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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

wht an exciting past..
it was hilarious.. i did tell u tht i was laughing throughout as if i cld see uv tickling her in real..
inka kuch nahi ho sakta, a few mins ago they were on each others throats, and now yuvi nicely cuddling her..
lol
kiss was not out of the place too.. i was like, ashu kaise daalegi? abhi toh jhagda chal raha hai
:P
camel came in at the rite time
:D and and and- haan thakur'- bechaari ashi..LOL

''Tia? Pahlease! All I can expect from her is something like 'pink bunnies'!''Ashi laughed, and to her surprise, Ranveer started laughing, too.

''Well, Ashi, that was one of her suggestions!''

lmao.. tia asctually thot of pink bunnies, and thakur laughed with ashi

and finally we got the name of our band.. just 7 more updates.. god!!
ab saare updates bade bade hoge
:P

Lmao .. thank you! :D

AY are like that .. Unpredictable beyond limits! One minute, they can be at each other's throats.. and the next minute, they will be kissing each other. That's just so them! :P

I swear I laughed so hard when I was writing that! LOL Haan .. aage ek acha sa part do ... Big smile Then ..concert.. check .. etc etc etc ... These happy days are short-lived, though. :P

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
OMG !! eliza ... what an innovative story - writing ROFL itna acha ''invention'' kahan se aayi ??LOLLOL sid-vrinda was really sweet --- liked maate's hyper-reactions on the supposed telephonic conversation LOLLOL

@akanksha : the last part was simply a laugh-riot ROFLROFL Yuvi kabhi bhi ashi se nahi jeet pata LOLLOL bechara bhaagta hi rehta hai LOLLOL ... tia-ranveer have such an awesome sense of timing ROFL  pink bunnies was truly an antic name that could be used for a band's name LOLLOL loved the entire part to the bits LOL

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

OMG !! eliza ... what an innovative story - writing ROFL itna acha ''invention'' kahan se aayi ??LOLLOL sid-vrinda was really sweet --- liked maate's hyper-reactions on the supposed telephonic conversation LOLLOL

@akanksha : the last part was simply a laugh-riot ROFLROFL Yuvi kabhi bhi ashi se nahi jeet pata LOLLOL bechara bhaagta hi rehta hai LOLLOL ... tia-ranveer have such an awesome sense of timing ROFL  pink bunnies was truly an antic name that could be used for a band's name LOLLOL loved the entire part to the bits LOL

Thank you! :D

LMAO .. Bechaare ko Ashi poori life bhagaayegi! LOL Pink Bunnies was actually one of Tia's suggestions in the name the band episode! :P 
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Originally posted by BUBLAI

OMG !! eliza ... what an innovative story - writing ROFL itna acha ''invention'' kahan se aayi ??LOLLOL sid-vrinda was really sweet --- liked maate's hyper-reactions on the supposed telephonic conversation LOLLOL

@akanksha : the last part was simply a laugh-riot ROFLROFL Yuvi kabhi bhi ashi se nahi jeet pata LOLLOL bechara bhaagta hi rehta hai LOLLOL ... tia-ranveer have such an awesome sense of timing ROFL  pink bunnies was truly an antic name that could be used for a band's name LOLLOL loved the entire part to the bits LOL

Thank you! :D

LMAO .. Bechaare ko Ashi poori life bhagaayegi! LOL Pink Bunnies was actually one of Tia's suggestions in the name the band episode! :P 

ofcourse i remember that Akanksha LOL how can I forget the band episode LOL Ashi n Yuvi were trying so desperately to strangle each other ... and all the names -- ozone,ret,pink bunniesLOL and pigeon headophobiaLOL it was really a funny name for a band ROFL
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
lmao.. i remeber all f this too.. am going next in a while..
am thinking of a track.. kuch sooj nahi raha
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

lmao.. i remeber all f this too.. am going next in a while..
am thinking of a track.. kuch sooj nahi raha

Concert karvao!! :D And a small shoe-fight..jaise Remix mein hui thi! :P
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
part 144


In the canteen.

"tia ko lagta hi ki hamara frst performance will not be the last one.. remix is gonna rock guys!"

"haan tia, hamare rehearsals itne acche jaa rahe hai' I can imagine how amazing our concert will be.."

"yes guys, remix will rock.. yuvi.. we wont let you down.." ashi said, holding yuvis hand and assuring him tht nothing will go wrong this time..

He took her hand and kissed it gently, "I know ashi.. remix will certainly rock.."

Everyone wer  busy talking bout the concert, tias angels had taken charge of the set, vrinda and sid had to do the costumes. Every thing was being planned wen sid noticed something really closely. It was a delicate structure wrapped in thin linen. It wasn't something.. it was someone.. he saw her big blue eyes staring at him, and then finally found her moving towards him.. "guys.. who dekho!" he managed to say.. all of them turned behind wondering wht caught sids attention, attention? Rather his breath..

