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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
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heyyy dear,
nice part
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Part 5

Previously; A tear plunged as she thought she could never be his, only bear his name; Ridhimma Armaan Malik.

The sound of water splashing woke her up, for a mere second unknown to where she is, she sat up in her red bridal lengha, capturing the sight of her new room, her eyes immediately fell on the couch, seeing him not there scared her, she got up hurriedly in hope to see him in other corner of the room, he wasn't there, a thousand emotions reached her in a matter of seconds;  she stood there rooted to the ground her heart sank, she was scared of losing him.

*splash splash* the sound reached her ears and then she recognized he was in the shower, oblivious of the tear that had run in her face; she hit her head lightly for her stupidity. She dusted off all her inner turmoils and began taking off her heavy clothing and jewellery. She dressed herself in a simple red saree and sat there in her makeup table that consisted of a huge mirror, staring at her image, her hair tied in a bun, her makeup light, her red saree sitting perfectly in her figure; she saw her spitting image but this was not who she was. Her face had lost the glow of happiness; she just stared as if it was someone else, someone who she failed to recognize, everything in her life had taken such immediate directions and decisions that in them she lost herself.

She stared back at her reflection unable to take her eyes of her counterfeit image lost in thought about her life. Rahul, Armaan, Rahul, Armaan, Rahul, Armaan these two names bursting in her mind constantly, she couldn't take it anymore, she took her gaze of her image, distracting herself with the mangulasthura that laid on the table, she just stared at for a while before taking to initiative to tie it around her neck, she took it in her hands and began placing it in her neck as she lifted her gaze back to the mirror, she stopped struggling with her mngulasthura to be tied.

As her eyes fell on his image in the mirror, his bare toned chest, his immense muscles beaming, water dripping from his wet hair falling onto his abs, his jeans clinging in his legs and a black t-shirt which he was covering himself in, she was lost in him not budging her eyes from his through the mirror. She immediately lowered her gaze as he took steps towards her direction, her breathing heavily increased, her heart screaming in nervousness, she closed her eyes as she could feel his presence very close to her.

During this she did not realize that her hands were still in the same position; trying to tie her mangulsthrua, she opened her eyes as his hands were touching hers, she snatched down her hands, while he tied the mangulsthrua, he bend over her shoulder, his face inches away from hers, she could feel his hot breath stinging her face, she looked dazed at him, he smiled dubbing his finger tip in the sindoor that was placed on the table.

His eyes fixed on hers, they gazed each other viewing each other's images through their crystal clear eyes, his hand made its way up to her maang where in a swift motion he placed the bright red sindoor on her maang, she closed her eyes as his face neared her ear while his hand on her hair, he took her hair out of the bun while whispering "You look better with your hair out". Her heart aching nervously, she seemed to be out of breath by the close-approximately, she remained entrenched in her seat, her eyes shut and his breaths itching her emotions that she sought to run away from.

He smiled seeing her shut her eyes in utter nervousness, her rosy lips were trembling, she looked beautiful more than ever, right now, her innocence had him compelled making him stare at her in absolute admiration. Seeing her uncomfortable at his closeness, he slowly stepped back grinning at the effect he had on her.

She slowly opened her eyes as she could feel him moving away, astonished by the effect he was creating within her, she just stared at his mischievous grin on his face and his descending figure, and she couldn't help but stare. Her eyes following him, while her mouth slight open, her heart racing and her hands shaking terribly, he closed the door shut making her jump.

As he closed the door, run his hands through his dark locks, dealing with the fact what he done to her, he is being more and more drawn to her. He cursed himself for his act unable to understand why he done what he did. Yes she was beautiful he couldn't deny that fact, maybe its lust? he questioned himself, his body unconsciously shook his head knowing very well that's not the reason. He has never felt anything as big as he does for her, he couldn't pin down what they named these feelings.

He needs to go out, being in ghunia had a profound effect in him, he observed life from a complete different light, but saying that he did miss Delhi and its nightlife, he just needs to get in regular routine that's all, that's why he is acting like that with her he concluded while making his way to the huge lounge.
 
She diverted her attention at her image, her face pale, her lips faintly trembling, she took her shaking hand and touched her maang filled with sindoor and her mangulshutra tied by Armaan. Her heart felt happy and in peace in months as a smile was about to be painted in her lips Rahul's word rang in her ear "I will fill your maang with sindoor and tie a manglasthrua in your neck", she went more pale at the thought of the many promises Rahul proposed, the ironic thing was that each and every one Armaan had fulfilled.
 
The incident replaying in her eyes, she went downstairs with butterflies swimming in her stomach, walking down the stairs, the huge size of the mansion dawned on her, if such big houses ever existed always doubted in her mind, but setting foot in Malik Mansions cleared all her doubts. She made her way to the dining room where a huge dining table was set, to find no one, she went to the kitchen to find 5 maids preparing breakfast and she nervously went towards them trying to help them.
 
All the maids denied her requests to help sending her away to the lounge where Armaan was, she knocked at the door, her head lowered, her cheeks burning at the thought of what happened in their room. Armaan seeing her there jumped nervously, a big smile plastered in his face, seeing Armaan's reaction Imran couldn't help but laugh.       
 
"Ridhimma beta, you don't have to knock, come in", she went inside the room taking Imran's blessing while saying a shy "Ji papa" Imran went on saying that shashank called saying he had reached safely at Ghunia. A wave of sadness took over her making her the more aware of everyone and everything and the fact now she is Ridhimma Malik. Seeing her disheartened Armaan felt remorse in him. Imran not noticing the sudden change in her, continued saying "beti, I am going to America for few months for some important business deals, if you ever feel like visiting your father just ask this baddhu here" he pointed towards armaan. She smiled faintly but the thought spending few months alone with Armaan made her rather uncontrollably nervous, she glanced at Armaan who seemed lost in his thoughts.
 
 
Yea, here is part 5, Ok please tell me what you think of it and if u think i could improve this FF in any way please let me know. From now on you will see more AR moments. Read, like & comment :)
please ignore spelling/ grammer mistakes havent checked it yet hehe (Tooo Lazy)


Edited by Kajenrsmecxi - 26 February 2011 at 5:39pm

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Dear Priyanka Ji,
Suniye ji LOLLOL Aap Armaan aur Riddhima ko door na kare.Pluease.Unhe ek doosre se pyaar hone de.Pluej.Ok,enough of my bakwaas.To stress the word,I have used two different spellings of 'Please' so that u understand,how badly I want AR to fall in love ( or Riddhima rather,because Armaan seems to have fallen already-DHAP!LOL) The Story is FAB! Ofcourse it'll be-it's written by you na,that's why.This part was WWWOOwww...Totally...I love when you put AR moments...just gives 10 stars to the part! Hehehe!LOL
Update soooooon!
Love,
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged

Hi dear……the part was just awesome as alwaysClap….Loved every bit of it…the short moment between AR is very cute and adorable….waiting for more and more AR MOMENTS….So continue soon…..thanks for the PM….take care….

 

Lots of Love

GEET

 

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged

simply awsum...

beautiful part...

hope AR enjoy these few months alone...

n get to knw each other better...

thnx for the pm................

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