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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks frnds for ur love and support........i will be updating soon.... so do comments frnds....


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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-17

Shaam ko naku ke aayi, baba aur seth ji pahunch jaatey hai.... Naku un sabko dekh kar bahut khush hoti hai... Uski aankho mey aansu aa jaatey hai...

Naku says "aayi kaisi hai tu... aur baba aap......"
Babi hugs naku and says "khub mast aahey, maazi porgi kasha aahey,..."      { means hum mazey mey hai, meri beti kaisi hai...."}
Naku says "mey theek hu aayi bilkul theek dekh terey samney toh hai...."
Baazi says "aey kya babi abhi ghar aayi nahi aur rona pehaley shuru ho gaya tera.... aey kaey radtey......" {kyu ro rahi hai}
Babi says "tu nahi samjhega baazi..... aaj itney din baad apni bachi ko dekh rahi hu na isliye...."
Seth ji says "taayi yeh galat baat hai tu mujhe bhul gayi mujse toh baat bi nahi ki.... bhau kaisa hai...."
Naku says "aey seth ji idher aa terko kaisey bhul sakti mey.... paagal.."
 Naku hugs sethi ji....Seth ji baazi ko dekhta hai... 
Seth ji says "baazi bhai dhinchak dhinchak and dance... kaisa hai baazi bhai.....
Baazi says 'ek dam mazey mey... par tu nahi tha aayi kasam terko apan akha dil sey yaad kiya... chal ab tu aagaya hai apan milkar dhinchak dhinchak dhinchak karengey.....

Dutta comes and sees baazi, sethji ganpat and babi....
Dutta says "kaisa aahey maushi, baba ani sethji....."
means [tum sab kaisey ho]
Ganpat says "bhau majey mey hai ek dam lakin humko na aap sabka bahut yaad aaya...
Sethi ji says " baba jhooth bol rahey bhau , yeh toh pitey rahey... khali pokat...."

everyone laughs😊😆😆......
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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-18

Naku comes to room... standing in front of window... Dutta comes and sees naku.....

Dutta says " kya baat hai naku, sab theek hai.......na?
Naku says "ha saab mey theek hai, soch rahi thi ki itni khushiya mey kaisey apney aanchal mey samet sakungi ki nahi......."
Dutta says "itna kyu soch rahi hai tu, mey hu na terey sath...."
Dutta hugs naku............
Dutta says "naku....."
Naku says "hmmm......"
Dutta says "merey sath chal..."
Naku says "lakin kaha saab...."
Dutta naku ka hath pakad kar lekar jaata hai aur dining hall sey hotey huey... Dutta naku ko gaadi mey beithata hai.... Dutta drives car....
Naku says "saab hum kaha ja rahey hai...."
Dutta chup rehta hai aur kuch nahi bolta... Naku dutta ko dekhti hai....


Dutta gaadi rokta hai.... aur dusri side sey gaadi ka darwaza kholta hai.... naku ka hath pakdta hai aur usey gaadi sey utarta hai... Naku jaisey hi gadi sey bahar nikalti hai.... Samney beach... mey ek shamiyana laga hai jaha 4 log hai jo volin baja rahey hai... aur dinner table laga hai.....

Naku says "saab yeh sab merey liye....." 
uski aakho mey ansu aa jaatey hai
Dutta says "yeh sab humarey pyar ke liye....."
Naku says "humarey pyar ke liye......"
Dutta uska hath pakdta hai aur usey lekar jaata hai... chair pe bitha deta hai...Naku dutta ko dekhti hai....

Dutta says "aisey kya dekh rahi hai...."
Naku says "aap merey sath hai bas mujhe yakin nahi hota yeh sach hai ya mera sapna......."
Dutta says "yeh sach hai.... mey tumhey itna pyar dunga ki dukh ki kahi bi koi bi parchai tumhey chu nahi sakegi......."
Naku apni chair se uper uthti hai aur dutta ki godh mey jakar beith jati hai.... apni dono baaho ko uski gardan pe daal deti hai.......
Dutta says " naku tu vaada kar ki zindagibhar mujhe aisey hi pyar karti rahegi........."
Naku says "saab agar aapke sath marna bi padey na toh bi yeh naku hastey hastey apni jaan apney pyar ke liye dedgi......."

