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AR - OS#4 ~Pyaar Ki Ye Ek Kahaani~ Pg 7 (Page 4)

crazy4KASH_AR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
The two OS were beautiful.
loved them.
do write more.

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..KaJenDelena.. Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
hey hun, great 0s. really cute ahaha AR were Adorable. xx priyanka

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-GoogleWithMe- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
os was amazing
really loved it
keep it up

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shristi sarda Goldie
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 2:59am | IP Logged
awesome OS....
thanx for the pm.....

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dhruvikaluvsKSG IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 12:18am | IP Logged
lovely :)

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ParneetS IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
hey..just caught up with ur os....they r soo amazing..:)
the way u reflected AR's married's sooo cute...beautiful and adorable..>:) <3
i really luved both of ur os....<3
please please pleaseeeeeeeee continue them...pleashhhhhhhhhhhhh
tc and do pm me...:)
Preet <3

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sweety7395 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
hey i loved both of your os
they were really lovely
continue soon

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nikiksgian Groupbie

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Guys plss send me a buddy req. if you want PMs ! And here you go !My next OS !

"Happppyyyy Birthday Ridddddhiimmaaaaaa !! " he said giving her a hug , 
The clock had just struck 12 ,Riddhima's most special day had come!
" Thannx Armaan! anyways ... where is my gift hmmm??"
"That I will give you tomorrow Best Friend !"
" Hmmm .... okayy " Riddhima said pouting her lips at her bestest friend in the whole world Armaan Mallik 
" Chalo , Riddhima , I bettter get going , bahut raat ho gayi haai , cya tomorrow " 
"Bye Armaan" She said giving him a last hug ..
~Next Day~
Finally the most exciting day for Riddhima had come ... Her awesome birthday ! 
Armaan had told her to meet him at their special place ... Riddhima just thought it was an ordinary birthday celebration but she did not know what she had in store for her ! 
Riddhima finally reached at the very special place " The backyard at Armaan's Farmhouse in Lonavla " .... 
As she reached ,  Armaan blinded her with a blind fold 
" Armaaan ?? Whats going on ?"
" Just wait Riddhima ! "
He dragged her by her hand and took her inside the house , and soon enough he opened her blinfold 
She was just shocked as well as amazed at the sight in front of her !
Red and white heart shaped balloons decorated the whole hall , on the dining table a huge cake kept in front of them.
"OMG Armaan !!!! Thank you sooo much ! "
"Happy Birthdayyyy !"and he hugged her tight 
He then led her to the cake "Chalo jaldi se cut karo !"
"Armaan tum bhi mere saat kato na pleasee!"
"Nahii babaa memory loss hai kya tumko ? aaj mera nahi sirf tumhara bday hai !"
" Armaaaaaaaaan ! " he giggled to see her scowl ! He loved troubling her ! and would never stop doing that !
" Challlo ab mere saath kato jaldi !"
" Theeek hai baba ! anything for d bday princess ! "
Riddhima let out her million dollar smile ! 
She took the knife in her hand while armaan was holding her hand 
"Happy Bday to you , Happy bday to you ! " He sang the song for her 
She then blew the candle and made her wish , and so did Armaan do the same.
She cut a small piece of cake and made him eat it and then he fed it to her too.
" Ab Armaan ! Main aur nahi rukne wali ! Jaldi se mera present dooo !"
"Achaa baba deta hoon , Pehle apni aankhon ko band karo !" 
"Par Armaa- ""Par var kuch nahi ! jaldi band karo!"
"Theeekk haiii !"
She closed her eyes . Armaan Rummaged his pocket and finally found what he wanted ... he took a deep breath , and kneeled on his feet , 
" Ridddhima apni aankhen kholo ! "
Hearing that she opened her eyes but was confused not to find him infront of her !
" Arrey mein yahaan tumhare niche hoon budddhuu ! "
Riddhima saw he was on his knees and felt anxious to know what he was doing altough she knew very well , her wish was indeed coming true ! 
"Riddhima , you know your so gorgeous , i cant take my eyes of you ! He stood up again , and said 
" Your eyes , these emeralds make me stop breathing " and he kissed her eyes one by one
"Your cute nose , which looks so cute when your angry !" he said kissing her nose
"Your chubby cheeks, which i feel like pulling everytime ! "
" And last , not the least but the best , your soft pink rosy lips .. which only belong to mine , 
I feel like kissing you everytime i see you smile "
and with that he leaned in ... almost about to kiss her .. 
Now their lips centimeters apart , and finally when his lips touched hers , she felt pleasure and slowly started responding to the kiss . Soon the kiss became passionate , His tounge was now already in her mouth , dangling with hers ! He then sucked her upper lip , she sucked his lower lip responding with equal passion , and soon both of them drew out , for breath , panting heavily , 
Armaan again went down on his knees ,
"Riddhima , Your not my best friend , your much much more than that , perhaps my soulmate ! I love you alot ! Will you marry me ?"he said slipping the ring through her finger , Riddima was in utter surprise to believe what he just said ! "Umm Riddhima ?? " he said snapping his finger on her face 
"Huh ? Armaan !! I love you too ! and yess i will marry you ! " She said and kissed him again , but this one was just a short one , probably a peck 
" I love you Riddhima " 
"I love you to Best Friend .. Wooops ! I mean boy friend ! Aghh ! I meaan Fiancee !"
"Aww your so cute !" He said while he kissed her on her cheeks " 
"Armaan thanks for the gift ! This is my best birthday ever ! "
"Welcome hun ! ab chalein ? "
"Haan chalo"
____4 months later___
"Riddhima , im going mad day by day ! I cant leave you ! Your soo sexy honey ! "
Riddhima was blushing deep crimson at that !
"Your not less sexy ! " She said in a seductive husky tone 
and he carried her in his arms to their room !
Yes they were married officialy now
He closed the door by kicking t with his foot and placed her on the bed,
and started kissing her all around ! He was yet not on the bed but just standing near the bed leaning on top , he was making her tempted 
" Armaan ! You dog ! come here now ! "  And she pulled him ont he bed just on top of her 
Both of them were kissing eachother passionately 
"I love you "
"I love you too Armaan" she said and started unbuttoning his shirt , and he started unzipping the side of her top 
Now both lost in the moment !
And you know what happened next dont you !!! Wink

Ok so this is another one just for you all ! Please Comment / critisize and press the "Like" button !
I love you !
- Niki Big smile

Edited by nikiksgian - 06 January 2011 at 5:45am

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