Remix

India-Forums

   
Remix
Remix

Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 82)

Meeko IF-Rockerz
Meeko
Meeko

Joined: 03 February 2009
Posts: 6769

Posted: 21 February 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

arps trust me!
lizzie was like sooo not confident abt writing pehle n nw luk at her..shes marvellous! and i noe that u wull b too.bt u caNT noe unless u dnt try..n we have all had our share of bad and gud parts!
i insist dat u take up d story tooBig smile
ya we wont kill u..maybe just sunao u a lil LOL

huh!! did i read it right?? tuney meri tareef ki??Shocked
ahahha, wer was i tht i missed these lovely linesEmbarrassed

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

BUBLAIAkankshaa.

Akankshaa. IF-Sizzlerz
Akankshaa.
Akankshaa.

Joined: 13 July 2010
Posts: 16934

Posted: 21 February 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by _Akanksha_

I'm updating Forbidden today, girlies! :D

and today u have nothing else to do... so rcc
:D
Impossible Love? :P
Meeko IF-Rockerz
Meeko
Meeko

Joined: 03 February 2009
Posts: 6769

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged

Part 128

 

Yuvi too joined her in the laughter but was suddenly stopped by the sound of unlocking the classroom door.. They looked at each other questioningly.

"yuvi.. banna, aap bhi na… why do u always attract problems, this is…." He stopped cursing when he saw two pairs of embarrassed eyes looking at him. Ashi looked quite uncomfortable on yuvi's lap, arms around his neck and his hands encircling her petite waist.  Ashi stood up in a start, pushing away from yuvi, catching hold of a bench nearby. "thakur tum?"

"haan hum ashi.. kyun, sir ko expect kar rahi thi? Taaki aur 3 ghante aapko bandh karke rakhe?" smirked ranveer.

"oh no no.. was just wondering coz there is still half an hour.." she bit her tongue and gulped closing her eyes tight.

"haan haan, I remember, half an hour more.." he smirked, "but kya karein, yuvi's dad is here.. toh jumbo ne humein bhej diya yuvi ko bulaane. By the way yuvi, what have you done? He seems pissed. And ashi, I guess your mom will be here soon too. Eco sir has called them"

"kya? Mamma ko bhi bulaya hai? Heyy bhaggu, ek saath itne tensions kyun dete hain aap!" she cursed looking at the ceiling when she felt warm hands go around her waist pulling her somewhere.

"yuvi.." she muttered

"ashi, chill baby, our parents know about us.. Remember? Fake dating?" he winked at her as she narrowed her eyes, " Kuch nahi hoga.." he pulled her more closer and planted a kiss on her cheek. "you wait, ill be right back" his eyes made the saying and she nodded back.

Ranveer made himself comfortable on the table next to ashi.. "aadha ghanta waste!" he made a disgusting face and shook his head.

"ranveer, why r you even here? Isn't the princess of dumbness busy searching you? Oh.. dnt tell me u broke up with her!" ashi snorted.

"heyy bhaggu!!" he imitated ashi, "yuvi se door hone pe itna frustration?"

"thakur!!" she screeched, "agar tumne mujhe phir se kabhi tease kiya na, toh mein tumhara murder kar doongi" almost strangling him till he choked, "sorry ashi.. sorry. Sorry" he managed to say.

 

On the other side, principals cabin

Yashwant dev was busy making calls.. he seemed to be in a bad mood. Yuvi was sitting on the principal's chair, rolling the paper weight, and waiting for his dad to get free.

Yash (calmly)- "so u have announced in your class that you are dating anwesha ray."

Yuvi (smiled)-" yeah dad, but I did take care that you'd be the first person to knw"

Yash (looked at yuvi)- "I've learnt of the fake dating deal, u have to say something about it?"

Yuvi (shocked)- "dad? Wht fake dating deal?"

Yash – "I spoke to jasmine, yuvi.."

Everything was getting crystal clear for yuvi, he had thought jas a good lesson, and she was getting back at him and ashi, and yuvi had to do his best to keep ashi away from all this.

