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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by 00123trisha

hey guys
i've read the 1st parts & now read the last one
Akhi,the jungle part was so much funLOL
gud working guysClap
i'll surely read the whole part

welcme trishuu...
tum kaunse part par pohchi??
part number?
9th part complete
now going to read next parts

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by 00123trisha

hey guys
i've read the 1st parts & now read the last one
Akhi,the jungle part was so much funLOL
gud working guysClap
i'll surely read the whole part

welcme trishuu...
tum kaunse part par pohchi??
part number?
9th part complete
now going to read next parts

yay..
jaldi jaldi..
aur jitna padho, yaahaan aake comment karo....
we forgot whatever we wrote na.. is liye
:P
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by 00123trisha

Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by 00123trisha

hey guys
i've read the 1st parts & now read the last one
Akhi,the jungle part was so much funLOL
gud working guysClap
i'll surely read the whole part

welcme trishuu...
tum kaunse part par pohchi??
part number?
9th part complete
now going to read next parts

yay..
jaldi jaldi..
aur jitna padho, yaahaan aake comment karo....
we forgot whatever we wrote na.. is liye
:P
okey....Big smile
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged

Part 149

 

The next morning in the canteen.


"three cheers for remix!!  Wooooahhhhh!!" the whole class shouted above their breath.. "REMIX ROCKS!!! REMIX ROCKS!! REMIX ROCKS!!"

"and guys guys' can we have three cheers for our manager too.. he helped us in our ups and downs, he was there with us throughout!!" said yuvi

"3 cheers for kabeer!! Hip-hip"

"HURRAY!"

"alright guys, I guess we need to go.. itna chillayenge toh jumbo pakka aa jayega.. tomorrws Sunday, so guys enjoy your Sunday! Keep remixing" said ashi.

 

After a while in the shed


ashi was patiently waiting for yuvi. They were to go out to celebrate this victory, but this was taking him more time then she thought he would. He was almost an hour late now.

"psycho, dumbo, idiot.. phone bhi nahi utha raha.. bolna hi nahi chahiye tha ki we r going out. Yeh toh ladkiyon se zyaada time leta hai." She cursed him till she saw him enter the shed.

 "yuvi, ab kyun aaye ho? Ab hamein kaheen nahi jaana."

"kyun ashi?"

"kyunki mein tumhein pehchaan nahi paa rahi hoon, tumhare make-up ke wajah se tum different lag rahe ho na isliye."

"kya? Make-up? Kaisa make-up" he touched his face.

"aur nahi toh kya, tumhein itni der aur kis cheez ke liye lagi? Tia ka make-up churaya ya khud khareeda?"

"ashi, dad aaye the" he sat down

"haan, phir bhi.. kya? Yashwant uncle aaye the?" she sat next to him and kept her hand on his shoulder. "kya kahaa uncle ne?"

"kuch nahi, bas kaha that he has lost both his sons and his wife, and cannot afford to lose me. He is okay with my music, and the best ashi.. he is okay with you.. he just wants me to concentrate on my studies as well. Ashi am so happy, my life is turning out to be so goo, and its all because of you" he kept his head on her lap as she played with his long curls.

She smile, "duh uh uv, maine kya kiya.. its all what you have done, you stood for yourself, and you got what you wanted."

"nahi ashi.. its all because of you, I stood for myself wen I was asked to leave you' and I didn't do tht for my music, you gave me the courage to fight for my dreams, to make the band again and to play in the concert again. And the best part ashi, my biggest possession, I got that too because of you."

Ashi narrowed her eyes , "what??"

"yes..YOU!! You made me fall in love with you, and you are the reason why I love you.. you're my biggest possession ashi.. I have you, because of you."

Ashi looked at him for a while, touched his forhead, "yuvi.. tum sach mein psycho ho!"

"haan hoon" he got up, "par sirf tumhare case mein"

Ashi rolled her eyes as she was being cuddled by yuvi, "yuvi, chalo chaltein hai.. kya make-up touch ups karne ke liye rukhein hai?" she giggled.

