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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

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yaar you are quite lucky that way ... kash mere bhi aise friends ya relatives hote LOL

y do u think i had the guts to do correspondence then???
mujh jaisi lazy ladki..
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
PART 126
 
 
"hey bhaggu!,yuviiiiiii" ashi got extremely annoyed after she was locked inside the classroom for detention..she was trying to convey to yuvi that they were LOCKED inside a classroom!
 
her face was going all red and pink with the thought of being alone with him and with the thought locked inside like a monkey!
 
yuvi was looking at her with utter amusement ,he just couldnt figure out that how could ANYONE be so adorable every minute of every day?!
He leaned on the wall while watching her struggle for freedom..
 
"hey bhaggu!" yuvi imitated ashi," inn duh uhs ne humein andar band kyun kiya?! "
 
"tum itne zyada khush kyun ho yuckman? its homework not pole dancing jiske bare me tum soch soch ke kangaroos ki tarah jump kar rahe ho.."
 
"ashi,quit homework..brace yourself for 3 hours of absolutely heavenly loving" ,smirked yuvi with a loving glint in his eyes..
 
ashi had no idea as to HOW she could be all alone with him..yeah she loved him, he was all she cared about with all her heart,
 
"ashi i really love you,i never thought ki main kisi ke liye bhi itna deeply feel karunga,within all those days that we spent together,ashi i want them never to fade from our life..we belong together shona"
 
he cupped her face in his hands and looked in her eyes,mesmerised by the depth of those beautiful hazel eyes that were transfixed on his..
 
both of them were engrossed in the intensity of their feelings, their was just something so special and intimate without them touchin each other,just one gaze was enough to prove their commitment fr each other.
 
"yuvi..I..ummm..."
but ashi was silenced by the intense kiss that yuvi planted on her lips,it wasn't a peck ,it was addictive..
when they broke apart ,their hands still remained entwined.
 
they both sat on d window sill,ashi lounging on yuvi's lap and yuvi caresing her cheek.
 
"yuvi,tumne kya plan kiya hai?" hum kaha jaa rahe hai?? kya karenge? batao naaaaaaa" ashi just started jumping in his lap,alarming yuvi even more now from female antics!
 
"ASHIIIIIIIIII.." he suddenly lowered his voice and softened his expressions,since  his loud shout out had affronted ashi! *or so he thought* , " uh baby,its a surprise..its OUR first date,its damn special for us,and it will be even more special when its a surprise" he put his hands on her shoulder and gave his adowable yuvi smile( the kind I adore)
 
he let out an amused laughter when ashi hmpphhed at the surprise bit., and kissed the top her head while she continued to act pricey!
 
one and a half hour had passed
 
"yuvi so u promise to love me all my life?" asked ashi with a twinkle in her eye and redness on her cheeks
 
"hmm nope,because im gonna love you for the rest of mine" he looked down at her xpecting a dhamaka of emotions!
 
when she didnt say anything, he walked in front of her,kneeled on one knee,held her hand and said,
 
"Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
 
ashi was overwhelemed,it had just been a day ,but this was the sign that she had found her man, her absolute rock,some one that will stand by her forever,will always stand her tantrums and keep her sane and happy..
 
with a tear rolling down her cheeks she just flung her arms around yuvi and kissed him hard on the lips..then she gently pecked his cheeks and whispered in his ears
 
" ur the magic in my life, my nonu psycho"
 
 
ps:i tried to be as romantic as possible..and i know that i have succeeded, marna mat im totally out of touch with writingTongue but its not my best,bt what the heck! i hope u all like it Smile

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Res! 

-EDITED-

When I read your name, I was expecting a chutku sa part. I was literally shocked when I saw the update, and I saw there - wide-eyed - for I don't know how long. And I was like .. Oh Mi Gosh, Debby ne itna bada update kiya!? ROFL

A pleasant surprise, indeed, Debs! Big smile Loved the update!! Big smile Beech beech mein mujhe laga main TiaRa FF padh rahi hoon! LOL But then you came up with this one-liner..jo sirf Ashi ya Yuvi hi de sakte hain! LOL 

"Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"

And that part was so aww!! This has to be the highlight!! Yuvi is SO adorable in this FF! Embarrassed And I love you for the promise thingy..I mean, we can use it in RCC 2, you know? After the break up n all .. But when I read this part, aww, they are so in love, break up kaise karayein .. kuch idea nahi aata! :P

Aaj jo khaaya hai .. harroz vahi khaaya karo .. and bless us with more updates like these! Big smile


Edited by _Akanksha_ - 12 February 2011 at 10:21am

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
UNRES KARO NA! ROFL
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

UNRES KARO NA! ROFL

Kara! Big smile

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Res! 

-EDITED-

When I read your name, I was expecting a chutku sa part. I was literally shocked when I saw the update, and I saw there - wide-eyed - for I don't know how long. And I was like .. Oh Mi Gosh, Debby ne itna bada update kiya!? ROFL

A pleasant surprise, indeed, Debs! Big smile Loved the update!! Big smile Beech beech mein mujhe laga main TiaRa FF padh rahi hoon! LOL But then you came up with this one-liner..jo sirf Ashi ya Yuvi hi de sakte hain! LOL 

"Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"

And that part was so aww!! This has to be the highlight!! Yuvi is SO adorable in this FF! Embarrassed And I love you for the promise thingy..I mean, we can use it in RCC 2, you know? After the break up n all .. But when I read this part, aww, they are so in love, break up kaise karayein .. kuch idea nahi aata! :P

Aaj jo khaaya hai .. harroz vahi khaaya karo .. and bless us with more updates like these! Big smile
uhh well main kal stomach upset se grast thiLOLLOLLOLLOL
lmao @chutka! omggggggggg chutkaROFL
main abhi bhi shocked hu ki maine itna bada part likha..like maine??? my god my celeb status is in jeapordy!ShockedLOLLOLLOL
 
thank u..i love those lines..i have no idea how i wrote thatShockedEmbarrassed so pardon me if i do dis for myselfClapClapClapClapClap
 
 

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

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