Yuvi –"dad, aapne hi mujhe bataya tha, bout jas. You know how she is, how can you trust her? There was no such deal."

Yash- " and what about chunk-rock? Is that false too?"

Yuvi stood straight, completely shocked, his tongue refused to speak, and his mind not in the state to think of something new.

Yash- " chunk-rock.. tumhara band yuvi.. bhool gaye? Tumhare band members ko Mumbai se bahar fekh diya gaya hai, your band is over.. I don't want you to waste your time on such useless things.. Concentrate on your studies."

Yuvi plainly nodded to his dads command.

Yash- "aur rahi us anvesha ki baat, its high time you change your girlfriend. Her name is not good for my political career. Actress ki beti hai woh.."

Yuvi- "par dad"

Yash (cutting him short, and picking another call)-"par war kuch nahi, jo kaha hai, woh sunna tumhara kaam hai"

 

 

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:

BUBLAIleeseunggiloveAkankshaa.--sunshine--DazzilerDizzySoulmate_Sana

Meeko IF-Rockerz
Meeko
Meeko

Joined: 03 February 2009
Posts: 6769

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged

Part 129

 

Back to the eco classroom

Ashi and ranveer were busy talking to each other, cracking jokes and abusing jumbo. Ashi had so many things to talk about, and majorly, it was her favorite topic- T.I.M.B.O

"toh thakur, abhi tak kaam kaise chal raha hai? Kya tum tumhara brain timbo ke saath share kar rahe ho?" she punched him playfully

"ashi.. aap bhi na.." he smiled

"yeh lo.. devil ka naam liya, and the devil is here.. nahi nahi, timbo, humne tumhara brain nahi churaya!!" she laughed hysterically

Tia was in to mood to argue with ashi, she looked quite occupied with some other weird thoughts.

"ashi… tia doesn't have time for all this.."

"kya? Timbo doesn't have time for her own brains?"

Ranveer was busy enjoying the cat fight which was just about to begin, but there was something else to come

"ashi.. will u let me talk. Its very important. Sonia aunty was here."

"heyy bhaggu, is this your important talk.. tumhari soniya aunty meri mamma hai, koi alien nahi, toh who jahan chahe wahaan jaa sakti hai" she snorted giving a hi-five to ranveer

"ranveer.. tum bhi ashi ke saath? And by the way ashi, lagta hai ki meri soniya aunty jo tumhari mamma hai, who kisi aur ki mamma bhi hone waali hai." Tia narrowed her eyes and said it all in a breath.

Ranveer&ashi- "WHAT?? KISKI??"

Tia- "ashi.. tia knows that it is not only you.."

Ashi- "timbet, can you be a bit faster, THAKUR…. Share karo na apne brains iske saath!!"

Tia- "tumhare mom yahaan aaye the, did she meet you?"

Ashi- "not yet"

Tia- "she met the princi and left"

Ashi (dramatically)- "heyy bhaggu!! Finally aap ne meri baat sun li, a non interfering mamma!! Thank you bhaggu"

Tia (yelled)- "anweshaaa- ok, the thing is that, soniya aunty came with tia's pappa, left with him, pappa didn't meet his princess, they've been hanging around together since a long time.. this is wht tia has noticed.. and I smell something fishy."

Ranveer (holding her close)-"tia, are you all right, am sure there is nothing of that sort."

Tia- "tia is sure ranveer, and tia is scared.. tia likes soniya aunty, she has always been with tia wenever tia needed her, but all this that is happening, tia cant take all this tension."

Ashi was quite for a bit, ranveer and tia holding each other, waiting for ashi's reaction, they expected a hurricane, but all that ashi did was made a fone call.

Ashi- "hello..mamma, aap school aai thi?"

Soniya- "haan mamam, don't worry, ive spoken to jumbo, kuch nahi hoga."

Ashi- "par mamma, aap kaahan hai?"

Soniya- "main.. main.. erm.. main bas shoot pe pohonch rahi hoon, chalo bye mamam!"

Ashi-"bye"

Ashi stared at her fone for a few minutes till tia spoke up, "ashi, I told u rite.. I smell something fishy."

Ashi shrugged, "something fishy? I smell the whole fish market here!"