"ofcourse.. thoda touch up toh dena hoga na,, kitna time hogaya hai.. I guess zyaada kuch nahi karna hai, bas blush lagana hai" ashi looked at him as if he had solved a difficult math sum verbally, till their lips brushed each other as she could feel the hair at her back race up and down at his first touch. Her stomach fluttered delicately as she could taste the sweetest scent of his lips. She looked at him and blushed deeply.

"perfect.. itna blush kaafi hai na?" he grinned.

"nahi" she said and kissed him back.

It had been a while now since they were in the shed. It was time for them to leave. Ashi forcefully pushed yuvi out of the shed with herself when she got a call from her mom.

Ashi- haan mamma

Soniya- shona, kahaaan ho?

Ashi- duh uh mamma, aur kahaan hongi? Skool mein hi hoon.

Soniya- mamam, plz zyaada sawaal mat karna, bahar driver khada hai, uske saath jaldi ghar aa jaao, and its damn serious shona.. understand..

Ashi- alrite mamma. Bye

She looked at yuvi who was all ready to spend some more time with her. She told her bout the call and yuvi knew wht urgent work it was. He didn't mind at all and dropped her till the gate and bid her good-bye

 

Evening- in the canteen


Yuvi- "ranveer, yeh kya hai, ashi phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai" (dialing her number again)

Ranveer- "haan, aur tia ka phone switched off hai.. pata nahi dono kya kya haal hoga ashi ke ghar.. aapko toh pata hai na, ke who dono ek doosreki shakal bhi bardash nahi kar sakte.."

Yuvi- "ur right dude, am sure soniya aunty ne in donoko sach bata diya hoga, and am sure ashi ne ne tia ka murder karkekhud suicide kar liya hoga"

Ranveer (tensed)- "haan banna, tabhi toh ashi ka fone baj raha hai, par who utha nahi rahi.. aur tia ka fone toh switched off hai.."

Yuvi- "mujhe lagta hai, humein ashi ke ghar jaake dekhna chahiye"

Ranveer- "itni raat ko? Kaise?"

Yuvi- "mujhe pata hai' come.. lets go!"

It was quite late as ranveer had mentioned, but yuvi was adamant. They stood below ashi's house and looked up to the window. They managed climbing the pipes and got into the room.

Yuvi (whispering)- "room mein bhi andhera? Ashi itni jaldi nahi soti"

Ranveer (whispering back)- "kiska room hai yeh"

When the lights wer turned on and they looked at the familiar face

"yuvi? Ranveer? tum dono is waqt yahaan kya kar rahe ho?"

"err.. woh"

"YUVI?? RANVEER?? TUM DONO IS WAQT YAHAAN KYA KAR RAHE HO?"

Soniya-"uff ffoo makheeja, kaa mein mat chillao, meine bhi yahi poocha, but thoda civilized hokar."

Sumeet- "ugh, who soniya, meine aawaaze suni toh mein aa gaya" (looks at the boys) "maine kuch poocha tum dono se"

Soniya (looks at sumeets temper, rolls her eyes)- "mr. cement.. ye dono tia aur ashi se milne aaye hai"

(both nod their heads)

Soniya- "jaao boys, go meet them"

Sumeet- "magar.."

Soniya- "bahar se right"

Sumeet- "par?!??!?!"

Soniya- "dono ashi ke room mein hi hai"

Sumit- "lekin soniya?"

Soniya (smiling while the boys left)- "sumeet.. let it go.. trust me.. I know what am doing."

 

Outside ashi's room


Ranveer- "banna, dekhiye, door is also locked, and I do kot hear any noises.. am so sure there is some problem inside."

Yuvi- "wht do u think.. should I knock or get in through this window?"



