yeh kain bola.....sees roops"         Roops says "tum itney badey flirter ho.... tumhey toh koi bi mil jayegi..rite.... toh tum merey pichey kyu aaye..... mujhe tumarey pichey bhagana chahiye tha na... afsos tum haar gaye....." 

 Pratyush says "yar jab mujhe koi challeneg karta hai na toh mera khoon double speed se daudney lagta hai....ab mey tumhey apney pichey bhaga sakta hu... aur agar bhaga diya toh mujhe kya milega...."

Roops says "ja ja aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta.... aur agar hogaya toh jaisa tum chaho."                                       

Pratyush says "dekho mey sach keh raha hu....."{uske pass atey huey}

Roops says "tum kuch nahi kar saktey major pratyush....."                   Suddenly pratyush grabs her chunari and hide it in her jacket.... and runs.. shourya sees and laughs.... Roops is running behind him..


 

 

 

Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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me first .......yipeeee............
read both the updts.............likd it very much.............i liked theway dutta put his arms on Nakkus shoulders to make her comfortable...............what is AS upto???????? she first decided Baaji fr Madhu an now she is changing..........would liketo know what happens nxt soooooooon............anyhow so sweet how shourya is running bhnd shalini and Pratyush makes fun of him..............Pratyush is vry clever........he makes Roops run bhnd him by taking her dupatta away fm hr.............wow!!!!!!!!!!!! a really nice one................continue sooooooooooon........
Edited by ushankitvc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg im nt likin AS now y cant she stik 2 hr wordz lol feelin sory 4 madhu/baaji n 2 top it ol of kalakuty is evesdroppin :@
 
awh shalini kisd hm bles ...yeh pratyush bhi na use bhi jaldi roops ke piche bagao ðŸ˜† he cudv been so romantic ukno lyk wen hez leavin n stf n roops can run afta hm 2 say gudbye agen o sma n den he cudv askd hr wateva he wntd 😉 ahem ahem 😆 
 
upd8 soon kajal.x
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Next Part-33

Scene start hota hai MM  ke ghar sey… sab ghar wapas aatey hai… Naku aur dutta, kala, baazi,Kishore, roops,madhu  leela and sudesh.. sab wapas aatey hai… Roops kala aey kehti hai…

Roops says "taayi kartik bhau ki shaadi kitni achi hui na…mazaa aa gaya..hw cute…"

Kala says " ha maza toh bahut aaya….isey kehtey hai shaadi… {naku ki taraf dekhtey huey}…humarey dil ke armaan toh kisi ne paani mey dubo diye… par tu chinta mat kar roops teri shaadi mey saari kasar puri kar lengey…."

Naku sees kala with teary eyes😭 and looks here and went from there… Dutta sees kala…

Dutta says "taayi yeh aapney acha nahi kiya…aakhir naku sey itni nafrat kyu karti hai aap…."

Kala says "ab tu mujhe batayegey ka ki kisey kaisey baat karni chahiye…kal tak tu bi toh naku se nafarat baat karta tha bhau ab kya ho gaya… teri nafrat kaha gayi….."

Dutta says "taayi mey naku ko maaf kar chukka hu aur yeh samaj chukka hu ki who mujse bahut pyar karti hai….kab tak is nafarat ki aag mey jalata rahunga..ab mey jeena chahata hu taayi….taayi mey khush rehna chahta hu..lakin jab tak aap khush nahi rehagi.. tab tak kaisey hoga yeh sab…."

Kala BG music starts she changes her mood and give a smile and comes to bhau…

Kala says " merey bhau ke liye kuch bi,… yeh kala apni jaan bi dekh sakti hai…"

Aayi sahib says " ho kala mey tumse kuch kehna chahti hu…. Kal madhu ko dekhney ke liye ladhke  waaley aa rahey hai…. Kal bahut saara kaam hai.. hum chahtey hai ki kal sab ghar pe rahey….

Madhu becomes shocked to listen this and she stand still with teary eyes…. Kala sees and smiles….

Kala says {evil smile} "aayi sahib ladhka kaun hai… chalo achi baat hai… madhu ka bi lagan ho jaayega…."