{SOUND TRACK roshini se bharey bharey plays in background....} Dutta apna hath naku ki taraf badta hai.... naku apna hath dutta ke hath mey deti and they start couple dance.... very close to each other... Jab song khatam ho jaata hai dutta usko ek diomand ring pehnata hai... aur uske haathao mey kiss karta hai..... Naku ko phir sey hug kar leta hai....


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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-19


Dutta aur naku raat ko gaadi mey wapas patil niwas aatey hai... Kala balcony mey bahar khadi hoti hai.... she makes faces😕😡..... Dutta naku ko gadi ke bahar sey apni godh mey utha leta hai... Aur usey andher lekar jaata hai.... Phir apney kamrey ka darwaaza kholta hai... aur usey bed pe nichey lita deta hai..... usey blanket uda deta hai aur uske forehead pe kiss karta hai.......

Dutta says 'naku bahut raat ho chuki hai....chal ab so jaa.. mey bazi ko dekhkar aata hu...."
Naku dutta ki baazu pakad leti hai... Dutta naku ki taraf dekhta hai...
Dutta says "kya hua naku......"
Naku says "jaldi aana saab..."
Dutta gives smile....😆😆 dutta goes out to see baazi...
Dutta baazi ke kamrey mey jaata hai... Lakin phir ruk jaata hai...yeh kya woh madhu ko itni raat mey baazi ke kamrey mey jaata dekhta hai.... Dutta baazi ke kamrey ke bahar side mey khada ho jaata hai....

Madhu says to baazi "baazi mey tumsey kuch kehna chahti hu..."
Baazi says "arey madhu tu itni raat ko... kuch locha hua hai kya....  sab theek hai na...."
Madhu says "sab theek hai baazi lakin baat kuch aur hai...."
Baazi says "sab theek hai, ek number phir kya baata hai....."
Madhu says "woh baazi mujhe na kisi sey pyar ho gaya hai....."
Baazi says "ailaa kya baat kar rahi hai.... {hastey huey🤣}... aey madhu tera dimag toh theek hai na itni raat ko tu mujhe yeh kehney aayi.... chal yeh bata kaun hai woh dhakan..."
Madhu says "mey abhi nahi bata sakti lakin ha sahi time aaney pe tujhe uska naam bata dungi...."
Baazi says "aey madhu naam bata na yar kaeko mera khopda ghumle li hai..."
Madhu says "baazi mujhe bas itna hi kehna tha....."
Madhu yeh kehkar chali jaati hai... baazi apna seer khujlata hai.... dutta madhu ko jaatey dekhta hai aur phir baazi ki taraf dekhta hai aur chala jaata hai....

Dutta hall sey gujar raha hota hai ki tabhi pichey achank sey koi aata hai aur dutta ko goli maar deta hai...😲......😲.....😲... Dutta pichey mudh mudh kar dekhta hai.... nakabposh insaan ka chehra dikhta nahi hai....Naku zor sey chilati hai...."saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab"

Dutta says " naku kya hua.... mey yahi hu....."
naku ke chehrey pe pasina hi pasina aa jaata hai....
Dutta says "naku tu theek hai na......"
Dutta light on karta hai...usey paani ka glass deta hai... usko hug kar leta hai... Naku start shivering and faints... Dutta sees naku bihosh ho gayi hai...dutta is shocked to see this😲... dutta calls aayi, babi, baazi and everyone....Dutta comes to naku...

Dutta says "naku naku hosh mey aaya naku...."
Dutta calls doctor... everyone comes

Aayi sahib says "kaey jaala aahey... naku ko kya hua........."
Babi says "naku meri bachi... kya hua bhau isey....."
Kala sees as usual... leela and roop comes........
Baazi says "bhau doctor aa gayi hai...."

Doctor comes and say to go out from room...as i have to check patient....

after 15 min doctor comes and says "gabraney ki koi baat nahi hai patient bas sadmey hai shayad dar gayi hai... mainey injection de diya hai.. doctor says to dutta "kal aap inhey mery clinic le aayiye inka kuch check up karna.... dutta nods his head....

