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Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 2)

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Posted: 16 December 2010 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
part 6


"u knw dude.. naakool dude... listen!!!" 

"haan bolo uv"

"stop staring at her.. u wnt get her, she is the hottest grl in mauriya"

"dude!! am nakool>> wen nakool is here, y fear!! waise, kya naam hai uska?"

"yeah yeah naakool!! dude, she is tia, tia ahuja!! and plz.. take my advice, dnt evn try"

"chuck tht, meri baat suno, chalo.... chalo mere saath"

uv pulls nakool to the place wer he frst saw ashi.. ashi was nower to be seen, but uv managed to see sonia.

"sonia aunty"screamd uv... sonia refused to pay attention, 'who'd have the nerve to call this pretty teenager an aunty' she thought.

"sonia aunty........hello sonia aunty"

"hmmmmmmmm.. bolo"

"aah wait... call me sonia... sonia ray"

"alrite.. soniya aa..i mean ma'am,.... uhhh>> well, am uv, yuvraj dev, yashwant dev ka beta"

"ohh... toh tum ho yuvraj? yashwant ke bete.... hmm, hws yashwant???" raised eyebrow*

uv's all confused...

"huh?@?!?!??! haan, dad theek hai, do u knw him??"

"haan, jaanti toh hoon, tumhari mom ko... same skool u see uv beta!" smiles*

(beta?? he thinks, isnt tht a bit more welcoming?? nvm, i can call her aunty now ;)

"well aunty, ur daughter, she has justjoined mauriya rite?? btw whts her name??

"anvesha, u can call her ashi"

"oh, toh aunty, mein soch raha tha ki, ashi ne abhi abhi skool join kiya hai, usey yahaan mauriya mein takleef hogi saare things sort out karne mein, toh mein soch raha tha, ki mein uski thodi madat kar doon"

"oh uv, hw sweet beta, ur so much like ur mom!! plz do so, mein soch rahi thi ke meri mamam, jaldi toh koi dost banati nahi, toh mujhe hi rukhna padta ussey settle down hone mein.. par nw tht ur there, i can leave.. rite??"

"oh yes aunty, waise, ashi hai kahaan???"

"woh aa hi rahi hogi, wait.. lemme call her.. and u listen, tum ussey kuch mat kehna, ill tell her to go with u, so tht u can help her settle down in mauriya.... nahi toh mamam bhi naa...hello mamam.. kahaan ho love?? haan.. ok.. jaldi aao"

soniya, with a big broad smile staring at uv..smiling not only coz she was happy tht some1 wanted to help ashi out, tht too on the frst day of skool, hardly any1 liked her on the frst meet.. she was also smiling coz of pity, pity tht he wld have to deal with her mamam now, and tht after helping ashi, he wld nvr b able to help ne1else..

"aah>> mamam!!kahaan thi.. accha suno, mujhe jaana hoga, yeh hai uv, tum mili ho na issey... yeh meri friend ka beta hai"

"heyy" moving a hand forward"am uv, uvraj dev"

"so??!?@?#!?$" ashi with her confused smile 




Edited by elizaa - 24 December 2010 at 6:54am

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Awesome part, Elizaa! Hug See, I told you you can write! Big smile

Okay..I am continuing the story in the next post. Smile
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Originally posted by Akanksha0701

Awesome part, Elizaa! Hug See, I told you you can write! Big smile

Okay..I am continuing the story in the next post. Smile
lol!!! plz continue nw.. can we plzz have more ppl joining in!!!

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PART 7 

''Wait wait wait wait wait...'' Ashi narrowed her eyes and looked at him. ''Ain't you the same guy who I met in the morning?''

He smirked. ''Im glad to know you remember me.''

''How can I forget you..And why are you here right now? Doing some social-service for the desperate poor newbies?''

''Something like that.'' He grinned. ''And please don't call yourself desperate and poor, I don't like that.''

''Despo, my foot.'' She started to stomp off but he held her hand.

''Wait Ashi.''

She turned around and gritted her teeth. ''Anwesha Banerjee Ray. I am Ashi only for the people I like.''

''And what about people who like you?'' He took a step closer. ''And besides, Anwesha is too long.''

Ashi didn't say anything, just looked at his hand gripping her arm. ''Take your hand off me.''

He stared at her for a second, his black eyes gazing in, and then his eyes twinkled, and he let go of it. ''Okay ma'am. But you know you can't go anywhere! I have been assigned by Jumbo.. I mean, principal, and your pretty mum, to take care of you, and help you around -''

''I don't need a babysitter, thank you!'' Ashi snapped but Yuvi just grinned wider. ''Trust me, Jumbo is not the kind of person you'd want to cross.''

She looked at Yuvi for a second, then threw her hands back. ''Fine! Show me around, help me, do what you are supposed to be doing, but-'' She looked up in his eyes. -''dont dare to touch me again.''

Yuvi fake-bowed, ''Whatever you say, mah lady. Lets go?''

