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Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) (Page 11)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:30am | IP Logged
lol im goin next!
 
part 42
 
"its time to have some fun sweetheart" he grinned.
 
well well well...d famous red head now in my zone..sufi man!....ashi get ready for some absolutely fun times..cz u r gonna be yuvraj dev's arm candy fr a lil while..
 
he thought smugly too self absorbed to notice d drunk puppet under his arms who was making slightly gagging voices by now!...
 
"main chali main chali dekho pyaar ki gali..."ashi began to sing loudly..
 
yuvi was too happy now!...he joined in for some fun..
 
"na na na meri jaan dekho jana na waha...".....
 
"yuvi tum bahut accha gaate ho.." ashi said in wonder and amazement puncuated with a drunk sense of humour!
 
" i mean tum mumma se bhi accha gana gaate ho........she trailed off with eyes big in wonder...
 
 
"wacko....kya main tumhe itna accha kagta hu?..asked yuvi teasingly..
 
:acccheee..ashi ko kya yuvi acccha lagta hai..??"..she began to think aloud..
 
 
at this point ashi is merely drunk and enjoying herself...she simply wants to show that yucky moron ki whos the boss!..
she puts her arms around his neck..looks him in d eye....and tries to go all naughty and pouty!
 
yuvi meanwhile is unable to comprehend the meaning of this behaviour..
 
*wasnt i supposed to sort of make her crazy abt me..well..shes already crazy!...bt mission meher has to accomplish itself*
 
"uhh babes..tum kya karna chahti ho?..."
 
"tumhe kya lagta hai ...main tumhari pooja kar rahi hu..eersh..yuvi..ur sooo naive!"
 
*huh if im naive..den she has no idea what she in for..thought yuvi with a self explanatory shrug*
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Debby!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna kill you for writing that! Ahaa, it's awesome!! LOL Ashi is just pretending, hun. Awesome. Embarrassed 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:46am | IP Logged
well nt technically..shes drunk bt she doesnt want yuvi to think she oiut..n she wants to have fun!revel in d moment's glory!

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:59am | IP Logged
aku u writing next??
maktub me aaja if ur free..im in total ay zone!

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PART 43

Ashi still had her arms around his neck, so she moved her face towards him and stopped when it was inches away from his face.

Yuvi was too swayed in the moment to react. He looked at Ashi with widened eyes. He half expected Ashi to kiss him, and half expected her to push him away any moment.

Ashi looked at him seductively, with a grin on her face. She looked down at his lips, and then at his eyes, and then she did what Yuvi totally hadn't expected.

She puked on Yuvi's clothes.

Yuvi - (Pushing Ashi away) ''Ashi..you...-'' (Stands up and looks at his shirt) ''Eww. Disgusting. Ashi, I'm gonna kill you, I swear I'm gonna kill you right now and nobody would ever find your body!''

Yuvi looks up to meet Ashi with a threatening glare, but he saw her giggling softly to herself as she wiped her mouth with a cloth from her bag. Her eyes were twinkling with happiness like he had never seen them before. She was laughing so cutely he swore he could watch her like that for the whole day.

Ashi - (Noticing that Yuvi is looking at her) ''I..Im sorry, Yuvi'' (Moves forward to give him the cloth) ''I  didn't mean it, okay?'' (Starts cleaning the shirt with the cloth herself) ''Sorry sorry sorry!''

Yuvi - (All his anger had vanished and he replied softly) ''It's okay. (Looks down at his shirt) ''I really don't know what to do about this. I .. I can't keep on wearing this.'' (Starts to take the shirt off)

Ashi - ''Wait wait wait!'' (Holds Yuvi's hand to stop him and looks down at his shirt) ''I'll take it off for you.'' (Goes behind him and moves her hand up his chest and takes the shirt off. When she's done, she turns him around to face her and grins in approval) ''Nice.''

Yuvi - (Feeling a little embarrased and hating himself for it.) ''Thanks.'' (He says confidently. His mind snaps with another idea he could use to make Ashi fall crazily for him) ''Ermm.. Ashi. I'm cold. Could you, like, stay close to me for the night?''









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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Who's here? Me! Cool

Not that anybody cares! :D Anyway, gals - can I have a summary kind of thing of the entire story so far, I can start writing right away!

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ROFLROFLROFL
hes disgusted yet hes trying...aku dis was disgusting..yuck she puked on himCensoredROFL

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:15am | IP Logged
no kanks u read it bcz u dnt have any idea of d characters n stuff..cmon read it bahut mehnat se likha hai

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