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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 8:32am | IP Logged
aku its a remix creativit corner..so its kinda unfair to just give space to ay n no one..lets have a balanced story...n yeshhhh more ay drama cumin up in my next update=)
eliza no chatting ..n dis is my last convo post tooLOL

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

aku its a remix creativit corner..so its kinda unfair to just give space to ay n no one..lets have a balanced story...n yeshhhh more ay drama cumin up in my next update=)
eliza no chatting ..n dis is my last convo post tooLOL

Okay.. And this is my last convo post too! LOL And we'll keep doing T and Ranvir's story too.. Side by side! Big smile

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

aku its a remix creativit corner..so its kinda unfair to just give space to ay n no one..lets have a balanced story...n yeshhhh more ay drama cumin up in my next update=)
eliza no chatting ..n dis is my last convo post tooLOL
wait!! srry again... ive already strted continuing... badi mushkil se likhti hoon,,so ucontinue after mine!! phleeezEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by luv_wacko

aku its a remix creativit corner..so its kinda unfair to just give space to ay n no one..lets have a balanced story...n yeshhhh more ay drama cumin up in my next update=)
eliza no chatting ..n dis is my last convo post tooLOL
wait!! srry again... ive already strted continuing... badi mushkil se likhti hoon,,so ucontinue after mine!! phleeezEmbarrassed

I will continue after Devyani's post..which she writes after Eliza posts, okay? Smile

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part 10


pataoing her was gonna be tough.. really tough..

but he had to do it, coz he had to teach a lesson to meher, his ex, he had to show her tht if she cld double date him with sid, he cld also patao any damn girl in a few hrs..

he chose miss anvesha ray banerjee this time.. no such reason y he chose her, it was just a feeling tht made him want her to be tht girl..

he was all okay with taking the shit shi gave him in the strt, but her nt responding to him being mr Y.D'S son was nt at all tht pleased him>>

"heyy tia!!!" he entered the room pushing ashi!!

"heyy uv!!! hw r u??" said tia doing her makeup touchups!!

"tia, meet ashi, miss anvesha ray banerjee!! woh hai na apni soniya ray>>> woh actress, unhi ki beti hai, and ur new roomie as u can see!"

"oh tia's god! tia jaanti hai, look at her mom, and look at this junk head...kitna diff hai"

"hello, mrs tamatar!! khair chodo, ill deal will ur little height later, and u.. u mister uvraj dev.. or whtever!!" pouncing on our poor uv 

"wht do u mean by, woh apni actress?? oh, who cares wht u mean, tumhare peanut size brain mein kya chal raha hoga, who cares>>> and btw, my actress mom, wht has she got to do with hw i am like??"

narrowing her eyes looking at him!!

"ohh!!! nw i get it>>>> yeh hai apne corrupt polititian ke bete, yashwant dev ke bete" shouting on top of her voice

"yuvraaaaaj dev!! and, he wants to be knwn as tht, and he  also must be like his corrupt dad!!"

 turnig around and winking at mrs tamatar, as she called her tht!!

our lovely tia, nt bothering, just making a pukey facial expression coz she was called a tomato, and continuing her makeup touch ups!!

"heyy!! u wacko!!" shouted our very own UV!! he cld take anything to get ms anvesha b R, but her insulting his dad was JUST NOT DONE>>

going closer to her and trying to scare her with those looks

," wht do think u r trying to prove wacko!!"

"heyy psycho!! PROVE??!!?!? PROVE TO U??" shouted ashi with a smirk on her peach complectioned face!

and this was the strt of our WACKO PSYCHO scenario!



Edited by elizaa - 24 December 2010 at 6:55am

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 8:47am | IP Logged
yes eliza il cnt aftr u..nw plz dnt comment more...just hit d like tab...okay..lol

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PART 11 

Ashi saw Yuvi moving towards him with those looks, and she felt this strong feeling that she should bulge, walk away, give up, whatever. She had never felt that way before. She used to think that the girls who are ready to give up in front of guys are weak, and dont have any nerves. But seeing him like that, it made her uncomfortable, and in that hesitation, he came even closer. So close she could feel his breath on her face. That closeness did something to her, and in that crazyness, she fell down on the bed, and grabbed Yuvi's shirt to stop herself from falling and ended up making Yuvi fall on top of her.

Ashi wriggled but Yuvi was holding her arms on her either side. She looked up, trying to fix a glare, but everytime she turned her chin up even slightly, she could see his black eyes, his curls, his lips - just inches away from hers. She shook her head and shreiked, ''Let me go, you moron. I told you do NOT touch me again!''

''Hello?'' Yuvi snapped back. ''I didnt do anything! I was just standing and you pulled me on top of you. Admit it, you can't resist me.. No girl can!''

''And I am not just another girl, am I?'' Ashi narrowed her eyes. ''Trust me, I not only dislike you, but your ''charm'' does not affect me at all. It's just..fake. Like you. Like this college. Like this pink pastry.''

Tia's mouth opened in a O, but one look at Ashi and Yuvi told her that she didn't dare interfere. This was between them, and it should remain that way.

''So my charm is fake, huh?'' Yuvi held Ashi's arm and pulled her to the door. ''Let me show you how charming I can be!''

''Yuvi, let me go! You are hurting me!'' The edge of hurt creeped into her voice, and that made Yuvi stop in his senses. He turned around, stared at Ashi for a moment, her eyes, pleading him to leave her, and he gently took his hand off and rubbed her arm where it had gone red. ''Im sorry.'' He said shaking his head, looking at the other direction.

''Its okay.'' Ashi said. At any other point, her ego would have burst out, throwing tamtrums, making fun of the other person. But right now...the best thing to do was to keep quiet.

''Let me show you other people here.''

''Okay.'' Ashi nodded, and followed him in silence. 


Edited by Akanksha0701 - 17 December 2010 at 9:17am

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 9:37am | IP Logged
part 12
 
she had no other choice but to follow this bully...so she set out on the tour of her new cage...gahh how she hated this place..with so many different species set loose around her...
suddenly she stopped around a corner....
 
yuvi:"wat babe!? kidhar jaa rahi ho?"
ashi: okay A: im not babe.
B: "main jaha bhi jau..tumhe explaination deni ki koi zarurat nahi hai..."
 
"oh cmon anvesha,no need to be so fussy alrite!..main toh tumhe welcum kar raha hu..aur tum attitude throw kar rahi ho...."
*grasping her arm and lowering is voice ,he looked in her in the eye*
dont be dificult!
 
he gives her an arrogant typical brat look and then, leaves her arm and goes away....meanwhile ashi is still trying to decipher his behaviour
 
"hey bhaggu!!!!! kya yaha koi bhi normal nahi hai?!"
now walking on the campus,shes really confused...and by the minute shes hating maurya high..
 
"pata nahi yaha ke peanut puppies ki problems kya hai?!..pehle woh pink bimbo and ab ye yuckraj!...
 
suddenly she spotted a very hassled looking boy sitting glumly behind the tree with his baggage..
 
"hey are u alrite?" ashi asks him...
"haan main thik hu,thanx" he replied..though in a veru aloof manner..
 
ashi fearing another wierd species attack, muttered alright and made a detour to the canteen..
 
 

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