Everyone got worried....doctor leaves from the patil niwas....









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shally_m
Shally @shally_m Goldie
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 3 Visit Streak 30 0
Posted: 13 years ago

well written .... please continue

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ushankitvc
usha @ushankitvc IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice updts..........updt soooon.............
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mIsHeZ.x
mIsHeZ.x @mIsHeZ.x IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

gr8 updatez hun!! yeahh D finali acceptd N..i wz worid dat mayb he'l 4gt n ignor stf lyk he dus in da show lol😆 bt thnk god hez hapy bou it...awh da diner d8 wz soo romantic...D toh majnu ban gaya 😆 ..madhu tld baaji n D heard..y ddn she tel dat she luvz hm..mayb cz she wntz baaji 2 realiz it hmself bt he actd so nrml i expctd hm 2 b abit worid incase he wsnt da 1 madhu luvd ...omg thnk god it wz a nytmare...i fote it wz real at 1st..is preggy of suma lol hehe bt den agen da doc shudv tld inh lol..btw cn u plz add me 2 ur pm list..continue soon.xx

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Sophia21
Sophia Khan @Sophia21 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 15 Group Promotion 5 + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

Great update kajal... Hailaaa yeh nakku ko kya hogaya... i hope she's fine..

Lool Madhu is in love with Baaji.. Woohoo.. n gadha #2 didnt even realise lol... bechari madhu...
Their beach date was awesome.. awww Dutta was so cute...
Continue soon..
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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u so much frnds... I have added u mishe.x sry i pronouced it wrong.... thanks shallymaan, and sophie........ and to all the fans of laagi tujse lagan



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imkt
kajal @imkt IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Next Part-20

Scene Subah se Shuru hota hai.... Dutta kahi janey ki tayari kar raha hota hai.... Naku ki aankh khulti hai.... Naki dutta ko dekhti hai aur dutta naku ko... She gives smile😊... Dutta Naku ke pass aata hai...

Dutta says" ab tabiyat kaisi hai teri...."
Naku says "mey abhi theek hai saab......aap kahi ja rahey hai saab....."
Dutta says "akeley nahi ja raha hu...tu bi merey sath ja rahi hai...."
Naku says "lakin hum kaha ja rahey hai.... saab...."
Dutta says "hmm hum ja rahey hai hospital....."
Naku says " saab abhi mey ek dam theek hai....mey hospital nahi jaayegi saab...."
Dutta naku ke kandhey pe hath rakhta hai..... uski ek baaju kandhey pe aur dusra hath naku ke chehrey pe...woh uske baal side karta hai aur uska hath uske gaal pe rakhta hai........

Dutta says" dekh naku teri tabiyat theek nahi...isliye doctor ke pass toh jaana padega na.... kal raat mey bahut daar gaya tha.... tumari aisi haalat dekh kar....."
Naku says "saab mey janti ki aap pareshan ho gaye they...lakin abhi mey theek hai hai na....mujhe kuch nahi hua hai......."
Dutta says "shhhh... ab tu chup kar aur meri baat sun... jaana zaruri hai..aur mey kuch nahi sunuga......"
Dutta naku ka hath padta hai aur usey washroom lekar jaata hai....bahar sey darwaza band karta hai.... aur smile karta hai....😃... Naku bahar aati hai..... she wore a light purple saree with golden embroiderery in it... She looks beautiful.... They both go down...

Aayi sahib says "dutta aur naku kaha ja rahey ho....."
Baazi says "bhau aaj to aap ek dam raapich dik rahey hai... vahini toh ek dam mast.... aap kisi shaadi mey ja rahey kar...."
Dutta says "chup kar baazi...teri nautaki phir se shuru ho gayi hai.... aayi hum hospital ja rahey hai........"
Aayi sahib says "ho porga...dhyan se jaana...aayi jagdambey tumdono ki raksha karey......"
Baazi says"bhau mey gaadi nikalata...aap aao..."
Dutta says "hmmm..."
Kala says "sabal kar jaana tum dono...zamana bahut kharab hai...😡"
Dutta says "ji taayi......"

Dutta and naku goes away and kala makes faces with anger........

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