 

Principals office

Yuvi and his dad were having a heated argument. Yashwant was not okay with the whole idea of his link up with the 'ray' family.

Yuvi- "dad, ashi meri friend hai, aur main apne friends ko nahi chodta."

Yashwant- "yuvi, meri baat suno, tumhe yeh skool mein rehna hai ki nahi?"

Yuvi- "how does that matter dad, am not leaving my friends, mere band ko toh aap ne tod diya, ab aur kya karenge aap?"

Yashwant- "ill get you out of this school, simple"

Yuvi (smirked)- "you do care a lot about your name right? What will you tell in your interviews wen am out of this school? What will people call me? Yuvraj anpad dev?"

Yashwant (raising a hand on uv)- "yuvi.. dnt make me repent for wht I might do. Stay away from her"

Making things quite clear for yuvi, yashwant leaves from the office slamming the door behind.

 

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:

manurBUBLAIleeseunggiloveAkankshaa.DazzilerDizzySoulmate_Sana

Meeko IF-Rockerz
Meeko
Meeko

Joined: 03 February 2009
Posts: 6769

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Part 130

 

Back to the classroom

Ranveer was trying his best to explain tia and ashi, "ashi, yeh aapki mom ka decision hai, and don't you think you should respect it."

"thakur, mom ka decision nahi hai.. am sure we r misunderstanding everything. I knw mom quite akeli hai, but.."

"haan, aur tia ke papa bhi bohot akele hai ashi, who dono ek doosre ke liye perfect hai.. if this is wht they think, I guess we should respect it. And koi bhi misunderstanding nahi hai ashi.. ive been following them since weeks, Ive heard them talk- ive seen them meet."

"and accepting them together simply means…" they dropped their heads disgusted

"SISTERS??"

Ranveer burst out laughing, "aap? Dono? Behnein?"

He saw yuvi entering the classroom, glum faced.

"aaiye yuvi banna, aap ne kuch accha miss kar diya. Ashi and tia are soon to be sisters."

"nahi yuvi, tia will never be this wacko's sister" tia snorted.

"pahlease, never!" ashi imitated her

Yuvi waited with baited breath for them to finish, he wasn't listening to any. Ashi noticed the uneasy yuvi, she saw him broken in a cold sweat. A few hours with him, and she had learnt him deep. She knew there was an argument between him and his dad, and she was quite sure that yuvi tried to stand for himself. His dad was quite strong, but yuvi had her, he had anvesha ray bannerjee. She was a strong person herself, and she knew it that her strength was all for yuvi. She calmly went up to him and kept her hands on his. Yuvi didn't look up to her, he just kept staring at her hands.

Ranveer and tia could see all of this, they could see how strong their bond was, tia never liked ashi for her friend, she always saw her as some other person, but wen she was with yuvi, tia could see how the person that ashi was would change, she could see the love for yuvi in her eyes, the trust that she had for him. She was not the dust bin that she saw everyday in the corridor, she was this strong set of emotions wen it came to yuvi. Tia clutched into ranveers fingers, and smiled at him. He was right. They both were made for each other.

"kya hua banna" ranveer decided to break the silence.

"tia" yuvi replied.

He went u to her and hugged her, "am sorry tia, its all gone, its all over. And I cant let this get over, I need to start all this again, I cant let this go.. I need your help babes"

Tia hugged him back as if she understood everything, no explanation was needed, she just ruffled his hair like she'd do to a kid to calm him down, "uncle knows right?" she broke the hug and he nodded.

Ashi and ranveer could make no sense of the broken words used

"tia, kya ho raha hai? Uv ke dad ko kya pata chala?"

"ranveer, yuvi ka ek band tha, uske papa ko iske baara mein kuch pata nahi tha. I used to rite songs for his band, and his performance was on this coming weekend."

"toh ab kya kiya tumhare dad ne?" ashi asked yuvi impatiently.

"he broke the band, he sent my friends out of Bombay, the concert is coming up, and I have to do something abut it."

"toh problem kya hai?"

"wacko! Dnt u understand, my band members r thrown out of Bombay, who will perform?"