Aayi sahib says " ho porgi…ladhka bahut acha hai.. doctor hai… hum bahut khush hai aur hum ek baat toh batana bhul gaye humney baazi ke liye bi ladhki dekhi hai… usi ladhke ki behan hai… naam kyat ha… ha shabd sahay aur swarali sahay… kyu baazi tujhe koi aitraaz toh nahi hai na…

Baazi says "nako aayi jaisey aapki marzi….aapney faisla liya hai sahi liya hi hoga…."

Madhu ko ek aur jhataka… she waana cry but cant infront of others… Kala is watching ans slowly she comes to madhu,,,"

Kala says  "arey madhu tumari aakho mey aansu….."

Sab madhu ki taraf dekhtey hai…. Madhu apney aansu pohctey huey…."

Madhu says "nako nako aayi and runs away…."

Aayi sahib says " lagta hai sharama gayi… shaadi ki baat sunkar maan toh bhar aayega na… hum dekhtey hai….Aur dutta tu nakku ko lekar aa humhey usey baat karni hai…"

Dutta nakku ke pass jaata hai… Naku is sitting on her with teary in her eyes… Dutta comes and sits behind her and puts her hand on her shoulder… Naku wipes her tears and turn around….

Naku says "arey sahib…. Kuch kaam tha mujhe bula liya hota…." {naku still crying and dutta is seeing….}

Dutta comes aur who naku ko apni taraf khichta hai…. Naku usey nazrey nahi mila paati hai… Dutta is seeing naku

After 1 min

Dutta says "dutta sriram patil ki patni itni kamzor hai ki woh ro rahi hai…. Mey terey annsu nahi de sakta samaj mey aaya.. aur ab rona mat samjhi chal aayi tujhe bula rahi hai…."

Naku nodes her head and goes with dutta

Madhu apney bed par leti huey soch rahi hai and she is crying… Suddenly aayi sahib comes there…

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Next Part-34

After 2 days kartik and roshini happily married and pratyush and shourya move on to kashmir' Unfortunately roops doesn't confess her love to pratyush'

Roshini is standing on window seeing a site'. Kartik comes from behind and closes her eyes from behind..

Roshini says "pata hai pata hai kartik tum hi ho'."                                                                                                   Kartik says "kya jaan tumney toh saara mood hi kharab kar diya' kaisey pata chala ki mey hu'"                          

Suddenly suraj and meera knocks the door'

Roshini sees and says "arey mumy papa aap'. Aaiye na'."                                                                                        

Suraj says "kartik beta mey  tumarey sawaal ka jawab deta hu'. Humari bahu bahut tez hai teri taraha duffer nahi samjha'."                                                                                                                                       Roshini smiles and make  faces...                                                       

 Kartik says "papa yeh kya baat hui bahi o aaye huey abhi 2 din hi huey hai aaye huey aur mey bechara akela padh gaya..."                                                                                              

 Meera says " hmm khub jaantey hai hum tumko natuanki karney mey toh ek no aaagey ho tum''"                      

Kartik says "arey mey bechara behsahara'. Arey meri behan kaha hai' woh hi hai ek jo mujhe samajti hai'."

Meera says "acha hum tum logo ke liye kuch laaye hai... yeh raha tumari shaadi ka tofaa.. honey moon tickets..."

Kartik opens the envolpe and sees... World tour tickets

Kartik says "wow world tour... i love you pops and mums..."

Roshini says "thanks papa, mummy...."

Shalini is sitting in her bed'. She is missing shourya' She closes her eye' Someone comes on her'.. She open her eyes and that was shourya'.

Agar koi mujhse yeh poochhe'.

{shourya asks shalini}

Kya                                                                                                                                                                            {shalini ask shourya}

Main kyoon bechain rehta hoon

{ shourya sees her face from down to earth}

 

Kyoon?

{shalini sees shourya asks}

 

Meri is beqaraari ki vaja kya hai, bata doon kya

{shourya gives smile and asks shalini...}

 Kya?

