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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
He knew, this was not the right time let her knw, tht the one who broke her heart, just saw it breaking into pieces.

she knew it hurts wen ur heart breaks, but it would definitely kill her if yuvi broke down.
 

Yeh dono lines se pata chalta hai k kabir n ashi ko pata hai what love is ... Lizzie great going....yeh lastly jitne bhi parts aa rahe hai tum dono k..they are so in sync...love them all...

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manur

He knew, this was not the right time let her knw, tht the one who broke her heart, just saw it breaking into pieces.

she knew it hurts wen ur heart breaks, but it would definitely kill her if yuvi broke down.
 

Yeh dono lines se pata chalta hai k kabir n ashi ko pata hai what love is ... Lizzie great going....yeh lastly jitne bhi parts aa rahe hai tum dono k..they are so in sync...love them all...

oye!! helllo!!
shuru se toh padha nahi, aur challi comment karne?
go and get done from the strt and say syunc mein hai ya nahi....Angry

ashu... can we block such readers plzz
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
i promise ill catch up soon..im so caught up in my packing n stuff n information visa ..geeeeeez!
bt sunday ko part is promised by me.! and i keep my promises!
so liz aki cant say awesome partsLOL

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by manur

He knew, this was not the right time let her knw, tht the one who broke her heart, just saw it breaking into pieces.

she knew it hurts wen ur heart breaks, but it would definitely kill her if yuvi broke down.
 

Yeh dono lines se pata chalta hai k kabir n ashi ko pata hai what love is ... Lizzie great going....yeh lastly jitne bhi parts aa rahe hai tum dono k..they are so in sync...love them all...

oye!! helllo!!
shuru se toh padha nahi, aur challi comment karne?
go and get done from the strt and say syunc mein hai ya nahi....Angry

ashu... can we block such readers plzz
:P

AJeeebb ho tum  bhi lizzie..pehle zaberdasti padne par lekar aye aur abhi block karna hai ....CONFUSE.COM ROFLROFL
sync mai last parts k liye kaha shuru se nahi lolxx.x..notice karo..

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

i promise ill catch up soon..im so caught up in my packing n stuff n information visa ..geeeeeez!
bt sunday ko part is promised by me.! and i keep my promises!
so liz aki cant say awesome partsLOL
youu.. youuu litte gum in my toe
:|
u just disappear like anything..
have a safe journey...
shop alot
take less luggage and get the triple of it!! tu bMby mein hoti, aur meri maa ko pata hota, toh tere saath bhi koi bag bhej diya jaata... rels ke liye..
lol..
bombay mammas.. 
uff
come back soon and SUN KO WE BETTER GET LEAST 2 PARTS
:|
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manur

AJeeebb ho tum  bhi lizzie..pehle zaberdasti padne par lekar aye aur abhi block karna hai ....CONFUSE.COM ROFLROFL
sync mai last parts k liye kaha shuru se nahi lolxx.x..notice karo..

kisi ne kuch kaha??Silly
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by luv_wacko

i promise ill catch up soon..im so caught up in my packing n stuff n information visa ..geeeeeez!
bt sunday ko part is promised by me.! and i keep my promises!
so liz aki cant say awesome partsLOL
youu.. youuu litte gum in my toe
:|
u just disappear like anything..
have a safe journey...
shop alot
take less luggage and get the triple of it!! tu bMby mein hoti, aur meri maa ko pata hota, toh tere saath bhi koi bag bhej diya jaata... rels ke liye..
lol..
bombay mammas.. 
uff
come back soon and SUN KO WE BETTER GET LEAST 2 PARTS
:|
haha..absolutely ..thank u so much!Embarrassed...
lmao..bombay mammas...!
ill try..if im free..bt ek part is guarnteed!LOLWink

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
PART 107

Yuvi walked back to Jasmine. He was there, but only physically. His mind was lost somewhere. He felt ' broken for some reason. He felt incomplete.