"duh uh uv, make a new band.. this is wht you like right? Your music?"

"music is my life"

"so go for it"

"tia thinks tia will be your second band member yuvi.. tia is with you. Ill have the songs ready and I know them very well." Tia smiled

"par tia, sirf hum dono? We need two more"

"ranveer hai na, he sings very well too" she blushed

"oh toh thakur, u sing songs for timbo too? How romantic!!"

"and and.. tia thinks the fourth member can be pri… she is a trained singer.. yuvi, we will do it this time, don't worry.. we will make this work!"

"And ashi u will have to help us too, and what will u do?" asked ranveer

"hmm… thakur, u guys need a manager.. and am your manager.. wen the timbo and her ANGLE will turn your band pink, you both will need me" she replied.

"oh pahleeze, tia doesn't need a manager like you, you and your tacky choices.. tum apne.."

"tia, chaliye, pri.. ke.. paas.. jaana.." he pulled tia out of the room.

Finally ashi was left alone with yuvi, she knew it was not only the band that was upsetting him, she made place next to yuvi and seated beside him. "its not only the band right?"

Yuvi plainly nodded

"ashi, dad doesn't want me to be with you, it has been jas who has be speaking to my dad throughout. She told him bout the band and now about you."

"wasn't he always okay with me?"

"jas told him bout the fake dating deal"

"gosh! Dnt worry yuvi, we will take care of her"

"we will…" he laid his head on her shoulder, "dad has told me clearly, he is going to stop paying my fees."

"and what bout your mom?"

" no news bout her, but am glad I have you ashi. You have always been my strength even wen u wer not with me, and now that we r together, I will never lose you."

"yuvi, I have always been with you, we were always together.. remember? "

"yes, I remember, wen the judge punished me, my accident, suspended by jumbo, lost in jungle, my exams, my football, you've always been with me"

"and.." she mumbled.

"and will always be" he continued. 

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:

manurBUBLAIleeseunggiloveAkankshaa.--sunshine--DazzilerDizzy

Akankshaa. IF-Sizzlerz
Akankshaa.
Akankshaa.

Joined: 13 July 2010
Posts: 16934

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Itne dino baad update mile .. aur vo bhi itne saare ikhaate!! 3-3 awesome parts!! Big smileBig smile

Loved it, loved it AND loved it!! Hug 

I loveee Ranveer and Ashi !! Karan Wahi and Priya Wal are awesome together !! I loved Ranveer teasing her.. and Ashi strangling him! LOL We have a scene like that in Remix, too, right? I've heard! Big smile "heyy bhaggu!!" he imitated ashi, "yuvi se door hone pe itna frustration?ROFL "haan hum ashi.. kyun, sir ko expect kar rahi thi? Taaki aur 3 ghante aapko bandh karke rakhe?" smirked ranveer. ROFL "ranveer, why r you even here? Isn't the princess of dumbness busy searching you? Oh.. dnt tell me u broke up with her!" ashi snorted ROFL 

He pulled her more closer and planted a kiss on her cheek . Kiss rule nahi tod sake the na!! LOL This was cute!! And I loved seeing Yuvi fighting for Ashi .. !! Awww !! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 

Yayy !! Sonia-Sumeet!! DancingDancing A awesome track for RCC 2!! Big smileParty

And I liked this para .. Ranveer and tia could see all of this, they could see how strong their bond was, tia never liked ashi for her friend, she always saw her as some other person, but wen she was with yuvi, tia could see how the person that ashi was would change, she could see the love for yuvi in her eyes, the trust that she had for him. She was not the dust bin that she saw everyday in the corridor, she was this strong set of emotions wen it came to yuvi. Tia clutched into ranveers fingers, and smiled at him. He was right. They both were made for each other.

