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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats on ur new FF........I just read the 3 parts............nice updt ...........plz do continue.......Best of luck

Jst read the 4th part too.............Evil kala .........notready to even spare her own sis Roops....

luved it...................

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kajal

@imkt

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Next Part-5

Dutta kamrey mey apney bed par leta hua soch raha hai...... Naku kamrey mey aati hai aur bhau ko dekhti hai aur kehti hai "sahib aap kya soch rahey hai....." Dutta says "kuch nahi naku......." Naku says "kuch toh soch rahey hai aap mujeh nahi batayengey....." Dutta gusey mey 😡 mey chilakar " ek baar samaj nahi aata tujhe naku mainey kya kaha kuch nahi soch raha mey, kyu baar baar mujse puch rahi hu.........."Naku starts crying😭... Dutta sees naku crying for a minute.... and come close to naku usey apni baaho bhar key kehta hai " aeeey naku, bura laga mera chilaana..... bahut gussa aa raha hai na mujh par......"Naku sees dutta and says "nahi sahib mey isliye nahi ro rahi ki aap mujh par chilaye balki isliye ro rahi hu ki aap takleef mey hai pareshan lakin mey aapki takleef nahi samaj sakti......... Dutta sees 😊 naku and kisses her forehead....

Madhu baazi sey kehti hai "aeey baazi mujhe baraf ka gola khaaney ka..."Baazi says "aey dhakan hiley li kya gola bi khaney ki cheez hai mey terko yaha ki special ragada markar paani puri khilaata jo tuney purey lonadon mey nahi khai hogi........."Madhu says "aisa kya, chal khaatey hai....." Baazi dukandar ke pass jaata hai aur bolta hai " kaka doha pani puri cha plate ek dam special ragada markar.........." Madhu says " baazi tu is theley pe paani puri khaata hai......" baazi says " ha kyu ismey kya gala hai".... baazi pani puri khaaney lagta hai....

Madhu sees baazi while eating paani puri...........😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

Why is Dutta bhaving so short tempered with Nakku?????? madhu luvs baaji...........updt soooooon.........

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kajal

@imkt

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Part-6

Baazi madhu ko ghar wapas lekar aata hai.... Madhu sey kehta hai "aey madhu aaj majaa aaya na ek dam rapsick.... Madhu hastey huey 😆... "ha baazi aaj bahut maaza aaya...." kala saamney sey aati hai " arey madhu zara sambhalkar kahi mazey leney ke chakar mey gir na jau, kyu baazi......." Baazi kala sey kehta hai "ho tayi"... aur chala jaata hai...... Madhu chali jaati hai.... kala hasti hai😆.....

Madhu apney kamrey mey jaati aur yaad karti hai baazi ke sath bitaya hua time yaad karti hai... Naku madhu ke pass aati hai aur kehti hai "madhu kya baat hai itni khush toh pehaley kabhi nahi dekh............."Madhu says " vahini aaj mey bahut khush hu aaj mey bahar gumi aur mainey bahut maza kiya..... aapko bi aana chahiye tha......." Naku says "tu pehaley bi bahar gayi hai lakin tab toh tujhe itna khush nahi dekha mainey........"Madhu says "ohh vahini aisa nahi hai mey bas khush hu......."Naku says "acha chal ab so ja bahut thak gayi hai na tu.......

Leela kala sey kehti hai "tayi aakhir tumarey dimag mey kya chal raha hai roops aur baazi shadi karwa kar aapko kya milney waala hai........ kaha humari behan aur kaha woh naukar.... kala hastey huey kehti hai "leela tu chinta mat kar mey roops ke liye lye jo kuch bi soch rhi hu........ theek hai....." Leela roops ko dekhti rehti hai............" Dutta kamrey mey beitha apni aur naku ki tasveer dekh raha hota hai...... naku kehti hai " sahib kya dekh rahey hai........... meri tasveer.... mey toh aapke dil mey hu mujhe tasveero mey kyu dundh rahey hai........."

Naku kamrey mey aati hai.... Dutta photo nichey rakh deta hai.... Dutta naku dekhta hai aur kehta hai "naku mujhe tumsey kuch kehna hai...Naku says "ji sahib kya baat hai..... Dutta "woh naku mey soch raha tha ki kyu na hum baazi aur roops ki shaadi karwa dey.... kala taayi bi yahi chahti hai.... Naku is shocked to listen this..........😲.... Naku says " lakin sahib aapko ek baar baazi sey puch lena chahiye.........😲... Dutta says " mey baazi ko achey sey janta hu woh mujhe manaa nahi karega.... waisey bi baazi mera doat kam bhai jayada hai uske woh roops ko bahut khush rakhega....."

Naku sees dutta with shocked eyes😲😲😲.........

