Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 4)

Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 10:58am | IP Logged
part 13

'theek hoon??? kaise theek ho sakta hoon>>'

thought varun, he was an old student of mauriya, a bit shy and confused. he refused to come back to mauriya coz he was always looked down upon, but wasnt left with any choice..

his mother hated him, his dad was never in town, his roomies had left mauriya, and he had to adjust with his new room mates.

picking up his bags he made his way through haunting eyes... eyes of his classmates, eyes tht told him how he didnt belong to this place..

wiping his tears, he entered his room, waiting for more ppl to attack his privacy..

how he missed his old roomies, they accepted him like he was... how cld they just leave him alone in this crowd he thought!!

"heyy banna!!" came a voice from the same room.. 

the hello was quite warm, but varun knew, he just knew tht this warm gesture was just a strt, a strt and then he wld be the laughing stock again>>

"hello banna!! ranveer!! ranveer sisodia! aur aap??" there stood a tall friendly man with a broad welcoming smile/

"varun! main varun"

It may not seem this way sometimes, but there are many good people living among us today. They're harder to distinguish, mainly because they are humble and many tend to keep a low profile. They're not seeking adulation. 
It's ironic that the truly good people in society many times do not receive the accolades they deserve, but this is in line with their nature.

varun just refused to understand this.

"toh varun, aap humare sabse pehle dost hue, hum mauriya main naye hai au aapke room mein hi raheinge!!"

"haan, theek hai" nodded varun, 

"woh tumhara bed hai, aur yeh mera"

ranveer smiled at tht, "toh kya hum aapke ilake mein nahi aa sakte kya??" he laughed hard,

 which made varun more uncomfortable,

"hum toh aada time, aapke ilake mein milenge banna!" he said and went to unpack stuff.

'am sure this ranveer is upto something, how can anyone be so sweet to me??' he thought

just then entered the third roomie..

"heyy guys, mein aman, aap logonka room share karoonga!!"

ranveer turned with a smile again, "banna, hum hai ranveer aur yeh hai varun.. hum ek schlorship student hai, aur aap dono??"

"haan, main bhi, varun ko dekh kar lagta hai ki woh bhi ek sclorship student hai, hai na??"

"nahi" was all he cld manage to say.

back to tia's room
"tia, tumhe mr jambwal ne bulaya hai, aur anwesha ko bhi" it was gloria this time

" glo!! jumbo ne tia ko kyun yaad kiya?? ek parrot ko mere room mein daalna kam nahi tha kya?"

"jambwal tia, mr jamwal, he is ur princi, and am gloria!! nt glo!" she stormed out of the room.

"ab tia us punk ko kahaan dhundegi?? oh tia's god!! ab tia kya kare??? haan, tia uv ko fone karegi, tht punk will be with him only" tia thought.

"hello uv, woh punk kya tumhare saath hai??"

"haan, mere saath hi hai" smiled uv/

ashi cldnt figure out wht made him smile so much.

"accha uv, jumbo ne us punk ko aur tia ko apne office mein bulaya hai, tum ussey directly udhar hi le aao, tia bhi aa jayegi"

"alrite sweets"

ashi wondered who this sweets was>> but refused to ask him tht.

"chalo ashi, jumbo ke office mein, tumhe bulaya hai, tia ka fone tha"

"oh, toh woh sweets woh pastry thi" she said to herself,

"kya?? kuch kaha??"

"duh uh!! kehti toh tumhe sunai deta nahi?? oh, main toh bhul hi gayi ki yeh uvraj dev hai, dad ki wajah se, zor se bolo, toh hi sunai deta hoga"

"shut up wacko, aur chalo mere saath"

he held her arm and pulled her hard, this time ashi just didnt say nething, just went along. 

she was never this way, hw cld she just not say anything wen come psyched up loser pulled her all along, but this touch was different, it had the strength to make her quite.

they reached jumbo's office, tia was standing out, quite happy,

"jaao jaao andar punk, good news hai hum dono ke liye"

ashi without looking behind, stomped violently inside the cabin>>

"kya news hai tia?" asked confused uv.

"us red head ko dusre room mein shift kar diya hai!! tia ke room mein tia ki old skool friend pri aa rahi hai, aur koi dusri meher bhi hai, tia doesnt knw her, par us anwesha se toh thodi toh decent hogi naa!!" smiled over excited tia.

anwesha came out of the cabin with a broad smile too.. 

she couldnt help it but keep smiling!!

she saw tia who was very happy with the decision, she went up to her and hugged her tight, tia too went for the big strong hug, this is wht they both wanted, they jumped and smiled leaving uv confused!