He shook his head, but he couldn't get the image out of his head. Ashi hugging kabir tightly, her cheek on his shoulders, Kabir running a hand through her hair, hugging her back.

I know this is love, I can feel it, Kabir.

The voice rang out again and again in his head, and he had this strong urge to shut his ears and scream. Scream away all the rage, the frustration that was flowing all over in his body like blood. He clenched his fists and forced a smile. ''Hey Jas''

''Hey'' She tossed her hair and grinned. Her smile grew wider as she saw Kabir and Ashi in the parking lot behind Yuvi. ''Are they going out together?'' She asked.

''Huh?'' He turned behind, and all the anger seemed to be doubling in inside him, as he saw Ashi smiling and following Kabir in his car, hands-in-hands. ''She didn't even bother to meet me.'' He muttered.

''Aww, she is busy, Yuvi. Chill. She will meet you when she gets back, okay?''

He nodded blankly, as he looked at the car driving away. He looked back at Jas. ''I gotta go. I need some rest. I will see you tomorrow.'' And without waiting for an answer, he walked away.

 ---

Kabir pulled the car in the driveway as they both got out of it.

''I am sorry, Kabir, but I don't trust you.'' Ashi said.

''I know. That's why I want you to have the proof.'' Kabir smiled, and knocked at the door. After a moment, someone answered.  A decent looking guy with black hair and a boyish smile opened the door. ''Hey bro, what's up?'' Kabir and the guy embraced for a second. Kabir broke the hug. ''Sahil, Ashi. Ashi, Sahil.''

''Hey Sahil.'' Ashi extended a hand. He  smiled and took it. ''Hey there. Nice to meet you.'' He looked at Kabir. ''Girlfriend?''

''Uh'No'' Kabir smiled warily. ''Friend. We wanted to ask you something. We need some answers. And a proof.''

''About?'' He raised a eyebrow and opened the door. ''Come in both of you.''

They sat on the sofa, and Kabir leaned forward meaningfully. ''jasmine is your girlfriend, right?''

He smiled. ''Yeah bro, we are together since three years now. You should know. I love her a lot, more than my life.''

''Is she the one in Maurya High?''

Sahil nodded. ''Yes, she joined Maurya a month ago. Why? What's wrong?''

Kabir looked at Ashi, who went numb. He looked at Sahil again. ''She lives with you, right?''

''Yeah.'' He answered. ''What happened? Tell me. What's wrong?''

''You are lying!'' Ashi snapped. ''Both of you. I don't ' I can't trust you.'' She started to walk away, but Kabir held her hand. ''Wait.'' He called. ''Sahil, do you have her picture? You two's picture together?''

He nodded, confused, but he opened the door to a room where a huge portrait of Jasmine kissing Sahil on the cheek hung. ''Jasmine's room.'' He announced, and sure enough, there were her clothes, her books, her stuff.

She turned back to Sahil. ''Sahil,  I know this might upset you, but you deserve to know it. She..'' She hesitated. ''Jasmine is cheating on you.''

Sahil blinked. ''What the-? She is my girlfriend since THREE YEARS. Our love is TRUE. How dare you say that?''

Kabir interrupted. ''Sahil, Ashi is right. She is cheating on you, and we want to help the other guy too. He's completely unaware of Jasmine's relationship with you. He deserves to know, too. Sahil, sahil?''

Sahil stared at the open space for a moment. He snapped out of it and nodded. ''What do you want me to do?''

''We would need some pictures. Please.'' Ashi said.

''Take whatever you want.'' Sahil said, as he walked out of the room, tears stinging in his eyes. Ashi looked at him for a while. His broken and unhealed wound was so like hers. She would learn how to protect it from now on. But right now, protecting Yuvi was the important thing to do. She collected some joint Jasmine-Sahil photos, and they went back to Maurya. 



Edited by _Akanksha_ - 28 January 2011 at 7:36am

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