Ashi nodded and let Yuvi lead the way. She muttered a 'psycho', and Yuvi just grinned, happy that the plan was coming out exactly the way he wanted. 

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Originally posted by Akanksha0701

PART 7 

''Wait wait wait wait wait...'' Ashi narrowed her eyes and looked at him. ''Ain't you the same guy who I met in the morning?''

He smirked. ''Im glad to know you remember me.''

''How can I forget you..And why are you here right now? Doing some social-service for the desperate poor newbies?''

''Something like that.'' He grinned. ''And please don't call yourself desperate and poor, I don't like that.''

''Despo, my foot.'' She started to stomp off but he held her hand.

''Wait Ashi.''

She turned around and gritted her teeth. ''Anwesha Banerjee Ray. I am Ashi only for the people I like.''

''And what about people who like you?'' He took a step closer. ''And besides, Anwesha is too long.''

Ashi didn't say anything, just looked at his hand gripping her arm. ''Take your hand off me.''

He stared at her for a second, his black eyes gazing in, and then his eyes twinkled, and he let go of it. ''Okay ma'am. But you know you can't go anywhere! I have been assigned by Jumbo.. I mean, principal, and your pretty mum, to take care of you, and help you around -''

''I don't need a babysitter, thank you!'' Ashi snapped but Yuvi just grinned wider. ''Trust me, Jumbo is not the kind of person you'd want to cross.''

She looked at Yuvi for a second, then threw her hands back. ''Fine! Show me around, help me, do what you are supposed to be doing, but-'' She looked up in his eyes. -''dont dare to touch me again.''

Yuvi fake-bowed, ''Whatever you say, mah lady. Lets go?''

Ashi nodded and let Yuvi lead the way. She muttered a 'psycho', and Yuvi just grinned, happy that the plan was coming out exactly the way he wanted. 



awww!!
this is so cute>> so perfectly written...all tht uv and ashi must be feeling then! lol!!
ashi so doesnt want to go wit uv( or does she?? :P)
but is just left with no choice... poor she!!LOL

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guys one req...dnt start a convo in d posts!! breaks d rythm of d story!!!
 
 
part 8
 
there in her room...tia ahuja is absolutely transfixed upon her pretty in pink image in the mirror....suddenly a knock on the door breaks her self obsessed reverie!....
 
a hair brush still in grasped tightly in her hand,she opens the door and nearly faints..LOL..because in front of her she sees 3 huge gigantic suites of baggage and holding them is a flamboyant,callous looking red head....who narrows her eyes on seeing the feminine decor of the room...
 
"are u lost? ' asks tia in her  babydrawl!LOL
*hey bhaggu* ashi mutters in an undertone...
"no i dont think im lost flamingo!" she smirks and enters the room with a scrutinising air..
 
"FLAMINGO?!..puhleez who do u think u are ha!..no one talks to tia ahuja like dis newbie!.."
 
"oh yeah ballerina barbie! no one crosses ashi! u get it"
 
with a glow of disaproval and new formed enmity...both girls faced their backs towrds each other....
 
ps: do tell me if u guys want a story dat focusses on every character or nt..??


Edited by luv_wacko - 17 December 2010 at 8:27am

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Devyani, it can be  a AY-centered story, 'cause all the people who are continuing the story seem to be more confident with writing about them. (; We can keep Tia and Ranvir in it, too, as side characters, if u want? And about others - It's entirely the writer's choice. Smile

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PART 9

''Oh My God, ye college kaise kaise namoon se bhara hai. Pehle that curly-hair guy.. And now this pink pastry roommate! Aaah bhaggu, help me!'' Ashi muttered to herself as she came out of the room where she could still hear Tia stomping. She nearly smacked into the guy again. 

''OMG, u..I told you I am going to my room, na? I asked you to wait for me-''

''That's what I was doing. Waiting for you.'' The guy flashed a innocent smile.

''Waiting for me outside my room in the girl's hostel!! Are you insane or what, Mr-''

''Yuvraj Dev.'' He proudly said, fixing his collars up.

''Yeah whatever. You will surely get suspended like this, Mr. Dev.''

Yuvi raised his eyebrows. ''You don't care who I am? I am Yuvraj Dev. Son of the most influential political party of India's president, Yashwant Dev.''

Ashi stuffed a yawn. ''Like I care! Now let's get this tourguide business over with.'' And she walked away.

Yuvi just stood there, looking at her, eyebrows raised, eyes wide, mouth falling in a O. She is the first girl he had ever met who failed to be transfixed by him, his looks, and his status.. Pataoing her is gonna be tough. 


Edited by Akanksha0701 - 17 December 2010 at 7:30am

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Originally posted by Akanksha0701

Devyani, it can be  a AY-centered story, 'cause all the people who are continuing the story seem to be more confident with writing about them. (; We can keep Tia and Ranvir in it, too, as side characters, if u want? And about others - It's entirely the writer's choice. Smile



completely agreed!! and yeah devyani, we wnt continue our convos on the post!!
tho i did it this time too!!
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