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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
You expect me to reply to ALL OF THAT !!?! ^^ :O :O Okay .. my arm hurts, so I'll use that as an excuse for my reasonably short reply! :P

''lol, meri wackypanti inbuilt hai, khud se bahaar nikal aa jaati hai, bina bulaaye.. :P and u r really good at the intense lovey dovey part... and tht reminds me u broke the kiss rule
:|''

Inbuilt wackypanti ? LOL Vo toh dikhta hai! LOL And oops .. yeah, I broke the kiss rule, my bad !! Tum 2 kisses post kar dena on my behalf! :P

''plz plz plz sid vrinda in rcc 2
:D
yuvi apna gussa hamesha sid pe utaarta hai, in berneys words- they are bros- wht is the brohood for if uv cant do this with sid.. and their awesomeness us amazing
:P''

Obviously! Sid-Vrinda! I lurve Sid! <33

I know ... I love Sid and Yuvi! Sid's my favourite guy in Remix, I actually like him more than Yuvi. :P

Yesh .. Tum Yuvi-Kabir ki dosti karva do .. and do something like.. Remember Kabir is Mr. Singhania's son?, since he owned all that music stuff in the jungle camp ..so he helps Yuvi to stay in the school! Big smile Jas ko tum kuch bhi karo .. Idc. :P

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
@eliza ..:  liked both the parts .. the way vrinda was waking ashi up was hilarious ... she actually blew the horn ... LOLLOL ab ashi kumbhkarni ki tarah soyegi toh woh bhi kya karegi ROFL... loved the way vrinda was so worried abt ashi-yuvi ... she is really sweet Tonguepata nahi pri ko confidence kab aayegi Confused
ashi was so sweet to not lose her temper while trying to manaofy yuvi .. she was really patient ... ranveer-tia's reaction to their fight was LOL sach mein yaar pyar ke second day kaun fight karta haiLOLLOL but they do ... they are so incomplete without their fights ... for a moment i thought jas sudhar gayi -- so foolish of me .. LOL ''i am in love'' -- yeh gaana toh abhi anthem ban gaya ... reminded me of PKYEK LOL ashi aakhir apne tarike se yuvi ko mana hi leti hai ..

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
@akanksha: your chutku sa part was really nice ... sab milke zaroor jas ko mazaa chakhayenge LOL i hope everything gets cleared among kabir-ashi-yuvi ... ab ek band ka rocking performance dekhna hai Tongue

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

@eliza ..:  liked both the parts .. the way vrinda was waking ashi up was hilarious ... she actually blew the horn ... LOLLOL ab ashi kumbhkarni ki tarah soyegi toh woh bhi kya karegi ROFL... loved the way vrinda was so worried abt ashi-yuvi ... she is really sweet Tonguepata nahi pri ko confidence kab aayegi Confused
ashi was so sweet to not lose her temper while trying to manaofy yuvi .. she was really patient ... ranveer-tia's reaction to their fight was LOL sach mein yaar pyar ke second day kaun fight karta haiLOLLOL but they do ... they are so incomplete without their fights ... for a moment i thought jas sudhar gayi -- so foolish of me .. LOL ''i am in love'' -- yeh gaana toh abhi anthem ban gaya ... reminded me of PKYEK LOL ashi aakhir apne tarike se yuvi ko mana hi leti hai ..
pitaaaaa!!!! thanks for the lovely comments....
y dnt u go next?
pahlease
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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
 I am going next Tongue
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PART : 138

As Kabir left from there , Yuvi and Ashi stared at each other .It was not at all difficult for Ashi to comprehend that Yuvi's facial expression changed after Kabir's visit .She put her hand on Yuvi reassuringly and said ''chale?''

Yuvi looked at his hand and nodded . While walking together towards the shed ( where Asked Kabir to wait via sms ) , both were silent. Ashi couldn't take it anymore and she broke it : "Yuvi … tum itna serious kyun behave kar rahe ho ? I know that you don't want to meet kabir abut I want to … only because I want to know why he said so . I trusted him a lot Yuvi , as a friend . So why did he just break it so casually ?''

Yuvi  kept looking at Ashi but said nothing . Ashi continued , '' Yuvi, I never loved Kabir. He was always a very good friend of mine and I would have liked it that way forever if he didn't end up doing something like this . But no one can ever take your place . Your place is so secured inside me that sometimes I fear it . I never thought Kabir would end up doing something like this but if everything gets solved … ( she pauses … she thinks '' I really hope it does '' ) then I don't want to make a choice between both of you . Both of you are an important part of my life and I love both of you .Definitely I don't love him in the sense that I love you , but as a friend definitely I love him too . Yuvi, I am telling you all this , not because I want you to trust me but because I wanted to share it with you because somewhere I can feel , you will understand ''.

Yuvi didn't say anything. He just hugged her tightly . After breaking the hug, he slowly bent over , looking in her eyes and planted a kiss on her cheeks . After sometime he broke off and said '' Ashi. Thanks for considering me such an important part of your life and I can understand how difficult it is for you to make a choice . I will never again ask you to do it . But one more thing , aise emotional speech tumhare wackiness ke image ke saath suit nahi karte ( Ashi was glaring at him ). (Yuvi just laughed ) … ab chalein ! nahi toh tumhara dearest lambu kharein kharein langra ho jayega . I seriously hope he has some good explanation . '' ( Ashi kept glaring at him and Yuvi pulled her with him to the shed )

''Duh-ha!  Kabir … tumne ek baar bhi ye kehne se pehle socha nahi ? '' – said Ashi , almost with a heightened B.p .

