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Part 2

Previously; As I took the duptta away.....

 Clearing her vision to see who this person was, the first immediate thing caught her attention was his dark browns eyes; the sheer sparkling purity shone brightly gazing at her, his dark brown hair and his muscular body would send anyone crazy. Her heart began tossing and turning with difficult emotions to describe. She wasn't scared but shyness took over her body, she clutched the duptta holding it near, lowering her gaze afraid of losing her heart, she slowly began to walk away from him, his eyes followed her. She had only taken few steps away when his hand held her wrist, at his touch, she gasped, this new feeling had come awake inside my heart, she twisted her hand trying to free herself from him.

Her beauty would bruise any men's heart, every step of hers made him feel as if stopping her was his duty, holding her wrist, hearing her gasp made him shake with excite, he began to pull her closer. The fear on her face was evident, her eyes skimming his face with great deal of attention piercing his heart at the sight of her; he smiled in spite of himself.

His face looked familiar, she couldn't figure where she had seen him her eyes fixed on his face unaware of his eyes piercing through her but soon she dragged those thoughts behind her as his smile caught her attention, immediately lowering her eyes, she blushed, she tried to let go of his hold around her waist but struggled as his arms were settled on holding her tightly. She wasn't scared rather nervous, in his arms she felt different.

She spoke uttering 'Please let go of me" at that instance he realized that he was holding her securely; he let go of her, she distanced herself,  he apologized for his act unable to support his actions to why he had done that, she whispered a slow "it's ok" walking slowly away. His heart felt heavy seeing her leave he yelled out "Rahul".

His deep voice made her stop at her track's, she turned around smiled and replied "Ridhimma" to only see him smile like mad man. She run as fast as she could to her house before the nervous atmosphere got the better of her, she run smiling and arousing a happy feeling inside of herself.


~*1 Month later*~

She walked lifeless alongside the road, her long hair out draping on her chest , her white shalwar and kameez tightly hugging her figure, her duppta touching the road dragging itself along with her body, she clutched on the letter firmly, her hazel eyes moist as the tears beamed down her tear stained face. Her heart cried, her body shook in denial unable to digest the fact that he left her, just like that, a month their shared sneaking around, falling in love, admitting their love for each other, he took it all; everything! leaving her alone with pain and the fact he left.

She cursed that they still love each other despite that he left her all alone to only bare the pain of their seperation, she wiped her tears as she reached her small house, she stood there at the brown faded door. The tears she wiped returned to fall out of her hazel eyes, the pain was beaming across her heart, and she was absolutely mesmerized by the fact Rahul is gone & out of her ife. She entered her house wiping the tears, run across to her room putting away the letter than burying her head in her hands crying her heart out.

A week had past, the pain still unhealed, she barely ate, talked or paid attention to herself or anyone else, her father realizing all this was unable to put his finger on what was happening in her life, she seemed so shattered and lost all the time & shashank hated the fact that her smile had disappeared.

Few weeks went like seconds, no change in her behaviour had occurred. Shashank had left to visit Imran Malik a week ago, she was waiting for his return tonight, the only thing that reared a slight happiness within her was her father, a knock brought of her thoughts, she run across the door opening it wide, there stood Shashank with the biggest smile attached on his face, she hugged him immediately.

Dinner had now finished, shashank looked at her somewhat scared, she knew he wanted to ask her something; she held his hand tight and forced herself to smile; although it was a fake smile shashank looked at her deep in thought smiling for him, he let out a whisper, which she didn't hear; she asked him to repeat it. He spoke louder " Ridhimma beta, kya up khush ho?" taken back by her father's word she nodded to reassure her father that she was fine; she didn't want her father to know about Rahul and her heartbreak, she lied to keep him happy.

He nodded with a smile, as she stood up from the table to take away the dishes, he clutched her wrist tight speaking through his eyes, indicating for her to sit, she done as she was told, her eyes lowered waiting for him to speak. "Beti, you have all grown up now, tonight I am asking for the biggest gift you can give your father", she looked at her father unable to understand his intentions, she squeezed his hand saying " Up ke liye kuch be papa" his smile widened he continued " Armaan se Shaadi Karlo beta", she immediately let go of his hand, her mind and heart yelling Rahul's name, the pain that seemed to decrease at her fathers appearance reoccurred wounding her deeply, her eyes fighting with tears she merely whispered "Armaan?" , "woh Imran ka beta hai, his full name being Armaan Malik" at that instance she wanted to cry, she didn't have the chance her dad hadn't realized the pain that she was giving through he continued to speak, she just looked at him shocked and hurt, she shrugged of the agony that screamed at her seeing her dad being so happy at the thought of her marrying his best friends son.

A few minutes of her dads consistent talk about her marriage to Armaan, Shashank looked at her, her eyes seemed moist, she seemed to be stuck in the same pose when he had told her about the news, he sighed seeing no reaction from her, he squeezed her hand and spoke calmly "Ridhimma beti, kya up upnay papa ko yeh gift daygi?". His words broke her dilemma of what to do, she looked upto his eyes to see them twinkling with joy; she nodded forcing herself. He jumped in joy hugging her tightly. She excused herself to her room with tears in her eyes.

Meanwhile shashank immediately rang Imran to express his happiness that they are finally going to be in-laws. As Imran who put down the phone down, he called out for a servant to wake his son up, who had arrived from Australia to India just yesterday.

Walking down the stairs in his trackies and a black short sleeved t-shirt clinging tight on his muscled body, the girl servants gasped at his presence, his blue eyes skimming the Malik Mansion with his dimpled smile.

hey guys, i finally updated this FF, ok so I wanted to finish RR's lovestory quickly and bring on AR ahaaLOL , Please do leave a comment would love to know ur thoughts! Thank you to all who commented and liked.Priyanka

Edited by Kajenrsmecxi - 26 February 2011 at 5:36pm

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AMMY12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Nice part frnd.
Ur cncpt is sup.
Thanx for the pm.
Update nxt part soon.

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Rapunzzel Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
awesome part.........
continue sooon...

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Amoon.88 Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
lovely part!!!
lobed it...
nw as RR will b gr8 2 raed AR....story..
thnx 4 da pm

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged

nw that was amazing..........

poor ridz...hw rahul can just left her...

bt nw she is gonna marry just for the sake of her father.......

loved armi's entry.......

thnx for the pm...........

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vidu87 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged

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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Hey priyanka........just loved ur concept yaar.....thank you sooo much for the PM......I just read both the part and must say I just loved itClap......thanksss for bringing the AR trackSmile......waiting for the nxt do continue soon.....

take care

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qt4ever Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Nyc part
bas AR ko separate mat karna end tak...
Thanx 4 pm

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