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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

UNRES KARO NA! ROFL

Kara! Big smile

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Res! 

-EDITED-

When I read your name, I was expecting a chutku sa part. I was literally shocked when I saw the update, and I saw there - wide-eyed - for I don't know how long. And I was like .. Oh Mi Gosh, Debby ne itna bada update kiya!? ROFL

A pleasant surprise, indeed, Debs! Big smile Loved the update!! Big smile Beech beech mein mujhe laga main TiaRa FF padh rahi hoon! LOL But then you came up with this one-liner..jo sirf Ashi ya Yuvi hi de sakte hain! LOL 

"Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"

And that part was so aww!! This has to be the highlight!! Yuvi is SO adorable in this FF! Embarrassed And I love you for the promise thingy..I mean, we can use it in RCC 2, you know? After the break up n all .. But when I read this part, aww, they are so in love, break up kaise karayein .. kuch idea nahi aata! :P

Aaj jo khaaya hai .. harroz vahi khaaya karo .. and bless us with more updates like these! Big smile
uhh well main kal stomach upset se grast thiLOLLOLLOLLOL
lmao @chutka! omggggggggg chutkaROFL
main abhi bhi shocked hu ki maine itna bada part likha..like maine??? my god my celeb status is in jeapordy!ShockedLOLLOLLOL
 
thank u..i love those lines..i have no idea how i wrote thatShockedEmbarrassed so pardon me if i do dis for myselfClapClapClapClapClap
 
 

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

thanx kyun haan????ShockedShockedShockedShocked  its my corner too..tum donomera celeb status seriously lete hoLOLLOL i noe i was shocked at d mush n i had tttttoooooo have some wackopanti..toh one liners were needed..kitna dimag lagaya maine!
dat line seriously has magic in it! Embarrassed 
next part soon..LOL

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

Originally posted by elizaa

@debeleena...
frst of all thanks for the BIG update..
nnd the best was ay with their oneliners..
ashi so wanted to be with him, so happy tht they wer left alone, lekin madam wants to throw her tantrums too.. and uv handles her so wellllEmbarrassed
upar se to tease her more, he imitates her..
lol... yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... and i knw wht smile u wer talking bout.. am tooo fida on tht one!!
Look. I guarantee that we'll have tough times. And I guarantee that at some point, one or both of us will want to get out of this thing. But I also Guarantee that if I don't ask you to be mine I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Because I know in my heart, you're the only one for me, i promise that this psycho will never let you down"
omg omgomg... this part, i really cld feel the ay scene.. i remember their heart to heart talks.. this one was the bestest line uve written.. 

and both of them giving sweet nicks to each other.. tht was another thing tht i liked.. 
ashu sahi boli, tum wahi khao jo aaj khaya haiLOL
waise next kab de rahi ho?

thanx kyun haan????Shocked  its my corner too..tum donomera celeb status seriously lete hoLOLLOL i noe i was shocked at d mush n i had tttttoooooo have some wackopanti..toh one liners were needed..kitna dimag lagaya maine!
dat line seriously has magic in it! Embarrassed 
next part soon..LOL

thanks for the BIG update.
BIG*
Silly

ur one liners were awesome!!!
ill update tomrrw.. kal college hai.. bloody sunday

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
hey !! debo .. this part was a real mixture of witticism and sweetness ... they are really crazy but they wouldn't have been them without their craziness ... you have described ashi's anger very nicely ... and loved yuvi's reaction to itLOL ... they both are so adorable ... me too loved the promise wala sentence ..... and i agree with you ... it has some sort of magic in it ... TongueTongue

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
thanx arps...i noe Big smile im soo coolLOL
arps u have to write!
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

thanx arps...i noe Big smile im soo coolLOL
arps u have to write!

yesterday i said that i'll giv it a try but you guys can't kill me if it's pathetic ... ok

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