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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:53am | IP Logged
godd!! they r not supposed to be this way on the sec day of col!!! i really dnt knw why am doing this again.... make them kill each other again plzzz... hmm btw, they are all alone in the jungle, wht else can we expect, and let them be this way here, weel make tem fight wen they r back at skool!!

loved ur post debo!! plz write more!!! plzzzz
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part 29

yeah wer in trouble..yuvi thought smugly!

It was enough she had been his mother, taking care of him, but having him make her day even worse...'

And it was only the second day of school!

anger rolled down her cheeks like smoke, and his eyes widened when he saw her face. 

ashi thought he would actually apologize to her for doing this, but no, life was always set on proving her wrong. 

A slow smirk climbed up his face and he laughed at her.

she dropped everything she was carrying and bolted out of there as quick as she could. she needed space; she needed to let her anger out. 

Everything around her was blurred as she ran. she was running too fast to realize where she was going 

and the next thing she knew was that she was lying on top of a hard muscular body. 

her eyes flickered open and she looked at the person who was under her.

"Uh- what..?" UV opening his own eyes.

"Sorry," she whispered, rolling over so that she was off him and she sat up, dazed. 

she walking fast.... fast, around the same trees in anger, and didnt bother to se mr yuvraj dev who hadnt moved an inch from there...

He got to his feet and he turned warm brown eyes towards ashi.
 
"Its okay, ashi, you alright?" he asked, putting out a hand for her to take.

ashi took in a sharp breath as she took his hand, 

her anger vanished...realizing how a jolt of pain went up her arm. 

He looked down at their hands confused and took his hand away. 

Then he quickly took ashi's hands and I realized there was blood. 

"She must've hurt herself when she fell on top of me," he murmured,, worry etched into his voice. 

"Let's go wer u say," he said, taking her by her wrist and pulling her out of her dreamland. 

He was much stronger than her, being one of the stars in the football team but she refused and dug her feet into the grass.

 "No, I don't want to go there, we will go this way," she said, firmly.

uv frowned and picked up her bag. "do u have some water ashi??"

"yeah i do, its in tht bag of mine" she replied.

"need to wash hands"

"wht!!! uv, theres just a bottle of water left, and we dnt knw wen we r getting out of here, and u want to finish it all by washing ur hands, give my bag psycho!!" she yelled

uv pulled the bag back and got the bottle out, ashi tried snatching it from uv, but she knew, he was too strong for her!

he opend the bottle and caught ashi's hand, 

"we need to wash ur hands, i dnt want ur wound to get infected" he said with a concerned look,

she shook her head side to side firmly. "I can take care of it," she mumbled.

Defeated, he dropped her hand and then reached into his pocket to pull out a handkerchief. 

He re-picked up her hand and then pulled her towards him and cupped his hands, scooping up water over the handkerchief and dabbed the wet cloth over the cut on her palm. 

she felt a slight pain in her hand and then looked up at uv who was working so intently on wrapping her hand with the handkerchief. It awed her on how careful and gentle he was being, she was used to him running around annoying her 24/7. 

His forehead was scrunched up, concentrating hard on what he was doing and then a proud smile slid up his face as he finished, dropping her hand.

"There, all better," he declared and she chuckled at his happiness.



Edited by elizaa - 24 December 2010 at 7:05am

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OMG, so many great parts! I am going next I am going next!! Big smile And yesh, I am 14, okay? No doubts there. :P And elizaa, you have improved SO MUCH since your first part! Honestly, girl, that was AMAZING! And Debby, glad to have you back!

I dont know why Im doing this, either..but they can always kill each other WITH a  certain amount of passion :P
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PART 30

Ashi looked up to meet his gaze. He looked at her with equally sincere eyes. His gaze bore deep into her eyes, and he moved his face closer. They were just inches away, now. Ashi looked down at his lips, and she realised that her own lips were trembling. Her legs were quavering under the intensity of his eyes. This wasn't her. This wasn't Ashi-like at all. She hesitated and moved her gaze down, and Yuvi snapped out of his reverie and moved back. Ashi narrowed her eyes but didn't look at him. She couldn't trust herself to. 

''I...I am sorry, Ashi.'' Yuvi said. And he sounded sincere. He ran a hand through his hair, eyes looking around, thinking of words to say. 

Ashi didn't know why, but at that moment, she wanted to run away from there. Tears were bundling in her eyes and she had to let them out. She felt angry. She felt angry at herself for hesitating. She felt angry at him for coming close to her in the first place. She felt angry at herself to make a fool out of her in front of him. What's he gonna think? Ashi is just another girl for Yuvraj Dev. Just another lovestruck puppy?

She shook her head and blinked her tears back. She would never give the satisfaction of breaking her heart to him. She would never let anyone see through her strong personality to the real her. Especially to guys like him.