She was tall and had a curvy figure, she walked gracefully towards them handling her saree and her heels.

"ouch" she fell over ranveer, the whole canteen had been observing her since the time she stepped in. "am sorry. can you tell me wher is the principals office?" she asked ranveer. Ranveer stared back as if she had asked him where his bedroom was.. yuvi quickly replied, "jambwal sir is not in school, he will be back in an hour our two."

"oh.. I had a meeting with him.. anyway, am quite tired, ill go get a cup of coffe for myself.. am shanaya.. ill be joining mauriya from tomorrow by the way.. am your new facts of life professor" she smiled at ranveer.

"oh ma'am, y dnt u sit down, ill get your coffee for you" said yuvi

Sid quickly got up and gave her his seat.

"oh thank you sweetie" she looked at sid "and you.. one large cafe latte" she smile.

"sure"

The girls wer busy noticing the whole scene. Ashi tightened her fists as she saw yuvi drooling over the new professor, while tia nudged meher and showed her how ranveer was busy staring at her.

"ashi" said tia, "yeh nayi tension kya hai? Tia toh faint ho jayegi ashi, abhi abhi toh jas se peecha choota, and ab tumko and tia ko is prof se ladna hoga?"

"timbo' hume is prof se nahi ladna hoga timbo.. hume in ladkon ko unki sahi jagah dikhani hogi" ashi grinned

"tia samjhi nahi"

"tia ko samajne ki koi zaroorat nahi.. tia khud samaj jayegi.. aaj raat ko band practice hai na.. mere do handsome friends ayenge' and u follow my lead" she winked

"done! Tia is with you"

After a while, wen shanaya left, all the boys wer back on their track. Ranveer  busy talking to tia, yuvi not letting go ashi's hands, sid talking bout their date tonight.. the girls clearly noticed everything

Ashi (looking at yuvi)- "yuvi, ill go get a cup of coffee"

Yuvi- "ya sure"

Ashi (clinching her fists)- "ofcourse"(and stomped away)

It took a bit more longer for yuvi to register what happened, but not too late tht he couldn't mend it. He looked at tia, who gave him the most dangerous looks.  Gulping down, he ran behind ashi.

Yuvi (guilty)- "sweetheart, u cld have asked me.. mein le aata tumhari coffee"

Ashi (narrowing her eyes)- "oh yuvi, that's so sweet, but I can get it my self.. tumko kuch chahiye?"

Yuvi (trying to smile)- "no baby, chalein?" (looking at the waiter) "mere account mein daal do"

Ashi- "oh no no no.. ofcourse not. Ill pay for myself" (paying the waiter)

Yuvi "y cant I pay for you?"

Ashi "coz I dnt want to act formal with you"  (picking up her coffee and walking towards their table)

Yuvi "formal? This is more formal' your not letting your boyfriend pay for you.. how more formal can our relationship get"

Ashi  (seating herself) ' "ofcourse not yuvi, its formal wen u get up for random women and get coffee for them and don't let them pay for themselves.. bt wen its with ur loved ones, u don't act that way"

Yuvi (maintaining his calm)-"oh, so your getting jealous rite?? Are u angry??"

Ashi (calmly) "ofcourse not baby.." (kissing him softly on his cheeks) "am not angry or jealous' am just casual with my boyfriend"

Yuvi (frustrated)- "but why? Your supposed to be jealous.. look at tia.. she is" (looking at tia, who smiled patiently ) "she isn't too?"

Ranveer looked back at tia "your okay tia?"

"tia is okay ranveer.. and yuvi, get over it.. we r nt the jealous kinds.. we are all okay.. get over yourselves guys" (she playfully slapped ranveer)

Ashi "yuvvvi' come on' we need to go to the class.. and don't worry.. you can continue your formal behavior with random ppl.. jisko jitni chahe, utni coffee pilana.." she smiled and walked towards the class.



Edited by elizaa - 06 March 2011 at 4:43pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Lizz .. me loves this!! HugYe filler nahi tha ... bakwaas bhi nahi tha..this was super-awesome! Big smile

Shanaya? I cracked up when I read the name! LOL I honestly started laughing and paused a little before reading any furthur..I imagined Kabir wagging his tails behind her! ROFL

LOL .. Mean Yuvi! ''Yuvi .. main coffee leke aati hoon!'' ''Okay!'' ... And a jealous Ashi! :D Tia Ashi bhi smart hain..they won't let Ranveer or Yuvi notice their jealousy.. and vo unse jam ke badla lengi! :P Bechaare Yuvi and Ranveer! LOL 

Hehe .. ''I won't let you pay for my coffee coz I don't wanna be formal'' ''You aint letting your boyfriend pay for your coffee, how more formal could it get?'' ROFL 

I wanna go next right now.. But I've got school tomorrow! Kal raat ko I'll update..you go and read TFT! Big smile

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