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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

ill read n comment liz!
yes yes we r not ending dis..i cant write in forbiden much as much as i try!..
but here my feelings and my heart overpowers me..and creativity just flowssssssssss

temme about it..
i so dnt have time for anything, but i manage to remove time for this rcc corner.. i dnt knw y, my heart pulls me here.. u want to go next debileena?

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE NO ADITYAAAAAAAAAAAA....AKANKSHA CHHHABRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..DONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT BRING ADITYAAAAAAAAA..
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no no no nooooooooooooo...we can have something else...i dnt want any more third party to intrude on dem now..agar aisa hua toh main aur lizzie STRIKE pe chale jayengeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
 
 
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrAngry

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by luv_wacko

ill read n comment liz!
yes yes we r not ending dis..i cant write in forbiden much as much as i try!..
but here my feelings and my heart overpowers me..and creativity just flowssssssssss

temme about it..
i so dnt have time for anything, but i manage to remove time for this rcc corner.. i dnt knw y, my heart pulls me here.. u want to go next debileena?
awww sAme here..even wen i dnt write i still love reading d story from d startEmbarrassed
okay im going next!Big smile music to ur ears na?LOL
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by luv_wacko

ill read n comment liz!
yes yes we r not ending dis..i cant write in forbiden much as much as i try!..
but here my feelings and my heart overpowers me..and creativity just flowssssssssss

temme about it..
i so dnt have time for anything, but i manage to remove time for this rcc corner.. i dnt knw y, my heart pulls me here.. u want to go next debileena?
awww sAme here..even wen i dnt write i still love reading d story from d startEmbarrassed
okay im going next!Big smile music to ur ears na?LOL


Embarrassed this was the only thing tht made me happy after ashu's yesterdays news!
music nahi!! mast waala band!!!
jaldi jaldi!!

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE NO ADITYAAAAAAAAAAAA....AKANKSHA CHHHABRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..DONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT BRING ADITYAAAAAAAAA..
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no no no nooooooooooooo...we can have something else...i dnt want any more third party to intrude on dem now..agar aisa hua toh main aur lizzie STRIKE pe chale jayengeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
 
 
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrAngry

seee seee!!! ashuuu

cant u see... 2 of ur writers r going on a strike!!!
debs!! che needs serious help ;)
she LIKES aditiya!! 
we need to show her some aage ke videos :|
mujhe serious heart probs honewaali hai!!
uff uff these kids!!
Wink
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
hahaha..she like aditya..god..dude ur in for a rude shock..
!
haan im writing abhi..will finsh n post in some 10  mins..
aki no please i cant stand more triangles and stuff AT ALL...
im slowly aiming for them to confess and all..uske baad thoda happy puppies wale romantic moments bhi dikhayenge na...
cmon no adi..we can have remix gang fun! okay!

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged

PART 111

ashi stood there ,watching him go..the sadness had been replaced by a renewed sense of hope ,and his eyes echoed that emotion very well,atleast to her,that sudden glow became inevitable to ignore!
"kyun, why him ya!..why...main abhi tak ye nahi samajh paa rahi..ki main iss monkey poop se PYAR kaise kar sakti hu?!?!?!
like how..hello its me -ashi!"
 
ashi sood there,looking at the door and talking to herself..the first signs of a lunatic in love..
*great ab main apne aap se baatein bhi kar rahi hu,bhaggu kasam jisne bhi ye love ka concept banaya hai..usski toh...*
 
but suddenly she spotted a gleaming silver on the floor,she picked it up..it was a guitar shaped key chain..wid YD embossed on it in gold!
 
 
ashi suddenly softened at the sight of it...each memory..each touch re surfacing ..yuvi was so soft,so caring when it came to her..
*did he love me then,all the defence ,all the moments we spent together,alone*
who is that other friend,is it me? is it someone else?..who is it..
 
and then rationality swept over her and she snapped out of her reverie at the creak of the door!
                                                                                                                                      
 
yuvi was in the cafetaria..trying to find some peace and quiet..in the babble of the students!Smile...
suddenly he heard a song playing in the background..
 
tum mile toh mil gaya humsafar
tum mile,toh khud ki hai khabar
tum mile,
toh rishta sa ban gaya!
 
suddenly the memory of them being in the jungle rose in his mind,ashi getting drunk...telling him that she liked him..a sweet smile(THE KIND I ADOREEEEEEEEEE) lit up his face..
 
tum mile,toh jadoo chha gaya
tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
tum mile
toh maine paya hai khuda...
 
so was she the reason..was she my strenght,my being
ASHI...
a mischievous knowing smile finally made him realise that she was special..
 
 
note: guys der is a loose end in d ashi part..that someone comes..but please its not aditya...(aki pad leLOL???)
make it someone else...like ranveer vrinda or even jas..but not HIM!


Edited by luv_wacko - 30 January 2011 at 7:00am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Err, dude, I liked Adi. OuchOuch Vaise bhi .. We decided on a different name, na? Not Adi, but Karan. :P Phir kyon? Mere saath aisa dhoka kyon!? CryCry

But I liked the part! Big smile Nah .. Agar main Aditya ko laayi .. toh I'll make him enter grandly, not like this! LOL Toh it can be anyone. But .. Adi chahiye mujhe!! I can't write lovey dovey moments. I SUCK. :P

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