{shalini asks again}

Teri adaaon pe marta hoon - 2

Love tujhe love main karta hoon

Teri adaaon pe marta hoon

Love tujhe love main karta hoon

{shourya hugs her and then sings this song}

 

{dream sequence}

Tujhse bichhadne se darrti hoon - 2

Love tujhe love main karti hoon

{shalini sings and dance}

 

 

Teri adaaon pe marta hoon

Love tujhe love main karta hoon) ' 2

 

Zara paas aa, mujhe kuch kehna hai - 2

Door nahin ek pal rehna hai {shourya shalini ko khicta hai apney pass}

 

 

Dekho mere itne kareeb na aao

Darr lagta hai, na haath lagaao {shalini hesitate to come but finally she comes}

 

Hmm, main hoon tera, tu hai meri

Mujhse bhi kya darrna

Chhodo tum zid karna, zid karna

Tujhe dekhke aahein bharta hoon ' 2

{shourya sits on a stone and sees shalini and sings

 

 

 

Love tujhe love main karta hoon

(Teri adaaon pe marta hoon

Love tujhe love main karta hoon) ' 2

{shourya sings this and dance}

 

{shalini comes back from dream sequence and sees wedding album and sees shourya photo}

Jab mujhe chhodke tu jaata hai - 2

Sach kehti hoon, rona aata hai

{standing in front of mirror and she sees shourya and turns around}

 

 

Ishq mein aksar yeh hota hai

Pyaar jo karta hai rota hai {shourya comes and wipes her tears} 


Chaahat ke saare gham seh loongi

Chhodoongi duniya ko

Tere dil mein reh loongi, reh loongi

Tere liye sajti sanwarti hoon - 2

{shalini sees shourya and hugs her tightly suddenly she realises that shourya is not there}

Love tujhe love main karti hoon

 

(Teri adaaon pe marta hoon

Love tujhe love main karta hoon) - 2

{shourya puts her hands on her cheeks

 

 

Tujhse bichhadne se darrti hoon - 2

Love tujhe love main karti hoon {shalini again hugs shourya}

 

(Teri adaaon pe marta hoon

Love tujhe love main karta hoon) -2 {shourya suddenly disappear and disappear}

 

Roshini comes and knocks the door.. Khayalo mey khoyi hui shalini achank sapney sey bahar aati hai aur darwaaza kholti hai..

Shalini says "arey vahini aap, aayie mujhe awaaz de deti mey aa jaati..."

Roshini says "arey kyu apni eklauti nanad key kamrey mey aaney ke kiye order thodi na dena padta hai...bhabi khudh bi aa sakti hai...."

Shalini says "ohh bhabi you are so sweet..."

Roshini says " chalo mumy, papa bula rehey hai'."

 

Roshini aur shalini goes... aayi sahib comes to madhu room.. madhu apney aansu pounch leti hai aur beith jaati hai....

 

Aayi sahib says " madhu beta hum tumsey kuch puchney aaye hai...."

Madhu says sadly "ji aayi sahib..."

Aayi sahib "waisey tumney sab kuch sun liya hai....hum puchna chahtey hai ki tumhey koi aitraaz toh nahi hai na is shaadi sey...."

Madhu says "nahi aayi sahib....jaisa aap theek samjhey...."

Aayi sahib says " jiti  raho beti tumney humhey aaj bahut badi khushi di hai...."

 

Aayi sahib hugs madhu and madhu thinks herself,,, apna har sapna todh diya hai aayi sahib aapki khushi ke liye bhau ki khushi ke liye mey kuch bi kar sakti hu... baazi toh mujse kabhi pyar karta hi nahi tha aur na jaaney mainey kya kya soch liya... lakin ab aisa nahi hoga.. ab apney dil ke saarey raastey band karkey, mey apney pariwaar ki khushi ke liye kuch bi kar jaungi...

 

 

Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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me first .....
A very emotinal updt.............Shalilni sad .........missing shourya..........good song selection............ Madhu too sad.........agrees to marriage .......thinks Baaji doesnt luv her..........OMG!!!!! what to do with this AS????????? send her fr Teerthytra................continue sooooooooooooooooooon......
Edited by ushankitvc - 13 years ago