Edited by elizaa - 10 March 2011 at 4:26pm

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Liz, an awesome part once again! Hug

Aww, the gang scene! I so miss those scenes.. We'll never get to see those scenes again without Aman, MP and Nakool. Unhappy Anyway, me loved this .. I was missing Kabir, he's back.. here too, and in PKYEK too! Big smileDancing

Ahaa, AY! Tia ka make up churaaya ya khud ka khareeda? LOL I so love Ashi!! And I loved Yuvi here, the adorable lovey Yuvi, awwieee! Embarrassed And Ashi rolling her eyes.. tum kitne bade psycho!! And he's like.. haan, sirf tumhaare liye. Embarrassed

Ahahahahaha, Sonia and Sumeet! Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho? TUM YAHAAN KYA KAR RAHE HO? Maine bhi toh vahi poocha..bas thode civilised manner mein! ROFL Ashi ne Tia ka murder kar diya..and khud suicide kar liya, tabhi Tia ka phone switched off hai and Ashi phone nahi utha rahi! LOLLOL I love this, I LOVE this! LOL 

Next part mein I know what to do. ;D Mastttttttttttttttttt partttttttttt, btw. :P

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Originally posted by elizaa

part 10


pataoing her was gonna be tough.. really tough..

but he had to do it, coz he had to teach a lesson to meher, his ex, he had to show her tht if she cld double date him with sid, he cld also patao any damn girl in a few hrs..

he chose miss anvesha ray banerjee this time.. no such reason y he chose her, it was just a feeling tht made him want her to be tht girl..

he was all okay with taking the shit shi gave him in the strt, but her nt responding to him being mr Y.D'S son was nt at all tht pleased him>>

"heyy tia!!!" he entered the room pushing ashi!!

"heyy uv!!! hw r u??" said tia doing her makeup touchups!!

"tia, meet ashi, miss anvesha ray banerjee!! woh hai na apni soniya ray>>> woh actress, unhi ki beti hai, and ur new roomie as u can see!"

"oh tia's god! tia jaanti hai, look at her mom, and look at this junk head...kitna diff hai"

"hello, mrs tamatar!! khair chodo, ill deal will ur little height later, and u.. u mister uvraj dev.. or whtever!!" pouncing on our poor uv 

"wht do u mean by, woh apni actress?? oh, who cares wht u mean, tumhare peanut size brain mein kya chal raha hoga, who cares>>> and btw, my actress mom, wht has she got to do with hw i am like??"

narrowing her eyes looking at him!!

"ohh!!! nw i get it>>>> yeh hai apne corrupt polititian ke bete, yashwant dev ke bete" shouting on top of her voice

"yuvraaaaaj dev!! and, he wants to be knwn as tht, and he  also must be like his corrupt dad!!"

 turnig around and winking at mrs tamatar, as she called her tht!!

our lovely tia, nt bothering, just making a pukey facial expression coz she was called a tomato, and continuing her makeup touch ups!!

"heyy!! u wacko!!" shouted our very own UV!! he cld take anything to get ms anvesha b R, but her insulting his dad was JUST NOT DONE>>

going closer to her and trying to scare her with those looks

," wht do think u r trying to prove wacko!!"

"heyy psycho!! PROVE??!!?!? PROVE TO U??" shouted ashi with a smirk on her peach complectioned face!

and this was the strt of our WACKO PSYCHO scenario!

tia bani tamatarROFL
AY was gr8Clap

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ok i have read till part 141...
 
as for u arps! god a huge wacko ki jhappi for u HugHug
i enjoyed d tia ashi nok jhoks immensely
 
aki ur drunken part was d best..im like W*F is happeningROFLROFL d best part was tia falling on ranveer n giggling...
as for d sid part u have shown sid exactly at his funniest best..
oh n d ay kiss Big smile im blushing like an idiot on dat!
why oh why?! do i get so blown away by romance?!!?!?!?Blushing

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 3:39am | IP Logged
 
see dis..thodi inspiration aa jayegi..somehw diego seemed a little srk ish! ROFL

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