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Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 16)

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
omg has ashi gone nuts or what?!..ya well whoever is updating..plz try n write a camp part where the oders r worried fr dem!..
 nw ill update tonite ya tmrw!..
 
aku lol...ashi has gone CERTIFIED MAD!..

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LOL, Debby, she is supposed to be drunk, right? LOLLOL If you are continuing tonight, I'll wait for you.. But if you ain't, I'll continue tonight and you can go tomorrow. =]
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u cntinue bcz my part  will be d insight of camp n d oder ppl!
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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_wacko

u cntinue bcz my part  will be d insight of camp n d oder ppl!

Okay. Should I, like, make them reach the camp?, or lost in the jungle again? Tongue
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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
umm..well let them stumble to find d way..bt den someone frm d camp has already found dem!
make it like dat

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Originally posted by luv_wacko

umm..well let them stumble to find d way..bt den someone frm d camp has already found dem!
make it like dat

Okay. Even I wanted them to get back at the camp. =] 


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PART 53

Ashi - (Imitating Yuvi's voice) ''Bhaagne ke liye taiyaar rehna!'' (Snorts) ''Bol toh aise rahe ho jaise shaadi ke liye bhagaane wale ho''

Yuvi  - (Shocked) ''Shaadi!? Ashi, tum bhi aisi gandi cheezon ke baare mein sochti ho''

Ashi - (Narrowing her eyes) ''Hey Bhaggu, vo joke tha, psycho!''

Yuvi - (Relaxed) ''Dara diya tha tumne!''

Rampu - ''Jaao, Shampu, in dono ko le jaao apne saath! Achi tarah dhyaan rakhna inka, samajh aayi?''

Shampu - (Nods his head) ''Jee, sardaar!''

He walks out of the cabin and Ashi and Yuvi follow him. 

Ashi - (Whispering) ''Yuvi, ab hum kya karein?''

Yuvi - (Maintaining a safe distance from Shampu) ''Humein bhaagna hoga! That's the only way to get out''

Ashi - (Sarcastically) ''Wow, tum kitne smart ho!''

Yuvi - (Grins) ''I know, wacko''

Ashi - (Hitting Yuvi lightly with her shoulder) ''Ek number ke psycho ho tum! Bhaagna hai ye mujhe bhi pata hai, but kab? kaise? kahaan? Aur us Shampu ka kya karein?''

Yuvi - (Faking) ''Ouch! Ashi, tumhein ek heavyweight boxer hona chahiye tha! Mera poora shoulder dislocate ho gaya''

Ashi gave him a Shut-the-hell-up look and he obeyed.

Yuvi - ''Hmm, us Shampu ka kya karna hai?, ye tum socho na! Tumhaare peeche toh vo vaise bhi paagal hai!''

Ashi grins. 

Yuvi - (Scared) ''No no no Ashi! Jo maine kaha, bhool jao.. Tum kuch nahi kar rahi ho!''

Ashi - (Her eyes were twinkling with mischief) ''Relax, Yuvi, Hum yahaan meri driving ki vajah se pahunche the, yahaan se bahaar bhi main hi tumhein leke jaaungi!''

Yuvi tried to stop her but she moved forward ''Shampu! Shampu ruko, na!''

Shampu turned around. ''Kya hua? Jaldi karo tum dono! Lakdiyaan uthaake ghar bhi pahunchna hai! Vahaan jaao, Vahaan pe lakdiyaan hai''

Ashi - (Seductively) ''Shampu...Shampu my darrling!'' (Putting arms around his neck) ''U like me, na, Shampu? Bolo?''

Shampu just stood there, with wide eyes and hanging jaws. Yuvi thought he would try to push Ashi off him but he moved his hands to her waist. Yuvi clenched his fists. Ashi gave him a look to get on with the plan. 

Ashi - (Clearly uncomfortable with the position but still moving with the plan) ''Shampu.. Darling, kya hum kahin bhaag chalein?, sirf tum aur main?''

Shampu started to move his hands towards her face and at the same moment, Yuvi striked him hard with the strong piece of wood right on the back of his head. Ashi wriggled free from his grip. Shampu looked at him with disbelieving eyes and fell down on the ground.

Ashi - (Sighed) ''That was close!''

Yuvi - (Angrily) ''Close? VERY close. He looked like he could pin you to a tree and kiss you any second!''

Ashi - (Shrugged her shoulders) ''We HAD to do that! That was the only way to get out!''

Yuvi - (Tensed) ''We ain't out of the jungle yet. We are still somewhere deep inside!''

''Ashi! Yuvi!'' They heard voices calling. 

Ashi's face broke into a grin and she pulled Yuvi by his hand. ''Hello? Hum yahaan hai! Hello?''

They saw Vrinda and Sid coming out of the bushes! ''Ashi! Yuvi!'' 

Ashi hugged Vrinda and Sid hugged Yuvi.

''Kahaan the tum dono? Hum kal shaam se tumhein dhoond rahe hain!'' 

Ashi sighed ''It's a LONG story. Vaapis chalke bataungi! Vaise, we ain't lost, are we?''

Vrinda smiled ''No Ashi, we have compasses and maps!''

''Hey bhaggu, thank god! Varna phir kisi Rampu Champu se takra jaate!''

Yuvi laughed while Vrinda and Sid looked confused. Yuvi prodded them forward ''Chalo chalo, vaapis jaake batayenge!''


Edited by Akanksha0701 - 01 January 2011 at 6:36pm

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Debby, are you going next ?!?

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