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PART 98

 Ashi shouted curses at each and every language she knew at the speeding away car. One car. In 20 minutes. And it just moved past her, ignoring her every plead for help. 

Damn Yuvi. She frowned. Khud ko samajhta kya hai? He left me all alone in this area. All alone. At 12 in the midnight. Talk about a ideal boyfriend ..

She kicked a stone in frustration. Moron. Loser. Psycho.

She walked forward. The road came to a crossing. Left, right or straight? She thought. There was complete darkness on the right side. She could hear people on the left. People. Drunk? Dangerous people? The road that led straight ahead was empty, but lighted. Light. Empty. Safe?

She shook her head. Obviously she should take the left road, where she can hear people. And she can handle any dangerous drunkards, she thought, and clenched her fists. She might even find someone to help her. She started moving on the left road. She could hear people shouting and hooting at the far corner. There was a crowd. She stopped and thought about her decision again. Should she really take this way? She gritted her teeth. If only Yuvi hadn't put me in this mess in the first place, now I am going to get out of here myself. She stomped forward. To her surprise, there wasn't a crowd there. There were about 3, no 4, people on the roadside bench. They had something in their hands. Alcohol. Drunk people. She snapped. Just like she thought there would be.

She ignored them and kept moving. She was scared, she had to admit it, if not to everyone, but to herself. She felt the man's eyes turning towards her. She didn't know what they saw in her, since she never turned that way. Her steps turned fast, and she crossed the edge and turned.

She heaved a sigh of relief. Relief. Phew. She smiled and started walking again. That was easy. She kept moving. After about 10 steps, she heard crunching of leaves behind her. They instantly stopped, as if the person realized their mistake and stepped off the leaves. She walked again. Footsteps. She was sure she heard them. Someone was following her. Damn. For an instant, relief surged through her. Yuvi? Is this one of his another plans? She clenched her fists. He is so dead. She turned around, and the person she saw – It wasn't Yuvi.

Damn. Bad idea to turn around. She muttered as she saw one of the drunkards behind her. He looked old – very old. 40, maybe? This was no time to think about his age. What should she do? Run? No way. She wasn't running like a coward. The drunkard realized that he had been spotted and he begun to move swiftly towards her. Run. Run. Run, Ashi. We can worry about your reputation later.

She turned around and started running. She was better in it than she thought she would be. She smiled with self-pride, but that smile vanished as she heard running footsteps behind her. Damn, was he running too? He is 40, he needs to lie down on his bed with his crutch lying on his side. She snapped angrily as she turned another corner.

Headlights. She saw headlights of a car. Great. She grinned and ran in front of the car. She leaned on the car for a minute. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. ''Help.'' She knocked on the window. ''Help.'' She looked behind to see the drunkard on the corner, glaring at her  and at the person in the window.  

Someone got out of the car behind her. ''Gaadi mein baitho!'' He whispered. His voice was strangely familiar. She turned around. Yuvi.

''Yuvi!'' She herself didn't quite know what she felt then. It was a mixture of relief, joy, anticipation, and anger. She had this urge to hug him tightly, and she had this urge to scream at him and pull his hair out. She could just stand there and stare at him awkwardly.

There was a rage in his voice she hadn't heard before. Well, she had, once. When he fought with Kabir. But this was stronger. Pure hatred. And his eyes had gone black. He was angry, and his rage reflected in his eyes. His mouth was turned back in a snarl, as he moved towards the drunkard.

She wanted to call out to him, to stop him. But a part of her was enjoying this. He got me in the mess, now let him deal with it. She crossed her arms and grinned.

He moved towards the drunkard, facing him. The man moved his fist to punch him, but Yuvi stopped it from making contact. He gazed in his eyes for a moment, and fell down to his knees.

''Aap theek toh hai na? Isne-'' He pointed to Ashi. ''-Isne aapke saath kuch kiya toh nahi na? Aap theek hai na? Hai na?''

The drunkard looked confused and he pushed Yuvi  away. He again held his legs. The drunkard scowled. ''Get off me.'' He said, and turned behind to walk the way he had come. ''Aaj kal ke bacche.'' He muttered to thin air.

Yuvi stared at him for a second, the cold fury back in his eyes. He turned to Ashi, saw the confused and annoying expression on her face, and he started laughing. He held his stomach and laughed till tears came out of his eyes as he walked back towards Ashi and his car.

Ashi raised a eyebrow at him. ''What was that all about?''

Yuvi wiped the tears off his face. ''Come on, Ashi. I leave you alone for a minute, and you end up having a drunkard at your tail.'' He laughed. ''Well, nobody can resist you. Especially after knowing what you taste like.'' He winked.

Ashi rolled her eyes. ''That reminds me ..'' She punched him in the stomach.

''Ow!'' Yuvi held his stomach. ''You wacko!''

''Well, you psycho! You left me all alone, deserted. You deserve this.''

''I think I deserve a thank you for saving your life.'' Yuvi scowled in pain.

''Saving my life?'' Ashi snapped. ''Yeah, thanks a lot! Tumhaare bina main kya karti?'' She muttered angrily.

''You are welcome. And besides, you asked for it, remember?''

''I DID NOT.'' Ashi growled. Yuvi raised a eyebrow, and Ashi snapped. ''Fine. I did. I take it back. I take my rules back. Do NOT EVER LEAVE ME ALONE IN THE NIGHT AGAIN, understood?''

''Understood.'' Yuvi smiled. ''Want a lift?''

Ashi sighed. ''Yes please. I am starving after all that excitement.''

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
ahahhahahhhahahhahahhahahh!!!!
as u said this ones the best uve ever writtenn!!!!
awwwwwwwwww ashi!!!! poor doll, woh darr gayi? huh? r u serious? she got scared???
and the famous aamir preity scene.... u killed it!!! so many updates for the day?? whtt is it ashu?? 
i get 3 BEAUTIFULLLLLLL ONES from debs today and 3 MOST AMAZING ONES FROM U!!
:P
the last one was a killer as u know..
and u knw wht, i cheated and looked down to see the name of ashi's savior then, and thn i see KABIR?
u wld be so dead if it was kabir.. u just saved ur own freaking life!!LOL
uv actually kneels dwn to tht buddha!! and the oldie is like, aaj kal ke bacche!!!a hahahahha!!!
wer do u get so much wackoness from ashu?? whts with it??
and. adn. and...she punches him again?? i guess thts really not enuf!LOL
and yeah!!!
THANKS, thanks for finishing the QA sessions of y they r still fke dating, and for the latest one.. wht is it? yeah her freaking rules!!
uff uff aasshhii!!!!
am in love with this uv!  jee haan!!!!
with this uv too..
next its me.. 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
liz babe u updating???
bt plz nuthin like d last one..ill kill u denROFL
aki wonderful parts
sowie abt d chhotu one..my sister was hell bent on me shutting d computer down..isliye dat was all i cud manage!

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Liz, you haven't updated yet!! AngryAngry H-U-R-R-Y U-P! :D Debs, you wanna go after her? 
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

liz babe u updating???
bt plz nuthin like d last one..ill kill u denROFL
aki wonderful parts
sowie abt d chhotu one..my sister was hell bent on me shutting d computer down..isliye dat was all i cud manage!

last one...
erm erm.....
Wink
sure, anshu has left the dinner for me...
i still didnt understand wer i messed up in the last update.. plz explainBig smile as anshu refuses to
:P

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
nah aki sowie....cant update today..liz UPDATE

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Liz will update tonight.. after she's back from her party! :) Tab tak I am ITCHING to write!! But I am gonna wait for her .. :D  

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
lol u can write...! she can cntinue after u..

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