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kiran255

@kiran255

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

welcome to the forum

nice story

keep writing

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Shally

@shally_m

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

welcome dear

ff seems interesting , please continue

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568986

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

hey welcum 2 da forum hun 🤗

ya ff seemz rli intrestin 👍🏼..do continue soon.x

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kajal

@imkt

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Next Part-7

Madhu is sitting on her bed and dreaming 😍 about baazi.... Naku madhu ke kamrey mey aati hai aur kehti hai thoda sa jhinjhodtey huey " madhu kya hua tujhe......"Madhu says "nako vahini....."Naku samaj jaati hai ki woh baazi sey pyar karney lagi bad usey is baat ka ehsaas nahi hai.... Naku madhu sey kehti hai "madhu kyu tu baazi ko pasand karti hai....." Madhu sharama jaati hai☺️... and she says "pata nahi vahini par mujhe baazi ke sath rehna acha lagta hai... woh jab bi merey pass hota hai tok aisa lagta hai ki mey hawa mey udh rahi hu......{wow👏 too much baby}.... Naku says "acha toh yeh baat hai😊.... toh tujhe baazi pasand hai😛.... mey baat karu usey..." Madhu gives smiles😊.....

Baazi gate ke pass khada hokar ek guard ko kehta hai "aey ramesh key jaala aahey....... tujha jhopna aaley ka....." {😉 means aey ramesh kya kar raha hai.... soney ko aaya kya....}Tabhi naku comes and says to baazi "chal kuch khaa ley......." Chaltey chaltey naku baazi se puchti hai "baazi kal tu aur madhu ghumney ko gaya khubh masti hoga hai na........." Baazi says "ho vahini khubh masti kiya apan ney, apni madhu hai na ek dam hateli hai... kehti hai "baazi tu theley pe paani puri khaata kya......" Mey bi ek dam rapich bola " aey madhu mumbai ki pani puri bahut jhakaas hai.." Naku gives smile😊...... Naku says "baazi ab toh terey bhau ki shaadi ho gayi hai ab tujhe bi shaadi kar leni chahiye taki mey bi usko vahini bol saku......

Baazi sees naku 😆.... and says "aey naku tu kya bol rahi hai mey kaisey shaadi kar sakta... apan toh yeh bi nahi janta ki koi mujhe jasey halcut sey koi pyar bi karegi ki nahi jaisey tu bhau sey karti hai {hmmm oooo baazi u r shooo cuteee😆 bt time will cme wen u hve to choose between madhu and roops...... till then wait dear}.... Naku 😊 says "kyu nahi karegi pyar tujse terey dil ko bi padney wali ek din zarur milegi tujhe aisa teri vahini ka vishwas hai.........{ vahini aur devar ka pyar😊😊😊 oey maar sutaya oey hoey.....} Baazi sees naku and gives smile😃... Naku says " ab chaley warna dil ko padhney wali toh nahi but ha aayi sahib danda lekar zarur aa jayegi......"

Baazi and naku goes.....

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568986

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Posted: 13 years ago

awhh rli sweet update hun..rli lyk convo b/n naku n baaji..hope baaji pikz madhu...baaji rli desrvz a person much bta den roops..

continue soon.xx

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kajal

@imkt

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

😊NEXT PART-8

Scene sab dinning table par baithey hai..... Naku aur baazi aatey hai....Aayi sahib says " ikdey aa baazi, ithey basa......"Baazi says " ho aayi sahib...." {means yaha par aao baazi, yaha baitho, baazi says "ji aayi sahib......"}...Dutta comes and gives smiles to everyone.... Dutta says to aayi sahib "aayi, mey soch raha tha ki ab humhey ab roops ki shadi ke baarey mey sochna chahiye... waisey bi uski college ki padhai ab khatam ho chuki hai...."... Aayi sahib gives smiles😊 and says " ha lakin koi porga {boy} bi toh hona chahiye... tumari nazar mey koi hai kya......" Dutta sees to baazi and says "ho aayi, ladhka toh hai.. bas baat karna baaki hai....." Naku sees baazi and then madhu... she start thinking something and interrupts between and says "aayi sahib roop tayi se pehaley toh madhu tayi ka lagan hona chahiye na aakhir woh bi toh is pariwar ki sadasya hai...... Kala sees naku with 😡 angry looks.........

Aayi sahin says 😊"tu ek dam sahi bol rahi hai naku waisey bi dutta roopmati ki shadi sey pehaley madhu ke baarey mey sochna padge na, yeh terey baba ki aakhri icha thi............." Dutta becomes silent for a min and says "kyu na hum dono ka lagan ek hi mandap mey kar wa dey aayi sahib......👏..." Aayi sahib gives smile😊 and says "mi parat vichar kaarun {hum is par vichar kartey hai} aur ha madhu sey hum baat karengey...... Naku sees kala and gives smile😊... {silent war between kala and naku👏😡}..

Kala sees naku with angry smile😡😊...........

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