Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


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Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) (Page 9)

sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:46am | IP Logged
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Without the glasses on , Shravans eyes could be seen clearly and they were full of tears. 
"Jis Shravan Jaisawal kko aap jante thhe woh ab zinda nahin raha. Main hoon Shravan Jay aur mera koi  bhai nahin hai . For me my father and my brothers are  all dead   aur aap sab  widhba ho gaye ho . "
Shravan paused to  swallow the lump of struck in his throat
"Aur ke aur , aap sab meri biwi- meri Sachi ko bhi mujh se chhin li .  Dadi ko bol dijiye main yahan hoon aur unse mile bina yahan se nahin jaunga."
"Shravan tu meri meri bat to sun, " Neetu held Shravans arm.
"Nahin Bhabi , I dont have time to listen to you now, i have to take care of other guests, Please excuse me " He politely slided off Neetus hand from his arm and walked away without even giving a glance at  Rajat.
"Rajat , aap kuchh kariye na, "
"Shaant ho jao  Neetu, dheere , dheere sab thik ho jayega, what is most important is that now we know where  is Shravan and we can trace him"
" Phir bhi, he should know the whole truth ."
"He will."
Rajat and Neetu left the party without having dinner.  Mr. Jay saw them leaving the bungalow and hated himself for wanting them not to go.
After all the guests had left , he came back to his room. While undressing he chided himself.
"Shravan -  grow up , be strong, you have something very important to do. tomorrow "
One thing had not changed in Shravan -  he falls asleep within few seconds his head touches the pillow.
Next whole day  Mr. Jay was busy attending the Autogiant meetings and took part in the project JAD session.
During lunch time he called his finance officer Deepak to his office
" Deepak , did you find out what I wanted."
"Yes sir , I have done the research on Jaisawal business and have made a report on how many shares they have, who owns them and their market status. "
" So what did you find out?"
"Fifty five percent are owned by the Jaiswal themselves", deepak said after looking  at the figures.
"Who owns the rest?"
"Different shareholders "
"Will it possible to cajole them into selling these shares"
"Why not Sir if they get good price."
"Among the JAiswals , who owns the most?"
" Prataap Jaiswal owns 20 %"
"Then I want to buy 21 percent of these shares.  Deal with the other shareholders , quote them good price but try to keep it minumum."
"Okay Sir."
Mr. Jay wanted to enter the Jaisawal shareholders boardroom meeting as the person owning the maximum shares. He wanted to destroy the Jaiswals .

Edited by sunaina02 - 19 December 2010 at 9:53am

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spicy_tikka Goldie

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 9:56am | IP Logged
finally got time to read all the updates! im loving it! Very interesting! Pls continue soooooooooooooon :)
atikna IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:00am | IP Logged
brilliant and awesome

just can't wait to find out what happened to sanchi?

why shravan jay ?
Davi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Amazin su, why does shravan want to destroy his family? What truth is neetu talkin abt?
Mr.Zk Goldie

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 10:55am | IP Logged
OMG..What is this ...Why Shravan wants to Destory Jaiswal Family? What Happened To Saanchi Sunaina...As u said in your one of the post that She get widowed and will be Back to Shravan...Hope it wont happen in this storyConfused.....Plz do continue ..Waiting for Next...
sandy.21 Goldie

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Hey Sunaina..Very well writing dear....Excellent Description of the situations...Now Shravan making me to get tears in my eyesCry...Whats happening dear..... Shravan Wants to Destroy Jaiswal Family..What About Saanchi..Where is She? After a long many years he came back to his home town and till now He didnt meet Saanchi..How it happened ? Plz sunaina dont make us to cry moreCry...Its Really Paining the Last part i.e 7th...
Great goingThumbs Up ...Plz do continue soon..Waiting for Next Part...
Peda Senior Member

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 11:26am | IP Logged
superb update.Just love the way ur ff is shaping up.Please update soon.Wink
sunaina02 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Precap - Mr. Shravan Jay  visits flower-shop

Edited by sunaina02 - 19 December 2010 at 12:04pm

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