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Posted: 13 years ago
Liz, you haven't updated yet!! ðŸ˜¡ðŸ˜¡ H-U-R-R-Y U-P! :D Debs, you wanna go after her? 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: luv_wacko

liz babe u updating???

bt plz nuthin like d last one..ill kill u den🤣
aki wonderful parts
sowie abt d chhotu one..my sister was hell bent on me shutting d computer down..isliye dat was all i cud manage!


last one...
erm erm.....
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sure, anshu has left the dinner for me...
i still didnt understand wer i messed up in the last update.. plz explain😃 as anshu refuses to
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Posted: 13 years ago
nah aki sowie....cant update today..liz UPDATE
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Liz will update tonight.. after she's back from her party! :) Tab tak I am ITCHING to write!! But I am gonna wait for her .. :D  
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol u can write...! she can cntinue after u..
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Nope .. I want her to update! :) When are you going??  :S
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i dunno..i dnt plan it😆...i will u[date someday..:P
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Someday ?!? That day BETTER come soon. 
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part 98



 

Soniya's place

 

The look in soniya's eyes made the devs blood run cold. Still, in the dining area, soniya was fidgeting with her cellfone, nervous and broke out in a cold sweat. She nearly had kittens when she'd hear the clock ticking.. "half past one" she sighed

 

 "am sorry soniya, I still cant believe he is my son, no sense of responsibility, how could he leave anvesha alone.. aur ab fone bhi nahi utha raha' bewakoof.." said yashwant dev making a disgusting face.

 

Suman (calming soniya)- "sonu, uv gaya hai na.. ashi mil jayegi usey"

 

Soniya was restless, "suman.. mujhe lagta hai hi hame jaana chahiye unko dhoondne'" picking up her car keys "main jaa rahi hoon"

 

"uski koi zaroorat nahi hai mamma.. mein koi bacchi nahi hoon jo ghoom jaaoongi!" ashi entered

 

"yeah right.. bacchi nahi hai.." uv whispered back with a small grin on his face

 

"mamam!!! Kahaan reh gayi thi?? Maar daalogi kya mujhe?? Mein kitini darr gayi thi" wiping her tears, she kissed her mamam hard.

 

"mamma' aashi.. mamam nahiii...mammaaaaah..'" ashi whispered back "bas karo.. yahaan mat shuru ho jaana abhi!!"

 

Yashwant suddenly blew a fuse at uv, "yuvi' kahan thi ashi? Tumne usko akela kaise chod diya tha?" he caught him by his shoulders and shook the hell outa him.

"err' uncle..woh.. uv and I had a small argument, aur woh mujhe akele.. sunsaan sadak pe, chod ke a gaya.. " ashi made a puppy dog  face and added fuel to the flames, blinking back at uv.

"oh rehne do mr. dev, ashi bohot shararti hai isi ne kuch gadbad ki hogi' yuvi will never leave her alone.. I know" soniya smiled to which uv nodded, "chalo, bohot bhook lagi hai, lets go have our dinner"

 

They finally are seated with the guests in the spacious dining room, and a spirited discussion springs up between soniya and yuvi. "so soniya aunty, whts with your latest project?? Oh btw, completely suits u.. u actually look like a 17 year old!"

"with all the possible surgeries, who wouldn't?" ashi blew her top

"aww sweetheart, did I say u look old wen u frown?" winked yuvi,.

"no yuvi, can I ever LOOK OLD, if my moms just 17?" ashi snapped back, to which everyone smiled.

 

The conversation was cool on the table, yuvi as usual trying to crack jokes with soniya and ashi snapping back at him, making him look like a fool. Yashwant does not join the conversation but watches ashi closely, as he looks he sees a strange expression come over her face. She is staring at her bowl, her face muscles contracting slightly. With a slight gesture, he catches soniya's attention and looks at ashi.

 

"wht is it ashi? Whts upsetting u? kha kyun nahi rahi ho?" questioned soniya, "is tht kabeer annoying u again?"