I love Tia and Ashi's scenes !! They are cute when they're fighting, and they are super cute when they are NOT fighting. I loved this part in their bday where they hugged, and Ashi helped Ranveer and Tia patch up! Embarrassed

Haww .. Ashi ko group mein nahi liya!? Angry Ab Remix ki tarah yahaan bhi Pri ko underconfident banana padega? Well .. fikar not. I'll think of something in the next update. :P And I loved the last line .. AY will be together .. Evil us coz we're gonna create a hell lotta problems for 'em in Rcc2. OuchLOL



The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

BUBLAIMeeko

Meeko IF-Rockerz
Meeko
Meeko

Joined: 03 February 2009
Posts: 6769

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Itne dino baad update mile .. aur vo bhi itne saare ikhaate!! 3-3 awesome parts!! Big smileBig smile

Loved it, loved it AND loved it!! Hug 

I loveee Ranveer and Ashi !! Karan Wahi and Priya Wal are awesome together !! I loved Ranveer teasing her.. and Ashi strangling him! LOL We have a scene like that in Remix, too, right? I've heard! Big smile "heyy bhaggu!!" he imitated ashi, "yuvi se door hone pe itna frustration?ROFL "haan hum ashi.. kyun, sir ko expect kar rahi thi? Taaki aur 3 ghante aapko bandh karke rakhe?" smirked ranveer. ROFL "ranveer, why r you even here? Isn't the princess of dumbness busy searching you? Oh.. dnt tell me u broke up with her!" ashi snorted ROFL 

He pulled her more closer and planted a kiss on her cheek . Kiss rule nahi tod sake the na!! LOL This was cute!! And I loved seeing Yuvi fighting for Ashi .. !! Awww !! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 

Yayy !! Sonia-Sumeet!! DancingDancing A awesome track for RCC 2!! Big smileParty

And I liked this para .. Ranveer and tia could see all of this, they could see how strong their bond was, tia never liked ashi for her friend, she always saw her as some other person, but wen she was with yuvi, tia could see how the person that ashi was would change, she could see the love for yuvi in her eyes, the trust that she had for him. She was not the dust bin that she saw everyday in the corridor, she was this strong set of emotions wen it came to yuvi. Tia clutched into ranveers fingers, and smiled at him. He was right. They both were made for each other.

I love Tia and Ashi's scenes !! They are cute when they're fighting, and they are super cute when they are NOT fighting. I loved this part in their bday where they hugged, and Ashi helped Ranveer and Tia patch up! Embarrassed

Haww .. Ashi ko group mein nahi liya!? Angry Ab Remix ki tarah yahaan bhi Pri ko underconfident banana padega? Well .. fikar not. I'll think of something in the next update. :P And I loved the last line .. AY will be together .. Evil us coz we're gonna create a hell lotta problems for 'em in Rcc2. OuchLOL




lmao ashu.... finally mera page khula..
net low tha and ym off on ho raha tha and ppl think am going ofline online for attention
:|
dumb suckers...
yeah, the soniya sumeet part was for rcc two
:D
and finally ab rcc fir shuru ho gaya
:D

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Akankshaa.

manur Senior Member
manur
manur

Joined: 27 October 2008
Posts: 382

Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
love to see ranveer tia back.. jayda remix feeling aa rai thi last three parts mai...band ...tia n ashi ka ladna jagdana...yashwant dev...sonya n tia's dad ...lately kafi jayda uvi ashi ho gya tha...so freshness aa gyi....mast tha..Wink

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

MeekoAkankshaa.

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Pieces of Me ~ AY RD V-Day Mix

Author: DulceAmor   Replies: 5   Views: 581

DulceAmor 5 581 15 February 2009 at 8:03am by DulceAmor
Taciturn Romance -::Finished::-

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: Eloquent   Replies: 81   Views: 9324

Eloquent 81 9324 30 September 2007 at 6:31pm by usharafuddin
tia ranveer finished [tdys precap]

2

Author: veonal   Replies: 12   Views: 1269

veonal 12 1269 19 April 2006 at 9:06am by uvcraziestfan
ashi’s revenge finished

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 14 15

Author: lalit1   Replies: 113   Views: 8899

lalit1 113 8899 07 February 2006 at 4:19am by uvcraziestfan
To love or not to love(fanfic)(finished)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: ashi912   Replies: 309   Views: 21507

ashi912 309 21507 14 January 2006 at 12:48am by uvcraziestfan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Remix Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index