''Let's get moving. We need to look for a shelter!'' She forced her gaze up to meet his eyes. And she could see a sincere apology there, a genuineness that he didn't mean it that way! But she knew that guys like him know exactly the tricks to trap a girl, how to show that innocence, that genuineness, and that apology in your eyes to get them back. And she wasn't gonna give in, no matter how much her heart resists.

(Yuvi's POV )

He doesn't know what happened. All he knew was that Ashi was close to him, so close that he couldn't help himself. Before he could think, his feet moved on their own. He wanted to close every single inch of distance between them. He could feel her breath on his face. He could see her trembling lips from less than a inch of a distance and he couldn't help but smile. All he wanted was to press his lips to her and forget everything about the world. Where they are, what are they going to do, how are they gonna get back - Nothing mattered.

But, at the last moment, he had seen her hesitation, her confused, and he had snapped out of it. He wanted to explain to her what had happened, but he himself was confused. He had realised her closeness did something strange to him, now he was sure. And he didn't even know why. All he knew was that he had ruined himself in her eyes. Probably she hated him. And he thought..Maybe that's good. Maybe getting close to her was something he didn't want, either. He had just sensed the crazyness, and he had no intention of doing it again, no matter how appealing it is. He decided they were better off seperate. And he just nodded when she asked to go look for the shelter.


Edited by Akanksha0701 - 24 December 2010 at 8:34am

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Originally posted by Akanksha0701

OMG, so many great parts! I am going next I am going next!! Big smile And yesh, I am 14, okay? No doubts there. :P And elizaa, you have improved SO MUCH since your first part! Honestly, girl, that was AMAZING! And Debby, glad to have you back!

I dont know why Im doing this, either..but they can always kill each other WITH a  certain amount of passion :P


thanks sweets!!
improved??
i thot ud be like... "liz... its supposed to be remix and not ashi uv only Angry "
par yahaan toh kahaani kuch aur hi hai!!
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lol>> par now i have nothing in mind.. u guys have to continue for a few days, i need to go, christmas na, understand, chal, g2g, have to get ready 4 the mass!!
but plzzz do continue!!


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Since no one is continuing, I just thought I would. Ermm

PART 31

Ashi and Yuvi both walked in silence for about an hour, Yuvi knew this  was so unlike her. He kept stealing glances at her, trying to read her expressions. But she had this undecipherable mask of emotions on. He knew she was bitter, angry even. She must have felt humiliated when he broke the kiss. But.. didn't she back down, first? Shouldn't he be the angry one? 

Yuvi scowled. Why are girls so complicated!? 

''Hmm?'' Ashi looked at him when she saw him frowning. He immediately dropped his frown, but couldn't smile. He just shook his head and waved at her to continue.

Ashi nodded - eyes cold and empty, chin down, cheeks red and puffed - and kept walking. Yuvi stood there for a moment, not knowing what to do. He kept looking at Ashi for a second, and threw a nearby stick in frustation. Could this day get any worse!? He thought. And just then, it started raining.

''Damn it!'' He growled in frustation. Ashi turned around and narrowed her eyes. What are they going to do? 

Yuvi looked around. He could see a small hut in a nearby distance. He pointed to it, and Ashi's face broke into a relieved smile. ''Hey bhaggu, thank god, we got a hut! I hate hate hate hate rains.''

This was the first time he had heard Ashi speak since that incident happen, and that too, in a totally Ashi-ish way. Her psycho-ish way. Maybe this rain can't be THAT bad. 


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I don't know what I'm doing..making them hate each other in a part, and then talking to each other normally. But..yeah..I WANTED a normal part now! Embarrassed

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PART 32

Ashi reached the hut first. ''I just hope it's open! I can't go on around with him anymore. That too, in RAIN! No way.''

Yuvi reached on the steps and bend down and tried to take breaths. 

''Oh gosh, Yuvi, what are you!? Asthma ke patient? It was only a good 3 miles.''

Yuvi narrowed his eyes and shook his head. ''I can't ever understand you, Ashi. One moment, you are like all rude and cold, and then, you are back to being sarcastic.'' 

Ashi tried to smile, but the smile wouldn't reach her eyes. ''I guess you will just have to get used to these mood swings!''

Yuvi smiled. ''I guess I will have to.''

''Okay!'' Ashi turned back to the door. ''1, 2, 3.. Here we go!'' She kicked the door with her right leg and it fell back with a WHOOSH! Yuvi choked on nothing, and Ashi grinned. 

''Where did you learn to do that!?'' Yuvi hurried on and looked at the door.

''Self-defence lessons! Im the only daughter of a superstar..I need protection, don't I?'' She grinned. ''Okay let's go!''

They went inside, and took a good look at the hut. It was smaller than it looked, with a square piece of land with a bed, a fireplace, and some dishes. There was nothing else. And it didn't look like no one else lived there. The place was dirty, spider webs hanging everywhere. 

