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Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 85)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
omfg, u kept the kiss rule both the times
ROFLROFLROFLROFL
i sooooooooo love u for thtHug
coz rcc2 mein we will use all these as memoriesEmbarrassed
uv is beind extremely polite, sweet and all... i hope all this is only till the date, bas... nt used to this sweet type uvROFLROFL
:P
and i soooooo love u for getting the midnite picnic here... it was LE-GEN am getting there.... DARY!!ROFLROFL
lmao, am sorry, am totally BARNIEfied
so yeah.. ignore..
ashi going for the date as her self, i so love this... and vrinda and her covo was the cutest..
soniya track coming up, and vrinda can sense the tsunami coming... hell..
if this was ur timepass wala written, idk wht id feel wen ill see ur whole mehnat waala kaam
:P
loved this part... next ill edit in a while.... 
wait...
so many places i have to comment, wer ppl wait for my essays
:P

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
ok- this is for the sec part...
midnite picnicEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
candles cakes flowers, tia types, ashi style..
only uv cld do this for herEmbarrassed and half credit goes to u, u made him do it!!
:D
and and and.... they dance on your song too:P
u made them dance on tum miley again? tumhara fav track hai? i loved it tho.... quite a romantic part.... didnt get too cheezy or messy at allEmbarrassed
:D
ashu.. serioulsy? he remembered the day ashi cried wen he kissed her? and then he checked again if she was crying or no??? awwww.. tht was the best part uve written in this epi...Embarrassed
y wld she cry, she was busy inhaling him in... ughh.. me and my cheesy lines...:P
i so loved the gift ashi gave him,
u knw wht ashu, u remember uv's mammas guitar? i alwsys wished if it was ashi who gave it to him, and he'd be so possessive bout it thenEmbarrassed 
so we will make it this way, uv willl never perform without this guitar!!! and i love u for this
:D

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
@eliza : 3 updates at one go !!! That was brilliant ... ClapClap  loved the ranveer-ashi convo , tia-ashi fight, tia's sweet and adorable thoughts about ashi ( that was very sweet indeed ...) ... ashi-yuvi understanding , tia-yuvi hug ... ashi ko bhi band mein le leti yaar Tongue... loved all the three updates Clap

@akanksha : tum na suspense aise beech mein choda mat karo ... bahut tadpati hai yaar LOLLOL ... how dangerous will the ''storm '' be ..??? Confused the idea of putting the mid-night picnic in your own way is really good Wink really liked it a lottttttttttTongue used the 'tum mile' track nicely and ashi's surprise was great Tongue thank God ashi finally didn't wear those bimbo-type dresses ... liked it very much Tongue

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Liz ..Appy..I just replied to you two on Forbidden and Impossible Love.. Now, my hands hurt! LOL So all I can say is .. thank you! HugHug I'll prolly update again .. tonight! And Liz .. don't keel me! I PROMISE this will be over before 150th .. and we'll have a happy ending ..but I can't go on and on with romance..I suck! :P

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

@eliza : 3 updates at one go !!! That was brilliant ... ClapClap  loved the ranveer-ashi convo , tia-ashi fight, tia's sweet and adorable thoughts about ashi ( that was very sweet indeed ...) ... ashi-yuvi understanding , tia-yuvi hug ... ashi ko bhi band mein le leti yaar Tongue... loved all the three updates Clap

@akanksha : tum na suspense aise beech mein choda mat karo ... bahut tadpati hai yaar LOLLOL ... how dangerous will the ''storm '' be ..??? Confused the idea of putting the mid-night picnic in your own way is really good Wink really liked it a lottttttttttTongue used the 'tum mile' track nicely and ashi's surprise was great Tongue thank God ashi finally didn't wear those bimbo-type dresses ... liked it very much Tongue

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eeeee, thank u pita!!
:D
u wanna go next?
:D
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Liz ..Appy..I just replied to you two on Forbidden and Impossible Love.. Now, my hands hurt! LOL So all I can say is .. thank you! HugHug I'll prolly update again .. tonight! And Liz .. don't keel me! I PROMISE this will be over before 150th .. and we'll have a happy ending ..but I can't go on and on with romance..I suck! :P

yeah, we already have a track...
dnt we
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Chapter 133 

Ashi : (Crashing down on the floor) ''Vo cake kitna yummy tha!!!''