"bas bas said uv, looks like url both r happy coz url have been alloted the same room" said uv with a sarcastic smile,

"oh, puhleez uv, tia is happy coz is garbage ko mere room se out kar diya gaya hai"

"and ashi... huh?? god>> guess this is tia's effect, me taking my own name??? whtever, i am happy coz i wont have to live inside a plum cake"

and smiled back to tia..

 tia thot tht this is the fst and last time both of them agreed to one thing, not tht she lived in a plum cake, but tht she cldnt live with this red head...LOL

Edited by elizaa - 24 December 2010 at 6:57am

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Awesome parts, both of you! Sorry..I reserved this post and opened a new one, anyway. My fault. :$ 

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 17 December 2010 at 1:45pm

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 1:44pm | IP Logged

'So girls, this calls for a celebration, doesn't it?'' Yuvi beamed.

Ashi nodded. ''Uh huh. Happy independence day to me and Tia.'' And she high-fived her.

''I was about to take you to the cafe anyway...Pure luck, you got a reason to do so, now.'' Yuvi took a step closer to Ashi and grinned. She just rolled her eyes. ''Yeah dude! Oh Em Gee, I get to go to the cafe with Yashvant Dev's son! How fascinating.'' 

''Uh. Carry on, you two. I need to meet Pri, and this Meher. She is a senior, right?''

Yuvi stiffened. ''Yes, she is a senior. And not a very good one, let me tell you. One of my exes.'' He winked.

''Oh ho. So ab ''sweets''-'' She pointed to Tia, ''- will be advised to stay away from your ex, right?'' 

''If she wants to!'' Yuvi shrugged. ''I couldn't care less!''

''Yeah right, I totally believe you, dude. Okay now, let's go. I am really hungry.''

Ashi and Yuvi walked to the cafe. When they entered, Yuvi glanced around for a familar face. Ah, there she was, Meher. He grinned. Time for some action! He kept a hand around Ashi's waist and led her to the table in the center. The table that used to be their table. That should do the work.

Ashi tried to wriggle but surprisingly, Yuvi's hold was too tight. Any other moment, Ashi would have shouted, but all she could do right now was stare at Yuvi's eyes, twinkling with mischief.

When they reached the table, Yuvi pulled a chair for Ashi. Just like a gentlemen. Ashi rolled his eyes. When Yuvi sat, she glanced at him, ''What are you trying to do?''

''What am I doing?'' He asked innocently.

''Right. With all the holding my waist, leading me, pulling the chair for me-'' Ashi rolled his eyes. ''Dude, what's the plan? Tell me.''

''So you are saying that I can't pull a chair for you? That's just manners, babe. And about holding your waist, I don't think you had any objection. You didn't even try to resist.'' Yuvi winked.

Ashi felt her cheeks heating, but she kept her voice even. ''That's because your hold was too strong. Mr superman. No..not Mr. Superman. He-man. Mr. He-man!''  

Yuvi chuckled at his new name. ''Thanks!.'' He moved forward and brushed his leg with Ashi's. And she could swear she felt it like a jolt of electricity. She looked at his eyes, innocence sparkling through them, and she looked down at the two legs brushing, and then at his grin. 

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Embarrassed nice one
keep updating

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:23am | IP Logged
sonu di plz no chatting..just press d like tab...
res..will edit my part at nite!

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Devyani, edit fast, babes. 
Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akanksha0701

Devyani, edit fast, babes. 
heyy girls, am back, devyani, if u want, ill edit this and post next.. press the like tab if u want me to.. we r waiting for so long sweets, continue soon!!Smile

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:46am | IP Logged

part 15

ashi was numb...this was the first time any boy had that kinda effect on her...but hey! hang on...why was this fake he man egging her on??
"hey babes! hows the coffee?" asked yuvi*extra innocence tapkoing rom his face"
ashi decidng to play hard to get..pushed her cup away..
"im not a huge fan of ya i dont like it",said ashi..her confidence waning slightly..
yuvi taking advantage of the situation...held her hand purposely to provoke meher..
aa.umm..wat r u ...?...ashi started..but then suddenly lost her words....
ps: sry fr d short update..i noe u 2 r getting edgy...ab u cn update..oh n btw i have no idea why im making ashi so mellow.plz make her ASHI..LOLLOL

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