''Ewww. Dirty..but manageable!'' Ashi tilted her head and looked at the hut. 

''Manageable? NO WAY!'' Yuvi threw his hands back and started walking out the door. ''There's no way I am living in that worse-than-a-slum place.''

Ashi held his hand and stopped him. ''We ain't living here! We are just staying here until someone finds us. Or atleast till morning. It's getting dark-'' She looked at the sky. ''- and I don't fancy being the dinner of some ugly four-legged animals.''

Yuvi rolled his eyes. ''Fine! We will stay.''





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lol..this reminds me of armaan riddhima's medical camp..wen dey boty got stuck in dat forest!..gahh gud times..n guys puhleeez...lets nt have anymore romance..ill get sick..i want a wackyyy story shuru mein..baad me we cn have all d love we need!Blushing
 
 
part 33
 
outside it had began pouring like cats and dogs...
 
brrrrrrrrrr...., ashi shivered...hey bhaggu..i hate rains......
 
meanwhile yuvi was as usual lazing around in his rajkumar
 
 avtar.waiting to be served upon..
 
"uhhh....ashi ab kya kare?" he asked quiet nonchalantly...
 
"duh uh dimwit..pooch toh aise rahe ho jaise main tumhari jungle
 
 safari ki itinerary sath me lekar ghoom rahi hu"..
 
*shuru ho gayi* muttered yuvi under his breath...
 
"kuch kaha tumne??' ashi snapped at him..
 
ashi was in an absolutely black temper at the moment which she
 
 attributed to the rain,the cold ,the squelchy wet feeling that she was
 
 getting while doin nothing....
 
she glanced towards her right at the boy who was lounging around
 
 and simply doing nothing...her temper went for an extreme toss...and
 
 she ..anvesha ray bannerjee...wanted nothing but to strangle this
 
 yuckraj dev  and make fettucini pasta out of him..
 
"mujhe thand lag rahi hai" ashi managed to get that idea into his mind...
 
hmmm actualy this wud be a sufi opportunity to make her crazy for me...yuvi thought smugly..
 
"ohh..ashi tum idhar aa jao...dis is a cosy spot!"..
 
ashi though confused by his sudden burst of gallantry shifted into the
 
 "so called cosy spot"
 
"thanx.." she said without looking at him...
 
 
note: make it more crzy..with more one liners and wackinessEmbarrassed

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PART 34

Ashi moved to the corner of the bed where Yuvi was sitting. Yuvi graciously wiped the dirt off the place and grinned. Ashi rolled her eyes and snuggled in. 

''Not good enough.'' Ashi frowned.''I don't have a jacket on 'cause you needed it more. My top is kinda in shreds because I had to rip it to tie around your leg. And you are all warm and cosy, tucked in, properly getting taken care of, and look at me-'' Ashi pointed to herself. -''Im roaming around like a foreign tourist in a strapless shirt and shorts in December!''

Yuvi chuckled. She was getting back to the original psycho. He liked that. ''Okay Ashi, tell me what you want me to do! Take my jacket off and give it to you, like a proper gentlemen?''

''That won't work because that is MY jacket, in the first place!'' Ashi snorted. ''And besides, I don't want to carry you around half-dead like a while ago! People would seriously assume I killed you.''

''Tuck in, then!'' Yuvi grinned and moved behind. Ashi looked at him curiously, and then just rolled her eyes and muttered, ''Anything to keep warm'' and snuggled in on top of him. She was almost sitting on his lap, and his lips were nearly brushing her hair. 

''Still cold?'' Yuvi asked,

''No, thank you!'' Ashi snapped. 

''Ashi..''

''Yuvi..''

''You know I hate you, right?''

''Trust me, the feeling is mutual.'' Ashi growled.

''Yeah, but, you know, I did something to get you in trouble today.''

''Did what?'' Ashi turned around and looked at him. 

''Check your bag?''

''What's in my bag?'' Ashi looked at him with widened eyes and almost tripped over his feet as she rushed for the bag. She unzipped it and opened it to find a big bottle of alcohol resting above her stuff.

''Pass it.'' Yuvi grinned. 

''What? NO WAY. I don't fancy spending a night with a alcoholic, I swear!''

''Are you scared?'' Yuvi grinned, and Ashi could see the glint in his eye even from a distance.

''NO!'' Ashi snapped. ''I just don't want you to drink!''

''Oh, who said only Im drinking? We both are.'' Yuvi tilted his head and looked at his watch. ''Besides, we have more than 12 hours to go. We might as well do something. We don't have anything else to survive on, do we?''

Ashi tensed. This was going to be trouble. 





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lol..yuvi loves to drinkROFL..love dis part aku..it was fabulous!

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