Yuvi : (Imitating Ashi) ''Yuvi, mujhe raat ko bhookh nahi lagti''

Ashi : (Slightly punching him in the elbow) ''Bhookh nahi lagti mujhe..but that was CHOCOLATE, Yuvi. And you know na .. koi bhi ladki chocolate ko resist nahi kar sakti.''

Yuvi : ''Vo toh dikhta hai. Is chocolate ke chakkar mein tum kitni moti ho gayi ho'' (In a teasing tone)

Ashi : ''Moti? Excuse me. Tum mote, aur tumhaara ye pea-sized brain mota.''

Yuvi : ''Mere paas ek working condition wala brain tha, but tumse milke saara khatam ho gaya. Tum mera dimaag jo kha gayi.'' (Smiles secretly)

Ashi : ''Main tumhaara dimaag kha gayi? Main? Tum hi toh mere peeche bhaagte rehte the, remember when I joined the college. Tum hi mere paas aaye the.''

Yuvi : ''Tum mujhse takraayi and aake meri arms pe giri. Ismein meri kya galti hai?''

Ashi : ''Mujhe tumhaari arms mein girne ka koi shauk nahi hai. Main ulta dekh ke chal rahi thi, but tum, tum toh seedha dekh rahe the. Tumhaari aankhein hai ya button?''

Yuvi : (Frowns) ''Tumhein meri arms mein girne ka koi shauk nahi hai?''

Ashi : (Looks away) ''Duh uh. Ek baar sunai nahi deta kya? Nahi hai.''

Yuvi : ''Pakka?''

Ashi : ''Pakka.''

Yuvi : ''Well .. '' (Grins) ''But mujhe toh tumhein apni arms mein girte dekhne ka bahut shauk hai.''

Ashi : (Snorts) ''Too bad. Kyonki ab aisa kuch nahi hone wala-''

Yuvi : (Cuts Ashi off and hugs her from behind) ''Tumhein abhi bhi meri arms mein girne ka koi shauk hai?''

Ashi : (Tries to get away a little, but gives in) ''Shut up and kiss me.''

Yuvi : (A mischievous grin playing on his lips) ''Whatever you say, Madame.''

*After the kiss, Ashi was sitting on Yuvi's lap, and his arms went around her waist, while he played with her hair*

Ashi  : ''Yuvi, tumne mujhe apni feelings batane mein itni der kyon lagaayi? I mean, kya tum mujhse darte the? The great Yuvraj Dev ko rejection mil jaayegi?''

Yuvi : (Snorts) ''No, wacko. Agar mera bas chalta toh main tumhein apne dil ki baat bahut jaldi bata deta. But us Kabir ki vajah se-'' (Angrily)

Ashi : (Looks at him, confused) ''Kabir ki vajah se.. kya?''

Yuvi : (Runs a hand through his hair) ''Kabir ne mujhe kaha ki you love him, and you spent the weekend with him. And agar main tumse apne feelings keh deta, toh I thought I would lose your friendship. And I didn't want to lose you.'' (Holds her hand and kisses it)

Ashi : (Pulls her hand back) ''What bullshit. Kabir mera friend hai, vo tumse aisa jhoot kyon kahega? He always knew about my feelings for you.''

Yuvi : (A edge of anger in his voice) ''Haan, go on. Ab tum bhi Kabir ki side lo. Tumhein kya lagta hai? Main jhoot bol raha hoon?''

Ashi : ''Duh uh, Yuvi. Maine aisa kab kaha?''

Yuvi : ''Phir kaisa kaha? Tumhaara matlab kya hai, Ashi? Ya toh Kabir sach bol raha hai, ya main. Who would you rather believe?''

Ashi : (Looks away) ''I can't believe that Kabir aisa kuch keh sakta hai.''(Thinking about how Kabir respected her feelings and helped her) ''He's a good friend, Yuvi.''

Yuvi : ''Well then. It's pretty clear ki tum kisko trust karti ho. Mujhe ya apne ex.'' (Stomps off from the place while Ashi stands there helplessly)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
shit ashu... wht a dil tootne waala part..
ill reply on both of the parts together.. write fast!
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