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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

thanx kyun haan????ShockedShockedShockedShocked  its my corner too..tum donomera celeb status seriously lete hoLOLLOL i noe i was shocked at d mush n i had tttttoooooo have some wackopanti..toh one liners were needed..kitna dimag lagaya maine!
dat line seriously has magic in it! Embarrassed 
next part soon..LOL

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

Originally posted by elizaa

@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

thanx kyun haan????Shocked  its my corner too..tum donomera celeb status seriously lete hoLOLLOL i noe i was shocked at d mush n i had tttttoooooo have some wackopanti..toh one liners were needed..kitna dimag lagaya maine!
dat line seriously has magic in it! Embarrassed 
next part soon..LOL

thanks for the BIG update.
BIG*
Silly

ur one liners were awesome!!!
ill update tomrrw.. kal college hai.. bloody sunday

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
hey !! debo .. this part was a real mixture of witticism and sweetness ... they are really crazy but they wouldn't have been them without their craziness ... you have described ashi's anger very nicely ... and loved yuvi's reaction to itLOL ... they both are so adorable ... me too loved the promise wala sentence ..... and i agree with you ... it has some sort of magic in it ... TongueTongue

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
thanx arps...i noe Big smile im soo coolLOL
arps u have to write!
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

thanx arps...i noe Big smile im soo coolLOL
arps u have to write!

yesterday i said that i'll giv it a try but you guys can't kill me if it's pathetic ... ok

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
arps trust me!
lizzie was like sooo not confident abt writing pehle n nw luk at her..shes marvellous! and i noe that u wull b too.bt u caNT noe unless u dnt try..n we have all had our share of bad and gud parts!
i insist dat u take up d story tooBig smile
ya we wont kill u..maybe just sunao u a lil LOL

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

arps trust me!
lizzie was like sooo not confident abt writing pehle n nw luk at her..shes marvellous! and i noe that u wull b too.bt u caNT noe unless u dnt try..n we have all had our share of bad and gud parts!
i insist dat u take up d story tooBig smile
ya we wont kill u..maybe just sunao u a lil LOL

okay i'll write a part during the weekend ... but i'll pm you the part first ... if you feel it's fine , then only i'll post it ... otherwise i won't ... okay .Tongue
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
okay arps..dats great..cant wait fr ur part..bt dnt b soo conscious..Big smile

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