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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 111

ashi stood there ,watching him go..the sadness had been replaced by a renewed sense of hope ,and his eyes echoed that emotion very well,atleast to her,that sudden glow became inevitable to ignore!
"kyun, why him ya!..why...main abhi tak ye nahi samajh paa rahi..ki main iss monkey poop se PYAR kaise kar sakti hu?!?!?!
like how..hello its me -ashi!"
 
ashi sood there,looking at the door and talking to herself..the first signs of a lunatic in love..
*great ab main apne aap se baatein bhi kar rahi hu,bhaggu kasam jisne bhi ye love ka concept banaya hai..usski toh...*
 
but suddenly she spotted a gleaming silver on the floor,she picked it up..it was a guitar shaped key chain..wid YD embossed on it in gold!
 
 
ashi suddenly softened at the sight of it...each memory..each touch re surfacing ..yuvi was so soft,so caring when it came to her..
*did he love me then,all the defence ,all the moments we spent together,alone*
who is that other friend,is it me? is it someone else?..who is it..
 
and then rationality swept over her and she snapped out of her reverie at the creak of the door!
                                                                                                                                      
 
yuvi was in the cafetaria..trying to find some peace and quiet..in the babble of the students!😊...
suddenly he heard a song playing in the background..
 
tum mile toh mil gaya humsafar
tum mile,toh khud ki hai khabar
tum mile,
toh rishta sa ban gaya!
 
suddenly the memory of them being in the jungle rose in his mind,ashi getting drunk...telling him that she liked him..a sweet smile(THE KIND I ADOREEEEEEEEEE) lit up his face..
 
tum mile,toh jadoo chha gaya
tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
tum mile
toh maine paya hai khuda...
 
so was she the reason..was she my strenght,my being
ASHI...
a mischievous knowing smile finally made him realise that she was special..
 
 
note: guys der is a loose end in d ashi part..that someone comes..but please its not aditya...(aki pad leπŸ˜†???)
make it someone else...like ranveer vrinda or even jas..but not HIM!
Edited by luv_wacko - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Err, dude, I liked Adi.  Vaise bhi .. We decided on a different name, na? Not Adi, but Karan. :P Phir kyon? Mere saath aisa dhoka kyon!? πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

But I liked the part! πŸ˜ƒ Nah .. Agar main Aditya ko laayi .. toh I'll make him enter grandly, not like this! πŸ˜† Toh it can be anyone. But .. Adi chahiye mujhe!! I can't write lovey dovey moments. I SUCK. :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
no aki plz..no more third party entry..not aditya no karan NADA
iv told liz d aage ka plan..but please no more character entries!
and dats final..nahi toh STRIKEEEEEEEEEE
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Posted: 13 years ago
ill write lovey dovey moments
u romance ki dushman!
but NOA DITYA
dats final!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Err, dude, I liked Adi.  Vaise bhi .. We decided on a different name, na? Not Adi, but Karan. :P Phir kyon? Mere saath aisa dhoka kyon!? πŸ˜­πŸ˜­


But I liked the part! πŸ˜ƒ Nah .. Agar main Aditya ko laayi .. toh I'll make him enter grandly, not like this! πŸ˜† Toh it can be anyone. But .. Adi chahiye mujhe!! I can't write lovey dovey moments. I SUCK. :P


@debby... i loved this one... i just keep laughing wen i read ashis parts by u!!
πŸ˜† she is too much!! uv is like ADORABLE!! thinking bout the past and all😳
πŸ‘

@ashu... didnt u read.. 2 of ur writers will go on a strike?
no karan, no adi!!
puhleez
we all suck at the lovey dovey part, but we have miss pinky debeleena for tht!!
and y only lovey dovey? we have so many tracks tht we cn follow.. band.. picnics..outings.. and so much more..
ashu sun le meri!!
no adi
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol i like writing like dat
and trust moi..me and romance have a connection..likh lungi main!
NO ADITYA is our final word
nahi toh the S word
liz noes dat wordπŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

lol i like writing like dat

and trust moi..me and romance have a connection..likh lungi main!
NO ADITYA is our final word
nahi toh the S word
liz noes dat wordπŸ˜†




yeah!! and thn as u see.... itll be
ASHU HAII HAII!!!
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Meeko thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
ALRIGHT

babies!!
am going next...
will strt in a while..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay .. babes, strike mat karo. I won't bring Adi in .. well, atleast, not now. Not before the confession. ;D Jk jk, I won't bring him in. Pakka promise! :)Edited by _Akanksha_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
je hui na baat!
no aditya everrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..like ever wala ever..
okay no strike!πŸ˜ƒ