'' Par ashi …. I am trying to explain it from the past half an hour that I tried to know Yuvi's feelings for you , So I said this . But before I could tell him the truth , he went away from there ''

'' Par janne ke aur bhi tareekein hote hain Kabir. I hope you know that . Tumhare is jhooth ke wajah se I refused to trust Yuvi. Aur tum keh rahe ho that you did all this only to know his true feelings for me '' –retorted Ashi .

'' Haan Kabir . I can understand that tumne shayad yeh sab sirf isiliye kiye so that you get a clear idea about my feelings for Ashi … but I agree with ashi that saying such a big lie was not a solution to this . Ashi trusts you so much but tumne aisa kiya '' --- intervened Yuvi .

''Guys ! I know ke jo maine kiya who galat tha. But trust me my intentions were not wrong . I knew how much Ashi loves you Yuvi and I felt the pain that she was going through when she learnt about you dating Jas ( Yuvi looked at Ashi with eyes full of pain , Ashi smiled slightly at him ) …Uss time mujhe kuch nahi soojha and I said whatever came to my mind . I tried clearing the misunderstanding but never got a chance to do so . I tried explaining ashi too but then you too got back together and I didn't want to lose her friendship .( He was looking down ) . Kal jab ashi call kit hi , I tried explaining her par she didn't wish to listen . I can totally understand her . I am really sorry guys …. Please forgive me ''.

Yuvi put his hands around Kabir … '' Dude , itna guilty feel karne ki zaroorat nahi hai . I can totally understand that your intentions were not wrong , its just the means which created the mess . Today , I understood that you will never do anything to hurt Ashi ( Kabir smiled a sad smile ) ''.

Kabir thought that it is really hard to imagine his life without Ashi . He will always remain a loyal friend of hers and will never let her down . She is and will always be very important for him .

Ashi just smiled seeing both of them and said '' Yes kabir , Yuvi is right . Me too understand it completely and I forgive you " ( She gave him a side hug ) ….

Yuvi just smiled seeing them and understood what Ashi told him before coming here .'' It's honestly very difficult to choose between your love and such a sweet friend .'' – he thought .

Yuvi : '' Chalo … ek problem toh solve hua … ab dusre ka kya karein ?''

Kabir : '' Dusra problem ?''

Ashi : '' Jas ''

Kabir : '' Jas ? What did she do now ?''

They told him the entire incident that happened earlier that day during the auditions . Kabir listened to it carefully and said '' Don't worry guys . I know how to deal with her . You guys don't worry . I'll try asking sahil about some help and we will surely fix this . She won't be able to do anything to the band . I'll look to that ''.

Ashi : '' btw , I'm the fourth member in the band . Pri chickened out and I'm in to rescue the almost-sunken ship '' …. ( she declared gladly … yuvi just shook his head and Kabir smiled and congratulated her …,.She gladly accepted it ) .

Kabir : '' Ok Guys ! bye now …. Will try my best to fix jas … see you all later ''

Ashi and Yuvi bade him good-bye .While leaving the shed , Yuvi was walking in the front . Ashi pulled Yuvi closer , turned him around , put her arms around his neck and kissed him passionately on the lips.

After they separated , Ashi said : '' This is a big thank you from my side for whatever you did today … thanks a ton for understanding me yuvi "

They both smiled at each other and left the shed hand in hand …

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
omfg arpita....
abhi uth and didnt expect this part to be up... and what a surprise it was..... eah and every detail, without lil bloopers too.... arpu, r u sure this is ur frst time? each and every word so convincing, thier dialogues so well written, the conversation so intense, all the credit goes to the written materal, the written style... it was just awesome...
i never knew tht we had such and awesome writer here, ur getting better in the second post itself? god.. u gotta be kidding me.. pittta!! uve really impressed meHug
u so very well managed to get both the kisses i wanted in this part..
one tht ashuu left outAngry tht lil monster who loves annoying me by getting so many issues wen i ask her for a sensible cute part* Angry
nvm, lets get bk to ur part.. kabeer not being a villain was also very convincingly written.. i see the pkek waala kabeer here, and so love himEmbarrassed
he explained his grief also very sensibly and the best was yuvi understanding ashi to the fullest..
badle mein usko uska gift bhi toh mila!!LOL 
jas ki toh ab khair nahi... am waiting to see her reactions wen everything will fall back on her head..

now lemme get bk to the most important part.. wer the hell is my second part.. jas to mazza chakaao part..
arpu go fast... aur tum ol bhi nahi dikh rahi.... agar aaj hi part nahi mila toh in ashi's wrds- tumhara murder pakkaLOL

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
thankyou so much eliza for such sweet comments ... Tongue Thank God you liked both the kisses .. Wink especially tumhare liye hi toh tha ..LOL yeah , I am struggling with the second part ... will update it soon ..

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