Yashwant (confused)- "kabeer? Who kabeer? Do u have a new student in ur class uv?"

Uv ' "err.. haan dad."

Ashi (looking at soniya)-"heyy bhaggu, aaj sabko kya ho gaya hai?? Is it some question question day?? Kabeer mujhe kyun annoy karega?? Its just tht am tired.."

Yashwant (to uv)- "new admission.. hmm.. troubling ashi' ill take care of tht, ill see to it tht he is out of the school soon"

Ashi (flies off to handle) ' "duh uhh mr. yashwant dev, I can take care my problems alone, I dnt like people interfering in my business.."

Soniya (whispering)- "ashi!! Behave!!"

Yashwant dev looked quite furious, completely cheesed off with ashi's comment

Soniya (bending over backwards)- "uff.. yeh aaj kal ke bacche, mr. dev, u dnt worry for her, she can handle her problems alone, aur ab, yuvi bhi toh hai na uske saath.."

 "haan, yuvi toh hai hi.. but ill have an eye on tht boy.." smiled yashwant, "and on you two too"

"so soniya.. I guess we should take your leave now, kaafi der ho gayi hai" sighed suman, "and kal ki subah ki hi flight se, humein jaana hai"

"kya? Kal? Aur mein kahaan jaao? Am not coming with u guys to delhi" snorted yuvi

"tumhe aane ki zarurat bhi nahi hai, tumhe abhi ham school drop kar rahe hai" said yashwant

Soniya could see the displeasure in yuvi's eyes, she wanted him to spend some time with her mamam, as she knew, ashi's happiness lied in this,

"err.. mr dev, yuvi yeh weekend hamare ghar per eh sakta hai, if u really don't mind" smiled the real social butterfly

Ashi- "WHAT!!"

Yuvi (taking a leave of his senses) -"ofcourse aunty' dad ko kya prob ho sakti hai? Ill stay here the weekend, right dad?"

Ashi(to herself)- "no!!"

Suman (cutting in)- "haan.. koi problem nahi hame' we shall come and meet you on Monday!"

Yashwant (going closer to yuvi)- "I hope u behave ur self son.."

The devs took a leave and soniya went along, escorting them tho the car.

Ashi pulled yuvi towards the stairs and gave him THE look "psycho' come to your senses, u cannot stay in my house' have you lost it?"

Yuvi, calmly going upstairs, "aww sweetheart' can u lend me YOUR room?"

Ashi ran upstairs as well, standing in front of him, with her hands shooting outside, trying to stop him, "what? Wht did u say?"

Yuvi smiled, "I just asked if u can lend me ur room tonight.."

"how about.. NO!" snorted ashi..

Yuvi, siding her with one hand, took a step forward "I AM TAKING IT THEN!"

"NO!" (taking the same position as before)

Yuvi heard some footsteps coming towards them, realizing tht it must be soniya, he just slipped his hands into ashi and hugged her as if she had been anxiously waiting for this with her hands wide open..

"aww'. I am happy tooo!!! Weel spend so much time together" he said, making sure tht soniya could hear him..

 

Ashi pushed him and went straight down to soniya

Ashi (with her eyes wide open)- "mamma' have u lost it' uv yahaan nahi reh raha!"

Soniya-"ofcourse reh raha hai!"

"mom.. aap paagal ho gayi hai' yuvi is going back.. I dnt want him here"

"I clearly saw wht u wanted and wht u didn't.." she teased

"WHAT DO U MEAN?"

"mamam, its ok baby.. I can see it in your eyes tht u want him here' mujhse sharmaneki zaroorat nahi.. maa hoon main tumhari.. sab samajhti hoon!!" smiled soniya giving her a half hug and taking her upstairs wer uv was.

 


Edited by elizaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww, Liz, AWESOME PART!! It was worth all the wait! :D Yashvant's feelings are a mystery though .. and is he gonna kick Kabir out? Let's see! :D I'm going next! :)